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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2024 6:59 PM Title: It’s All Coming Together Now

awww for her asking him to teach her dancing.  Love that Charlie and Bella get to keep each other.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 4:28 PM Title: It’s All Coming Together Now

So Char brings back a motorcycle and news of Charlie mating to Bente.   And everyone is  happy about that...well except Isaac, but he doesn't know.   LOL

Jasper and  Bella are both so appreciative of the little things like sunsets, and being supported and happy and whole.   Especially when they see what Emmett/Rose and Esme/Carlisle are going through.   Peter/Char, and I suspect Bente/Charlie, will also be like Jasper/Bella as far as life styles go.

I'm happy that they aren't planning on living in each other's pockets.   That can't be healthy for  anyone, much less vampires that can hear everything...like sexin noises.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2024 2:15 AM Title: The Beginning Of The End

Poor Carlisle having to deal with Edward....  Even though it was a good punishment having to deal with him.     LOL

Emmett will have to go see Rosalie and work on his relationship soon.

Alice, even not seeing her own future, is in crazy level disalusion. 

Bella and Charlie both are a little tentative in their new relationships.   But so is Jasper.   Hopefully they will fully gel soon.   Maybe when Emmett leaves to go see Rosalie?   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2024 8:37 PM Title: The Beginning Of The End

Great chapter.  Glad to see Fuckward getting his rightly due. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2024 6:25 PM Title: Goddamn, My Life’s Amazing

I love how everything is coming together.     Rubs hands together in glee....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2024 6:44 PM Title: Goddamn, My Life’s Amazing

Great chapter.  Glad Charlie has his mate now.   Sounds like Rose is finally getting her head straight. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2024 1:29 PM Title: Problems & How To Solve Them

Glad to see the cogs moving for our couples.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2024 10:17 PM Title: Problems & How To Solve Them

Peter sure knows a lot about everyone elses lives.   But Charlie is right that Peter handles it all so well.

Bente and Charlie both deserve someone strong and loyal that will love them.    I'm looking forward to Edward and Isaak's demise.

Emmett calling and starting the long, painful, over due discussion with Rose will help both of them in the long run.

Hopefully Bella and Jasper are getting comfortable with and starting to want and love each other.   THEY both deserve a loving mate too.   I'm looking forward to Alice's demise.

I'm still undecided about Esme and how I really feel about her.  Should she and Carlisle just go off and never bother anyone again or should they be killed or should they be redeemed?   I'm not sure what I'm hoping for.    Hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2024 7:28 PM Title: Life Has A Way Of Sneaking Up On You

Glad Charlie has Peter to help him. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2024 12:28 PM Title: Life Has A Way Of Sneaking Up On You

Well, lots of other covens have just as many problems as the Cullens did/do.   

Rose is making progress thank goodness.   Hopefully Emmett will talk to her soon.

I love that Maggie found her mate, even though that puts Bente on her own.   Maybe Charlie will be her mate.   She seems a touch lonely and sad about her brother's death.

Bella is going to learn a lot from Jasper.   I see them getting along great.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2024 3:41 AM Title: Look Out World, Here We Come

Glad Char was there to help Bella out.  THey are going to be great friends.  Love that she and Charlie still get to have each other in their eternal lives.  Buh Bye Esme.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2024 10:45 AM Title: Look Out World, Here We Come

So Bella is awake now, along with her dad, and they are both learning things.    

Esme is laying down the law, finally, with Carlisle.   And no one is going to cover for or protect Edweird anymore.   ;)   

Bella sticking to her guns about her own choices will hopefully spread to others and be respected.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2024 8:00 PM Title: The Future Looks…! Different

Hmm is Maggie Charlie's mate? 

Glad Rose is realizing her mistakes. 

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 7:14 PM Title: The Future Looks…! Different

I really like Charlie, he's going to make an interesting vampire.

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 6:58 PM Title: The Future Looks…! Different

I am enjoying this story.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 4:17 PM Title: The Future Looks…! Different

So Bella and Charlie are about to wake up.

Emmett and Jasper are getting more annoyed by Esme.   And she is just being a lump.   I love seeing Rose's growth though.

Maggie's POV was interesting.   So she knows Alice is full of crap, feels trapped in Ireland and has some wander lust.   Lots up in the air there....

I wonder if Peter and Charlie will buddy around or hard core train or a mix.   Hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2024 6:43 PM Title: How Wrong Can One person Be

Glad Peter is looking out for Charlie and Bella.  At least Carlisle and Esme realize what morons they were. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2024 3:21 PM Title: How Wrong Can One person Be

Esme and Carlisle seem to have come to the same realizations at different times.   There might be hope for them as a vamp couple yet.

I'm not sure about Rose and Emmett yet, but hopefully Rose has learned and accepted she isn't all that.

Here's to Peter distracting Charlie so that Bella doesn't kill him.   gah....    I'm glad that he is planning on feeding Peter and Charlotte's way.   Maybe Bella will too.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2024 6:16 AM Title: Revenge Comes Cold, Forgiveness Frozen

Esme is being just too wishy washy to me.   Is she REALLY siding with Emmett, Jasper and Bella?    Or is she just spying on them and their actions or something?   hmmm.....

I love that Jasper and Bella are looking out for each other already, despite not being together or knowing much about each other.   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2024 10:44 PM Title: Revenge Comes Cold, Forgiveness Frozen

Can't wait to see Bella and the Chief team up on Malice and Fuckward. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2024 10:44 PM Title: Revenge Comes Cold, Forgiveness Frozen

Can't wait to see Bella and the Chief team up on Malice and Fuckward. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 3:57 PM Title: Edward Two, Swans Nil

Loved seeing B's POV of all going on.   Such a smart woman. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 2:15 PM Title: Edward Two, Swans Nil

Bella has some pretty spot on thoughts about events and people while she is changing.    I love how she is already trying to protect Jasper.    She is going to be a force to be reckoned with.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2024 2:28 PM Title: Pick Your Hill, Live Or Die On It

Peter is da bomb.  Glad Rose is finally starting to see her mistakes.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2024 2:38 PM Title: Pick Your Hill, Live Or Die On It

Peter's knowledge spurts sure come in handy.   Just driving along with 2 dead bodies in your truck and not knowing why is crazy.   LOL   I'm excited about his "visions" of Charlie chasing Edward down and making him pay.

Rose and Carlisle have finally faced their mistakes, but Edward is still blaming everyone else.   Rose's plan to restore Bella's truck is kind.   Knowing the good hearted nature of Emmett, Bella and Charlie...she'll be forgiven.  :)

Alice is a walking dead woman.   I just wonder who is gonna get her first.   mwahahaha....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Angelsoultaker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2024 4:47 AM Title: His Sister, Her Father

More please. I am loving this story.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2024 10:48 PM Title: His Sister, Her Father

Love Em.  He was always the big teddy bear we all need.   Go Peter and Charlotte.   Glad Bella will have Charlie in her life. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2024 10:48 PM Title: His Sister, Her Father

Love Em.  He was always the big teddy bear we all need.   Go Peter and Charlotte.   Glad Bella will have Charlie in her life. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2024 6:59 PM Title: His Sister, Her Father

I'm sad that Emmett has to feel the pull as he leaves his bitch of a mate.     I guess they really are unfortunately mates.

Charlie figured out a whole lot about the who and what of happenings even while he was dieing and or changing.   He sure is observant.    Peter and Charlotte had to come fix more of the shit heads mistakes.   I see they've learned nothing.

Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2024 12:22 PM Title: His Sister, Her Father

Loved it!

Reviewer: Angelsoultaker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2024 6:16 PM Title: Out Of Sight, Not Of Mind

More please. Liking this story a lot.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2024 6:30 AM Title: Out Of Sight, Not Of Mind

Well at least Carlisle realizes how screwed he is.  I wonder how long it will take for Rose.  Malice and Fuckward are just lost causes. 

I love Peter and Char. 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2024 3:53 AM Title: Out Of Sight, Not Of Mind

Umm a big truck for a transitioning Charlie in the back maybe... looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2024 6:19 PM Title: Out Of Sight, Not Of Mind

Carlisle is reaping what he allowed to be sowed.   mwahahaha....   The remaining Cullens emotions are going to wreak havoc.    And I'm down for watching it unfold.   ;)

Charlotte has a great read on the "non-personalities" of the Cullens and has figured out a lot about Bella just with some subtle clues in her room and closet.    She is really intuitive.

Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2024 8:19 PM Title: Not Quite Right

new reader to your story.  very interesting.  I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.

Reviewer: MajorSoldier Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2024 12:19 PM Title: Not Quite Right

I love this and hope to see more.

Reviewer: MajorSoldier Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2024 12:19 PM Title: Not Quite Right

I love this and hope to see more.

Reviewer: Angelsoultaker Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2024 4:08 AM Title: Not Quite Right

More please. I am liking this so far.

Reviewer: EMHW_Bear Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2024 2:05 PM Title: Not Quite Right

This is very good. It sucked me right in and I'm eager for more. 

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2024 12:22 AM Title: Not Quite Right

Great start to, I'm sure, another wonderful story. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2024 9:42 PM Title: Not Quite Right

Ooooh can't wait to see where you take it. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2024 8:42 PM Title: Not Quite Right

Jasper will have put the fear of god into at least Carlisle with that official letter.       I'm wondering if hateful Rose is even really kind Emmett's mate.   They are just too different.    Thanks for gifting us a new wonderful story. 

Reviewer: TheWhitlocksGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2024 4:27 PM Title: Not Quite Right

Yay!

I am so very excited for this one!  My favorites are on the side of right and Esme while a little nieve isn't willing to shove her head in the sand.

 

I hope you had an amazing holiday season and look forward to what you have in store for us!  You are the best 🤩

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