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Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't usually read one shots but this was good any chance of making a whole story out of it? I think it has potential!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

too bad you did not make this one full length it was a great start

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: anira4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: korenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

are u going to write more to this?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow, i think i need to stop and take a breather after that one!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nooooooooo! I want to know how she did it, if she caught E. What was his reaction? And what about everyone else when B is suddenly w J!? Come on...just one (or more) chapter?

Reviewer: fprm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! So hot!

Reviewer: AnaCullen159 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

awww you totally want to continue with this don't cha!

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was really good...Please Continue!!!!!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like dom Jasper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Alikatt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice one-shot. THX

Reviewer: TwilightGoober Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

sexy...really sexy

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm usually not a big fan of Jasper/Bella, but this was amazing!

Reviewer: spetha Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  Poor Edward, what a looser, did I really just say that!..

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: MyJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yum...that was hot! Is this a one-shot? I would love it if you continue it and make it a full-length story!

Reviewer: RJW86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Man some DOMsper always does the trick good Lord yikes. That was freaking hot. Man I love Jasper he is so I don't know but God do I love it! Way to go ladies. Whew wee!

Reviewer: santa muerte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please keep going!!

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Dom Jasper...YUMMY!

Reviewer: Totallyobsessed82 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow you two are such pervs.  Great story! Loved it!

Reviewer: Jw11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! That was awesome. Are you continuing?

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it!

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Footroza and TSO, the flowers in Spring are really beautiful.. Just saying.. ;)

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Holy Shit! That was H.O.T. I love the mix up of the couple. A Jasper/Bella story is great. Oh, this is going to be another fun ride. Keep it coming!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I loved it, and I LOVE the Jasper you created! So hot!!

Reviewer: vampluvr25 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Aww man I was so ready to see Edward's shit get handed to him :(

I was "Jasper" back in high school. Man I wish it all ended that well for me too. But it was all for the better, I ran into my "Bella" a couple weeks ago man he totally peaked in high school.:-!. So sad....

I'm not sure if my brain is really that perverted but I couldn't help but notice Jazz's Dom tendencies. Again, very hot. ;)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

S.O. & Foot

I hope you carry forward with some type of ending for this one!!!!


Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

that was sooo toatlly hot but kinda freaky at the same time

jasper can be scary, who knew

but that was totally awesome

loved it

is this just a one shot or a story?


Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful.  Between  a sneaky Edward and a dominant Jasper...who could ask for more?!  I love your Jasper!  He's everything witha naive, innocent Bella that he should be.  She's been feeling it, but until Jasper takes the upper hand (and the reins!) she has no clue.  Edward's in for a rude awakening!

Reviewer: brit77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was great, nothing better than a dommineering Jasper! I hope you continue this it has great potential!

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done. Are you going to be continuing it after the challenge? I'd love to see Edward get caught!

Reviewer: kirifox Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Assward is going to get his balls handed to him on Saturday! Looking forward to more please.

Reviewer: thatgirljen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm, Normally I don't like reading stories that are not canon, or at least BxE but after reading this chapter I am going to give it a chance. I liked that Jasper isnt completely pussy whipped by her, even thought he wants her, and I also liked that even though Edward is a shit head cheater, he still has kind things to say about her. I kind of hate that Edward is a cheater though, but Im glad he is getting whats coming to him and at least Bella has kind of gotten him back by cheating on him, even though she doesnt know he did anything wrong to begin with. Maybe Edward will see what he had once its gone.

Reviewer: shar0525 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

oooh I like it.  Not really a Jasper/Bella fan (unless Edward is in there somewhere!) but I like this aggressive Jasper for some reason.


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