Date: 01 Feb 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Loved it. Looking forward to Edward handling Victoria. Cant wait for next update.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you loved it and Victoria will be handled pronto :) Thank you!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I loved it!! Keep the updates coming...I am snowed in and loving the chapters you are putting out!! Thanks for the great read!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you love it :) Sorry about the snow but glad I could help distract you for awhile! Thanks for the review!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Ahh Tanya in the bathroom. Poor old Tanya no body loves her everybody screws her, oops perhaps not everbody!. LOL LOL
Author's Response:
Heheh Esme just had to be sure she wasn't going to interfere any further :) Gotta love Mama Bear!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
SQUEAL!!!!!! This chapter was wonderful! I loved how Bella handled the Tanya debacle; it was very classy. But then Rose did what we all wanted to do the moment it was mentioned that Tanya was wearing white... I love how much Bella's confidence has grown since the beginning (if by beginning I mean chapter 2) and Alice is hilarious, as always. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Bella did keep her head, which wasn't easy, but she knew that a fight wasn't the way to go there. Rose took it to the next level and Esme finished it off. hehe Perfect tag teaming I think :) Bella's confidence in her relationship has definitely grown. Which is good, now that they're out in the public eye.
So glad you liked it! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I almost can't stop laughing right now!!! Emmett, and Riley, and Jasper, and holy hell this was freaking GREAT! And Rose with Tanya...priceless! God, I'm dying. Suffice it to say, I loved this :) I can't wait for more!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Hehe Good! I love love love making you laugh! The new male trio was so much fun to write. Poor Jasper, dragged along. hehe
Rose was great with Tanya, huh? Hitting her would have been fun though.
I'm so glad you loved it, Rae. I had the best time with this chapter and I am so happy you did too!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I'll be waiting anxiously for that lemon ;)
Author's Response:
Hehe I'll be working on it very soon :) Should be fun!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Loved this chapter. Classic that Emmett won Jasper. Cant wait for the next chapter, loving this story.
Author's Response:
Hehe if Emmett had to have a man date, than Jasper was gonna too ;) He wanted Edward but Rose wasn't about to let that happen! So glad you're loving it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Awesome chapter
I LOVED auction AWESOME
Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm so glad you loved it! Definitely one of my favorites! More soon :)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
My family and I want to move to Tampa...we love it there...we have friends that live in Land O Lakes
Author's Response:
Excellent! I love it here too and Land O Lakes is not far at all :) Come on down!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I knew you had to be a steeler fan with the way/you wrote about the game with them...awesome chapter...love Rose spilling the wine
Author's Response:
Hehe actually I'm a Tampa Bay fan, but they got their coach from my coaching staff so I cheer him on :) Glad you liked it! Rose was definitely shining in this chapter :)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I actually started cursing under my breath that I had to get up in the middle of the chapter and cook dinner for my family. They could eat PBJ for one night right. Emmett is as usual hysterical, and Rose is my hero. going with GB just cause I don't like the terrible towels lol. Will be watching for the commercials this year, course the fams will insist on wings, fried cheese, spinach dip, and those little sausage thingies inthe bbq sauce and pizza. When did the superbowl become as much work as Thanksgiving dinner.
Author's Response:
Hahah I love that you didn't want to interrupt your reading. PB&J is always win in my book!
Em was his usual self and I had fun turning Rose loose on people finally.
Hahaha sounds like quite the spread at your house! I love it! I'm just picking up a sub to munch on all day. hehe Lame! Maybe some chocolate...hehe
Enjoy the commercials and hopefully the game a little :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I loved this chapter!! I laughed my ass off.... Thank you
Author's Response:
Hehe I'm so glad! I had the best time with it :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Wonderful as always
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Omg. So much to comment on (in a positive way of course) in this chapter! I can't believe Victoria did that! Well actually I can believe she did it and actually I'm pleased she did as it will give Edward the push he needs to fire her arse! Loved that Esme locked T in a closet too! I have to say after this and the last chapter I find myself actually liking lauren. she is 'herself' as it were but in a loveable and honest way. I hope Emmett isn't pouting too much about there being a Zeus to his Hercules! ha ha ha.
Author's Response:
Haha so glad you liked it! Victoria's been trouble for awhile but not for much longer to be sure :) Edward's not putting up with that, needless to say.
Esme locking Tanya in the bathroom was just too much fun.
I'm glad you like Lauren. She's a nice person, even if she's a bit vain and sex crazed. She's not out to sabotage Bella or anything :)
Emmett's definitely pouting but he'll get over it :)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
hahaha! That was a great chapter. I laughed so hard
and it was nice to see Tanya get what was coming to her.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love making you laugh, as you know and it was a lot of fun to put Tanya in her place :)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Loved it!!! I was laughing so hard when Esme annouced Em, and with his ouburst of "No way he's bigger!" Had tears in my eyes and wierd looks from the kids from laughing so hard! Can't wait till B&E get home! ;) And how beautiful are they together dancing. I just could picture it!
Thanks for the update!! Will be waiting for the next one!!
Go Steelers!!
peach
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you loved it! Emmett was not sure what the Zeus thing meant but then Jas had to tell him and he had to yell. hehe I love making you laugh, so that pleases me!
The evening is only just beginning. Glad you're excited for more!
Go Steelers indeed :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Loved the auction and as for Emmett...ha,ha,ha,ha Their faces as Esme used the info Bella gave her...just classic...a lovely ending to the chapter and T got hers.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) Emmett got his this time but you know he kinda loved it! Having sweet Esme read off the dick names just gave me the giggles. So glad you enjoyed that and Tanya getting what she deserved ;) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Wonderful chapter, I loved the interview!
cant wait to see what is going to happen the night of the Auction.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) The auction will be up tomorrow, so not long to wait now :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
I am so glad you continued this story on! It's made me laugh so hard I couldn't see for the tears and cry at the sweetness. I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love making you laugh and cry, so long as it's in good ways. I'm so happy you're loving it :) Thanks for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Oh!Oh!Methinks there is going to be trouble at said auction, he,he.
Author's Response:
Trouble??? Or fun? :) We shall see!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
I love this story. I am glad the gossip girls calmed down after a rocky start.
I hate this years Super Bowl. I hate both teams. I don't know what to do. I guess go with who I hate least. I better think this one through.
Author's Response:
Yeah they're not so bad :) Once the surprise wore off, Lauren calmed considerably. Jess, not so much!
Aww sorry you hate both teams. Always makes it tough. Good luck!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Love your story! Very entertaining. Your Emmett is wonderful. And on the football front...Have to go with Green Bay! I live 13 miles from Lambeau Field. If my buddy Rodgers is on his game it should be fun to watch. Have a good week!
Sue
Author's Response:
Sue,
Thank you! I'm glad you love it. And Em. hehe He's so much fun to write.
Good luck to your boys. I'm really excited about this game, I think it's going to be a really good match up. Living that close to Lambeau is awesome :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! New chapter on Monday!
Amy
Date: 25 Jan 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Pitt all the way GB cn go to hell fucking Cutler pansy ass if you were hurting you should not have played grrrrrrr. Yeah I'm a Chicago girl and Cutler pissed off the fans. Awesome Chappy!!!! awww Edward is awesome... though lauren craked me up with the whole ass thing I had to explain that one to my friend's parents when i was laughing my ass off and they were like "ummm what's so funny about the state farm comercial?"
Author's Response:
Hehe I love the Cutler rage. If he was so badly injured, why was he walking just fine? And riding a bike? Don't blame you for being mad!
I'm glad you liked the chapter! Edward is a definite dream. I adore him.
I loved the ass grab myself! Too much fun! Love that you laughed and they thought it was the commercial. Too fun :)
Thanks for the review hon!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
'I had been afraid they’d be bitchy and catty but they both seemed fairly decent,' --that's exactly what I thought. Thanks for not going for the cheap shot, makes for a much more intelligent read, IMO. ;D)
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to make them different from what was expected. They don't always have to be evil :) They like Bella and though they're jealous, they'll have her back! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Steelers all the way
Author's Response:
Good luck! ;)
Date: 25 Jan 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
It was cool to see Lauren in a nice role for once. Great chapter.
As for the Super Bowl there is realy only one thing to say....
GO PACK GO!
Author's Response:
Yeah I wanted to mix it up with her :) Glad you liked that!
Good luck to your Packers. I'm pretty excited about this game. Two great defenses, two QBs that make plays...yeah, it could be fun!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Wow. This is the first time I've ever genuinely liked Lauren! I was almost as nervous about the interview as Bella was, but I loved it! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Good! I wanted to write an atypical Lauren! Glad you liked her :) Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
I haven't laughed this hard in months!! I cannot emphasize enough how much I love your Charlie and Renée!!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
You do so good. I LOOOVE this story. I guess it is because no matter how important he is, he is decent and honest. Honest to Bella!
Our Bella here is the right balance, smart and sweet.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) He is definitely decent and honest and just too much in love with his girl to hide it! So glad you like both him and Bella. I really love writing them :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
I have 5 more monthes of no elevated heart rate do you think you can keep the sexin down to none till I'm better I hate it when people are getting lucky and I'm not it sucks LMAO thanks for sharing and update when you can
Author's Response:
Hehe Now lady, you know that I'm already getting "where are the lemons?" complaints! I'll put a warning on lemon chapters. hehe
Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
big happy smiley face when I saw you updated!!! Fun chapter would have loved to have been a fly on the wall during that interview. Em as usual is genius, can't wait to see how Bella gets him back. Looking forward to next chapter, have a feeling there might be some trouble with the bidding hmmm?
Going for GB just 'cause have never liked the steelers. Don't really care this superbowl, at the beginning of the season never had these two teams on my radar for SB. Guess I will watch for the commercials and the chicken wings this year lol no beer tho grrr
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it! The interview was fun and Em, well, he just may finally be in trouble! hehe We'll see how that goes!
Ahhh well it'll be fun to see who comes out on top. I'm rooting for the Steelers, but I don't really care that much eitehr way! Commercials are always fun and the food is a must! :) Enjoy!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Love this fic!! Interview was great!! Can't wait for the Auction and the reactions of everyone!!
Pittsburgh all the way baby!! Go Steelers!!
peach
Author's Response:
:) Thank you! I'm glad you liked the interview. The auction is up next and I'm very much looking forward to it as well!
I'm rooting Steelers too! Let's hope so! ;)
Date: 25 Jan 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Great chapter. Cant wait for the auction.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It'll be here soon!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
I actually cant wait for the auction, and I liked how Lauren was nicer than expected xx
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to write a different Lauren. The auction is next! :)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
go gb. I hate pitt. goog story cant wait for the auction
Author's Response:
Haha Good luck to GB for you then! The auction is next! ;)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
::sigh:: I just love Edward :)
Can't wait til the next update! LOVE your story!
Author's Response:
He is pretty dreamy, isn't he? :) The auction is next! So glad you love it :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
Love this story, cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! New chapter up on Monday :)
Date: 23 Jan 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
That was a great read. Very funny banter with the parents;D)
Can't wait for the next update & the auction and the gossips reaction to Edward & Bella's relationship news. I have a feeling they're going to say some really derogatory remarks to her & piss Edward off.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a blast writing Charlie and Renee.
The Gossip Girls are up next. Maybe one of em will surprise you :) We'll see!
So glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
That was hysterical...I'm still laughing. ..what can I say great as usual.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a blast with it! :) So happy it made you laugh!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
I am loving the story so far... Just curious though... did I miss a chapter or something? I ask because I was wondering what happened to the fashion show footage of Jasper.
Also, did Edward spill the news about the charity auction? Dont forget Bella got that check for the commercial. Maybe she could bet on Edward.
The locker room scene is incredibly hot!! I loved seeing Edward's POV on it.
Author's Response:
No, you didn't miss it. Edward hasn't used that yet but he will somewhere down the line.
There was a month long time jump (mentioned in an AN) and during that time the auction news was spilled. Bella's check was for $10K and that won't even guy Edward's arm. hehe But yes, she's given thought to it. Read on and you get Bella's thoughts on buying him.
So glad you enjoyed EPOV of the locker room. Definitely had a different feel :) Glad you're loving it!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
OMG Renee is a crack up. How funny was she and Charlie was not any better.
I loving this story even though I just started reading on Tuesday.
I cant believe that I just found it by the off chance. Now you have yourself a loyal reader.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Fiorella,
Thank you for checking it out! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I have the best time writing this story and I love the feedback you all give me. Charlie and Renee were a definite blast! So happy you liked them :)
I post every Monday so there'll be a new chapter fairly soon!
Thanks for the review!
Amy
Date: 19 Jan 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
Oh My i think I hurt myself laughing at the end... awesome chappy :)
Author's Response:
Hehe Well I don't want you hurting yourself but I do love making you laugh! Glad you liked it!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
wow, another fantastic chapter.
this story is brilliant, cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a good time writing that one. So happy you're excited for more! ;)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
can you make it so the jasper and emmett buy each other at the aution
Author's Response:
heheh I have a plan, we'll leave it at that :)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
great chapter. glad to see you updating more often
Author's Response:
Thank you. Doing my best to keep it weekly. So far, so good!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
snort...lol Oh I am so going to be like Renee when my daughter brings home the "One" that was a fantastic chapter and as usual Emmett should move next door to me, I need a neighbor like him .
Author's Response:
Hehe I'm glad you want to be like Renee. She's nutty but so much fun! Emmett would be a fantastic neighbor, so long as you didn't mind the occasional good-hearted prank :)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
Awesome lol
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
Her parfents are great also I said in the very beginning it was the Jets year so I go with the Jets I am a KC fan but I wrte down the Jets in the FB Pool wish me luck......
Author's Response:
Good luck with your pool hon! You deserve to win!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
Loved it his parents are great I am glad I have been reading alot of Bad Esma fics latly just so I don't laugh Meat Master was just to painful thanks for sharing this with us....
Author's Response:
Haha I'm glad you love Esme and Carlisle. I had a blast with it :) You stay calm lady!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
Her Boss did what I expected and I am trying to catch up I loved it very much and so excited to see what will happen next thanks for sharing this with us....
Author's Response:
:) Ted isn't as big a jerk as he appeared. Thank you for checking in hon. Take your time :)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
I loved this chapter. I laughed so much at the end my husband thought I lost it. Hurry and update again soon please. Bella's parents were great.
Author's Response:
Yay! I love that I made you laugh that hard. Sorry if your husband is a bit worried about you! Thank you for the review. Renee and Charlie are such a blast :) So glad you like them!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
I think you may be unintentionally making me fall in love with Emmett more than Edward. Every word of dialogue you give him is priceless. And he totally did something with her phone, right??
Author's Response:
Haha it's absolutely not intentional, but I truly adore this Emmett so much that I think it shines thorugh in my writing! He makes me laugh the whole time. Would you trust Emmett with your phone? :) We shall see very soon!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
Awesome chapter
can't wait for more more more
Author's Response:
Thank you! More, more and more are coming, I promise :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
I laughed my ass off!!! First with Emmett then with Bella's parents. Very funny can't wait for them to go public, also can't wait to see J&L reaction ......
Author's Response:
Good! I love making you laugh! :) J&L are next, then the auction. It's all on the way, I promise :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
I was looking forward for the auction but you certainly made up for it. That was fun!!!! Renee it's out of this world. I can't wait to see how it goes when you put the Cullens and Swans together ahhh and don't forget to add Emmett to that mix!!!!
Author's Response:
Haha sorry, I had some important things to do before the auction. Renee and Charlie needed to be told! I promise the whole gang will be together at some point. It'll be wacky! ;)
So glad you liked it anyway!
Date: 17 Jan 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
Once again, many chuckles and LOLs!! Ya gotta love Renee when she is at her weirdest! Ted did a nice "recovery" job! I can't wait until you get to the auction.....wondering if Bella is gonna have some competiton for BUYING Edward!!! :-)
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you! I love making you laugh. Renee is definitely out there but a lot of fun.
Glad Ted could redeem himself a bit. He was surprised and acted out a little is all.
I'm sure Bella won't be the only bidder! ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
Fantastic as per usual. I was laughing all the way through.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love making you laugh :)
Date: 17 Jan 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
I loved it...that was fucking hilarious xx
Author's Response:
Hehe I love fucking hilarious :) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
omg havent laughed so hard in ages ,,,have tears running down my face, cant. catch.breath.lmao
cant wait for more ,,,,,,keep um coming.c.=P
Author's Response:
:) Love hearing that! An excellent compliment by all means! I'll keep em coming, promise! Thanks for the review ;)
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
oh god I did miss a bunch while I was offline didn't I?! What a great dinner with the folks, and goodness if I were meeting Carlise there is no telling what would come out of my mouth. That man is beautiful. Almost wish Emmett were there tho Him and Esme together would be a hoot.
Author's Response:
Haha I guess, but it was all here waiting for you when you came back! He is indeed beautiful and you can't blame Bella for loving the fingers. Emmett and Esme will unite at some point, I promise ;)
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
Loved it. Edward's parents are wonderful. Update again soon please.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a blast writing them :) So happy you liked it. More soon, I promise!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Dang sorry I missed this on Christmas, wouldve made the day a little better (in-laws hanging around all day tend to make me cranky) So our Bucs are out darn it...you rooting for anyone else? My Georgia roots are coming through so going for the Falcons.
Author's Response:
Haha that's what I was going for :) Sorry you missed it but glad you found it now anyway!
I'm happy with most of the teams in the playoffs. Not really a Packer or Bear fan so I'd like them to get ousted. Oh and the Seahawks because Tampa had a better record. hehe. Not fond of the Jets either, but that's about it. Just having fun watching ;)
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
OMG!!!! And I thought Emmett was hilarious!! Esme rocks, she's just genious!!!! I can't wait for that auction!
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you so much :) I love Esme and Emmett on about the same level I think. So awesome. I'm glad you like them too. Auction is soon, I promise! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
The meeting with Edward's parents went well. Excited to see they convinced Bella to bid for Edward. I think what they have planned is a good way to come out to the public.
Author's Response:
It did go very well, didn't it? Lots of fun ;) Bella wanted to bid on him, she just needed a little push. I think it'll be fun to come out that way. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
Awesome chapter
can't wait for more more more
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it :) I'll have more for you soon, I promise!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
Cute, meet cute:D)
Author's Response:
Thank you :) So glad you liked it!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
wow wow wow
what a beautiful chapter!!!!!
i cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it! I love writing these guys for you. More soon!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
SQUEE!!! I loved this chapter SO much! Esme is my favorite. Of course, so is Alice, and Emmett, and Edward, and Carlisle, and Bella, and Jasper... Darn you for writing so many awesome characters! Now I can't find just one favorite. That was such a perfect blend of verbal diarrhea and graceful recovery; I loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm so glad you love Esme...and the rest of them. hehe I have a hard time picking my fave in this story too, which is a refreshing change. I'ms o happy you love the chapter. So much fun writing it ;) More soon!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
I can't think of a better way to "out" this couple...can't wait to read as I'm hoping the next chapter covers this!! This story is one of my favorites, keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you :) It's probably a chapter away yet, a few things they need to do before the official auction but we're nearly there. So glad to be amongst your faves, thanks so much :)
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
OMG, this chapter was hysterical! I literally made myself cry laughing at this chapter - Great Job! I can't believe her first words to the parents were about Carlisle's fingers, so classic. And all the Sexual references were great, I love Esme and Carlisle!
Author's Response:
I love making you laugh, and laughing to tears is so much fun :) I had to bring back the fingers, like from when she met Edward. It's tradition now!
So glad you love them. I love writing them :) Sexual references are always fun!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
They are the BEST!!! hahahaha. I haven't laughed so much at a chapter of any story in a long time. Seriously, this was great. I can't wait to see what happens at the auction. I hope Tanya doesn't show up....yikes...
How did your Bucs fare at the end of the season? Poor Huskers played horribly the last few games. Real disappointment :(
~Rae
Author's Response:
Rae,
Thank you! Love making you laugh so much, you just don't know :)
The auction will be fun and if T turns up, she'll go away unhappy. This much I know.
My Bucs ended up 10-6 and out of the playoffs. But they did me proud so I'm okay with it.
Sorry about your Huskers. I was shocked by their fall at the end. My Noles managed to win their bowl game, which pleased me. 10 win season, haven't had one in a long time. So sad.
Happy to hear from you. New chapter next week :)
Amy
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
Bella's word vomit, love it.
Author's Response:
Haha thank you! I love her word vomit myself!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
This chapter, just CRACKED ME UP!! Esme, like we have never seen her before....did her and Edward plan that "attack" on Bella about the auction??? GREAT JOB!! Can't wait for that auction!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad it did! :) Esme definitely let loose to make Bella more comfortable, even if it was a weird way to go about it. No plan on the attack. It was all Mama Bear ;) So glad you liked it! Auction is about a chapter away probably!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
he he he. Love Esme and Carlisle. Can't wait for Jessica's and Lauren's reaction to interviewing Bella as Edward's girlfriend and the whole 'coming out'.
Author's Response:
:) I'm so glad you loved them. They're a blast. Lauren and Jess will be up soon. Should be fun :)
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
woohoo computers fixed and am able to catch up on my "stories" good chapter and looking forward to the next which I am sure is somewhere in the gazillion bits of mail I have to catch up on.
Author's Response:
Glad the comp is fixed! A new chapter is going to post shortly, so you'll have that in the pile at least. Good luck!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
Love this story!!
The end was soooo great, I love it that both of them are ready to sacrifice for each other, wow, that's love.
Buddy and Alice are great looking after Bella.
Can't wait for the meeting with Esme!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you love it! They definitely are showing just how deeply they're in love now :) Buddy and Alice are two fabulous people to have in your corner! Esme is next :)
Thanks for the review!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
Great chapter. I love Buddy. Cant wait for next update for dinner with the parents.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love Buddy too. Such a great guy! Parents are next, this time I swear :)
Date: 04 Jan 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
wow I can't believe Ted would threaten her job if she didn't use Edward for the paper. What an asshole. I am sure glad that Alice was there to witness it.
Author's Response:
:) It wasn't exactly a threat, just a hypothetical but it came off kind of as one because he was so surprised. Alice put him in his place as did Buddy and I think you'll see a softer side of Ted down the road!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
another great chapter, i cant wait to read about bella meeting edwards parents, im praying for lots of fun and playful banter
Author's Response:
Haha I'll do my best to give you the fun and banter, I promise! Working on it! I'm so glad you liked it :)
Date: 04 Jan 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
Their getting out there. Go Alice, huh, that was an awesome smack down she put on Ted.
Thanks for the update,
Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Yep! Step one of going public is underway. They'll be all the way out very soon but there are certain people that need to know first.
I'm glad you enjoyed Alice getting fired up on Ted. Such fun!
Thank you for reading and reviewing and I wish you a very Happy New Year as well!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
LOVED IT!! Even if it was not dinner with the parents and of course who does not love Emmett!?
As ever Thank You for story! Have a HAPPY and BLESSED NEW YEAR
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) Happy New Year to you as well!
I promise dinner is coming up next! Glad you liked Em's little cameo!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
Shucks, I was looking forward to dinner with the parents, but I guess I can wait until next time...
I really enjoyed this chapter and loved Buddy, what an awesome boss to report to that you know has your back. Also, love any dialogue featuring Emmett and his nicknames. Thanks
Author's Response:
Sorry to disappoint, other stuff just ended up taking precedence. I'm glad you liked it anyway :) Buddy's a great boss/friend/mentor and EM is always a treat ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 7 Second Down
Love the sauna mmmm!!!
Author's Response:
Hehe I want it for my very own :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
Really, really, REALLY like this!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! I have a great time with these characters :)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
hahaha yeah that is true they did bad but u know u can tell a true fan through it all....and i agree best desision jones made to can phillips....Cant wait to see what happens when romos back
Author's Response:
This is very true. We stick with our teams through good times and bad or else we're not really fans. Dallas is looking a lot better now and with healthy Romo and Bryant next year and a few tweaks to the offensive line they could be formidable again :)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Ok so I personally blame you for not being able to update my own story like I had planned yesterday. In a moment of writer's block, I stumbled upon your story and was hooked reading it the rest of the day. I usually go to bed with ideas in my head for my next chapters - but instead it was all thoughts on that sexy locker room scene last night. Damn you! (In a good way) :)
Author's Response:
Hee, I both love and hate when that happens :) Always fun to find something good to read but I feel guilty for shirking! I'm thilled that you enjoyed the story so much and I would apologize about sexy locker room scenes in your head but really, it's not a bad thing :) So happy you liked it. More coming soon!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the twist at the end! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to surprise everyone :)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
awww cant wait for more
Author's Response:
;) I'm glad! More to come soon!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
I swear this is such a cool story for a guy like me.. Football-smut...You made my wife a VERY satisfied woman tonight!
Author's Response:
:) I love it! I think you're my first guy that's reading this story. I heard from a couple on one of my other stories. I'm glad I could be inspirational for you! And your wife. hehe One of my friends read that chapter to her husband and he told her I should send it in to Penthouse Forum. I love it. Thanks so much for reading and even more for saying hi!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
I thoroughly enjoyed my present, another wonderful chapter xx
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! It was my little way of thanking you all for reading :) Thanks for the review! New chapter soon!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
I love Edwards POV Thank you! Hope you had a Merry Christmas!!! Can't wait to meet the Fam.!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you loved it. It was the best present I could think of to thank you all for reading. I had a very Merry Christmas and hope you did as well. The fam is coming soon :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Did someone leave the faucet on? I think I hear dripping..;~P)
Author's Response:
*laughs hard* Um...wow, hehe That's a hell of a compliment! I thank you!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
ooooh nice chappy :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 25 Dec 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
What can I say.. I loved it... It was so great hearing the locker room from Edwards POV. Can't wait to see what happens at dinner and when the rest of the world fines out about them.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you loved it! I really liked getting into his head at that moment. It's so different. Parents are coming up quickly and so is the publicly. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 Dec 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
AWWW!!! Merry FREAKING CHRISTMAS indeed. I saw that in my inbox this morning and about had a seizure! Thanks so much. that was I do believe Hotter than Bella's pov. :D keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. Meeting the parents next? or what do you have in store? :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Hehe I'm so glad that you were happy with my present to you! Merry Freaking Christmas :) Love it!
I thought it was hotter myself. Something about that guy/porn mentality coupled with his love for her that made it even better.
Meeting the parents amongst a couple other things next :)
Thank you so much for the review, I'm happy as can be that you liked it!
Date: 25 Dec 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
awwwwww
Update again soon please! Merry Xmas
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Merry Christmas to you! I'll update ASAP I promise!
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Yay we finally got there... So far this is my favorite chapter..can't wait to see what Carlisle says or does when he officially meets Bella and how the press will react to them coming out..
Author's Response:
Haha yes we finally got there. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was a lot of fun and felt so very different from chapter one which was fun. We'll definitely see Bella meeting the parents next and the press thing is coming up soon :)
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Awesome chapter
can't wait for more more more
Love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it and are anxious for more! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 25 Dec 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Great chapter. Love hearing it from EPOV. Thanks for the early Christmas present. Happy Holidays!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked my virtual Christmas present. Happy Holidays to you as well and I thank you for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Loved as you know and thanks again if something does happen I have given all my info to my husband and he will post info on my profile on both sites so if you don't hear from me info might be there I just don't know how he will be so he may forget all together update when you can thanks......Good news though if something does happen it will be quick either way......
Author's Response:
I am so, so sorry to hear that. I truly hope you get a new heart quick. You deserve one because you're such a kind, caring person. I love that you told me about it and know that you're in my thoughts and prayers.