Date: 24 Dec 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
love this story but dang my Boys lost...Big fan and love how ur so into even the plays its great cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Hehe he has to beat some teams and I know the Cards/Dallas game is kind of a rivalry! Besides, this was a good year to beat them right? They're looking a lot better since Phillips got canned though! I'm glad you're liking it and the football, having a blast writing it! More soon!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
WOW!!!!
I just discovered this story and i absolutely love it
i cannot wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so happy you're loving it! I'll have a chapter for you very soon! I'm thrilled you're so excited :) Thanks for leaving a review!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
;D) good for Bella & Ronnie putting Fox people in their place, doesn't happen enough.
Thanks for the update, Happy Holidays!
Author's Response:
:) You're so right on that front! Ronnie's a good guy and Bella sure can handle her own.
Happy Holidays to you and I'll have EPOV for you soon :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
Man, I love football! I was imagining the game throughout the chapter, and I must tell you I am impressed with your great game descriptions. It was so easy to picture. Aaand, I am excited to the point of ridiculousness about next chapter! Insert squeal here!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love hearing that you guys enjoy the football aspect when I put it in. I don't like when sports fics don't include the sport and I love meeting all these football gals in the fandom! So great!
I am just as excited about the next chapter myself ;) It's insane how much I can't wait to post it for you guys! Soon, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
That chapter rocked and I am so excited for the next chapter I hope Edward gets to show everyone that he is not who they think he is and Bella needs to show those dickheads that football is not just a guys sport she has showed Edward many times Now its her time to shine Loved it I really did Also I read the teaser for ToI, I am so excited to see what they have planned Thank you so much for sharing this with us and update when you can and Happy Holidays and see you next Monday Yaaa*giggles*
Author's Response:
Next chapter is EPOV of the locker room so I'm not sure he's going to show anything other than some skin but you be sure to tell me! hehe
Bella definitely showed the guy's she can handle herself, which I loved :)
Taste will post in a day or two :) Almost done!
Happy Holidays to you and you'll definitely see me soon! Thanks for the reviews hon!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
can u please write the outtake of Edward giving Bella the key to his place
Author's Response:
I definitely will, I think it'll be cute. Thanks! ;)
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
OMG!! I hate you so much right now, you are dragging the inevitable, ok I don't hate you cause your story is totally awesome but I can't believe you left it there.
xoxo
M*
Author's Response:
Haha dragging it out? I had to end it there so EPOV could pick up silly! I'm posting again soon, I promise :)
Date: 21 Dec 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
ouch poor Edward. :( he got smacked in the face but now I'm going to go reread Bella's pov from the first chapter to see if she told Edward about that Dan guy bc he needs to have his head ripped off. :) lol thanks again so much and I do HOPE you start updating weekly. that would be great. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Haha no she didn't tell him in the locker room, but I'm sure she'll tell him about it at home. The locker room was for other things! hehe
He'll be okay, he's used to taking hits!
I'm glad you liked it and yes, EPOV is coming very soon. I'll do my best to update weekly!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
I do not know what i am more happy about Bella first "Big Time" interview or you up dating this story once a week!!! I think you updating once a week!!! Yay..... Thank you....Merry Christmas..
Author's Response:
Haha yeah I think everyone's excited. Taste will be done officially this week and I should have more time. I'm hoping! No guarantees it will be every Monday but I will try :)
EPOV is coming next and I cannot wait to share it with you! :)
Merry Christmas to you, thanks! I hope you have a great one!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
I'm so excited that we are caught up to the first chapter now! Will it be the same or will you make it from Edward's POV this time? I can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Oh it's EPOV and very different. Same dialogue, same action but the viewpoint makes it...well, hotter I think. I hope you do too! I'm glad you're excited and I'll have it for you soon :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
Awesome chapter
can't wait until next week for the update
LOVE this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Next week is a doozy I think! :) I love that you love it and want more!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
well as a cowboys fan i am sort of insulted. although this season they deserve it. Good story though and I enjoy it quite a bit. good job.
Author's Response:
Hahah well I wrote it as a compliment, actually, since they were Super Bowl favorites when I wrote chapter one. But yeah, not their year. It happens. Loaded with talent so we'll see what next year brings. Glad you like the story anyway :)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 17 Press Pass
WooHoo!! Oh this is gonna get goooood.....!!!! So proud of Bella for putting that Dan dude in his place, she gave nothing away and was able to keep doing her job! GREAT chapter!!!!
Can't wait for EPOV on "THE interview"!! hehe
Author's Response:
Haha yeah I am kind of in love with next chapter. I thought chapter one was hot but it's way hotter when he knows what's going down the whole time. Hopefully you'll agree with me!
Bella did a very good job holding her own, which is a good thing because she'll have a lot of flak coming her way soon enough ;)
Thanks for the review, so glad you liked it!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
OMG, this is tragic. I've been devouring this story all day & now I'm out of new chapters!
This has been a great read, thanks for writing and I hope you'll update soon;DD)
Author's Response:
:) I'll update on Monday, promise! So glad you enjoyed it and want more. I have the best time writing this story and combining football with fic! Thanks for reading!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was awkward for a moment, cute meet cute!
Looking forward to reading more;D
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for checking it out :) I hope you enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
Bella's dad won't be upset with her dating Edward will he just because Of who he plays for I also loved that Esme noticed Bella at the game and remembered her that is a very special woman Loved it and next week we get to see what happened to Mike I so can't wait.....
Author's Response:
Haha no he won't be. It might give him fodder for teasing but I'm quite sure he'll be okay with it. Esme sees all and knows all :) Hahah no the last chapter is Mike. Next week is something else but maybe my favorite :)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
I love this story!!!! please keep updating asap
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'll update as often as I can!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
Edward's parents are pretty sharp, he didn't get anything past him. Can't wait for Bella to meet the parents, and I assume we are almost back to the point the story prologue began. Good Job!
Author's Response:
hahah Yeah they're the all-knowing kind! We are one chapter away from EPOV, want to do a bridge chapter with Bella setting it up and then it's on! Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
lol Esme is too cool. I love her. she knew all along and just wanted her baby to tell her. too sweet. keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Haha yeah she did. He needed a little needling and deserved it for shutting her out. I'm so glad you liked it :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
oh I have been waiting and waiting for your update...thought there might be a little aside in there about FSU beating Florida lol...Wait till next year! Great chapter, hot as hell in the beginning and then a wonderful insight into what an athlete has to put up with being famous. Loved the 'rents too. Thought the bucs were going to beat the falcons this weekend, but they were just too much for em, I miss Warren Sapp and Mike Alstott.
Author's Response:
Ha! Had I updated last week when we won, I might have. After the fail vs. Va Tech I wasn't loving them near as much. But that UF game made me extremely happy for the first time in a long time ;) We'll see what next year holds. haha
So glad you liked it! I wanted to show that he's not all football, to be sure. And the wall sex was a just a must. hehe Mom and Dad were fun to bring in finally :)
Bucs should have beaten the Falcons. I love how they're claiming "Matt Ryan" did it again. Um, no, that kick return is what did it. Such is life. They're better than I expected and have something to build off next year I guess. I miss the team too, but I miss Derrick the most. Love him so!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
omg I love esme "you gave me a look" "for you" Haha oh god I was cracking up right along with Jasper.
Author's Response:
Hahah she had a good time messing with her son and of course the boys appreciate it! Poor Edward, ganged up on at every turn. hehe Keeps him real, though! Glad you liked that :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
I loved Esme in this chapter! When she tricked Edward's confession, I couldn't stop giggling!
Author's Response:
Haha thank you! I thought it was a lot of fun to make her such a smart, all knowing mom. So glad you liked her!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
Awesome chapter
Can't wait for Bella to meet the parents
wonder what off the wall comment infront of them
Love this story
Author's Response:
Haha glad you liked it! I can't wait to see what she'll say myself. I never know with her, but I know it'll be fun!
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
I love it like always!! Keep the updates coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'll keep em coming, hopefully faster soon :)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
Hey!! Great chapter, hon :) I'm a little weirded out by Victoria. The way she was pushing him at lunch was a little...odd. I'm I wonder how Bella's going to feel about the bachelor auction. I don't do well with angst so I'm cringing a little at the thought of a fight breaking out. BUT, I'll hang in there! I can take it, lol.
Well, we blew it in the Big 12 Championship. Ugh, it was bad. I hope your last couple of weeks have been better than ours, hahaha. Can't wait for more!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Hahah odd but very like a PR director I think. She's definitely all about manipulating the press. I'mm sure we'll see her again. I'm not going to write angst, I promise. If they have an issue, they'll work through it like rational adults.
Saw that. Surprising game! My Noles screwed up too but they aren't ready to be in BCS games right now anyway. Sorry though! Thanks for the review.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 16 Game Plan
I loved this chapter---you had me CRACKING UP LAUGHING---when Esme was talking about how Edward was looking at her and motioning to her at the game!! WooHoo!!
Now I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting (oh so NOT patiently) for EPOV of Chap 1!!
Great work!!
Author's Response:
Hehe I was giggling away writing it. Her playing all clueless but needling the heck out of her son. Always fun!
EPOV is coming. One BPOV in between to set up the scene :) Not long now!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Alright, you got me. I had a WTF moment there that I'm sure was intentional. Nicely done. ;)
Author's Response:
Hahah Thank you! I wanted to have a twist and make them both not whores :) Glad you liked it!
Date: 24 Nov 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
Awwwww!!!!! Dammit, they're cute! I'm really excited for the day when Bella meet's his parents. I can just imagine Esme. Hell, if she hated Tanya then she'll LOVE Bella :) Great job, sweets!
On a sadder note...we lost to A&M. Crap. And Bo threw a FIT at the QB AND at the line judge! It was not a pretty sight. Hope your boys have been doing better :) Guess we'll see what this weekend brings!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think they're pretty adorable myself ;) Meeting the parents won't be far off. One more chapter to EPOV I believe and then we'll go to town on meeting the fams and dealing with the public eye. I have no doubt that Esme will be pleased with Bella.
I saw that! 9-6? Holy defensive battle. Saw the coaches apology but yeah, not pretty. My team is trying to kill me weekly. Biggest game of all this week. If we don't beat Florida I will cry. Good luck to you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
Sorry I thought I reviewed here I still have alot of emails to go through I hope his mom saw what his look or atleast asked him what he said loved it like always and so excited to see what will happen next see you next week.....
Author's Response:
:) No problem sweetie! Thanks for reviewing in two places, so sweet! We'll see what Esme did or did not see!
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
I love it when Bella starts rambling, you never know what she is going to say. Can't wait for her to meet the Cullens
For the record, I totally agree with the pink jersey thing...that drives me crazy to see pink jerseys instead of the team colors - I mean, what's the point
Author's Response:
Hee! I love how many people agree with me on the team colors thing. There is no point to pink. You're not a fan if you can't wear your team's colors!
I love her rambles too. One of my favorite things to write. hehe The parental meeting is coming fairly soon! Promise!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
Just Awwwww!!!
Author's Response:
Haha thank you :) I was kinda swoony after that TD dedication myself!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I had fun with it!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
Awesome Chapter
can't wait for more more more
this story is Awesome
LOVE IT
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I really love writing it and then you guys give me a huge smile when I read reviews. Means so much! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
"For you", oh how sweet! I am glad Rose has friends.
Author's Response:
:) Isn't it? So sexy too! Sweet and sexy, that's my QB! I really wanted to give the girls a chance to bond. So glad you liked that ;)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
aww that chapter was sweet. and I'm assuming this is the game before the prologue? or not? either way I love it. especially that glance he sent her and then mouthing for you. *sigh* too freaking cute. keep up the great work. I can't wait for another chapter. thanks again bye :D
Author's Response:
No it's not the game before the prologue. That's going to require a time jump after this next chapter ;) She covers that game, remember, not hanging out with Alice and Rose. I'm glad you liked it! The "for you" was just swoon-worthy I thought! I so want him! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
One word: sssssqqqqqqqqquuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
That was a cute chapter and I loved the nonsense of the girls. Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you! I had a blast writing it, loved letting the girls get some bonding time and including Rose. Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
this was a great chapter!!! That boy is as hot as fire too. Looking forward to when she finally does meet the parentals(cant wait to see what comes outta that mouth of hers lol) and so glad she and Alice are making friends with Rose. They will be a leathel combination on those boys. My football weekend was interupted by soccer games (high school football is done, but high school soccer is starting+club) and Harry Potter Movie opening so did not get to see the Bucs but glad they won.
Author's Response:
I barely watched the Bucs since Indy/NE was on at the same time. I adore watching Manning vs. Brady. They're epic going head to head. hehe But I saw all the Bucs TDs and some good defense. They continue to surprise!
She'll meet the parents pretty soon, right after EPOV chapter. We're not far off now!
I really wanted to give them some time to spend with Rose, they'll all be in one another's lives and it's important that the girls start bonding too. haha And yeah, the boys will be in trouble with them teaming up :)
I'll probably see HP with my dad this week. Mom doesn't do those sorts of movies so I waited! I hope you enjoyed it and the soccer :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Write it in Edward's POV!
Awesome story, best sport one I've read so far. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have a great time with all these characters :) EPOV will definitely happen :)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Update soon!!
Author's Response:
Hehe working on it!
Date: 14 Nov 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Hey to my favorite writer/Bucs fan, sorry it took so long to review, pc is down and have to steal reading time on my daughters laptop so am slogging through 300 emails rrrr. Great chapter, am reading while I have the bucs game on (halftime right now) they look good. Great chapter as usual, so glad to see Edward has friends that are willing to pull his head outta his arse. P.S. would love a bathtub like that!!! Game is back on so will leave you with the thought that Edwards point of view would be just fine to hear about lol. See ya next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Ha, at least you get to see them. I was writing my next chapter of First (yay) and the game isn't on here. Gonna pull the second half up on my comp and try not to jinx them this time! Glad they're playing well though!
So happy you liked the chapter! Edward needed a little prodding and they're just the ones to do it! The bathtub is my dream. The whole bathroom really. hehe Some day, maybe...hehe
EPOV is going to happen :) Thanks for the review and enjoy the game!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
My vote is for chapter 1 revisited to be from EPOV.
And props for mentioning the UO game in this chapter...it's my alma mater, so I'm pretty damn stoked about this season.
Author's Response:
I love watching Oregon play football this year. Definitely the most exciting team I've seen in a long time. And I have a football crush on LaMichael James so I totally had to bring him in. My brother's name is Michael and I call him LaMichael now in honor of my little running back!
EPOV is definitely going to happen, pretty much unanimously! Thanks for weighing in and reviewing :)
Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Definitely EPOV!!! I'd love to hear what he's thinking!! lol
Author's Response:
:) You shall get it! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
I normally don't like the same thing in both pov but I think I would like it in his
Author's Response:
Hahah good thing because everyone seems to want it :)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Epov!!! please? lol I loved that chapter and the massage was HOT. I usually don't like being massaged but if the event leads to that, well massage away. lol I can't wait for more. especially more Dr. phil with Jasper, Edward and Emmett moments would be great. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I can honestly say I don't think I've ever met anyone who didn't like to be massaged! How about that? haha Anyway, glad you liked it in the fic, at least :)
EPOV is definitely going to happen. It's pretty much unanimous it looks like.
I love writing the boys together, so I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
I would love to read chap 1 in EPOV... only if you have it in you tho.
Author's Response:
Oh I do :) I always planned on it, just wanted to make sure that you guys were cool with it. Thanks!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Epov definitely. Looking forward to the next chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) Everybody seems to want that, so you guys will get it. I knew before I asked :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Wow, Bella actually blurted out that she loves Edward. Great to see that they have both declared themselves.
Author's Response:
Haha yes she did ;) I wanted them on the same page, quickly!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Can't wait to see Emmett's reaction.
Author's Response:
I love how everyone wants to hear from Em, makes my day!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Oh please do Edwards POV you don't have to do all of it but I would really like to see his reactions to seeing her there and what he thought of the role play Also her boss has to die right so she can get the job I am sure there will be a funeral and they both will be there they could meet each other in public also my Mom is in town and she is driving me nuts but I love her so I let her She took my phone away from me and made me go to the casino with her so glad you can smoke in those places loved it update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Haha sorry you were phoneless! Never fair! But I'm sure you had fun t the casino!
EPOV will happen, no worries.
Her boss didn't die, just had a heart attack and early retirement. No funeral!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
I have to say that I love this story! As far as getting to the insert of chapter one, you should do in Edward's point of view.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I love that you guys love it so much! EPOV is a definite happening, I knew it would be :)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Awww...ILY's! Yay! They're so cute together. I love how Emmett is with the guys. And how he stuck up for Bella. So funny. Then there's Jasper. Love him too. He's a smart one ;)
Great chapter! I really loved it. Hope your boys are doing well, still :) We just barely squeaked past Iowa State, but we play the University of Kansas this weekend, so we should be all right. Though, I'd better not talk much about it with the people here seeing as we LIVE in Kansas and follow Nebraska...lol!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Rae,
My boys are not doing well! Two heartbreaking losses in a row that never should have happened. Hate that. At least your boys pulled it out! Always hard living in another state from your team :)
Yeah, I love you's are out now. They can relax a little!
Emmett and Jasper are both awesome. I love how they're there for Edward in their own ways. hehe
So glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Amy
Date: 09 Nov 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
I absolutely love this story and cant wait to finally get where chapter one occurs. Of course I would love to read it from EPOV also.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I think we'll definitely be doing it in EPOV, everyone seems to want it :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Another GREAT chapter!!!Love the whole Emmett sends Brett text messages HAHAHa.... Also the whole I love you's were great!! Can't wait for next chapter!!! Thank you! Wendy
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) Emmett wasn't about to let something like small cock pictures go by without commenting on it in some way. hehe too much fun!
Glad you liked the I love you's. Felt right to have it happen that way!
Thanks for the review, Wendy, glad you're excited for the next chapter!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Chapter one goes here...I'm so excited
Author's Response:
Haha you want me to skip the chapter? You're the only one I'm afraid :) I"m glad you're excited!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
EPOV!! I love this story
Author's Response:
Hahah EPOV will happen :) Thank you, so glad you love it :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Awesome chapter
EPOV is great
love this story
more more more PLEASE
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) I love EPOV as well and plan on writing it for chapter one! I'll get on the next chapter ASAP! Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
LOL. I loved Edward's reaction to Alice and Bella naming his dick.
Oh. I want you to write the chapter in Edward's pov.
Author's Response:
Hee, you and everyone else! I expected it though and always planned on EPOV of that moment.
Edward took that pretty well, though he was a bit surprised, not that I blame him :) hehe
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Another GREAT Chapter!! Am so glad they admitted their feelings for one another---also am glad they guys (Emmett and Jasper) were cool with talking to him, and helped!!
As for the chapter one, I would L-O-V-E to read EPOV since we already had BPOV (which I again say was GREAT!!!). But then, I ALWAYS enjoy reading EPOV's!! ;-)
Author's Response:
I knew EPOV would be win :) I was always planning on it, just glad you want it!
Thank you for the compliment! The love was bound to come pouring out soon, just had to make Bella spew it like usual :) Jas and Em are great friends, to be sure! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Love it!! Update soon...This is one of my favorite stories!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I love hearing that! New chapter ASAP :)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Yummy chapter, very nice. Zeus seems like a good name hee hee. Your Alice is the bees knees, I adore her. How bout those Bucs pulling it off in the last minute. It was the only part of the game I got to see after watching the Dolphins and the Jags lose. I of course gloated the rest of the day.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think it's pretty kickass and can't until the day it's unleashed on Emmett. Not for awhile though. hehe
I love that you guys are loving Alice. I really, really wanted to write one that didn't piss people off. Sometimes that can be very hard to do.
The Bucs...I don't know how they're winning those games, but I like that they don't quit and Freeman has that special spark I guess. I don't think they're the best team in the NFC, unlike our delusional coach, but they're way beyond what I expected. hehe Glad you got to gloat! Hopefully we'll get to this week!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks, I had a lot of fun with it :) They're so cute!
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
aww she loves him, him, his fingers and ZEUS!!! lol I love it. that shower sounds awesome and i tried looking up the heater that heats your feet and I couldn't find it anywhere so I'm deeply bummed. :( lol other than that, I love where you're taking this. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Heheh what's not to love? Fingers, tongue and Zeus and hotness and the shower! I want some! Sorry about your heater, that's not fair! I would love to have something like that myself :)
Glad you like it and I thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
I hope they guys get more out of him then Alice got out of Bella he seemed more into it than she did he was more heart and soul and she was very pysical maybe I read to much into it let me know if I'm crazy won't be the first time see you next week....
Author's Response:
Oh no, hon, that's not the case at all. Bella's not the type to really share her feelings or trust in love so Alice getting what she did get out of her was a big deal. Trust me.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
lol lmfao, rotf.
Author's Response:
That's a lot of laughing! Love it!
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Alice is a riot...yey he loves her
Author's Response:
She is a lot of fun! Edward's definitely gone over Bella :)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
FUN CHAPTER!!! I kinda want one of those showers now! Keep up the GREAT work! Totally enjoying this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I want that shower to be mine. I could be content with it and without the man, though both would be preferable of course! So glad you liked it! I love these two and love the way you guys respond to them!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Wow that was a wonderful night they had. I really am surprised she could walk at all. lol. But what really bothers me in these stories and I am not just talking about yours is when they wake up they dont brush their teeth. YUKKKK. LOL.
Author's Response:
Eh, they didn't kiss very much and I really hate breaking the mood with crap like running for a toothbrush! I wanted the sexy times. Maybe they had a mint just before they crashed. hehe
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Great chapter. I absolutely love the name Zeus, she has to call it that.lol Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Hehe glad you liked it and yes, she will be calling it that in the very near future. Promise! Update ASAP :)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Awwww...she loves him :) That's so cute. And lemme just say that Zeus is PERFECT, hahahaha! Hopefully either he tells her that he loves her soon, or she gets the courage to tell him :) Can't wait for more!!
Huskers are 6-1 now, stupid Texas! Just kidding. Hope your guys are doing well!
~Rae
Author's Response:
How could she not? I'd fall in love with him for that bathroom alone. hehe Dream bathrooms are worth it! And so is he. hehe
Zeus is absolute perfection. I think 10 or 15 readers threw that one at me and I wanted to kick my own ass for not thinking of it.
The ILU's are coming, I promise.
Nole's keep winning, though less than impressively vs. BC. They're on Thurs night this week so we'll see! Sorry bout your Huskers but with this weird year, they're still in it ;)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
Can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep the updates coming!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Will do! New chapter is almost done :)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
Loved the way, they were both so nervous---to me that shows the caring on both sides (his especially!!) Great chapter! Keep them coming!!! :-)
Author's Response:
Exactly! I think if they didn't care so much, it would have been no big deal. But they both like/love one another and really wanted it to be the best it could be. Pressure. hehe But they pulled it off beautifully I htink. I"m happy you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
they are so hot and cute
Author's Response:
:) Thank you! I think so too. I like how they can be sweet and sexy at the same time :)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
I just love this story... Thanks...
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm having a lot of fun writing it :)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
Finally a lemon. I am excited to see it progress into more passionate ones. And see them both lose control.
Author's Response:
Finally? They've known each other 3 weeks! *sighs* Pervy fandom :) I'm sure there's plenty of passion ahead.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
wonderful :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I adore your name by the way :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
Great chapter
more more more more
LOVE IT
Author's Response:
Thank you! Definitely much more to come :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
Loved it! Wonder what his friends name will be? ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! You should get the name next chapter :) hehe
Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
oh my...humor and sex what could be better!!! GO BUCS...can't believe they won, I had to change channels (sunday ticket, means my daughter gets to watch her jags, or my son his Colts, or my hubby the Dolphins) and didn't even know they won till this morning when I was watching the NFL network. They were losing when I changed it rrrr. Congrats on beating the "Canes, looks like y'all might beat my beloved Gators this year (young team give us a few years we will be back lol)
Author's Response:
Haha they had to have a little humor with their sex, it was required!
I actually turned it off in disgust but got some texts that let me know I needed to tune back in so I did see us win! It was awesome. The Noles kicked Cane ass, it was awesome. And UF lost, sorry, but that was awesome for me. About time ! Sucks replacing a legend. I know all too well. Good luck :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
I won't have the protection talk with you and just hope they had the talk behind the scenes or thats next chapter but loved it very much and as you already know I loved it thanks for sharing this with us.....
Author's Response:
I knew I forgot to include something in my A/N. I'll address it next chapter. They planned and have had the discussion. No babies or diseases here.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
whooooooh,*fans face* now that was hot,yay they finally got down n'dirty,jasper can be such an idiot sometimes,can he say DUH!,,,,any way looking forward to whats to come,excellent chappy,until next time.c.
Author's Response:
Haha Jasper was in his own little world. Silly guy! But that's okay, he made it fun.
Glad you found it hot! :) Thank you! I wanted it to be hot and sweet and fun!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
Precious
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I thought they were adorable!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12 Touchdown
Holy hell.....wow. I loved how they could laugh a little while they were still loving each other. It was perfect for them. Great job!!! I can't wait until more :)
Hope your teams are doing great! We had a little party here when Alabama lost the other day. My hubby was crazy excited. I just laughed at him, lol.
Hugs!!
~Rae
Author's Response:
I thought it seemed fitting to throw in a few laughs. That's the kind of thing that happens with them so why change it up? :) Glad you approve!
My teams are! The Noles KILLED Miami and the Bucs managed to win despite all odds. I'm amazed. Bama going down made things a lot more interesting! :)
Hugs back!
Amy
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
fantastic chapter, wish I had Emmett as a neighbor. sorry this has taken so long to reply to, my computer is dead and having to sneak updates on my daughters laptop. Getting her pc away from her is very hard. Go Bucs, hope they are well rested after the by=week and come back from that loss.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Em as a neighbor would be a riot, though you never know what he'd want to borrow. hehe I'd be on the lookout every day for some prank :) Awesome.
Sorry about your comp! Sharing is not fun!
Yes the Bucs needs a bounce back! We'll see!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
You are TRULY evil, do you know that?? Haha! Can I just say that I LOVE Emmett? He is absolutely hilarious. And the collage on the ceiling?? Genius! Too perfect. I can't WAIT for the next chapter...though I'm pretty sure you already knew that.
Hope your team's doing well :) We have a bye this week so we'll see how next week goes... Though my NFL team is sucking some serious you know what. Oh well, can't win 'em all!
Great job, hon!!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Rae,
Evil? How? I wanted their first time to stand alone, not to be tacked on the end :) I'm not trying to put it off on purpose, just trying to make it right, promise!
Thank you! I adore Em. He's so much fun and mischievous but good hearted. The collage was truly awesome. Poor QBward! Bella will make it all better though!
My team is 2-1 now, after getting thrashed by Pitt last week. They're on a bye week as well so I'm gonna get to watch without raging on Sunday. Always nice. hehe
Thanks for the review, new chapter, the one you want, soon!
Amy
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
The meeting between everyone went very well. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Emmett wouldn't have it any other way! Lemon next ;)
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
I love Em and Rose! Well I love them all.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I love that all 6 of them are pretty darn likable! :)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
Boooo where's my smexin??? I needs it! LOL :P
Author's Response:
Hahah rather than tack it on to the end of the chapter, I decided to give it it's own. Thought you guys might appreciate that. *sighs*
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
Loved it very much and ya for the next chapter so can't wait I am sorry this took so long computer died last week and I got it back at 6 tonoght and spent most of my time deleating spam see you next week thanks for sharing this with us 2 chapters in a row in BPOV does that mean that the next one will be in Edwards that would be great if you don't mind......
Author's Response:
I'm still deciding on EPOV or BPOV in the next chapter. I planned on it being her but then I'd have 4 chapters of her viewpoint in a row which doesn't seem fair. We shall see who's talking to me when I write I guess.
Glad your computer is back, never fun to be without it! And I'm honored you rushed to read! Thank you for that!
Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
that was sweet. the whole get-together. everyone got along, just like we thought they would and they made fun of Edward. lol loved the collage a la Edward on Emmett's ceiling. lol to funny. hopefully we get our lemon really soon. I think I might explode if I don't. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Hehe uniting in making fun of a person....always the way to go! He took it mostly well. Poor QB. Well, Bella will make it all better next chapter, promise!
Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
Great chapter, LOVE Emmett!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks, love all the love for the big guy! He's so much fun!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
Great chapter Em and Rose funny as hell
can't wait for more more
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked them both! They're definitely a fun pair! More soon, promise!
Date: 28 Sep 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
That was great fun. Emmett is awesome. Really they all are. Thanks for the story. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I adore them all and would happily know and hang out with all of them if I could. Why can't they be real for me? hehe So glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
Love it!!! Update soon this is my favorite story!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you like it! I love these guys too!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
awwwwww
Update soon please!!!!
Author's Response:
Haha Glad you liked it! I will be back with another chapter soon :)
Date: 20 Sep 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
Update Soon!! I love this story!...And an athletic Edward :)
Author's Response:
Awww glad you like him! I love him too! I update every two weeks, so not too long to wait! :) Glad you're so anxious!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
Great to see that they are officially boyfriend and girlfriend. Alice's idea for the commercial was perfect. Funny to see how Edward was prepared for what Tanya or Alice might have had in store for him. Can't wait to see what happens in the BBQ and how emmetts reacts to meeting Bella.
Author's Response:
Hee, I am so glad you liked it! The girlfriend thing was jus so cute and so them. They're awkward but perfect for aneanother I think.
Edward's a pretty smart guy. hehe
I'm looking forward to the BBQ as well. I never know what Em will do!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
I love Alice...she always gets what she wants
Author's Response:
She sure does! She was awesome this chapter I thought!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
i love this story, can't wait for the next chapter. i hope it's the party and emmetts house. i hope bella and rose hit it off. can't wait for the next chapter. Also i love how alice is in this story.!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) I really am fond of all these characters and yes, Emmett's house is next. It should be fun. I can't wait to meet Rose myself! So happy you like Alice, I really wanted to write a good one :)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
Last night I wondered when the next chapter was coming! Maybe I should have wondered about when some money was coming??
Love the chapter and the story. Despite having gotten them together pretty early in the tale, you have kept it moving and interesting where some other stories lose their momentum. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Every other Monday like clockwork, unless I have a hold up! Usually I'm good with schedules though ;) Glad you were looking for it! I wish we could schedule money coming that way :)
I'm glad I'm still keeping you interested. I think it's that these two are so likable. And it's nice not to have angst all the time I think.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
Oh god how I love Alice. That shit she pulled to get Edward out of the original vision of the commercial was classic.
Author's Response:
Haha she's a formidable little foe, isn't she? She's a great friend and I love all the love her! Thank you!