Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...
I knew she would freak out but he is hot so give the guy a break I cant wait to see what happens next.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...
What the hell is wrong with Bella?!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
I hope you post the next chapter soon. I know I am a little late in reviewing but have been a crazy couple of weeks. Great story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
What a good story and only 7 chapters! Could anything entice you to post them all early! :)
Author's Response:
Why thank-you so much for the delightful compliment!
LOL Perhaps 100 rockin' reviews for this next chapter would entice us, we're pushovers ya know. ;D
But by the same token, we're having so much fun hearing from ya'all!
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
i really hope you two get your reviews! i'm loving this story
Author's Response:
Sadly we didn't but more soon anyway! :D
Thanks for the encouragement and for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Good job. HS peer pressure has ruined many a true love.
You should post early -
Author's Response:
Thanks!
It really has spoiled many a good thing.
More soon. Thanks for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Excellent. Slow burn.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Love it! Can't wait for the next chap :D
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! More soon!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
I am addicted! Poor Edward, I hope he gets his chance.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks! So thrilled to hear it!
We'll find out soon. :D
Thanks for reading and responding!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
I am glad to see that Bella does regret her actions back in high school. At least she has grown up and does her own thing now. Can't wait for the meeting.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's suffered just as much as Edward has. Maturity is a beautiful thing!
They meet next chapter!
Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Like to story, just wish the chapters were a little longer.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Sorry about that. They felt longer when we were divying them up. More soon!
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
I am MORE than looking forward to Bella's reaction when she discovered that Edward is her "savior". Also, I'm interested to find out what happens next. I can't see Edward taking advantage of his position, but I would think that in Bella's eyes if she doesn't go through with it she has no right to the money she needs so desperatley. Interesting conundrum!!!
Author's Response:
Well, that's what's up next!
We thought it was a great conundrum too and had a lot of fun with it!
Thanks for the great review, and for reading!!!
More soon!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Dang you, I can't believe you ended it there. That is evil, and the the heck (a few other choice expletives fit better) is it with the short chapter. I need the next one.
Author's Response:
*laughs and cringes* Sorry leave you feeling frustrated rather than enticed!
When we first mapped out the chapters this one felt a lot longer.
But we've got to get our jollies somehow! ;D
Thanks for reading!! More soon!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Can't wait till next Wednesday! Great Job!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Argh! To hell w foreplay! More more more!
Author's Response:
Awww. Sorry to hear it's torturing you! But we've got to get our jollies somehow! ;D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:39 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Oh! Poor E! And that's totally creepy about the website. Lol
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
The story is great so far. Like Bella I did something equally stupid in HS by letting the opinions of so-called friends cloud my judgement. I can't wait for her to find Edward waiting for her, unless of course there are going to be wicked twists and turns. Regardless, consider me hooked :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the wonderful encouragement! We're delighted to hear it's hooked you.
Sorry to hear you, too had a HS experience like this, but glad to hear it makes it more interesting for you!
They finally meet in the next chapter. :D
Thanks for reading and responding!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
You have caught me in your storytelling web. I am dying for the next chapter. Please update soon. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Delighted to hear it! It's why we weave, afterall. :D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
:)
Author's Response:
:D Thanks!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Aaah! You left me hanging, but hey, I've done that before to so I can't really complain. Great chapter. I can't wait till they meet. :)
Author's Response:
I hear you, it's empowering as an author, but sucks as a reader! lol
Sorry to make you scream. We appreciate the encouraging words tremendously!
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
I cant wait till she sees it is really him. Both pineing for each other and not doing anything about it. will it work if I post 49 more times??? LOL
Author's Response:
You could go for it and see!! LOL
Glad to hear what captured your imagination. I just love a good mystery. :D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Great story, though I kinda wanna hurt Jessica and lauren en even Bella a little bit for not standing up for herself amd letting them get to her.
I can't wait for the next chapter post soon please
Author's Response:
Yeah, peer pressure and immaturity suck! She can be so strong, it's hard to see Bella when she's not.
Thanks for your enthusiasm, comments and most especially for reading!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Ack! Short chapter slow burn.
Author's Response:
Yeah, sorry, but it was a natural break! :D
Feel the burn, bb! ;D No pain, no gain? lol
Thanks for reading!!!
(love your profile, btw. And 10 times...me too! RB)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
I hope she comes clean with Edward about the letter!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear what caught your curiosity! Thanks for commenting and even more for reading!!! :D
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
awww ain't peer pressure grand? NOT
Author's Response:
Sorry. A writer's gotta do SOMETHING to get people to speak up!
Is it wrong that your "NOT" makes me smile?
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Very nice ladies!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
y'all are evil with the cliffie! I cannot wait to see what happens when she gets there. I wonder who will chicken out first -- my guess is it will be Edward. He won't be willing to do it as long as she agrees to some dates.
Author's Response:
LOL But it's sooo empowering as a writer! :D
He's certainly been a chicken so far after the first bit of putting himself out there. It's sooo hard to wait to see what you think from this end too!
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
I knew Bella would have kept that love letter. I certainly would have.
Author's Response:
Yeah, had to show the connection, even when it's unconscious. And we both would have too! ;D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
OMG!!! You two are such teases! LOL.... I NEED MORE!!
Author's Response:
Ohhh, but it's so much fun! I usually write such LONG chapters and get so few reviews, we thought we'd play with this one! LOL
It's coming darling! If it's any consolation, we're making our RL friends/readers wait too! :D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
That was very mean to leave us with a cliffie!!!! We need no foreplay...we need lemons, lots and lots of lemons. Come on girls, you can do it!!!!!!
Author's Response:
It was. But it doesn't mean we don't love you! And don't worry, this is me afterall (RB75) - there WILL be lemons. *mwaha*
Thanks for the encouragement and for reading!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
"Fanfic foreplay"? Love it, that's funny. And so apropo.
I'm truly enjoying this story. Edward's such a romantic.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! So glad to hear you are enjoying it!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Woo-hoo can't wait for more over here!
Author's Response:
Thanks! So glad you are reading and enjoying! :D
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
oh i love it
more please
Author's Response:
So glad it has grabbed ya!
More next week! Keep your fingers crossed for thurs. ;D
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Sweet heaven, I don't know if I can wait till next friday. I need the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Sorry to be torturous! It's looking good to get it thurs, if that's any consolation!
Glad to have intruiged you so much!
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
edward is making this really exciting..
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're liking him! (He's all TwiliteAddict, Bella was by RoseaBella75.)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
You're right RoseB!! ;)
Author's Response:
Glad it worked, and hope it hasn't ticked anyone off too much! ;D
It is Edward foreplay after all! lol
Thanks for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Interesting story you guys have here. I've read a similar one but had to stop bc it was absolutely absurd. I'm glad this one is different and keeps me interested.
Author's Response:
So glad we were able to capture your interest!
When our winner gave us the prompt, making it believable was the most important part for us. I haven't heard of any others with this premise. May have to look out of curiosity now! :D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
How cool is this love so far. Cant wait till they meet how shocked will she be
Author's Response:
So glad you're liking it. We can always count on Bella to have quite a reaction, can't we?
Thanks for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 9:23 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Yay, such a cool story idea! I am very excited!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 9:22 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Yay, such a cool story idea! I am very excited!!!
Author's Response:
So pleased you like it so much! I'm excited to hear it and hear more of what you think as we go along!
Thanks for writing!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
:)
Author's Response:
;D
Thanks!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
I can't wait to hear about her hyperventilating when she sees Edward at the symphony! :)
Author's Response:
Can't wait to see what you think about her reaction, either! ;D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Hopefully Bella doesn't hurt Edward!
Author's Response:
Hopefully! ;D
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Okay... so I do love foreplay.... but come on!! I need more of this story!
Author's Response:
Sorry to laugh...but I am! (Affectionately!!) lol
Can I recommend cold showers? ;D
Keep your fingers crossed we get enough response to post thurs instead of Fri!
Thrilled you're loving it. Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:03 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
So far I love it!! Poor Edward :(
Author's Response:
Yes, poor boy! So glad to hear you like it!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Wow, well okay I will be here again next Friday. Can't wait.
Author's Response:
So glad to hear it! Keep your fingers crossed that between all the places we post we get fifty reviews and you'll get another dose next thurs! :D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:54 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
This is very interesting. Can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response:
So glad you are liking it. More next week, and weekly after that!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 9:03 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
this sounds good so far
Author's Response:
Excellent. :D More next week and weekly after that!
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 8:04 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Aw, poor Edward, but I bet she threw the note back into her locker to save it and was just playing it cool in front of tweedle dee and tweedle dum. Anyway, good start. Soooo update update update grrrrl!
Author's Response:
Yes, poor dear! There's always more to our motivations that observers can see. ;D We'll just have to wait and see how that truism plays out for dear Edward. (bahahaha t-dee and t-dum)
So glad to hear it's captivated you so!
More next week.
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:22 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
OMG cant wait for more what is he going to do does he have enought money to bid on her and win??????
Author's Response:
Tee hee! We'll just have to see won't we?!
More next week!
Thanks for reading and responding!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:06 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Wow, this sounds like a real intriguing story. I look forward to reading the next.
Author's Response:
I'm so pleased to hear you liked it so well! More next week. :D
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:26 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Interesting! I'll be adding this to my favorites!
Author's Response:
Very cool! So glad to hear you liked it!
Thanks for reading and responding!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:59 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Poor Edward!!
Author's Response:
Yeah. But he has hope!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:56 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
You've captured my interest! Can't wait to see where this story is going!
Author's Response:
*mwaha* Glad we could intruige you! More next week. :D
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:24 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Can't wait to read more. Poor Edward.
Author's Response:
Yes, poor baby! I think he's counting on good things come to those who wait. :D
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:42 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
haha isn't it illegal to sell sex over the internet? anyway, i am really liking this so far
Author's Response:
Probably! :D The RL person who did it registered with a brothel in Nevada, working through their legal auspices and so broke no laws. It was the prompt we were given, so we romanticised it and ran with the idea.
Glad you're enjoying it! We had fun writing it.
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:25 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :D
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:24 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Oh. My. God. Love it. Get posting!
And how sad is that about Edward and his note to Bella? Geez Louise!
Author's Response:
My co-author wants to udate fridays, so you'll be getting a weekly dose for 7 weeks!
I know, poor baby. But if he hadn't been such a chicken, they might have had a relationship. Bit of RL experience there - friends interfereing and sabotageing a good thing. :D And non-persisitant guy and bashful girl miss out. At least these two are set up for a second chance. eh?
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:58 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Well I am interested. I hope the next chapter goes up soon.
Author's Response:
Glad we were able to intruige you! Look for this to update on fridays until all 7 chaps are posted.
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:30 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
up date...update....i like this..quite interesting
Author's Response:
Next update friday! We plan to update fri's until all 7 chapters are up.
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:19 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
:)
Author's Response:
:D
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:18 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
this could be a great story ... cant wait to read on !
Author's Response:
We're certainly very pleased with how it turned out. :D
More next friday until all 7 chapters are posted. There may be additonal outtakes (like the shopping trip with Alice to buy condoms and the phone convo the morning after with Alice - it was requested by the auction winner).
Thanks for reading and responding!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 11:47 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
I think this story has lots of potential and I can't wait to see what you'll do with it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It is seven chapters long. We'll release more in a few days.
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 11:39 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Very interesting story. I'm definitely excited to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! We've been really excited to release it!
More in a few days! :D
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 11:36 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
I look forward to more of this story! Great opening
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! We had a really great time writing it!
More in a few days. :D