Poor James... just kidding!!!!!!!!!!!!

He really gets what he deserves!

Wow....so powerfully written. He's finally getting what he deserves!

I can't wait till this is in print...I loved the journey, well done to you both! :D

OMG it is so nice to see that James gets what he deserves.  I can not believe it is almost over I have enjoyed and looked forward to reading this story I get so excited when I would see a new chapter was up.  It is one of the best stories I have read one I would read again and yes again.  Thanks and looking forward to the next chapter and next project you work on.

I have enjoyed this story so much and was glad when you found a home for it her and continued it after fanfic blew up and started taking down all my favorites. It has been quite an experience reaing The Training School Saga and I think it's brilliant. I'm sad it's coming to an end, but I'm sure Bella & Edward will have their happy ending.

Loved it! Seriously, the most deserving punishment I could imagine for the fucking bastard. Bloody brilliant, and the slave tag? Genius! I will be sad to see this end, but am looking forward to seeing you tie up the loose ends. Then I'm going to sit down and read it all over again.

Also, congratulations on starting a publishing house! You hugs are amazing. First the website, then the library, and now this? I couldn't be more pleased with all of your accomplishments. You have opened the door for so many writers and readers. Thank you so much for all of you efforts and hard work.

My goodness - that was SO GOOD :)

So happy, in fact... jumping for joy & celebration that James is getting what he so deserves!!! Aro has him & shall do whatever he pleases... I know hope he doesn't doe too soon.... hehehee!!!! What more could we want for him? Absolutely nothing....

Oh you are so good at endings, sad to see it ending, but so happy with the way it has ended :) 

You both SO ROCK!!! I don't even know who to express my happiness for you both in this saga & TWSC library & all that you have achieved! 

Thank you & I know we shall be hearing from you both soon whether together or seperately.... enjoy your break from writing but can't wait for more...

Oh & the last chapter of TTSS.... THANK YOU & heaps of kisses thrown your way :) XXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Finally, James gets what he deserved by the ultimate MASTER.  I am go very glad.  He was an evile motherfucker who deserved to get what was coming from him.  I have to assume that he was stuck with a tacking chip so if on the off chance that he gets away, he can be located.  I am so glad that he is getting what is coming to him.  HE FUCKING DESERVES IT BECAUSE OF WHAT HE DID TO BELLA FIRST AND THEN VICTORIA.  He had no soul at all.  I really enjoyed reading this although at times, made my stomach extremely nervous, nonetheless, it is great work.  THANKS FOR THE FUCK, FUCK AWESOME READING.  Sherri

Great story, I am sooooo glad that James is getting what he deserves!!!!  I look forward to hearing more about your publishing project.

Ahh, justice is sweet. I can't say that I don't enjoy the face that James will suffer the fate he had intended for sweet Bella and naive Victoria. And the slave tag, priceless! God bless Carlisle and his twisted sense of revenge!

I can't wait to read the original version and see what changes you have made!

Aww, I'm sad there's only one more chapter to come. I'll have the tissues, ice-cream and alcohol at the ready when you post it!

TSO & Footroza, you rock my world ladies!

OMG!!! New it was Aro! He is sofucking evil I love it!

Thank you for this update. I have been following this story for about a year. I love it and look forward to enjoying more of yor work in the future.

this is great please update soon

Wow. I can't believe this story has only one chapter left to go and then its journey is finished. I've been around since almost the beginning, its seeped into my dreams, inspiring the weirdest dream/nightmares (I'm pretty sure I at least told you about one of them). I'm interested in the publishing house!

Hey Girls - a perfect chapter!! Talk about happy endings - yes I know that that is very blood thirsty, but it's all James' fault!  I can't wait  for the last chapter - I want to see what lies ahead for B & E and J&A and of course C&E.

Thanks for a gripping and awewsome story.

i love this story so much i have only got to chapter 24 so far but i had to know what happend to james so i of course read the end of the story before i read the rest i am intrested in the coffe shop opening its own publishing house i would love to hear moor about it i am in the middle of writing three storys one is of course twilight a twilight/harry potter croosover and a original story of my own i have also decided that my storys will be posted on this sight moor thane on fan fiction i dont agree with them erasing peoples storys so please let me know about the publishing house i and am looking forward to hopfully  seeing moor storys like this in the future hope to hear from you soon and please update soon

Wow. What a chapter. I know James deserves what he is getting. But a part of me wants to show him mercy. Not mercy in the sense of walking away, but just the mercy of death... However, brilliant, intense and well-written chapter. Thank you so much for sharing. And oh! Where do I sign up for a copy of the book? I'll preorder and pay now. Greetings from Denmark, Kristina.

James doesn't seem to like the other end of the torture. I feel so bad for him. Not!

When I saw the update in my inbox I was all bouncy and YAY!!! then I though it was the second to last chapter I as noooooooo come on not yet!!

Now I am soooo happy giddy almost about the torture!

One question I have though! How exactly is the brand??

Aro is cool!!

xoxo

Marianne

PS I 'd love more information about the publishin house!!

i'm so sad and so excited at the same time sad this is almost finished i will re read as you are leaving it up thankyou for that and excited that you are publishing as an original work i cant wait to purchase that, i would lve to read the teaser how do i do that? or shall i just wait for the news section of twcs, this chapter superbly written  as usual is is bad of me to enjoy his emmense suffering now and his  his lifelong suffering he better get used to the feeling of his ass being used and abused i dont think so as he deserves it,  it's everything he would have done to bella and victoria, james really wasnt very smart when he pissed off every body at the school with his treatment of bella and aro  who sounds like a man who can inflict a hell of a lot of pain thanks ladies best wishes tracy  

LOVE to see that James is getting what he deserves.  You said you wanted to write the long AN at the end of this chapter because you were still happy... does that mean bad news for our fave couple then in the next?

I love the fact that you're opening a publishing house!  What a huge undertaking!  I look forward to learning more about it...

Yay!!!

Yeah, Death is too good for James.

Enjoyed your writing

New reader!!! Just spent all day reading this and I am so loving it. can't wait for the next chapter

I must say this story is quite the roller coaster,I have loved and hated moments of it.just so you know this one has kept me interested in it for days .. well done.

I cant wait for the rest..plz hurry

I'm on the edge of my seat! Can't wait to see what happens next! Awesome job, ladies...

OMG!!! He killed him? Wow! Pure genius, love this story!

So glad they got the call in time and were able to get out of there. Hope James doesn't find them. Thanks for sharing!

I've spent the last two days soaking up this story. Yall...this is seriously fantastic. I just wish I started to read it sooner :) I came across it once and I'll admit...at first it felt a bit too graphic for me. I am SO glad I came back around and gave this story another chance! I should've known how great this story was...sice I've been throughly enjoying the rest of yall's stories. Like you can see, I could go on & on about how awesome this story is...but I'm going to shut up so yall can get back to posting your next fabulous chapter! :)

Perfect ladies!! 

You mean do a one-shot of Bella pre-James? That would be interesting.  I wouldn't read a full on story with Bella though and no Edward... But would definately be up for a one-shot.

Hope you enjoyed your time off, I had it in my head that I wouldn't be hearing from you pair until the end of the month, so this was a lovely surprise.

Thank you.

x x

I love love love love this story. It has torn my heart to pieces and then stitched it back together again repeatedly. There is a part of me that is glad there is only a couple of chapters left so I can see how it's gonna end, but then there's a part of me that is sad that there is an end coming. These characters have become a part of my heart and mind for all time, just like family. I be back again and again to re-read this amazing story.

Thank you for sharing all your amazing talent and imagination with this wonderful story. It is greatly appreciated.

celtic   ooo

I think that would be great to know Bella before she was essentially trained by James. I think some us wonder how she could have let it get so far out of hand but guys like James' character are like a fungus they grow on you. I have seen it with my sister and her loser boyfriends I would wonder why she just wouldn't whoop their asses but they broke her down. No one who knows her would believe she was a victim of domestic abuse but love fucks up people's common sense and the intellect. They are far from stupid but lovesick dumb. Does that make any sense. Okay I'm looking forward to the ending but at the same time I'm so sad. The Perfect Wife & The training school coming to an end WTshrek is going on? I love ya. Until next time.

that was good glad that bella stood up for herself and was able to take james down glad taht edward and the guys got to her    cant wait to see what jacob says about taking him to aro instead of going to jail    cant waitt to read more

I can't believe we are almost at the end. It seems of late that all my favourite stories are concluding, and it is very sad, as i have followed many of them for a year!

I was very happy in this chapter that Bella was given the opportunity to overcome James and face the final battle alone. It shows such growth and strength in her character. It wouldn't have had the same affect if her knight in shining armour came in to save the day! Although i am a little confused about what happened between Bella beating the crap out of James (woop...so happy for her) and Edward arriving on the scene...

And that was an interesting proposition at the end there by Carlisle. It would go against everything Jacob has been taught in the police force to let Carlisle take James, but will he do it to keep Bella safe? I think he will. Everyone needs that kind of resolution.

I am very proud of you both for wanting to make this an original piece. And the idea of adding a section of Bella pre-James...i think you might need to test this on some new readers. I kind of liked where you started this story - Bella's whole mindset added to the intrigue and mystery of the story. But definitely try it...i may just be biased because i love this version so SO much!

Thankyou so much for the update. You two ladies are wonderfully brilliant as always, and deserve the highest regards for your unyeilding work! I eagerly await your next installment...

I think seeing Bella before James would be interesting. Was she strong? Was she a follower? Was she nieve? Did she have goals that James ignored? It would take the journey of Bella full circle. Bella ends the the story a very strong women.

This was an amazing story! Im really sad to see it end, but kinda glad so im not always looking for the weekend update ;) I can't wait to see what yall think up next.

I dont think the story needs a prelude of how Bella got where she is to me you already explained it really isnt needed. But I hope you are not letting Laurent's girl go, she was an accessory and needs to be handed over to Aro also. She kidnapped and didnt give a shit what happened to Bella & Victoria and if James hadnt turned on her she wouldve went on her merry way. She deserves the same as James not sympathy.

WOW. I can't wait to see what happens! Whoa we are finally going to get to meet Edward. I think your ideas for the original work is great. I think to build suspense and really get people into Bella's character getting to background early is a must. Even if you start with her in the car and her walk into the door at the school as a prologue or something then back up and tell a bit of her and James... because personally I thought that beginning really was riveting and set the stage well. This story is amazing though. I wish you the best.
~Jessi Cullen

This was a great chapter ladies! I love how Bella has finally come into her true stretngth, standing up to James is a starting step for her healing.

I really hope Jacob allows Carlisle to take James to Aro. Though would that make them no better than James? Hmm, interesting ethical dilemma. I agree with Carlisle, the justice system and dodgy lawyers would no doubt allow him to get out of true punishment. I don't think there is any hope for rehabilitation for him which jeapordizes all of their lives.

*unfurls a long cat o' nine tails furnished with metal spikes* Mind if I help out on Aro's punishment team? <insert evil cackle here>

wait so your ending the story now!? or ending it after the next two chapters? or are the next two chapters bella before she met james? i want moer of this story not of bella before james :(  like hearing about edwrd and bella not prejames bella..

but i love this chapter and all the others from this story :)

I would love a sequal or prequal, whatever it is you two are planning on writing. Both would be nice, for obvious reasons.

I loved this chapter. Bella finally showed the woman I always knew she could be.

Carlisle is completely right about the whole take James away shit. I know I would live in constant fear if all anyone ever did was lock him away.

It's funny how the chip- the source of all my angst- was the one thing that saved all the right lives. Still Victoria needs to remove that shit.

:)

Haha, suck it James, you sadistic mother fucker! Ugh, I HATE him!

Good ridance! : )

Please, can we let Em and Rose play with him, one last humiliation for shits and giggles...? *wink*

No WAY! I had no idea that Heidi was involved!

Oh, Edward... *sigh*

Loved this chapter, as always! : )

I hope Jacob agrees to let Aro take James. Great story! Yes to making a it an original work. A bit unsure if I want to see Bella in that mindset again after seeing her gain her strength and confidence. Definitely will give it a try though.

Thanks for the update. I love this story. I have been following for a long time. I don't want it to end.

I love your idea! i think you should totally do it!!!!

Excellent chapter. Can't wait for Aro to get ahold of James!

TWO CHAPTERS!!!!!! WHAT???? How can you finish this story in TWO chapters. I hope we get to read what Carlisle, Emmett, Jasper and Jacob did to James. Will Jacob or will he not give James to Carlisle????? THAT is the millon dollar question. Can't wait to find out. What will Aro do to him when/if he gets him. Can't wait to find that out too. GREAT JOB LADIES!!!!!!! LOVE this story.

uh oh. what's Aro going to do? hopefully something horrible! haha. really great chapter, i'm so glad they're safe. can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Please let Aro deal with James, it needs to be very painful and permanent.