Date: 19 May 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
How frustrating! Riley really needs to just make the call to get her home. Kate is delusional - I hope karma does a number on her. Fantastic story!
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I stumbled across your story in the most recent section and now I'm in love with your story. I have recommended your story to a couple of my friends and they are like me, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
Date: 18 May 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
So, I just found this and I'm loving it. I suspected from the beginning Kate was going to pull something like this. It's been two weeks, so I assume Riley didn't turn her in...and he was calling her a blonde? That's major stupid!
Date: 17 May 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
love this story, can't wait for more.
Date: 15 May 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope Riley does the right thing here, as well as Kate. She needs to get Emma back to Edward, she can't handle her properly yet.
Date: 15 May 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Riley better smarten up and report Kate. They might let him off with a deal, since he was only an accessory after the fact.
Date: 14 May 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is so sad! I hope they find her soon!
Date: 14 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was very well played! :)
Date: 14 May 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm seriously about to cry! Kate is such a bitch!
Date: 14 May 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
Daddyward so sweet :) and of course Carlisle!
Date: 14 May 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
so fucked up. hope she gets back to them soon.
Date: 14 May 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
I usually wouldn't go for that kind of thing but that was HOT!
Date: 14 May 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
*sigh* Edward is so perfect.
Date: 14 May 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
:( I hope Bella answers soon! Edward should go see her!
Date: 14 May 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter. hope emma gets home soon
Date: 14 May 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
OMG...I want to bitch slap Kate! Emma better come home to Edward. Cant wait for more.
Date: 14 May 2010 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope Riley reports her because he's right- she cannot hide. Update soon please.
Date: 14 May 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Noo! Jacob and kate!
Date: 14 May 2010 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Carlisle seeing Edward leave her room was pretty funny! I'm glad the chapter ended with them going to work things out :)
Date: 14 May 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
wow... poor Emma..
great chapter
Date: 14 May 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved the chapter... curious about the Jake comment... I hope she isn't currently dating him.
Date: 14 May 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow.. that was the hottest first chapter I have read!
Date: 14 May 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
This chapter made me cry! Emma running up to the Police Officer for help...that tore my heart out! Not to mention the fact that Kate is my daughters name, so the emotions are totally conflicting.
Date: 14 May 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope they get her back soon
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Leave it to you to give us some lemony goodness after being so pissed off at Kate for taking Emma. Please let Riley do the right thing (even if it's anonymously) and turn Kate in. Yes, Emma is young and may not be too traumatized but she needs her Daddy and the longer she's away, the harder it will be.
Looking forward to the update....this story is one of my favorites and I savor each word!
Date: 14 May 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
LOVE THIS STORY! Please update again soon!!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
I cant believe no on in LA has seen them.
Date: 14 May 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG I thought things were going to work out quick when Emma seen the cop but I should of known better LOL. They have to find the bitch before long she better not get ruff with that baby. So glad Bella has stayed with him but where else should she be.
Date: 14 May 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
awesome chapter! And I loved the teaser you posted! :) Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 14 May 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
I can't believe Kate has lasted this long. Come on Riley do the right thing...turn her in. Great job...thanks so much!
Date: 14 May 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
awww c'mon riley. do the right thing.
Date: 14 May 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad Kate's at least not w a drug addict or psycho. Can't imagine how scared Emma is though.
Date: 14 May 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
well, I loved it!
I am happy Kate was at least trying...even though her fucked up intentions were honorable...she went about it all teh wrong way!
Glad that Riley has a conscience...........I hope he turns her in!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was really good I just hope they find her soon loved it update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
That what crazy ex-girlfriend drug addicts do, stupid stuff.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Of course he took the money, what good dad wouldnt?
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
Aww how sweet. They should be friends first.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, what a messed up life.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Of course she is bad news, she did drugs while she was pregnant.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
I cant believe Bella is hooking up with Jake while he has Leah. What the heck is wrong with her?? And Kate is back after all this time???
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thank goodness they are willing to give it a try.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
How can this work out??
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I cant believe she would do that with someone she just met.
Date: 12 May 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
Boo what a bitch Kate is. Update soon!
Date: 10 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story. I feel so bad for Edward hopefully they will find Kate fast and kill her. Sorry I know that's harsh, but that's what I would do if someone took my daughter (Who's middle name just so happens to be Emma.) I hope that they have Emma home safe soon.
I love all that the stroy revolves around Philadelphia. I'm a Philly girl (I went to Ryan) But I live in the Pocono's now and this story is making me home sick.
Keep up the great work I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I am a philly girl too! You should Read Counterpoint that is Philly too!
Date: 10 May 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awww.. Oh kate is in so much trouble....I hope she gets whats comin' for her...
Date: 10 May 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMFG!!!!!! I knew that something was going to happen when Kate took the money. When I read that Edward dropped Emma off and daycare and Rose was to pick her up I felt like Kate was going to try and take her BUT I never thought she would get away with it. I thought maybe Rose would show up at the last minute or the people at the daycare would call Edward to verify that Kate could pick her up and then the police would get called because Kate made a scene.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 May 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
SOOOOOO LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! I am excited that you are updating so quickly. Loveing it. I can not believe that Kate would do that....YES I CAN!!! With Edward out of town and telling her things like she will only see Emma when he says and that she has not right...there is no telling what Kate will do. I am worried.
I am glad that Edward and Bella do not have to hide anymore.
Date: 10 May 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
For a os, I think this story has a great continuation. I was really surprised to see the twist.
Date: 10 May 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG PLEASE UP-DATE SOON:) This is a great story. Heart breakingly good. I admit I thought at first it would be like all of the other stories, but you really captured the characters and brought Emma alive. The villian Kate is a nice surprize. Usually it is Tayna. Edward is a total DILF.
Date: 10 May 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG! I had a bad feeling something like that was going to happen when he dropped her off at day care :( Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 09 May 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
GASPS...poor Emma, poor Edward. when we find Kate i think she is in for a beat down. please update soon!
Date: 09 May 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh. my. god! I am totally bawling right now! I am grabbing the torches and the pitch forks! That bitch is going down!
Date: 09 May 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter...but I thought Emma's middle name was Grace?
Date: 09 May 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
WHAT THE HELL IS EDWARD THINKING? I get that he wants to put his daughter before himself, but that doesn't mean he has to take Kate back! She used while pregnant...she needs to go! That just disgusts me and how Edward thinks she deserves another chance is completely beyond me. He'll never be able to trust her with Emma and she is still hanging around Victoria and James...give me a break! This really pisses me off!
Date: 09 May 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wasn't expecting that one. What a surprise.
Date: 09 May 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON... THIS IS GREAT!!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
I WANT TO KILL KATE MYSELF!
Date: 09 May 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
nice buttseck!!!!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
aww that is so beautiful...
Date: 09 May 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter. cant wait for kate to get whats coming to her
Date: 09 May 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh poor bella.. this is sad... FIX IT!!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
Please update quick! And please let her be ok!!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh yeah... and is bella going to say she slept with Jake one last time? well I guess they weren't technically together? hmm... grey area.. lol
Date: 09 May 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG OMG OMg
I hate Kate!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope they find Emma fast.
Can't wait till the next one
Date: 09 May 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm this complicates things.. not a nice neat bow... LOL
Date: 09 May 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
aww that is super sweet i am loving this.. would you mind if I featured this on the library next week?
Author's Response:
I would be honored!! So glad you like it!
Date: 09 May 2010 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
aww that is so romantic.. and what a hot chapter..
Date: 09 May 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow that was a great chapter.. can't wait for the next one.. going to read on..
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
I need need need to know what happens next..*
Alice R..*
Date: 09 May 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG I knew I was missing something I missed this chapter and read 10 first I was trying to figure out when Kate took the money. Glad to read this chapter filled in the holes I was missing and the boby display sounds so cool not sure how I would feel about the babys either.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
i new it that kate was planing that i cant wait to find out what happens next why do i habve a feeling that kate is with victoria and james and that they are still in the city so please update soon
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
That fucking Bitch :(
LOVE the chapter ^^
Date: 09 May 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG SUCH A PLOT TWIST!! amazing :) :) Was not expecting that at alll!!!!
More soon please :)
Date: 09 May 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
So far I am loving this. At first I was shocked that they jumped into bed so quickly, but you remedied that by balancing their feelings. I can't wait to see how things materialize once they are separated!
Date: 09 May 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Kate must die that dirty rotten bitch how dare she take that baby from her daddy. Kate knew that Emma loved Bella and she didnt love her so steel her not a nice lady. Find her quick she needs her daddy and Bella. By the way I would like to say this is a wonderful story.
Date: 09 May 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG I had a feeling this would happen. Please update soon I have to know what happens next. Good job.
Date: 09 May 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh please say he gets Emma back safely and Kate gets what she deserves!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Freaking Kate! I get it now...the whole thing! I've worried for years that my ex would do the same thing and run off with my kids and so this makes it all the more real. I think I may visit my lawyer on Monday!!!
Anyway, great chapter, was crying right along with Edward in this one!
Sarah
Date: 09 May 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG! NOOOOOO!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Date: 09 May 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hmm. Don't care for the family'n, well i s reaction to E's decision about Kate. E is smart and is doing what he feels is best for his child.
And as far as B having an abortion and seeking redemption or only doing it for a man is insulting. Or maybe its just me because all the stories involving an unplanned or teenage pregnancy always end w sunshine and roses. I just think there's another side.
Date: 09 May 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my lord! I was shocked! I mean, I figured Kate would do something crazy...but I figured it would be some drug thing. Wow! I love the multi-chapter update...thanks for that. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Guess Bella will be staying closer to them after this mess, eh? Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Date: 09 May 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
OH I didn't see this coming. I expected jealousy and court battle.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Breaks my heart!
Date: 09 May 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
when they find that stupid psychotic bitch....can they LITERALLY rip her apart??????
Date: 09 May 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chap! Can't wait to see what happens next...And high five for the fast update! You made my saturday :)
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG please I hope she comes back soon can't wait loved it update when you can thanks.....
Date: 09 May 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
not going to kill you honestly! this is getting good. I love it. I was almost crying right along with Edward when I found out Kate took Emma and then for Bella to just drop everything and go to him was awesome. I love it. keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
Date: 09 May 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
lights a toorch to go after Kate....as long as Emma comes home safely no authresses will get hurt :)
Date: 09 May 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
Update!!!! Please like now-ish. This kind of a cliff-hanger is not the fun kind. I need to see Kate go to jail. Please?
Date: 09 May 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG!! I was really hoping that when Bella got off the plane she would see Kate trying to drag Em on a plane!!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
OK - no killing but you have to update SOON, please!!??!!?? How in the hell did Kate get access to Edward's apartment?? You know, it is more common than people think on child kidnapping. Lots of times childcare establishments say they have positive i.d. required for pick up but lots of times, employees get lazy and they just release kids without checking first. Happened to my kid's daycare and yes, the next day I pulled him out and put him somewhere else where you were buzzed in like a bank and only 1 person (the director) was able to release the kids.
Date: 09 May 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Sad that Emma got taken, hoping they find her fast. Daddyward is so awesome, I can really feel his emotion.
Date: 09 May 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
This chapter was amazing! I really hope they find Kate and Emma ASAP and that Kate gets punished severely!
Date: 09 May 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
OK - now I remember. Jessica and Mike being total assholes...poor bella!
Thanks for the reminder!