Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
What the frick is going on!!!!!! No! this is all wrong!?! What the HELL is Edward doing!?!? Obviously he doesn't grasp what this will do to his and Bella "relationship". God he is so naive. I really hope Bella calls Jake out on his shit! Right in front of his wife too!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Amazing chapter! Looking forward to seeing what Edward thinks of the message Bella left him!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
God you suck you know that? lol no I'm kidding but that does suck about Kate coming back just right when they are getting things going. :( Please update again soon. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
really good chapter! and for some reason I don't believe Kate :( Keep writing...can't wait to see more :)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
So he didn't get Bella's message yet or did she not send it? Loved the chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really think Edward is making a big mistake letting Kate back into his life and not telling Bella about it. Did he really think that Alice would keep news like that to herself? Nobody likes Kate and doesn't want Emma and Edward to be hurt in the process. I'm just waiting for Edward's reaction to Bella's phone message. That'll really knock him off his rocker.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome story so far :)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
OOOHHH...Im really hoping you update this soon!!! Im impatient...LOL...great story cant wait for mroe!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am slightly peeved that she
called jake! . That proves
she is to young for a real
relationship! Love the story! :)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
cant wait till the next one
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for updating so quickly. I am so in love with your story. This story line is wonderful. You are doing an amazing job writing it. I am sooo into this.
I love how you have written Edward and Bella's feelings for each other. Please don't let Bella sleep with Jake. What is Kate up to??? Does she want Emma back?? I hope not.
BOY, I can't wait for another update. Please don't leave us hanging for to long.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh crap! ok so awesome chapter... please let Bella leave the Hotel ... and can't wait to see what the heck Kate wants!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well that’s just perfect... What can Kate possible want after 3 years, hopefully Edward tells her to kick rocks! And Bella! What is she thinking!?!?!? I hope she decides to end it with Jacob for good, I mean come on... he's with Leah!!! She can't possible condone cheating right!?
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
NO WAY KATES BACK. WHAT THE DEAL WITH JACOB IS HE MARRIED TO LEAH??
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope all is well in Edward; Bella land?????
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella cant go through with being with Jake they are having an afair???? Kate OH NO what the hell does she want???? When is Bella going to get the message form Edward????
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope Bella doesn't do something she'll regret
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really hope that Bella doesn't sleep with Jake. She's already realized that it's not the same as being with Edward and doesn't merit the same feelings as being with Edward either. I just don't want to see her be with Jake just because it's easy. I really think Bella and Edward need to talk more and discuss things.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yes what was Kate doing there and what did she want? lol don't leave us hanging and while I'm there, WTF is up with Miss Bella? is she out of her freaking skull? and what is with her and Jake? their fuck buddies, sorry but buddies? Priceless :D this is going great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Update soon can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh gosh, this is going to be good. After three years she shows up now, after he has found Bella. I wonder what she wants. I hope Bella doesn't slip and have sex with Jake or Edward doing the same with Kate. Great chapter. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what happens in both situations!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love making! Wondering if Emma is going with the fam shopping? We'll see...
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Daddy Edward, that's so fuck hot! Great story of a father's love, dedication and determination to raise his little girl. Def think he has Bella as that "type" of girl wrong. She just can't resist him. I'm guessing she's only been w/Jacob. I like how you had Kate as his booty call. Poor Tanya has a rep as a whore in most stories, ha. Good detailed, heart warming, and the plot is fun to read. This is on my fav list. Thanks for the story!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
WOW!!!! This chapter was VERY moving. I loved it. You did a great job writing it. I am soooo falling in love with this story.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really like this story so far. I look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
SO happy they are going to try to work something out! I am also curious about Jake...Is he married? Can't wait to read more!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
great chapter. cant wait for the next one
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
GOOD CHAPTER
Date: 18 Apr 2010 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
I would love to see them together... and Emma.... what a cutie...
Date: 18 Apr 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad they figured out that it's not a fling
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved this one the best....i think because the cat kinda got let out of the bag..........it would be interesting to see what CARLISLE thought about it all...did he talk to Esme about it or keep it to himself...maybe something to put in an outtake!
Super happy and grateful for the fast updates...keep doing a great job!!!!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
There day alone was so adorable! I can't believe Carlisle caught them! LOL, that was priceless. The fact that Edward was able to confide in Jasper was great, I wonder if Bella will fell the need to do the same with Alice. I am happy they want to work things out, hopefully it does!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
OH thank god they both said it was more than a fling. I cant wait to see were this goes and what a dick Jacob is.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start!! You would never expect Bella to be so forward!! LOL!!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad they talked about what they are feeling for each other. So what is the story behind Jake back home? Just a friend with benifits? Bella said in a previous chapter that she moved around alot, so maybe she could transfer to a school closer to where Edward and Emma live. That would be great. Thanks for the update. Great chapter.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am so happy! You gave us another chapter!!
You love us! YEAH! :) It is really brilliant! :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
great story... can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was one of the hottest first encounters I have read. I am off to take a cold shower. Thanks!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was great! I loved that chapter.... can't wait to see more and how they will try to work things out cross-country! But New Years should be great! :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
Aww, I feel so bad for them. They care so much for each othar, even after just knowing each other a few days. I really hope they find a way to make it work.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
one day at a time indeed. :D i guess I wasn't paying attention but I had no idea he was what 27? where she is only 19. wow, that is not a problem though. keep up the lemons and smutty goodness and Emma too. I love Emma. thanks again bye
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow!! love this story and the lemons are soooo hot!! :) Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
OH MY GOSH!!!!! THAT WAS WONDERFUL!!!!!!!
I love this story.
Does Alice know what is going on?????? Can't wait for you to update. PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW that was quick for Bella and Edward. Not even 24-hours. Way to go Bella!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more. I love me some Daddy Edward.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am LOVING this holiday trip. Can't wait for the next chapter. Wonder how long before the family catches on to their midnight lovin'??
Hope Bella joins Alice for New Years!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
They're falling... and falling fast! I really hope they figure something out before the end of the weekend. Edward seems to really be confortable and enjoying his time with Bella, and the fact that Emma likes her is all the better! Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nothing sexier than a single daddy!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
I loved it!!! Uh oh, will they wake before anyone finds them together? I can't wait to see all the fun they will have together as a little family while the others are gone for the day. Thanks for the update. Great chapter.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
The family figure out what is going on???? Do they get busted???? Love your story need more
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
please tell me that they get caught by a little pixie the next morning she is already thinking someithing is going on i cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter someone is going to find out i cant wiat so please udpate soon
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
That was just perfect! :)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
It is so natural and midnight meeting oh yah
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow Rose is a B***H!!! I hope Alice is ok with everything and that they have a HEA Lol yes i know were only 2 ch's in to the story!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG.. i wonder what will happen after the holiday is over?
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it!!! Im excited to read more!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter. I'm glad that Bella stuck up for herself with Rose. Even Edward was getting tired of her attitude as well. And it's obvious that feelings are starting to emerge between Edward and Bella. I can't wait to see how it plays out.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
AWW!!!! I love where this story is going. I love Emma the best but Edward and Bella's relationship (even if it is based on fuck buddies lol) for right now is sweet mixed with hotter than hell. :) keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
So sweet and sexy
Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
what a great day and night......the distance does suck.....but I am sure they'll work it out!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter love your story
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was great! I like the duel pov's!
That lemon was mighty fine! I look
forward to see where you take it! :)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was an awesome first chapter. I love Edward as a DILF!!! I'm sure he will try to change the distance once Thanksgiving is over. LOL This is going to be a great. Can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, well that's definately a more confident Bella than I'm used to reading about. Interested in seeing where this story goes
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! Just one chapter and I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next installment.
You have done a wonderful job so far. Good luck with the rest of it.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
great job. cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Keep it going! I love a good dilfward story.........was this the one shot tht was posted somewhere else....or do I need to go find that?
I hope Bella makes it clear to him that she isn't usually that kind of girl. Condoms? He didn't know her that well....and besides he is a doctor...he knows these things!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow that was great
Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
those two are crazy!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely adorable!! Please say you’re going to update soon?!?! Defiantly adding this story to my favorites!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow...steamy love fest...lol
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a first chapter!!! And way to go Bella for being bold and getting with Edward right away. She sure knows what she wants and he obviously does, too, cuz he wants to see her again that evening. I am just hoping they are able to continue seeing each other after the holidays. It's obvious Edward likes her, as does Emma, too.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was great I am so glad that you posted this over here i love this story
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oooooo! nasty Edward yum! can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this chapter - can't wait for the next one!!