Date: 12 May 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
AWESOME!!! story ;) in your a/n at the top you mentioned that there's an epilogue to come? i REALLY hope you manage to come back and post it asap PLEASE ;D
Date: 08 Aug 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it, please hurrrrrrry lol
Date: 08 Apr 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
This was a really great story!!!
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
She should have listened to Emmett
Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
I hope this isn't the end?
Date: 02 Oct 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 30
Excellent story!!
I LOVE CIA & Mafia stories & this was no exception!!! It had so many elements of a great story...romance, friendship, humor, mystery, suspense, drama, CIA, Mobsters, danger & so much more!!! :)
U really should write more!!
P.S. I hope RL for you has improved over the years! I hate u had to go thru such a tough divorce & custody battle.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
First, I want to tell u what an awesome story this is!!! I can't put it down it's so good!!!
Second, u created a James that was actually likable & made a James & Bella couple with an intense, passionate, & loving relationship...at least in the beginning. :)
Thirdly, I abt fell over when u referenced Ridgeway, SC!!! I grew up in Lexington, SC before moving to NC in 1994. My husband & 2 kids moved back to Blythewood, SC in 2005 for his job for 2 yrs before he was transferred back to NC. In fact, we still own our home in Blythewood!!!
What a small world!!!
I would love to hear your connection to Ridgeway as it is a small town that few know of. :)
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
i didn't think you'd actually let bella leave with them. that was a twist. i know there are only a few chapters left, but i hate the thought of bella going anywhere with those psychos and leaving edward behind.
Date: 17 Aug 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
for some reason, until now i didn't connect marcus/james with marcus volturi. this james is so very evil, and he really is crazy about bella (emphasis on crazy). poor edward must be going crazy because we all know bella would sacrifice herself to save the ones she loves.
Date: 09 Mar 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
I just wanted to say, after reading your authors note in the beginning, you have a duty to yourself first and foremost when painting "your" vision. I'm appalled that some of your readers would actually send you hate mail, as if in order to sway you to write or not write the way they wanted. It's crass and dispicable. Take what you can from the haters if anything, and ignore the rest. Don't ever sell yourself short or change for anyone but you. I'm behind you 100%
Date: 09 Mar 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
I have to admit I'm not an Edward/Bella paired fan. I'm more of a Jasper/Bella fan. Mostly because most Edwards in fics I've read and in the movie are emo and broody. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Rob bigtime. Anyway, I think your version of Edward is the best written that I've read so far. I really like him in this fic. You really are an amazing writer and after this I look forward to more of your stories:)
Author's Response:
Date: 08 Mar 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
This chapter had me in tears. I have 3 boys of my own and can't have anymore. And even though I'm grateful for them, I still yearn for another. With that and this exceptionally well written chapter I needed half a box of Kleenex. Good job!
Date: 07 Mar 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
Those were some great jokes!
What does James think or feel about Edward's Affection towards Bella?
Date: 06 Mar 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I really enjoyed this first chapter. When Bella spoke of the loss of her parents and the greif and sorrow her and Emmett share, I actually sobbed. It was pretty powerful.
Great GREAT job on the beginning of what I'm sure I will find to be a wonderful fic.
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
What a powerful plot and great writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for that... Its taken me forever to finish it but now we only have the epi left...
Date: 09 Dec 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
loved it. Couldn't help liking James in the beginning though. Not enough chapters with her and Edward being together but I really enjoyed this story.
Author's Response:
I loved James throughout this story... even when he was an evil SOB... but he had to end... I am writing another story that is B/James, with a little bit of E/B in between... but I love me some James and think it's time for him to be a good guy for a change. Keep watch for my stories.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
I really loved this story, thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading my story and leaving a review.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
wow... so I just found this and have been reading! WOW... This was an amazing story! I am happy that she finally got to kill him. Can't wait to read the epi to see where everyone's future ends up! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. And thanks for the review.
Date: 17 Nov 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
love it
Author's Response:
Thank ya
Date: 16 Nov 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
so good ...
Author's Response: tee hee thanks
Date: 16 Nov 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 30
wow. so i read all 30 chapters today. I love it so far. Great story
Author's Response:
Wow... good job... those are pretty long chapters lol... Glad you liked it though.
Date: 16 Nov 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
oh my goodness..................that was amazing........i cant believe james...hate him!!!! i love it amazing writing!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.... Glad you loved it.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 30
Welcome back & thank you. Very well written!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. Glad you liked it.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
loved the ending!
Author's Response:
Glad you loved it. Thanks for the review
Date: 15 Nov 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
Glad that it was Bella that got to take out James. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: I've had that planned since the beginning.. It always had to be her.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
bella's kinda dumb. any girl who puts up with that is.
Date: 09 May 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm so sorry for the crap year you had...remember, HE never gives you anything he doesn't think you can't handle....it will just make you stronger!
Great chapter....I'm so glad you didn't drag it out. It has been a while (understandably) so a brief refresher was in order.
Honestly, I think whatever you write will be anticlimactic. Maybe a few chapters to wrap it up....is James dead? What happened in tuscany? Maybe a wrap and then if you feel like it, maybe a sequel like Love and Redemption or something like that..
Stay strong & best of luck to you!
J
Date: 08 May 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yeah!! A wedding, can't wait.
Date: 08 May 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Sorry to hear about everything you've been going through, glad it worked out for you in the wnd!
Love this story I need to go back and reread it from the beginning now that is back!
So glad that bella is safe and with little Emma again. Great chapter.
Date: 08 May 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait to get more of EPOV!
Date: 08 May 2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ahwww! So Sweet.
Date: 07 May 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm falling in love with James? How is thus possible?
Date: 07 May 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
You're an amzing storyteller. Throughly enjoying your writing. Thanks!
Date: 07 May 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 29
It had been so long I went back and read the whole thing over again. It was just as good the 2nd time as it was a year ago. I Really look forward to the next chapter. Is it curtain time for James? Will the voturi leave Bella alone? Will Bella feel the need to disappear? That girl never thinks ahead and is too in the moment. Can't wait!
Date: 06 May 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 29
glad that your back and im excited for the next chapter
Date: 05 May 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
omg i love it!!! amazing!!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
This is amazing!!
Date: 11 Dec 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
I like Ryan too. He sound really cute.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
I have been reading your story from FF.net but saw that you are also posting it here. The reason why I signed up for this site was to read a fic that was moved here. Anyway, I hope you update very soon. I usally forget about what's going on in a story if it hasn't been updated in a while but it's hard to forget this one.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
I noticed that there has not been an update since July on this story. I really hope you will continue to update. Especially since it has been left on sort of a cliff hanger.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh no! This should never have happened, with Phil being ex-CIA, they still have the resources and knowledge on tracking and rescuing. Where were their guns and weapons. They never even had a chance to fight James and his thugs off.
Please have Bella and Emma make a speedy return to their family safely.
I'd like to see Aro punish James/Marcus severely for his degenerate and violent behavior with Bella.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
That just made my heart melt when Emma called Edward Daddy -- so adorable. They finally get to be a happy family like they should have been all along.
Edward deserves happiness, for always being there for Emma and Bella and being such a gentleman and so very patient. He makes my heart melt. He will make a wonderful father.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
Greatg ending to the chapter -- very cleaver. I'm so happy that they told Bella right away about not naming James as the father in any way, so he wouldn't have any rights.
I hope Bella gets payback for everything James did to her.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
Not good -- James has now moved on to stalking. I'm worried for Bella and Edward.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm completely shocked that James didn't go off about Bella going with both him and Edward to Prom. Could he have been sincere about not being angry and jealous with Bella anymore? Highly doubtful, but then he was fine with Edward rubbing Bella's feet while they lay by the fire.
I sure hope James doesn't know about the $450,000 of insurance money that Bella was left
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Damn! I feel sorry for James. Being a child of abuse really messed him up for life, unless he gets therapy, he will become abusive. And, unfortunately, abuse always escalates and he's already shown signs of being mildly abusive with Bella.
Emmett is going to be so pissed off when he finds out. He has quite a temper himself, this could get really bad.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
This is a really different James (in a way), he seems to really love Bella, but has future abuser written all over him. I'm curious about what happened to him in his past. I hope Bella puts a stop to this abusive, obsessive/posessive behavior quickly.
I have a feeling things are going to escalate when the Tequila comes into play. It sure isn't going to make it better.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like the interesting twist. Does Edward have a girlfriend also, or is he crushing on Bella?
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
Is Edward and Bella ever gon be together in this story.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
I think this is one of the best creepy James. I'm so sad there's only one more chapter left for now. L&O has become one of my top favorites and I can't wait for more!
Thanks again for taking the time to share your story with the fandom.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
Sorry I haven't reviewed until the 26th chapter... I just read your a/n at the beginning of chapter 27 and thought I'd leave you a review. I'm glad you didn't let those emails stop you from writing. This is a pretty long story and you've obviously dedicated a ton of time and effort to it, don't let the opinions of a few stop you from doing what you love!
This is by far my favorite chapter so far! It's very suspenseful and I never saw your Aro character coming.
Thank you so much for sharing your story with the fandom!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
i am loving this story when are you going to update again?
Date: 03 Aug 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ohmygoodness, I love this story, I just started reading it 2 days ago and I'm already done. You need to update it (please). Sorry if other people have given you bad reviews, but I love it. I think you are a great writer! Keep up the good work =)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
i love it! i think alec and laurent are gonna help bella i love it! i hope james will get killed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
bella..............she should do something to him in that room like look for something sharp
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
i love it i cannot believe them i wanna kill them!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
omg..............i love it someone help her!!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
omg...........
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww I LOVE IT! the wedding sounds beautiful even though its simple
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
awwwwwww i love it!!! emma is soo cute!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
aw they should get married tomorrow then later when everything is safe have a real wedding i love it!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
omg..............i hope she says yes i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
omg i love it!!!! they will now no! james better not do anything to emma
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
awwwwwwwwwww i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
awwwwww i love it!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
i knew it was gonna happen sometime i love it!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
shes gonna get him back in jail!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
i love it! im happy they are over but i was hoping she would have ended it earlier
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
he should have said i love it!!!!!!!1 GRRRRRRR JAMES! i cannot believe bella didnt see it. she is blinded by love.......
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
i love it amazing!!!!! i listened to jimmy soul lol!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
the truck is james.....
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
i love it. bella might get pregnant!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
i wonder what he did i love the prom!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
i love it!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
omg bella ur in danger!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
i love it! i dont like james why cant bella see hes bad news?
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
i love it what bella said is touching!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
i dont like james i love it though!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
omg............i love it!!!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
i love it!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love it so far great chapter! i wonder what james did
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
great story!!! I can't wait for the next chap!! I am hooked!!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
HOLY SHIT THIS CHAP WAS INTENSE!!! THIS STORY KINDA REMINDS ME OF THE MOVIE FEAR! I LOVE IT!!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
loved the song. gonna have to downlosd it for my mp3, thanks.
it is nice to see that miss bella seems to have a few allies in the world of crazy she is stuck in right now. and the family knows were she is and are working to get her home.
i am all caught up now so please... update soon.
hope rl is treating you better! :)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
poor bella looks like in this one eddie is gonna have to save her from italy, but at least baby emma is safe at home.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
well holy shit! em and ed are gonna be so pissed at bella. i only hope that aro is honest in wanting to keep bella and emma safe and not just playing it up....
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
just goes to show that you can know how to fight, shoot, and handle a knife but when fear gets you sometimes it means nothing...
Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
see i told ya jameswas just gonna get more pissed and things would escalate.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
Haha mine was just up from the courthouse wedding, I got married in my livingroom! Lol! Wow they are moving fast! But again I don't think james is gonna care about a wedding. I think this will just piss him off more!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
well now everyone knows and all they have to do is find a way to deal with james. i wonder what jasper is gonna say about james' past?
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh boy looks like james doesn't really want baby emma. he seems to believe that edward is the baby daddy.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
well something tells me that marrying eddie and saying he's the daddy is not gonna be enough to make james go away...
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
well i must say miss bella is a lot like me, well minus the crazy staulker ex-boyfriend, and i had 2 kids, and some other storyland things. i remeber being a teen mom, going to prego school, realizing after high school that i needed to be home with my babies, and even waiting till my baby was in grade 1 before i got a part time job. being home with my kidlettes was awsome and i highly recomend it to all moms or dads!
i wonder how em is gonna take the truth?
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yay baby emma is here! I remember having the babies, 10hours of hard labour with the girl and not even 25 minutes with the boy.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
They are too cute with how they are together and em!? She's pregers it is not like she is untouched!
On a side note I remember prego school but we had more than a classroom, we had almost 200 students!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
well i am glad that james never got the chance to rape her. i figured that was how baby was gonna happen.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
well that was a close one! about damn time she called to turn his ass in.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
well it all seemed a little fishy, and now we know why. well bella now has someone to talk to about all of this crap. i sure hope when things get really bad bella will let ryan help her out.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
ok i get the rough make up sex but seriously this girl needed to see something was wrong with that picture?!?!?!?! and the death threat against ryan? red flag, red flag hunny! poor eddie does he know it's james or is he thinking ryan too? and what about the fallout when james hears what the girls think happened?