Date: 30 May 2010 3:32 PM Title: The First Six Months
that was an amazing chapter. i don't usually go fo "older edward" but yours is pretty fuckin hot, i also like your bella, she's strong, smart, self assured. i hate when she's whiney martyr bella
Author's Response:
So do I - I have a big problem with wimp Bella.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 2:59 PM Title: Christmas Break
I am so glad that this is a full story now.I can't wait till the party I bet James will be there loved it
Date: 30 May 2010 2:03 PM Title: Christmas Break
loved this story. great work
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 12:34 PM Title: Christmas Break
great chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2010 7:14 PM Title: The First Six Months
I love this story for sure! :)
Date: 25 May 2010 10:08 PM Title: The First Six Months
loved it
Date: 25 May 2010 2:43 PM Title: The First Six Months
:)
Date: 25 May 2010 5:09 AM Title: The First Six Months
I like how you're developing the story. It was a really pleasant surprise to see it become a story.
Bella is mature, extremely. She knows what she wants and realizes it will take time, she doesn't mind. She prefers to be patient, to wait and not give up. Edward is surprised by how she has been behaving and how supportive she has been.
Things apparently will work out for them, even Emily seems closer to Bella than anyone could have expected.
Author's Response:
Bella has babysat the kids for he and Tanya before so Emily knows her as being very kind to them.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 4:57 AM Title: The First Six Months
this is so good i loved it it could be a great full story really hot
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 4:55 AM Title: Be My Master
i really hope you make this a full story it's really good
Date: 25 May 2010 4:07 AM Title: The First Six Months
loved it
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: The First Six Months
Damn, that Bella is a smart cookie. I wouldn't want her conspiring against me!
Those are some tasty lemons you included in here. I can't wait to read about the playroom. And I loved how he set her up to fail while he fucked her on his desk so that he could "punish" her...very hot!!!
Date: 15 May 2010 7:34 PM Title: Be My Master
Are you going to continue this story? It's hard to find good BDSM stories and this one is very good.
Author's Response:
I think I will. This is entered in the Forbidden Lemon Contest on FF, so I can't do anything to it until voting is over on the 24th I think. After that I am considering writing atleast the 5 years in between.
Date: 10 May 2010 5:19 AM Title: Be My Master
Wow. I freaked out when you said '5 years' because I didn't expect them to get married. But am so glad it was her and not Tanya. wow, talk about stuffed with lemons, ha.
Date: 01 May 2010 10:00 AM Title: Be My Master
Love it. Any chance you can write their whole story for us? Thanks for writing xx
Author's Response:
I am thinking about it. I entered this in a contect on FF so I can't do anything with it until the end of May but that should give me plenty of time to write some of it - I am thinking the time 5 years in between....
If anyone has ideas let me know.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:27 PM Title: Be My Master
OMG!!! That was intense ane unbelievably hot! If you decided to continue this story, I can only imagine what you could do with these two.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:41 PM Title: Be My Master
this was a hot one shot! Thanks for sharing it!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:51 AM Title: Be My Master
A determined and focused Bella, who knew exactly what she was doing and wanted. Edward was shocked but he went along with it, not only for that night, but much, much longer.
I'm sure both of them are grateful for her determination.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:10 AM Title: Be My Master
Please continue! I love this.