Date: 05 Sep 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 36
This was a hard read but necessary. I truly enjoyed this story from the standpoint that it had an HEA.
Date: 23 Mar 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh poor Bella! I got a good laugh out of that tho.
Date: 26 Jun 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 36
i loved reading this story again thanks for keeping it posted ;D
Date: 06 Jan 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I love it!!! I would love to see some future takes!!
LOVED IT!!! :D
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 35
I loved this story but am curious to read about college life and beyond ... any chance of a sequel or two?
Date: 12 Jul 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 30
So, mystery man is Renee's father ... how interesting!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 12 Jul 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
Huh? So Tanya is Bella's Aunt???? Who'd a thunk it? ... Amazing story so far though ... I have read this far in a day but am now going to sleep for a bit and finish tomorrow ... Great read! Can't put it down!!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I totally loved Jasper's tire iron in this story. He, the tire iron that is, popped up at the most random times in the heat of battle...making me laugh so hard I cried. Additionally, I really liked your character development in the story...even though some where quite OCC you made it work. This is a heavy topic and a lot of times writers can horrible mess up (making it seem false or making it to funny) but you manage to balance it well. Kudos!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 36
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 36
What a fantastic story! Loved it - will defo reccommend to my friends!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 29
Sweet Christmas gift to Daddy C, brought tears to my eyes. What creative gifts you came up with for everyone. Great chapter.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
This is a. Scooby do episode. Rut roh, who would of thought. This is a good plot:-)
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
"go all Scooby gang" haha love the reference. They do kinda match up like scooby & the gang. The Fred & Daphne are Em & Rose, Velma is Alice, Jasper for Shaggy that leaves Edward as Scooby (we know the real life RP can have some pretty goofy looks) and Bella is the victim?
Ok, maybe I'm reading to much into it, still...
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
What the heck, this is when they leave her alone?!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
There is definitely some mystery going on with Rose.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
So yeah, Rose did kind of turn in to the selfish 'Heather' and it seemed like she was going totry & be sensitive toward Bella and self aware of her brashness. Maybe she's developed a brain tumor? Haha
Date: 21 Jun 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 36
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm feeling' a bit sorry for Rose. Her intentions were good:-/
Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
bella is happy i think she will do good with her school year as long as tanya doesn't start anything
Date: 16 Jun 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
oh god i am still in tears
Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE IT ROSILEE GOT BOTH TO PUT HER IN HER PLACE
SHE NEEDED A LESSON TAUGHT
Date: 15 Jun 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh how i am enjoying reaDING THIS
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love Charlie and Carlisle - even though they are evil Mo Fo's :-) Jasper puking - hillarious. Thanks for the story
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Jeeze she can't cut a break.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yikes, Hopefully this is the end of Renee. Please don't let anything happen to Noel.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Le sigh.....Edward is perfect!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh shit - evil Rose has emerged. Be afraid - be very afraid.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh Rose you are in the dog house. Hopefully she will suck it up and apologize and not be mean to Bella. Hmmmmm
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww I love Esme. I wonder if there is an evil Esme fiction - if so, I am not interested. I like your Esme - she's perfect. Thanks for the story. I am glad I found you on boycott fanfiction weekend :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 36
Hello. I had this story in my favorites forever but never read it. I just finished reading the entire thing and I loved it. I think you did a great job developing the characters and you represented Bella and her complex feelings and fears so well. Great job. I am now going to make sure I read everything else you have written. Thank you for sharing your talent and ideas. I envy your abilities.
Vicki from Wisconsin.
Date: 02 Jun 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it so much. I'm exited that you will be writing more Homecoming, I'm really looking forward to seeing a little more from them. :)
Date: 29 May 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 36
I really enjoyed this.
Date: 26 May 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Big berthas bitch!!! Hahahaha I lost it:) very funny
Date: 26 May 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Already loving this crew. . . :)
Date: 26 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 36
You know........I read this story straight through from start to finish when you posted this last chapter. I absolutely LOVED IT !!!! I also loved the 3 outtakes that I've read. This was a really good story. Thank you so much for writing it ;-)
Date: 24 May 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 36
I just loved this story was kinda hoping that Liz and Charlie hooked up though.
Date: 24 May 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 36
This was a great ending for this chapter of Bella's life. I loved that you decided to do sequel about the college years. I can't wait. It should be happier and Bella should just blossom with the new freedom and her love Edward.
Date: 24 May 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 36
omg beautiful ending.. thank you so much for sharing your story.
i really love your Charlie.. he is just so wonderful. amazing father.
Date: 24 May 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 36
Have enjoyed this story from day 1 and just want to thank you for taking all of us on the ride with you. It was wonderful! Thank you -- Cheri
Date: 24 May 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love it especially seeing how close Rose and Bella are now.
Date: 24 May 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 36
i loved this story and can't wait to read about their college lives :)
Date: 24 May 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 36
Sweet ending. Thank you for writing and sharing with us all
Date: 24 May 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 36
Really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing.
Date: 23 May 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
"Noel, out of the box, baby," Alice pleaded with my fur baby, who just wagged her little behind and gave Alice a look of 'this is my box, deal with it'.
"Alice, it's ok. I'll just put that box out later." I laugh as the two have a stare off.
"Silly spoiled dog."
"Pot kettle, Ali," Edward taunts, coming into my room He picks up Noel who proceeds to give her Daddy lots of puppy kisses.
Date: 23 May 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 36
well done! great story
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thank you for having the courage (sp) to write this! You have a very well written story! You are truly an inspiration to all abuse survivors every where!
Date: 05 Apr 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks for the update. I am glad this is a healing process for you. I hope it helps, thanks for sharing.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love how confident Bella is. She is secure for the first time and it's great to see her flourish.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
I am happy that the kids got a peek at their future. I wish that Jasper could join the boys. It is hard being the only muskateer left at home. Maybe he can take the girls over to Seattle on the weekends, so they can all be together more often. I am glad that Bella found a way to be intellectually stimulated for her next two years of school. If she wasn't so emotionally imature, I would say graduate early, but she isn't ready for that yet. I hope Edward realizes that he will have to make a big effort to see her a lot. She needs to hear from him. I hope they at least Skype everyday, so she doesn't feel abandon. He helps her feel strong.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 35
Not pleasent to read in places (not fun to walk in others shoes) but oh such a good story, thank you.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'm a late joiner to the story. I am also familiar with abusive behaviors. Everything you've shared is very realistic. You are an execellent writer and I have truly enjoyed reading it. I hope you do a sequel. Great job with the characters.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 35
I appauld you for your honesty and as a social worker, you have not stretched any further than my eyes have seen. Stay true to your course.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter. THe house ssems like an excellent idea.
Going to send you a PM about a real simple way to do conversions of files
Date: 01 Apr 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love this story. It's so sad that the abuse was based on real events but it's amazing that you have risen about it and can now write about your experiences. You are such a strong person and an unbelievable writer. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more of this story.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
Yay! Soooo happy to see this story updated!
Date: 01 Apr 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
I can't help it, and I feel kinda silly about it… I miss my dog. Noel couldn't come to Seattle with us so she stayed with Billy and Jacob Black out on the Reservation. Jacob assured me that he speaks dog, so Noel will be happy and safe with him. Dad reassured me that Billy had dogs in years past and knows what to do. Edward being Edward made sure they had our Vet's number in case of an emergency.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 35
loved the chapter looking fowrard to more
Date: 01 Apr 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 35
I love it! I am glad they will all be living together when they are at college. Ashley seemed real sweet. I wonder if she will end up being a great friend and maybe even living with them. I can't believe it is almost over. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thank you for sharing your story. I have loved it
Date: 23 Jan 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 34
I think Charlie just confused Bella more about sex. Charlies should have just talked to Esme about talking to Bella. Some things are easier female to female. I am glad the prom was event free. They didn't need anymore drama.
Date: 14 Jan 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm reading... I know I only found this story recently, but I for one love reading a story all at once. Its hard to keep 25 differnt stories alive in your head and have to wait a couple of weeks inbetween updates. So like I said I found this last week and have enjoyed all of your 34 chapters at once and have loved every bit of it. Thank you.
PS Read your OFT also and laughed and loved!
Date: 14 Jan 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 34
What Emmett did was priceless!!!!!!!!! Loved it. I am so glad that things seems to be going so good for all of them. All the teens have really been through a lot. They all deserve to have a GREAT prom. Can't wait for your next update. Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 34
Date: 12 Jan 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 33
Date: 12 Jan 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 34
i was so excited to see there was an update i really love these kids that you have given life to keep up the greatwork and can't wait till the next time
Date: 12 Jan 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 34
This is a great story. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter, I'm sad that the story almost over.
Date: 11 Jan 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter - stay stong Bella - love Edward's present
Date: 11 Jan 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
I just found this story recently and love it. Your characters are realistic and not too "idealistic" (too perfect for reality).
Date: 11 Jan 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 34
cool prom. Glad Vickie is doing ok. ugh for trial. hope em doesnt get into any trouble
Date: 11 Jan 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
I love it! Bella deserves to finally feel like a normal teenage girl. I am glad they had so much fun at prom. Charlie giving Bella the talk was priceless! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 34
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 01 Jan 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 33
hay i love ya story. but where did you get the name Tegan from. I have a sister named Tegan, she was named after Tegan in "Doctor Who".
Date: 11 Oct 2011 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 33
I'm looking forward to prom night. Did Charlie ever get to finish his "talk" with B? I wonder how hard it's going to be when E leaves for college?
I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Date: 26 Aug 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 33
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 32
Date: 16 Aug 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 33
hey i love the new chapter. you havent lost me luckily but i dont blame you for not updating. i've been having RL drama and havent updated in months. cant wait for another chapter.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
This is a fantastic story!! My apologies for not reviewing all along. I'll go back and review every chapter.
I'm usually not into "Bella/Edward teenage" stories much but I have thoroughly enjoyed this one.
Renee's family is one fucked up in the head family. Geez!!
I feel for poor Charlie. He can't catch a fucking break!! Poor guy!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awwww, poor Rose!! Can't believe I'm saying that.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
WOW!! Fantastic story!! Can't wait to keep reading!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 33
sweet chapter. Glad Bella is doing so much better.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
I am glad to see you are back. I have missed the storys. I have to say that i really liked this chapter. I can't wait for more of this one and the others...
Date: 05 Aug 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 33
I was so excited to get this update!!!!!! I love love love this chapter. I love seeing Bella so relaxed around everyone. She is really becoming a part of the whole gang. I love how Rose started her conversation with Emmett. I am glad that Emmet called Edward for some help. Also glad that Emmet was there for Jasper. You are doing an amazing job with this story. I am so glad to have this update. Can not wait for your next one. Thank you for sharing this amazinjgn story with us.
Date: 05 Aug 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 33
I've missed these guys... Thanks so much for sharing them!!!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
I love how much Bella has grown. It is because of all the support she has. Rose has come a long way too. I can't wait to see what "romantical" thing Emmett and Edward come up with. This is going to be great for Rose. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 33
Sorry to hear that things have been rough for you! I hope your step-dad is feeling better. Good to see you back!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 33
Date: 04 Aug 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 33
you know i could almost see my husband doing that to love this story can't wait for more
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 33
=) great chapter as always. I hope everything is okay at home. I love Bella's progress and I hope to see more of it soon *hint hint wink wink* lol
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 33
Another good chapter. The prom dress shopping made me sad because I never went. But I'm glad Bella found a dress. :)
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 33
So glad you're updating again! I've missed this story.
Date: 31 May 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
I love that Bella stood up for herself and Charlie!!! great job.. can't wait for more..
Date: 27 May 2011 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
Please update soon
Date: 24 May 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 32
I really liked this chapter. The Mike Newton part was hysterical...the poor boy. I also really liked the part w/ Jasper and his car jack. It was good comic relief during a difficult time.
Date: 23 May 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 32
Excellent chapter with (finally) very good explanations for Bella's behaviour. This dissociation thing is really scary ! I hope she will get better. The boys were amazing litlle heroes ! Lol A very good chapter... Pray the next one will come soon.