Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
That was such a horrible thing for Bella to live through. I'm wondering if there is more to Jasper's reaction than we know. I totally get him being a bit freaked out over her circumstances. It's so much more than her having a kid. There are obvious emotional trauma she still deals with.
I just hope he can get over it sooner rather than later.
Author's Response: Yes, Jasper has his own baggage to deal with, and it will come out soon enough
Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:28 AM Title: Trying
At least Jasper was honest with her. Also, if after a few weeks he decided he couldn't handle it I would think both of them could part as friends and he'd still be around. Of course I have a feeling it will all work out.
I love Charlie. His little speach he taught to Gavin was priceless :)
Author's Response: I could just see Charlie teaching Gavin that speech rofl
Date: 14 Jun 2010 8:08 PM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
Jasper is too awesome. I knew he wouldn't have a problem with Gavin. I honestly don't think any of the rest of the gang will have a problem either. I can totally see them protect her from the likes of Lauren Mallory.
Author's Response: Gavin is just so easy to love, I couldn't see any of them having too much trouble
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:55 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
I almost teared up when Seth was being so protective of Bella and told her that he didn't want to lose her again. That was so sweet.
So we all know Royce is usually a bad guy. Wonder if he could've been one of James's buddies that helped him. I just now James will show up eventually, I"m just wondering how it will happen.
Edward and Jake keep cracking me up.
Author's Response: I've always loved Seth and try to work him into all of my stories
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:40 PM Title: Finding My Way
The texting back and forth was sweet. I'm loving the friendship between Jake, Edward, and Bella.
Author's Response: I think it's cute myself
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:21 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
Okay, I totally freaked out when I read that Jake was blowing Edward. So didn't see that coming. I'm a total canon hoor but I'm willing to overlook the pairings because I like the plot and really enjoy your humor.
Author's Response: glad that you're willing to take a chance on my story
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:43 PM Title: First Day Pt 1
Gavin is too cute. So is Bella just that bad with directions or does she have some residual side effects from the rape and beating?
I couldn't imagine being a teen mom and having to leave my child to go to school. It was hard enough being an adult and leaving my child to go to work.
So far I like Jake. I reserve the right to change my mind later if he turns into a douche.
Author's Response: she's bad with directions and they did just move there two weeks beforehand lol
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:09 PM Title: Moving Day
Such a sad beginning for Bella. At least she has a big family for support.
What a stupid, small-minded counselor she had. I was like WTF was she thinking talking to Bella like that.
I kid you not my eyes popped out of my head and I said holy shit when I read the lovely amount of Charlie and Sue's lottery winnings. Nice ;)
Author's Response: I had someone tell me that when I needed time off to take my kids to their doctors appointments. They didn't keep their job long, though I didn't sue them or anything....and yeah, I thought Sue and Charlie deserved a hefty chunk of change to raise the kids with
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:09 AM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day
omg what another cliffie. you suck you really are great with them. cant wait for more thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: they come naturally lol
Date: 12 Jun 2010 8:37 PM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day
holy hell! time to call in the gaurds! and put everybody on lockdown
Author's Response: panic mode lol
Date: 12 Jun 2010 8:17 PM Title: Creeps
WHAT?!? emotions are running high, does he mean it? holy crap!
and renee? she is with james?!?!?!?!?! and why did they leave the store? why not find james and turn him over to the cops? that way they can have closure.
Author's Response: because Emmett's first instinct was to protect Bella
Date: 12 Jun 2010 7:15 PM Title: Big Bang, Emmett Style
too funny!
Author's Response: :-) I know
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:16 PM Title: Up in Smoke
poor emmy-bear! everybody is picking on him through this whole chapter! glad to see that the student body is dealing well with what happened to rose. it will give the group time to help her deal without extra bullshit.
Author's Response: that was my thoughts
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:00 PM Title: Declarations
well their love is out there.
Author's Response: nothing like a crisis to put things in perspective
Date: 12 Jun 2010 11:51 AM Title: Full House
well it looks like the family is growing...
Author's Response: yep :-)
Date: 12 Jun 2010 11:30 AM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
well it seems that help has arived for jasper and rose.
wonder what else b is gonna do or say to rose's mom and dad?
Author's Response: not much for a while, more important things are going on at the moment
Date: 12 Jun 2010 6:20 AM Title: To Save a Rose
well it seems that rose now share part of bella's nightmare.
Author's Response: unfortunately yes, but at least there is already a support system in place
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:48 AM Title: The Date
well what the hell?!?! we had the whole sweet date vibe goin' on and then BAM! theres blood?!?!
Author's Response: oopsy lol that's just how my crazy mind works
Date: 12 Jun 2010 2:45 AM Title: When did this happen?
well that was cute how em was looking out for bella's best intrest. and jasper's intentions
Author's Response: He is the big brother after all lol
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:51 AM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
well that was intence for a whle there! so cute to see that jasper could talk her down and helped her to fall asleep.
Author's Response: I have weird panic attacks and the only person who can ever calm me down is my hubby, he's always been a natural...so I gave Jasper that ability too
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:36 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
wow just holy shit! that is fucked up! i'd say even more so than bella's story. poor jasper...
Author's Response: yeah, his story was a hard one to tell
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:18 AM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
well that was interesting! but i must say that i don't know what it is like were you come from but when i got pregnant as a teen i did not have to deal with this kind of crap. i even went to a school for teen moms and never heard of shit getting this bad! maybe it's cause we are canadian and everyone knows how nice we are. lol! even one of my daughter's friends is preggers right now (less than a month to go) and all of the kids are excited for her and stoked that the baby is gonna be here soon and they are all 15-17
Author's Response: I live in West Virginia, US of course, and they hate everything unusual around here, from different religions, gays, you name it. It's actually really embarrassing
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Yardwork
i like how you are being more on the real life side with all of this and not the óh i love you forever and life is now perfect' side of the coin.
Author's Response: I think it comes from being the person I am. I am weird about caring for people, but when I do, I give it everything.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
i think charlie's right it is a lot to pile on a guy normally let alone a teen who has been through shit himself.
Author's Response: I know, but Bella would have had a hard time dealing with it if anyone but Charlie or Sue would have said it
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Trying
i think it is very grown up and responsible for bella to ask that question and i also think jasper was just as grown up and responsible with his answer. you never know how things will turn out especially when you're a teenager and dealing with something this big.
Author's Response: exactly
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
well it was bound to become common knowledge. it really shouldn't surprise her.
Author's Response: It doesn't, it just hurts because of her fear of prejudice
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
well it seems that jasper is ready to put himself out there for her to feel comfortable and for them to move forward. wonder how long till b tells him about gavin? or will he stumble on to the info?...
Author's Response: Bella is very protective of her son :-)
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Finding My Way
well it seems that bella has a few skeletons in the closet. but then so does jasper...
Author's Response: oh boy do they lol
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: First Day Pt 2
lol too funny you made jake and eddie gay! and with eachother! now that would be a sight to see....
Author's Response: personally I'd pay to see that beautiful paradox lol
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:46 AM Title: First Day Pt 1
well looks like heer day is going good so far. missing the baby is expected, and hard. i remember those days, i hated having to go to school and leaving her...
Author's Response: I took that bit of experience from one of my best friends, who cried every day when she had to leave her son at home
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:28 PM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day
Damn leah sounds amazing. Poor Bella this is so wrong. So sad for her. Can't wait till they skin him. Oh kudos to jazz. But I think a fews councling sessions are
needed. Meg
Author's Response: I think they're all going to need extensive counseling after all of this. thanks for r&ring sweetie, it makes my day!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:17 PM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day
ugh scumball got her phone number
Author's Response: *cringe* I know, it's so creepy that it made my skin crawl when I wrote it
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:22 PM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day
Ooh, getting scary. Ha Ha, little brother. Great chapter.
BTW, April 12 would make Jasper an Aries, not a Taurus. The change between the 2 falls on the 20th (I would know, it's my birthday). You make want to change that.
Look forward to your next chapter!
Cheers,
karina
Balti K
Author's Response: thank you so much hun, I'm in the process of fixing that now :-)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:20 PM Title: Moving Day
glad i stumbled on this little fic, it looks like it's gonna be good.
Author's Response: I really hope you enjoy it :-)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:22 AM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day
OMG...he is so sick! Someone please take him out!!! Bella doesn't deserve this. I wouldn't leave that house if I didn't have to. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: he's going to be in a load of trouble if the family gets a hold of him
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:42 AM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day
ok...so you definitely love us cause you were nice enough to give us 2 chapters in one day so thank you...but now a cliffy, and not just a any cliffy but one involving James calling, which only leads to more questions...have i mentioned how much i love your story?
Author's Response: I couldn't leave you completely satiated now could I? lol
Date: 10 Jun 2010 10:50 PM Title: Creeps
wow...im not sure if you love us or hate us....first a James/Victoria meeting then a marriage proposal..oh my!
Author's Response: don't say that, you know that I love you guys, why would I wrack my brain to keep coming up with this stuff? :-)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2010 10:17 PM Title: Creeps
What at hell of a story. At first I was worried about the 'ships', but when you made edward gay it was all ok. :)
It has been a fantastic ride. I picture Jazz as Mathew McConaughey. LOL.
Sorry for the lack of reviews reading on my phone at work.
I send hug out to the gang. They are going to need to rid the world of James and not run. Meg
Author's Response: lol glad you've enjoyed so far. And Matthew McConaughey huh? yummy, too bad he's too old for it in my head, those images would have been fun lol it definitely works for my story Black Swan though :-)
Date: 10 Jun 2010 7:01 PM Title: Creeps
So, when Emmett says be ready we may move again, does that mean James has found Bella before? Are they constantly running from him?
The end was very sweet of Jasper :)
Author's Response: they've moved a few times actually, but it was because of Charlie's job before this
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:56 PM Title: Creeps
OMFG THAT WAS SO WICKED AND TOTALLY UNEXPECTED AND JUST BLOODY BRILLANT I LOVE IT
Author's Response: thank you so much!!!! :-)
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:07 PM Title: Creeps
YES!
Author's Response: lol glad you liked! :-)
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:51 PM Title: Creeps
wow what a welcome back cant wait for more now,,,
Author's Response: I'm nothing if not known for pulling weird stuff like that lol
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:40 PM Title: Creeps
Wow...I didn't see that last line coming as quick as it did. I can't wait to see what is said next!!!
I can't believe Bella saw James. Has he been following them, or is it a fluke???
I felt so bad for Emmett. I know Rose is just mad and she took it out on him. I hope things change for them. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response: I didn't see it coming either lol and yes, it's a fluke, but you know what those can turn into
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:36 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
nope just can't bear a story where edward is gay..to much of a waste of some fione manhood..
Author's Response: lmao sorry you can't accept my changes to a fictional character, hope you find something else that makes you happy
Date: 05 Jun 2010 12:10 AM Title: Big Bang, Emmett Style
Awesome! My little sister LOVES Mythbusters. I think she has seen every episode. Emmett, being the big kid that he is, would fit in perfectly with the hosts. They are always looking for ways to blow stuff up!
Later!
Author's Response: I always thought Emmett would be a fan!
Date: 31 May 2010 7:20 AM Title: Big Bang, Emmett Style
I want to be Emmett when I grow up too!!
Yes,yes,I heard the duelling banjos of Deliverance for the rest of the chapter..thankyouverymuch!!
Happy Anniversary,Lady!! ;)
Author's Response: rofl I had to use the banjo line! and thank you so much!
Date: 31 May 2010 4:01 AM Title: Big Bang, Emmett Style
lol exploding trombones
Author's Response: It's Emmett, what do you expect? lmao
Date: 31 May 2010 1:38 AM Title: Big Bang, Emmett Style
Emmett is so funny. I can see loving that show. Great chapter...I love it all...thanks!!!
Author's Response: He is lol thanks for r&ring!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 11:45 PM Title: Up in Smoke
Brava! I love how Gavin insisted on going to the hospital to see his 'Wosawie' ! And I did not see that fire coming!
I eagerly await the next chapter!
Author's Response: he loves his Wosawie lol
Date: 27 May 2010 4:01 AM Title: Up in Smoke
hehe love it
Author's Response: thanks hun :-)
Date: 27 May 2010 3:22 AM Title: Up in Smoke
awww, why is everyone being so mean to Emmett, lol...i liked this chapter although i found myself needing to go back to find out what happened to Tyler.
Author's Response: yeah, I've had a few people who forgot what he did
Date: 26 May 2010 9:48 PM Title: Up in Smoke
Lol Emmett has set a school on fire before that's so Emmett. Really good chapter!!
Author's Response: lol thank you hun!
Date: 26 May 2010 7:50 PM Title: Up in Smoke
hmmm sounds like an interesting back story
Author's Response: yeah, I might have to sit down and write that one out lol
Date: 26 May 2010 7:18 PM Title: Up in Smoke
Gotta love Emmett! I wonder what happend to start the fire? I hope no one is hurt even though the group got out of there. I think it is so cute that everyone gets a chance to talk to Gavin at lunch. They are one big family and I love it!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response: Everyone got out fine, I can tell you that. And yeah, Gavin has thoroughly charmed everyone. thanks for r & ring!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 3:50 AM Title: Declarations
Hi! Great chapter! I just wanted to point out a little mistake in this chapter. With how crazy RL is for you right now I understand how you missed it, and thought I'd lend a hand here. At the begining of the chapter you say Jasper is going to sleep in Gavin's bed, and then Sue comes to get him to go to the Garage at the end of the chapter.
Anyway I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Good luck with RL!
Author's Response: thanks hun! that's what I get for rewriting a few times lol
Date: 24 May 2010 7:29 PM Title: Declarations
I love it!!! They both deserve to have this great love in their lives!!! Great job...thanks!
Author's Response: yes they do!
Date: 24 May 2010 7:12 PM Title: Declarations
awww...too cute..
Author's Response: they are lol
Date: 24 May 2010 5:08 PM Title: Declarations
good chapter! :)
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 24 May 2010 3:36 PM Title: Declarations
so good love it hope ur fam is doing good
Author's Response: we're doing okay right now, thanks for reading!
Date: 24 May 2010 5:34 AM Title: Declarations
Short but so freakin' sweet!!!! They love each other. You and everyone knew it and now they know it and admit it to each other! I'm so absolutly in love with this story because it show love is never cookie cutter. And the great ones will always trump everything shity. I think especially now a days we lose sight of that so thank you for reminding us that love like this is out there!
Author's Response: Aw hun, that was so sweet of you! Thank you so much!
Date: 24 May 2010 2:33 AM Title: Declarations
awww still sweet even if short
Author's Response: yeah, but you guys deserved an update of some kind even if my life is insane lol
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2010 6:33 AM Title: Full House
Oh, poor Rose! I'm glad that she's moving in with Bella and co so that they can help and support her.
Author's Response: It's the best place for her to be right now, I think
Date: 19 May 2010 4:42 AM Title: Full House
great chapter! Can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response: glad you liked! I'm working on the next chappie now!
Date: 18 May 2010 9:59 PM Title: Full House
Jasper and Rosalie moving in, hmmmmm...i have a feeling good things and maybe some not so good things are coming....i liked the chapter, but i seemed to notice the writing style seemed a little different?
Author's Response: that different writing style can be blamed on fatigue and stress sweetie lol, sorry
Date: 18 May 2010 8:22 PM Title: When did this happen?
Great chapter. I'm a bit slow keeping up with you.
Author's Response: that's okay, I'm a bit slow myself lately lol
Date: 18 May 2010 8:05 PM Title: Full House
wow what a great chapteri thanks for updating and i love your banner at the end.
Author's Response: thanks hun, I've put a few banners throughout the chapters actually, to help people visualize the characters better
Date: 18 May 2010 6:13 PM Title: Full House
That was a really awesome chapter!!!! I'm happy that everyone is so supportive with rose's recovery!! Yay for everyone giving witchy mamma Hale a talking too. Lol and awesome banner!!
Author's Response: thank you! I've went back and sprinkled a few banners throughout the story because everyone kept asking what the characters looked like lol
Date: 18 May 2010 5:58 PM Title: Moving Day
Infinite patience, or they're certifiably insane...or they will be after enough time has passed, lol. I couldn't do it...
Author's Response: lmao neither could I!
Date: 18 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: Full House
LOL Mamma has to go to jail. Hee Hee. Love the power of attorney thing
Author's Response: lol she deserves it
Date: 18 May 2010 5:24 PM Title: Full House
Sounds like you're home life is just awesome, huh? Poor hubby and son :(
I think its great that Jasper and Rose will move in with Bella's family. Great chapter. I love the "Gavin speak" lol
Author's Response: oh yeah, it's a real party here lol I think that Charlie and Sue must have infinite patience to be moving in two more teenagers!
Date: 18 May 2010 5:24 PM Title: Full House
ok i know i have told u before that i love ur story but what i like most is that u mad bella be a little heavy and i like that being a big can be hard and not a lot of people write her that way. and god japter is hot.
p.s. i will pray for ur fam hubby down and now ur sons broken arm. i know how broken arms on little one can be my 9 year old broke his 2 yeas ago on his birthday and broke a finger to so know i will be thinks about u and r family
Author's Response: thanks you so much for your kinds words sweetie :-)
Date: 18 May 2010 5:21 PM Title: Full House
I am so glad everyone is there for Rosalie and Jasper! Jasper and Gavin are so cute together. I can't believe how horrible Rosalie's mother is. I hope she gets what she deserves!
This house is about to get more crazy then usual!!! I can't wait!!! Great job...thanks so mcuh!!!
Author's Response: lol crazy seems to be the name of the game!
Date: 16 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
love this chap and sorry to hear about ur hubby hope he gets to feeling better soon
Author's Response: I hope he does too! thanks for r&ring!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 9:19 AM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
Oh dear, it looks like there might be a little altercation on the horizon. lol I hope Bella cusses Mrs.Hale out but good!
Author's Response: oh I wish
Date: 14 May 2010 2:57 AM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
we got to see a little more about what happened to Bella, i like that you chose to give us glimpses instead of all at one time. With the arrival of Allen and Mischa im assuming we will learn more of Jaspers story, and see how they help him and Rosalie...thanks for the update...well wishes for your husband.
Author's Response: thank you hun...and you might be right when it comes to learning more about Jasper
Date: 13 May 2010 11:48 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
Great chapter... Rose's stupid parents are about to get a beat down! LOL :) Can't wait to see more
Author's Response: her parents actually deserve one
Date: 13 May 2010 10:12 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
thanks for updating loving this chapter
Author's Response: really glad you enjoyed
Date: 13 May 2010 7:07 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
Rose's parents sure are a couple pieces of work, huh? I can't imagine Bella will take that sitting down.
And that flashback was...horrifying. Just horrifying.
Author's Response: I tried to warn people that it wasn't pretty, but they kept bugging for a more detailed account
Date: 13 May 2010 4:33 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
Can I hit Rose's 'mother'? I want Bella to hand her her ass. Lol
Author's Response: I think Bella's going to do just that
Date: 13 May 2010 4:07 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
that was good cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: thank you hun
Date: 13 May 2010 3:33 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
ok somebody smack "mommy dearest"
Author's Response: I agree
Date: 13 May 2010 3:10 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley
Wow...so the parents decided to show up. I can't wait to see what happens next. The parents can't be mad, if they had been around maybe this wouldn't have happened. I hope things settle down pretty quickly, for everyones sake, but especially for Rosalie! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response: I don't think Rosalie is going to be too happy about them being there
Date: 11 May 2010 5:42 PM Title: To Save a Rose
love it chicken and tangoo*giggles*
Author's Response: lol my hubby actually said that in his sleep and I had to use it when the opportunity came up
Date: 11 May 2010 2:23 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
Well I sure am glad he was able to help her there at the end. Poor thing.
Author's Response: yeah, I feel so bad sometimes, what I put them through
Date: 11 May 2010 1:43 PM Title: To Save a Rose
great chapter but those cliffy man they could drive a sain person crazy lol!!!!!!!! looking forward to the next chapter thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: lol sorry, don't mean to drive anyone crazy (except my hubby and kids lol)
Date: 11 May 2010 1:12 PM Title: The Date
wow what a scary phone call to recieve so late at night. their date was awesome and cute, on to the next chapter
Author's Response: yeah, she handled it well though
Date: 11 May 2010 4:10 AM Title: Moving Day
oh and i'm also pretty sure that royce has to be one of the guys who raped bella, hopefully not her's sons father though (although none of those monsters should be so maybe she should never find out who actually is)
Author's Response: interesting theory hun. Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Date: 11 May 2010 2:43 AM Title: To Save a Rose
*new reader*
a-freaking-mazing story!!
i almost stopped reading when i found out edward was gay so obviously not with bella but i am so glad i kept reading cause i'm loving this so much
more soon please
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you didn't give up on me!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2010 5:29 PM Title: To Save a Rose
Go Rose! That was well written. Very tense and suspenseful! Also I can't help but think that Royce is lucky he is dead. All of the guys, plus Charlie and Bella, would have made him hurt a lot worse before they let him die.
Author's Response: oh yeah, he is lucky that he's dead :-)
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2010 4:44 PM Title: The Date
That was sweet. I'm not going to complain about the ending, because the next chapter is already up! Later.
Author's Response: awesome lol
Date: 10 May 2010 1:05 PM Title: To Save a Rose
I'm so glad everyone is ok, and I'm so proud of Rose for hitting that bastard hard enough to kill him. Now comes the hard part - healing.
Author's Response: I'm proud of her too, and yes, the healing is going to be the hardest part
Date: 10 May 2010 5:16 AM Title: To Save a Rose
OMG! crazy couple of chapters... Hope everything is ok with everyone soon! :)
Author's Response: well, bad luck usually comes in cluster, but hopefully things will get easier, especially with Rose, Bella, and Jasper
Date: 10 May 2010 3:41 AM Title: To Save a Rose
Thank god Royce the creep is dead!!! I feel so bad for rose no one should have to go through that. I'm glad she has one hell of a support system.
Author's Response: oh boy does she :-)
Date: 10 May 2010 3:40 AM Title: To Save a Rose
Well, there is more healing to be done, but I am so glad that they all have each other there to lean on. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response: and thank for for taking the time to read and review my little story
Date: 10 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: To Save a Rose
oh my! oh my! this story is more than just the usually angsty teenage story, and i love it!
Author's Response: awesome! I has aiming way passed teen angst!
Date: 10 May 2010 3:24 AM Title: The Date
ok this is no doubt my favorite chapter so far!!!! the date was too cute, and just when i thought the chapter was over..BAM! You hit us with a crazy call from Rosalie...thanks!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed!
Date: 09 May 2010 11:29 PM Title: Moving Day
Good to know :) Have fun writing. Happy Mother's Day, by the way!
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 09 May 2010 11:18 PM Title: Moving Day
Lol, nah, I won't be grabbing any pitchforks or torches. I'll just be anxiously bouncing.
Author's Response: lol that's good. It might help to know that I've got the first few paragraphs down now that things are winding down here at home
Date: 09 May 2010 9:04 PM Title: The Date
OMG...please tell me Rose is okay!!! Jasper should be there quick, right??? Charlie will go with Bella and the boys right???
The date was wonderful. Just what they needed. Gavin was so cute when Bella was telling him about the date. I am glad that Japser asked about seeing Allen and Mischa. It will be good for him. Great job... thanks so much!!
Author's Response: Rosie and Jasper are alive, I promise..and thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Date: 09 May 2010 8:47 PM Title: The Date
Ooh, they're the therapists...
And you're so evil! Ending it right there...I'll be bouncing around waiting for an update...
Author's Response: bouncing is better than grabbing pitchforks and torches, in my book lol