[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 7:02 PM Title: The Date
Seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!??????
Author's Response: *evil laugh*
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 6:30 PM Title: The Date
Sweetie, evil should be your first and last name! And even though I still love you for this awesome story, you can not just leave us readers hanging like that!! It's cruel.. *pout*
Please let Rose be somewhat fine, cuz I'm already guessing Royce messed her up pretty badly already. :( And please, pretty please, don't let Jasper get hurt (for like "interfering" with Royce's plans).
Hope my review makes Bella (and the others) come to Rose's rescue faster, and an update to show up here faster too. ;) I love the story and the way you make it so real, it's actually kinda scary some times.
Love,
M
Author's Response: I can promise that Jasper is alive and Rosalie isn't going to die. I hope you understand why I don't say any more
Date: 09 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: The Date
oh wow. on the ending......perfect first date though
Author's Response: thanks so much :-)
Date: 09 May 2010 6:13 PM Title: The Date
Up until that lastr chapter, I was gonna write a review like...oh how sweet for them..what a nice date..blah blah..etc.
now all I can say is WOW holy cow batman..what did Rose do?!
and thanks for the clothes size, being an 18 myself, I have a visual now!
Author's Response: lol you're very welcome hun
Date: 09 May 2010 5:53 PM Title: The Date
Oh damn did rose killed him???? Really cute date reminded me a lot if my first date but we went mini golfing.
Author's Response: maybe *evil smirk*
Date: 09 May 2010 5:06 PM Title: The Date
Love the update! :)
Author's Response: love that you loved it! :-)
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 8:19 AM Title: When did this happen?
Emmett with a Nerf gun?! RUN! Hide the women and children, and any small animals!
Also, Jake and Edward's dog is named Nessie? rotfl! That's freaking awesome!
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: rofl that was so funny!
Date: 09 May 2010 3:53 AM Title: When did this happen?
great i think a nice fluffy chapter was just what i needed after the heaviness of the last one..
Author's Response: don't I know it lol
Date: 08 May 2010 8:09 PM Title: When did this happen?
really enjoying the story so far..keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: i hope you continue to enjoy as the story moves forward!
Date: 08 May 2010 4:30 PM Title: When did this happen?
aww sue is kewl
Author's Response: I kind of made Sue off a mom I wished I had instead of the lunatic I was graced with lol
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 10:48 AM Title: When did this happen?
this chapter was still serious just had a lot of fun mixed in.
Author's Response: yeah, but the kids did earn their break
Date: 08 May 2010 1:05 AM Title: When did this happen?
Good times with Gavin...how can that not make everything feel beter??? I love the family they have together. I could picture all the kids going to get a hug from Sue. Are we going to see Carlisle and Esme and Billy?
I love it as always...thanks!!!
Author's Response: Carlisle, Esme, and Billy will have their time, I promise
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 12:51 AM Title: When did this happen?
wow love the story..wasnt to thrilled about the characters at first but you did an awesome job with the writing...:)
Author's Response: thanks for not giving up on me
Date: 08 May 2010 12:08 AM Title: When did this happen?
very sweet chapter. I have you on alert and am now going to search for your other stories!
glad I found you!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks sweetie, I appreciate you favoriting me and giving my other stuff a chance
Date: 07 May 2010 11:57 PM Title: When did this happen?
great chapter thanks for updating cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: thanks hun, I've got the next chapter about half done, but the hubby and kids are home so that means family time!
Date: 07 May 2010 11:56 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
~sigh~
alot to digest.
Author's Response: yes it is, but they have to start somewhere
Date: 07 May 2010 11:47 PM Title: The Price of Insanity
I knew it was his anger! and while I did tip on abuse through his mother..the sexual abuse floors me.
Bella couldn't be more perfect for him!!
Author's Response: I completely agree :-)
Date: 07 May 2010 11:34 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
I just..enjoyed this chapter.
Jasper's reaction at the end was soo great!!
I seriously have to commend you on keeping these highschool kids actually higschoolish and not, pseudo adult!!
One of my friend sinHighschoolwas a 14 year old rape victim who kept her daughter, graduated under the top 10 of our class,is mother to 3 now and just became a grandma..she is 36 yrs.old
She was semi picked on/ stared at for about 6 months..after a while nobody talked about it any more..and her daughter was just too cute!!
Author's Response: Your friend is a strong woman :-) Some of the problem with the people Bella and the gang goes to school with is that they're mostly a bunch of rich kids who don't have anything better to do than stir trouble
Date: 07 May 2010 11:05 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
Poor Bella and poor Jasper!!
I mean, how helpless and emasculated must Jasper feel to know that the object of his infatuation was so horrifically violated and he can do nothing about it.
he is only 16-17..so I think his reaction is totally ok., Most adult men would have run screaming.Jazzy needs to think and process this aweful news...as wise old Charlie said!
Author's Response: he's actually 19, but it hasn't come up yet lol
Date: 07 May 2010 10:30 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
Squee!! Jasper and Bella !!
YAY!
Author's Response: yep :-)
Date: 07 May 2010 10:19 PM Title: Finding My Way
I need some clarification.
Now is Bella really fat, or is it baby fat from the prenancy..or does she just see herself as such.I haven't found a clear description of her yet.
I love gay Jake and gay Edward btw!
Author's Response: she is actually pretty heavy, but I've purposely kept her exact size vague for the moment
Date: 07 May 2010 10:08 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
YAY YIPPEE!! Jasper and Bella!!
I was sooooooo hoping for this couple!!!
thankyouthankyouthankyou!!
Date: 07 May 2010 9:47 PM Title: Moving Day
Thank you so much for breezing through the beginning and getting to the point! I just found this story and am going to catch up on the other chapters!!
:)
Author's Response: thank you fro giving me a chance! I hope you enjoy!
Date: 07 May 2010 8:41 PM Title: When did this happen?
I just didn't get it when Em mentioned Allen and Mischa...I'm assuming they're characters from another story? I haven't read any other of your stories, maybe I'll go check them out. This chapter was a nice relief from the last...
Author's Response: Allen and Mischa pop up in different capacities in almost all of my stories lol why Emmett asked about them will be explained later
Date: 07 May 2010 7:06 PM Title: When did this happen?
SUch a cute chapter! I loved it. I always smile when Gavin is I. The chappy he's just so gosh darn cute;)
Author's Response: He is adorable, it's his super power lol
Date: 07 May 2010 6:29 PM Title: When did this happen?
i love it cant wait for more i check for ur updates everyday as soon as i get up i so love ur storys
Author's Response: thanks so much hun, though this was probably the last update for the weekend, unless I can finish the one I'm working on tonight
Date: 07 May 2010 5:46 PM Title: When did this happen?
really good chapter :)
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 07 May 2010 5:30 PM Title: The Price of Insanity
you are a very straong writer to write something so dark.i applaud you.
Author's Response: thank you hun. So much. Glad I didn't scare you off :-)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 8:59 AM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
Still loving this story!
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 07 May 2010 2:53 AM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
i really, really like Jasper. The scene between Jasper and Bella on the phone was very creative.
Author's Response: I thought so too. thanks hun
Date: 07 May 2010 2:45 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
ok, that was heavy but well written at the same time...wow, im kinda speechless.
Author's Response: I will have to take speechless as a good sign :-)
Date: 07 May 2010 12:26 AM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
They both have a long way to go, but I am so glad they are there to help each other through this. They are all there for each other. Great job. I really love this story!!! Thanks so much!!!
Author's Response: I agree 100% thanks for r&r'ing!
Date: 06 May 2010 9:46 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
i like how protective they were of Bella yet Bella is still a strong character.
Author's Response: She is strong, but sometimes she needs someone to look out for her, just like we all do
Date: 06 May 2010 8:48 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
A little intense but a wonderful chapter none the less.
Author's Response: lol If it wasn't intense, I'd be taking a risk of my readers getting bored with me. As always, thanks for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 8:01 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
that was sad and sweet chapter in one.
Author's Response: I agree, so much. Thanks for taking the time to read and review
Date: 06 May 2010 7:39 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
amazing chapter! That was really great :)
Author's Response: thank you so much, it was a lot easier to write than the chapter before it, I'll admit
Date: 06 May 2010 7:29 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
this chapter is so sweet jasper awh love him
Author's Response: he is sweet. thanks for r&r'ing hun
Date: 06 May 2010 7:04 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You
Very intense reaction, but we can't pretend that after all Bella has gone through that she can enter into a normal relationship. Its heartbreaking to read her reaction, though.
Author's Response: It was his aggression that triggered it, which is sad, but you're right, Bella has been through so much to be able to jump right into a physical relationship with anyone, no matter how much she cares.
Date: 06 May 2010 6:55 PM Title: The Price of Insanity
Yikes. Wow. You handled it with dignity.
Author's Response: I'm so thrilled that you think so, a lot of people were really put off by it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing
Date: 06 May 2010 5:12 PM Title: The Price of Insanity
Poor poor Japser. These two have been through hell, but I think they will be good for each other.
Author's Response: I think they will be too
Date: 06 May 2010 4:50 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
Hey I liked it. Definitely and exciting chapter.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed hun, thanks for taking the time to read and review :-)
Date: 06 May 2010 3:39 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
It is very interesting, but not
what I thought! I have to admit
I am stiil undecided about the
non cannon pairings. :)
Author's Response: What I end up writing is seldom what people think they're going to see. And I'm sorry that the parings are not to you standards. Thank you for the taking the time to read and review though.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 12:35 PM Title: The Price of Insanity
These two has some real issues. I don't even know where to start, that was seriously messed up for him. But hopefully they will make it.
Author's Response: they do have issues, but I also think that they are strong enough to make it
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 8:16 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
As usual, you don't disappoint! That had to have been a hard chapter to write. It was intensly good! Congrats!
Author's Response: thank you so much for not bashing how dark it is, and thanks for not running away
Date: 06 May 2010 3:12 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
OMG...I can't imagine what Jasper went through. How horrible. I know that had to be hard to write...great job...thanks!
Author's Response: It was hard to write. I sat down and cried after finishing it, so thanks for not running away after reading how dark it is
Date: 06 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
im happy shes in it with him after that story and hers its like they are mad for eachother ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: oh yes, they can definitely help one another now
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 2:24 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
That has to be the saddest and most heartbreaking story I've ever read!!! Poor Jasper:( but I know that everything will work out for them.
Author's Response: it will work out, in time
Date: 06 May 2010 2:05 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
ugh
Author's Response: sorry, but Jasper's story needed told
Date: 06 May 2010 2:04 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
Wow, that would have been hard to write. But love your story!! Love that Jasper and Bella can find comfort in each other.
Can't wait for an update!!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing on both sites! :-)
Date: 06 May 2010 1:41 AM Title: Moving Day
Eh, if you loose them, then they don't deserve to read you're wonderfully written story. You won't loose me!
Author's Response: thanks hun, I really appreciate it
Date: 06 May 2010 1:37 AM Title: Moving Day
Well, it definitely needed to come out. It helps the readers understand more, and it helps Bella better understand him. So its good that you told his tale.
Author's Response: It did need to come out, but I have a feeling that I'm going to lose a lot of readers because it was so much worse than anyone thought
Date: 06 May 2010 1:33 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
wow poor jasper :( At least Bella showed him that she isn't going anywhere :)
Author's Response: I know, but now both of them understand just how messed up the other is
Date: 06 May 2010 1:32 AM Title: The Price of Insanity
Wow...that was truly heartbreaking. I don't even know what to say.
Author's Response: I know, that is why I was hesitant about telling his tale
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 12:32 AM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
I am so glad they kicked Tyler's butt. I can't wait to see what is next.
Author's Response: it was fun to write....I just posted chapter 11 if you're interested
Date: 05 May 2010 11:59 PM Title: Moving Day
Yep, I've got my son, mom, and grandparents. Without them, I'd definitely go crazy.
Author's Response: I'm glad you have them then lol
Date: 05 May 2010 11:37 PM Title: Moving Day
LOL, I know exactly what you mean! If it weren't for the wonders of the internet, I'd be very alone.
Author's Response: yep, if I didn't have the hubby and kids to keep me company, I think I'd go mad
Date: 05 May 2010 7:07 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
Great to have friends
Author's Response: yeah, I wish I had friends like this
Date: 05 May 2010 5:44 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
I think lauren deserved more lol but yay sh got her asses kicked!! And Jasper made a move and a good one at that!!!! *happy dance* can't what to see what's next!!
Author's Response: lol Between Bella and Rosalie, I don't think Lauren is going to be doing anything that stupid again any time soon. and yay! He finally made a move! I hope he doesn't wait too long to make another one!
Date: 05 May 2010 5:07 PM Title: Moving Day
Will do! I can't seem to find any like that, though...guess I'm looking in the wrong places, huh?
Author's Response: I must be too lol, because all of my friends live in my computer
Date: 05 May 2010 5:00 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
Wow. I need me some friends like that. Bella's friends kick ass!
Author's Response: lol yes they do! and toss some my way ever you ever find ones that awesome!
Date: 05 May 2010 4:40 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
yay! I love how he kissed her before he was dragged off! LOL That was awesome :) So excited to see the next one now :)
Author's Response: It just seemed so fitting after the day poor Bella's had
Date: 05 May 2010 4:35 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
What a day!!! I think Bella is starting to understand that she has friends that she can trust and that will stand beside her. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response: I think she is too, it just took some time
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 4:28 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss
love it love it love it and go Jasper i really love your stroy if you cant tell i follow u on Fan fic and rouge to u r good please up date soon
Author's Response: oh wow, thank you so much!
Date: 05 May 2010 4:11 PM Title: Yardwork
I was guessing this was Jasper's problem. He needed to process everything. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: yep :-) thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 May 2010 1:01 PM Title: Yardwork
Well, I surely can't fault Bella for her bitchyness. I would've done the same thing. It was so cute to read about Gavin helping the boys in the yard :) Small kids seem to always like to help. My little guy loves to work in the yard.
Author's Response: I don't blame Bella either. And Gavin is adorable, but I'm extra biased. He is a mix of my own kids, who are older now, with a sprinkling of my niece who is 2 1/2
Date: 05 May 2010 5:12 AM Title: Yardwork
kinda what I though on Jazz' side.
Author's Response: hhmmm, maybe I need to work harder to surprise you
Date: 05 May 2010 3:25 AM Title: Yardwork
That was an awesome chapter!! I cant wait to see what you come up with next!!! I think i might have fallen in love with Jasper just a little bit more. I hope all of the tension between them gets resolved soon and the love can get to cracking lol.
Monday is fast approaching and i can just see the horror that will be school, but hopefully Jasper with the the cowboy on a white horse and save the day!
Author's Response: I don't think these two can stay apart for long
Date: 05 May 2010 3:23 AM Title: Yardwork
i felt like with this chapter we are starting to get a better idea of who they are and type of friendships/relationships every has with each other. And yea to Jasper for at least trying to make up.
Author's Response: yeah, the boy knows he messed up
Date: 05 May 2010 3:09 AM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
wow, so at least we know the full story of what happened to Bella. But why is Jasper acting like that...bad Jasper bad.
Author's Response: because poor jasper is overwhelmed...I think he'll come around sooner than we think though
Date: 05 May 2010 3:07 AM Title: Moving Day
Most definitely. My Kismet really had me going. The others were great too, but emotionally Kismet was stronger with that element. But I have to give you props for adding humor too your stories. There are some that are so strong with angst that I want to tear my own hair out. Some of my favs have dealitful humor in them.
Author's Response: I admit that I've had to learn what works and what doesn't as I go, but luckily a writer friend who is also a published author, is a fan and adds his two cents every now and then to help me get better
Date: 05 May 2010 2:49 AM Title: Moving Day
I love stories that make me think and really bring you into the characters and you almost feel the same things. It's awesome.
Author's Response: Hopefully I succeeded in that then :-)
Date: 05 May 2010 2:46 AM Title: Yardwork
really awesome!!! Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response: hopefully I can actually sleep tonight so I can get to work tomorrow after my kids go to school!
Date: 05 May 2010 2:44 AM Title: Yardwork
I'm thinking he has such strong emotions about what happened to her because of what happened to him. But of course you are the one writing the story so you would know best.
Author's Response: good thinking. that's a big reason as to why he reacted the way he did
Date: 05 May 2010 1:12 AM Title: Moving Day
So true and I am glad for that.
Author's Response: me too...next chapter is up, btw
Date: 05 May 2010 1:11 AM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
Bella's story is heartbreaking. Made me almost cry :( I think she needs to give Jasper time, don't push. Its a huge amount of information to take in.
Author's Response: so true
Date: 05 May 2010 12:52 AM Title: Moving Day
I am sure it does. It's just so sad to think that stuff like that happens and that people are so heartless to hurt people that way.
Author's Response: yeah, but at least in my story one of those victims can end up with the happy ending that they deserve
Date: 05 May 2010 12:35 AM Title: Moving Day
Well that is sad. So it could be anyone one the the 3 idiots. Poor thing.
Author's Response: it is, but it's something that happens more often than people realize
Date: 05 May 2010 12:20 AM Title: Moving Day
Poor Bella. Does or did she end up finding out who the baby daddy is?
Author's Response: All she knows for sure is that her boyfriend was not the father
Date: 04 May 2010 11:47 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
Hmmm now what is Jasper up to
Author's Response: time will tell hun, I swear. Can you be patient for a little while longer?
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 9:45 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
that can be a hard subject to handle. She was raped, beaten, cut and burned and the left for dead. Who is to say the Jasper is not just really pissed at what happened and not at her.
Author's Response: smart thinking :-)
Date: 04 May 2010 9:19 PM Title: Trying
I think Jasper's answer was the best thing.. he was being honest and didn't know.. thank you for another great chapter
Author's Response: I think so too. thanks for taking the time to read and review
Date: 04 May 2010 8:34 PM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
Oh Bella have faith in your new friends!!! Another great chapter
Author's Response: I agree! thanks for r&r'ing!
Date: 04 May 2010 8:25 PM Title: Moving Day
well 16, 18 he is still a teenage boy LOL :)
Author's Response: Ain't that the truth? lol I wish some teenagers I've known were actually as mature as him, even if he is scared to death right now
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 8:24 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
Poor kid, I hope that she just doesn't just assume the wrong thing! My hope for this character is for patience!!!
Author's Response: me too!
Date: 04 May 2010 8:22 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
very cute chapter
overprotective brothers. concerned friends and due for late night calls
Thank you !!!!
Author's Response: lol so goes the life of a teenager
Date: 04 May 2010 8:08 PM Title: Finding My Way
another great chapter,,, Thank you
Author's Response: thank you for taking the time to read and review, it makes my day!
Date: 04 May 2010 7:43 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
I love the non-cannon statis.. Thank you for a great chapter
Author's Response: thanks hun, it's my first stab and an almost completely non cannon crew
Date: 04 May 2010 7:14 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
hey sorry i don't allways get to review cause i save the pages offline to read while i am at work ( reviewer comment: do not try this at your work unless you work sayes it is ok...i just have a really really really boring job and we are allowed computers in the guard shack to keep us from dieing of bordom) . I love thnis story and it rocks I am totally cool with your pairing choices. though I would feel bad for bella if whe went "i choose Edward" and he was like "well umm actually I ummmm kinda fell for Jacob and well ummm Bella you see....." in the actual series but hey that is what we have fanfiction for. :) keep up the awesome story.
Author's Response: Ah, I understand why you can't review hun, it's just that I get worried when no one is leaving me their thoughts on what I've done. It may sound shallow, but ask any author how they feel when one of their readers praise them. I'm thrilled that you're liking my choices on the pairings, I love being different than what people expect.
Date: 04 May 2010 7:07 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
wow... emotional chapter... poor jasper ... I think anyone who doesn't like his reaction is being a bit harsh... what 16 yr old boy would handle dealing with all that information in one day well? not many... lets just hope he doesn't freak out completely... oh and that Lauren doesn't completely screw everything up at school either :)
Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response: lol he's actually 18, but I haven't come out and said it so I'll let that one pass lol and you're right, it is a lot for him. I don't think he's going to freak out completely though...and Lauren...I have a feeling that it won't be pretty
Date: 04 May 2010 6:41 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
You are soiling us the frequent updates but I love being spoiled so I will spoil you in turn and leave this review......
This chapter was well written and a little bit butter sweet. Sweet because they were so understanding but sad because Jasper is retracting a little but I'm sure it's a good reason. I still love Jasper 100%:389;:389;:389;
edward was funny with the milf comment. Lol I can't wait to see what that mind of yours come up with not only with Jasper and Bella as well as the schools reaction when lauren the witch spills the beans about bella being a mommy.
Author's Response: It was bittersweet, but I think Jasper will still stand up for her when the shit hits the fan at school
Date: 04 May 2010 6:37 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
You are spoiling us, and I can't thank you enough!!! It is horrible what happened to Bella, but I think it is good she told her friend. They will be more support she needs them at school.
I agree with Charlie...Jasper just needs to process what he was told. I think he is having a hard time knowing this happened, not that he is trying to figure out how to get away from Bella.
Best line of the chapter is from Gavin..."I pwomise that I don't bite anymore Edward, you don't haf to be afwaid of me." How can you not smile when you read that!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response: that was mine too lol and I also think that Jasper just needs some time, like Charlie said...and don't tell anyone, but I like spoiling my readers because you are all so good to me :-)
Date: 04 May 2010 5:20 PM Title: Trying
I think Jasper spoke from his heart and that is all Bella can ask for. He can't know what he wants right now. He hardly knows Bella and she hardly knows him. Saying he wanted to try is the best for both of them. I understand where Bella was coming from though.
I tell you everytime, but I just love Gavin!!! Poor kid doesn't have a clue what he is saying, but the point gets out there.
I can't wait to see how everyone else reacts. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: I can't blame Jasper for not immediately jumping in with both feet, he has to consider the impact on his life. But I can't really blame Bella for asking either, because she is so ignorant when it comes to dating. lol and I love it that you love Gavin!
Date: 04 May 2010 1:00 PM Title: Trying
Seriously? That has got to be the most honest, responsible response from a teenage boy who just found out the chick he likes has a toddler. I don't know why someone would be mad about that. I'd be pissed if a guy told me straight up that he's ready to deal with my son and be a part of his life after only knowing him a few hours. Jasper's answer was perfect.
And the way they've been interacting is just so cute! Makes me smile :) And I love how Gavin is the messenger for dad threats, lol.
Author's Response: to be honest, almost everything Jasper said was based off of something that really happened, that's why I thought it was perfect for this. And they are cute together. As fo rGavin, he is based off of my two kids...and my 2 1/2 year old niece
Date: 04 May 2010 11:23 AM Title: Trying
I like Jaspers answer. It means he`s taking the idea seriously instead of just saying what would make Bella feel better. It was unrealistic of her to expect him to say yes I love you all lets run away to vegas..lol
Author's Response: He was hones, and that's a big step. Bella, I know she was quick to push this on him, but she is so inept when it comes to dating or anything that I had to show it
Date: 04 May 2010 7:06 AM Title: Trying
What's with all the cliffhangers?! Great story and can't wait to see how it all turns out. :)
Author's Response: I have been cutting the chapters so they didn't end up running way too long
Date: 04 May 2010 4:19 AM Title: Trying
I actually love Jasper's answer... it is much more realistic :) But jeez did you have to end it right there!! :) So excited to see more :)
Author's Response: I had to end it because my brain went to bed lol
Date: 04 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Trying
2 chapters in one day, YEA! i liked Jaspers answer, it was honest and not a "perfect' answer which shows that maybe your trying to make your characters more real. Im nervous for Bella to see what happens when they go back to school, but I have a feeling that the BBQ will help to strengthen everyone friendships, so she will be prepared/protected.
Date: 04 May 2010 4:04 AM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
i really like Jasper! cant wait to see what happens next and where your story will go.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that I've not scared you off! lol
Date: 04 May 2010 4:01 AM Title: Moving Day
Take your time! I can wait..... just dont make it too long lol. I just really like your story:)
Author's Response: I'll try not to be more than a few days, I promise
Date: 04 May 2010 3:15 AM Title: Trying
I liked Jaspers Answer, he was straight up with Bella, I think that counts for alot! But know I want to know what happens when Bella breaks the news to Alice and Rose. Awesome fic!!!!
Author's Response: I'm probably going to start on the next chapter tomorrow, but can't guarantee I'll get it finished after completing two chapters today