Date: 04 May 2010 3:11 AM Title: Trying
oh evil one leaving it there.
Author's Response: lol I had to, my brain is fried for the night
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 2:26 AM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
They do speak the truth at that age, like it or not!!! I feel so bad for her being treated so badly on he past that she is frightened most of the time!
Can't wait for more !
Author's Response: yes they do and I feel for her too, but I think that she is finally in a place that she can heal
Date: 03 May 2010 11:41 PM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
I love how Jasper found out about Gavin. So true, too. Kids always spill the secrets. Gotta love em :) I'm looking forward to the four wheeling!!
Author's Response: lol I know, I have two that spill the beans every chance they get!
Date: 03 May 2010 10:10 PM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
Your Jasper is so freakin perfect!!!!!! I absolutly love him!!! But lauren is a evil. But all that matters is that Jasper knows ans is fine with it. I hope that the backlash about Gavin isn't too bad.
Author's Response: I adore this Jasper..okay, well I adore almost every Jasper I've read lol as for the backlash, I think we're going to have to wait and see
Date: 03 May 2010 9:06 PM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
Poor B. Of course Lauren is going to be a biatch
Author's Response: I didn't mean to pick on Lauren, it just happened
Date: 03 May 2010 7:14 PM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes
I am glad that Japser knows about Gavin and reacted the way he did. I think the party on Saturday is going to be so much fun and everyone is going to love Gavin. They are going to be the saving grace Monday at school. They will be there for Bella no matter what!!! Great job...thanks!
Author's Response: Bella is learning that there are people in the world that she can trust besides her family and I also think that the gang will be her saving grace as well
Date: 02 May 2010 8:36 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
I like that Jasper opened up to Bella, I wonder how long it'll take her to do the same...
Author's Response: I don't know, because they seem to be connecting so easily
Date: 02 May 2010 5:05 AM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
your chapters are getting better and better! i seriously cant wait to see what jaspers reaction is to Bella's story! and jake and edward are freaking hilarious!!!!!!
Author's Response: I can't wait either and I'm glad that you're enjoying Jake and Edward together too
Date: 02 May 2010 4:52 AM Title: Finding My Way
hehehe sneaky sneaky jasper. i really love your story!!!!
Author's Response: lol he is a bit sneaky, isn't he?
Date: 02 May 2010 4:40 AM Title: First Day Pt 2
OMG Edward is gay and is with Jake? i sooo did not see that coming!!!! Now Jasper and Bella i love together or hopefully they will be together:)
Author's Response: I fI surprised you, then I'm doing my job right! lol
Date: 02 May 2010 4:26 AM Title: First Day Pt 1
great chapter:)
Author's Response: thank you for for reading!
Date: 02 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Moving Day
really interesting start. I feel bad for bella and hope everything works out for her.
Author's Response: I hope so too
Date: 01 May 2010 10:25 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
I am glad that Bella and Jasper opened up a little to one another. I think all Bella's new friends are going to be supportive of her and Gavin. I can't wait for her to see that. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: I think they will too!
Date: 01 May 2010 10:02 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
so i love it when authors find a way to throw in original twilight lines, it makes me smile so i loved the "suffer in silence types" line.. i think you said it best "awkward teenage romances. Gotta love them."
Author's Response: lol glad you liked
Date: 01 May 2010 8:33 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
yea so i was a little like "WTF!" with Edward and Jacob being together, but then I do LOVE the idea of Jasper/Bella.
Author's Response: lol I can't help it. Being bisexual myself, I have a tendency to forget that not everyone is so accepting. But I'm glad you've liked so far
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:33 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
Holy Crackers! I just found this fic and I am loving it! I can't wait to see what happens next! More soon please.
Author's Response: thank you for giving my story a chance, I hope I don't let you down!
Date: 01 May 2010 8:24 PM Title: First Day Pt 1
i am officially in love with the story already!
Author's Response: awesome! I hope I don't disappoint!
Date: 01 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
awww :) That was great! So excited to see more :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you've liked so far!
Date: 01 May 2010 7:22 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations
awww sweet jazz
Author's Response: he is, isn't he? and the gif is adorable, thank you!
Date: 01 May 2010 12:42 AM Title: Finding My Way
I'm loving it so far! The first chapter, I was a bit unsure as to the relationship between Bella, Emmett, and Seth, but you cleared that up in the second chapter. And holy shit, it was freaking hilarious the way Bella was "introduced" to Edward. That was great. I'm enjoying the non-canon roles
Author's Response: I am thrilled that you've enjoyed so far and hope you stick around for the journey
Date: 30 Apr 2010 7:09 PM Title: Finding My Way
lol Love the guys. Em is always good for a laugh
Author's Response: I always look at Emmett as to how my older brother would have been if he hadn't died
Date: 30 Apr 2010 6:17 PM Title: Finding My Way
really awesome chapter! Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response: thanks hun!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:20 PM Title: Finding My Way
Gavin is still my favorite. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: lol he's been the most popular so far
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:03 AM Title: First Day Pt 1
I honestly thought it was Edward she bumped into. Great chapter. ;)
Author's Response: lol glad I could surprise you like that then :-)
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:59 AM Title: Moving Day
Interesting, can't wait to see what you do with it. ;)
Author's Response: glad you've given my story a chance and hope you enjoy the ride :-)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:08 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
Well, I am a little shocked at the pairing, but that should make it interesting. Great job...thanks. PS - I miss Gavin too!!!
Author's Response: shock can be a good thing, that means I've stepped away from the norm and gave you something new :-) and Gavin is hard not to miss
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:52 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
im so glad i found this story. i already love it!!
gavin is the most cutest little boy ever. i like how you have him talk his age, i hate when some authors have 2 yr olds talking like adults.
Author's Response: he is adorable lol I based him off of my son and daughter when they were that age
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:17 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
LOL Gay Eddie and Jake. That is priceless.
Author's Response: I love this pairing and it was my hubby's idea lol
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:09 PM Title: First Day Pt 1
awww
Author's Response: he is too cute for words, isn't he?
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:01 PM Title: Moving Day
looks like it might be interesting
Author's Response: I'm happy that you gave it a chance! :-)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 8:18 PM Title: Moving Day
wow love the hubby imagination!! :)
Author's Response: me too! :-)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 7:41 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
awesome chapter! Ha she caught Jacob giving Edward a BJ that was classic :) LOL Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response: my husband gave me the idea, of all people! rofl
Date: 29 Apr 2010 7:25 PM Title: First Day Pt 2
Edward and jake gay love it cant wait to read more
Author's Response: lol thanks for not freaking out about it!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:44 AM Title: First Day Pt 1
really good start! Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response: thank you!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 1:46 AM Title: First Day Pt 1
Wow, this is pretty awesome. thanks for the story.
Author's Response: thank you so much for giving it a chance
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:12 PM Title: First Day Pt 1
more,more, more,it is getting interesting. Keep going.
Author's Response: I'm working on it! thanks for reviewing!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:25 PM Title: First Day Pt 1
I love Gavin!!! I can't wait to see what happens next! Who's going to be in her next class??? Thanks!!!
Author's Response: He is adorable, isn't he? lol
Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:05 PM Title: Moving Day
I like it!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: thank you and I'm glad that you've liked so far!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:41 PM Title: First Day Pt 1
great chapter. i like how your writing flows really well. it doesn't feel rushed or drawn out
Author's Response: thanks hun, I really appreciate the input
Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:14 PM Title: Moving Day
Well it's interesting, can't wait to see what is going to happen.
Author's Response: glad you liked, I hope I don't disappoint
Date: 27 Apr 2010 7:26 PM Title: Moving Day
cant wait for more
Author's Response: thanks. I'm working on the second chapter right now actually
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:12 PM Title: Moving Day
i like how you skipped ahead in time through this chapter
Author's Response: I thought it was a good way to give up some of the backstory
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:10 PM Title: Moving Day
Great start. You've set the emotional groundwork. Let her rip!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! lol
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:34 PM Title: Moving Day
Yikes... I'll keep reading. LOL
Author's Response: I hope so!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:24 PM Title: Moving Day
Great start, but I do hope that the rest of the story isn't going to have as many flashbacks each chapter :)
The story is really interesting. Can't wait for more
Thanks for uploading it on here!
Author's Response: the flashbacks were my lame way of giving some back story, and no, it won't be like that all the time
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:39 AM Title: Moving Day
It's definitely got my attention. But I need to know, is this the fic that you will have some girl/girl action, or is this another Bedward story?
(I'm just considering my options.) ;P lol
Leah in the mix is definitely making this story look promising. ;)
Okay, good start and looking forward to the next chapter.
~Labbit :)
Author's Response: I was thinking about doing this as a Bella/Jasper fic actually, but I also may have the beginning of a Bella/Rosalie storu trying to form in my head as well