Date: 28 Jul 2014 5:13 PM Title: One Shot
I have to say I loved that.
Not so serious, light, rather fluffy. lol.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:11 AM Title: One Shot
E's face on James Deen, and Stoya with Bella overlaid. Fluv! ;D (Pun fully intended. lol) A very delicious ride. Thanks!
Date: 27 Jul 2014 5:39 PM Title: One Shot
Loved this one shot!
Date: 27 May 2011 2:35 AM Title: One Shot
omg that was quite hilarious but oh so good!! i think i may have read this before but i notice that you're not on ff.net anymore and i'd really love to know if you've put your stories elsewhere or not i just thought i'd check here and a couple of other places to try to find you and stumbled on to this. thoroughly enjoyable that's for sure!!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 7:21 PM Title: One Shot
Haha I absolutely love this one-shot :D. It's amazing.
Date: 03 May 2010 4:43 AM Title: One Shot
That was funny, and hot :O
Date: 01 May 2010 10:58 PM Title: One Shot
That was hot, loved it
Date: 29 Apr 2010 8:56 AM Title: One Shot
Awesome. I was wondering when someone would write a fluffer fic ;) Very nice!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 6:31 AM Title: One Shot
Freaking hilarious! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 6:15 AM Title: One Shot
WOW OH WOW! THAT WAS HOT!!! AWESOME ONE SHOT!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:04 AM Title: One Shot
You know, I don't normally save one-shots, but this one was too cute to pass up. Having worked in the Adult Entertainment industry for the past ten years, let me tell you, you nailed a porn set on the head. That is exactly what happens. Too often the actors are talking about what they are going to have for dinner, or something trivial, while the action is going on. All you needed was the odd 'cut' due to bathroom breaks or cramped groin muscles. All in all, very well done.
Brava!!
Susan
Author's Response:
LMAO. I have seen some really 'low budget' porn in my day....and maybe I'm just odd, but I always see them talking during the sex and cant help but laugh. I figured it must happen on the "big budget" sets too. lol. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 2:06 AM Title: One Shot
You should feel proud to be such a dirty, dirty bird! Loved it!!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:53 PM Title: One Shot
lmao...yep that was hysterically dirty...loved it
Date: 28 Apr 2010 8:25 PM Title: One Shot
Love this one shot D! Laughed all the way through it!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 8:24 PM Title: One Shot
LOL this was so funny and hott! Awesome title, loved it!