[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:09 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 2:07 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
I think Cullen's Swan Racing would work
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 12:46 AM Title: It's Just Business...
your just a tease
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 11:43 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
love lemons
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 7:04 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
great story
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 6:23 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
awe
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 2:51 PM Title: Breakaway
awesome start
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:00 AM Title: Epilogue
This story was absolutely AMAZING! I love NASCAR and to have a story written about is with my favorite characters was just a wonderful trat!!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 9:28 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
I thought Tanya was with Shawna (or something similar, not Shannon)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:39 PM Title: Breakaway
This is what i was talking about before
Bathurst 2007 at the top of the Mt Panorma
http://www. youtube.com/ watch?v= j_-YSwhr5x4 (remove spaces)
Check it out!!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:27 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
Bathurst is on this sunday the 10th of october and it's and Australian MUST watch event and is even cool er now that thwy have it online as well as Tv at the same time showing in side the drivers cars ect every one should check it out - search for bathurst or channell 7 australia or something inbetween
http://www. youtube. com/watch?v= JQPOroesMWI (Remove spaces)
It gives a fairly good look at the track, one year on top of the mountain a kangaroo decided to hop across the track and was narrowly missed my one of the drivers.
I am really enjoying the story so far - I have never really seen the point to NASCAR - driving around in circles but after reading this I can see the appeal.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:41 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Best Chapter yet...loved the waiting room scene and the Whedon refernce....one of my favorite series.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:22 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
I loved the ending line in this chapter. One of the best chapter enders I've ever seen. :)
Date: 20 Sep 2010 4:27 PM Title: Epilogue
Absolutely awesome story with a unique plot. I liked it a lot! :)
Date: 12 Sep 2010 7:29 AM Title: Epilogue
WOW!!! I love this story... I'm sad that it's over. even tho i just realized it tonight... i stopped reading it on ff cause i didn't want to read censored work. the lemons are tooo good. :D I've got your two new stories to try out tho, and i'm sure i'll like at least one of them, so i won't be without something to read for a while. i'll catch up with them later.
angel
Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:39 AM Title: Epilogue
I think I am a little confused on what your actual original story is? I started at Knights... Whoot! Whoot! lol I know you know that 3rd person is not my thing. But, I did say that WOULD give it a chance. And, I am glad to say that I did. I am going to miss those guys. But, I see you have two more stories to ease my mourning. hehe.
Author's Response:
LOL...I'm glad you liked it. The original story is Children of Creation on this site. It's about Angels and this one girl that can see them all. :) HOpe you like the new ones...
Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:27 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
I guess I shouldn't be surprised by Daniels. I am not all that surprised by Cosma either. I think its the cynical side of me coming out to play. lol
Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:10 AM Title: Legal Eagle
Well, Aro is a smart man to figure out before his little niece that something was up in there. I mean honestly how stupid are those twins to not realize that? lol I like forceful Carlisle; he kicks ass. lol I wonder if Jane had actually been the reporter in disguise. lol They are pretty low at times.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:01 AM Title: Epilogue
J'ai adoré, merci, merci
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:43 PM Title: Attacking Walls
Ya charlie
now just bella how long will it take her to get a clue
Diane
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:15 PM Title: New Connections
so jake turns out to be a douch surprise surprise
bella really souldnt have beleived the press crap about edward knowing what they where doing to her but alls better now she knows hes a nice guy under all that
Diane
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:01 AM Title: Epilogue
Amazing wonderful and I am sad it it over but it was a great race to the finish Thanks
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:48 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
Another little race car driver how cute. So glad those assholes are going to jail and Ben is not. I cant believe this is almost over.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:33 AM Title: Epilogue
This was a great story and I love the ending. I am going to miss this story. Can't wait to see what you have next!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:36 PM Title: Epilogue
sweet awesome epilogue! Have enjoyed this story immensely. Thanks muchly for sharing your imagination with us reading hoors.. I appreciate all the time and effort it takes to turn out these writings. It has been a pleasure to read your tale of Edward, Bella, and of racing. Even learned a thing or two!! thanks again.. Pam b.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 7:43 PM Title: Epilogue
This was a totally awesome story thank you for sharing it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 5:38 AM Title: Epilogue
I just got finished with your story. Read it in 2 nights. It was lovely. I especially loved the last few chapters. They were so sweet! Can't wait to see what E&B story you come up with next...I'll be waiting. By the way, I loved all your other stories, too. I'm just crap at leaving reviews.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome ending!!!! I love Kyla's name. Very pretty!!! I have really enjoyed this story and the ending was perfect. Very natural.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:50 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
What a difference a year makes! So, they are having a little speed demon of their own?!? That is too sweet!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:50 AM Title: Epilogue
That was a fantastic finish. Thank you so much for not letting Bella become a "stay at home" mom when her passion was racing. As women we are torn by wanting to be both...stay at home mom's and have a career. Realistically the career wins out more times than not. Which makes your story even more believeable and encouraging. LOVED IT!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:27 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
That was a surprise and a very sweet one.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 5:31 PM Title: Epilogue
I was on vacation for two weeks and came back to a wonderful surprise but a sad one. The wonderful part was all the chapters I got to read to catch up. The sad part is knowing that the story is now complete! I've really enjoyed this story. You're such a talented writer and I've enjoyed everything you've written so far. I hope I can look forward to more from you!
Kat
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:03 PM Title: Epilogue
See my FFN review hon!! ;-P
Date: 03 Sep 2010 11:10 AM Title: Epilogue
OK, not gonna lie. This chapter made me tear up a bit at the end.
Especially the part where it says Bella won the Sprint Cup.
I'm going to be so sad not to get the updates for this story anymore! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Of course in the meantime, I'm going to catch up on "Children of Creation", so at least I'll get to read a bit of your fabulous writing.
Thanks so much for the stories you've already written, and what you continue to write. It's a true joy to read your stories :)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 7:47 AM Title: Epilogue
I have waited so long to read this. I wanted it to be completed first. It didn't disappoint! I really enjoyed your spin on the beloved characters and NASCAR. Great job! I loved so many things about the story but Charlie stole my heart. I seem to have a thing for Chief Swan. I love Edward to bits and felt for Esme. Good ending.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:34 AM Title: Epilogue
Awww, I just loved the ending. It was too cute. Wonderful story!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:35 PM Title: Epilogue
aw Kyla was so adorable and their a cute little racing family, i;ll miss them!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:35 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm so sad it's over! But it was a nice ending. Thank you for all the time and hard work you put into writing this story, I have enjoyed reading every word of it.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:34 PM Title: Epilogue
aww!!! i absolutely LOVED this story! i'm always so sad when your stories come to an end. really great job, as always :)
Kristi
Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:29 PM Title: New Connections
I feel horrible for Izzy situations like that always suck. BTW I love the fact that Edward wasn't idiot enough to put the move on her here. Cuddo's to you for not going for the obvious moment. yours story is really interesting.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:33 PM Title: Epilogue
Sweet. :-) Love the ending. :-)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:27 PM Title: Epilogue
Really good story. I loved it. It had my two favorite things, Twilight and Nascar. I'm a huge nascar fan and so glad you wrote this story. It was awesome and I loved how you ended it. Can't wait to read more of your writing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:51 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it from start to finish! Another winner!
Thanks for the great ride!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:11 PM Title: Epilogue
im sad that this is the end but happy that they got their happy ending !
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:39 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh, this was a FABULOUS story! Thanks so much for all your hard work!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:29 PM Title: Epilogue
This was such a great story. I can't remember what chapter you were on when I joined this band wagon. I love NASCAR, as does my family. Actually my younger brother races at a local dirt track. It's like the lowest class you can race but is still recognized by NASCAR because he has to have a NASCAR license. Anyway, I loved every minute of this story and you are such a great author.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:18 PM Title: Epilogue
:D She won it! Awesome!!! so sad it's over, i loved this, Great job as always! Kepp up the good work!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:16 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it- such a perfect ending for NASCARward and Driverella. Going to miss them, but will be looking forward to your new stuff, and more of Children of Creation, right?
Thanks for another great story.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:13 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
great chapter......
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:13 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
I loved this chaper! I am so glad she is going to have a baby and they are married. What were the grandparents reactions to the baby? Good I imagine, lol. Cant wait for the epi. Wonderful story.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:29 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
Wow and there's still the epi? well I can't wait to see what happens there. I'm sorry to see this go but the ending so far is good. :) thanks again bye
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:09 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
Awwwwwwww........
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:04 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 10:32 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
awe i love it!!! i hope everything will go smoothly now
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:56 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
aww sweet sweet post.. gonna have a little babyward... glad Edward was able to sweet talk his way out of the hot water he was in after the comment of "It's such bad timing.". Not what a pregnant, hormonal woman needs to hear.. Yeah,, Daniels is in jail along with his cohorts. Have thouroughly enjoyed your story. thanks so much for the time and effort it takes to keep all of us readers happy,, Awesome job.. Pam b.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:29 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
aw all their dreams are coming true! i loved it and i can't believe it's ending, sorry i didn't review last chapter but life is hectic right now!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:43 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
Awww! That was so cute!
Rhonda
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:41 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
:) a baby! I'm so glad they finally found out who was behind all that drama. I bet Edward pushed himself in PT just to get ready for the new season. Cullen racing will have a future Cullen driver now (I hope) :)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:29 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
I am so happy for them. They will make great parents. It is a good time to have a baby because one can work the business and one can work the track. Once the business is up and running, they both can be on the track with a baby along for the ride.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:08 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
Sweet! It just sucks for Bella not to be able to race though. I hope she still can after she gave birth with the baby (and after the nights without regular sleep ends but she had Edward there so it's gonna be just fine). :-)
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:49 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
Nice. Never thought of Cosma as the big bad guy but it makes perfect sense as he was too nice. And really nice that he and Daniels implicated each other.
Surprise with the pregnancy but again, understandable with their hectic lifestyle. That and the fact that they spend more time in the sack than they do on the track!
Giving Edward the win at Daytona was icing on the cake!
I'm really going to miss these guys!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:39 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
*sigh* So good, so sad its almost over. Knew something was up with Stephan.
Baby Cullen is on the way. Cant wait for the epi.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:35 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
See review on FFN!! *kiss*
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:33 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
a baby? never would have thunk it. thought they would have a huge wedding to. but i like how it ended, kinda like breaking dawn a little. A wedding and a baby when they didn't expect it. is this the epi? or is there more to come. didn't get a sexy honeymoon or anything honey. i'll still read whatev you write.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:25 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
yay!!! a happy ending for all of htem! and to have everyone find out the evilness and corruption of cosma and daniels. gosh, they are bad...glad that you are a firm believer in karma
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:09 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
did see that one comming ! happy for them.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 8:01 PM Title: Legal Eagle
ooooh, getting good and juicy. i wonder to. i know it wasn't volturi now, but james seems so obvious, huh?
Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:31 PM Title: Legal Eagle
I am so glad that Jenks in on the Cullen side. I hope Edward will heal fast so he can race at the beginning of the new race season. Bella should race for Edward. Just to prove to Danials that he did not win.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 7:10 AM Title: Legal Eagle
great chapter......
Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:47 AM Title: Legal Eagle
Aro is pissed what a slim ball LOL.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:43 AM Title: Legal Eagle
Wow, I would have loved to see there faces. Good chapter. I love the fact that his parents came and are staying to help.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:14 AM Title: Legal Eagle
i love it haha i didnt understand any of the section 29 33 thingy but i love the rest!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 3:22 AM Title: Legal Eagle
wow a lot of legal mumbo jumbo, I don't understand but I did get the gist of it. lol Aro is SCREWED!!! lol thanks again for the update.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:44 AM Title: Legal Eagle
The last two chapters great
love this story
I hope James gets more coming to him
and Edward is able to race again
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:58 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Let me tell you from being an outside observer, and all it would be insane if it were just about any other couple. That was very thoughtful of Edward to buy her a chain for the ring. I know if I was a parent I would like to hear from my child first, and not through the media. I am actually tearing up right now when Bella tells her father that she is a curse. I know I get to my snapping points and have to speak my mind. I see it with my job as well. Same @$$holes just different settings. I just imagined Bella beating the shit out of James. Thank you. My husband back when we were still kids was hit my car, and it was bad. I was and still am thankful it was not life or death. His is just a metal rod in his leg among a few things. I didn't leave the hospital until forced. Hell, I skipped some days in school. It was interesting when my principal (happened right after school next to their property) was there and I told him I had been there all day. I would have beat James ass too. I think Rose, Emmett, Jasper, Alice, and Charlie are probably proud of her. Edward could go either way. As in he wouldn't her hurt, but laughing because she kicked ass. LOL I couldn't imagine Edward taking no for answer. I can imagine he causing a scene though. hehe
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:53 AM Title: Legal Eagle
You are such a smart cookie posting in the A/N!
Normally I can't stand lawyers on principle alone, but I think I love Jenks! He totally handed Aro his ass and it was too sweet for words.
I love that Esme and Carlisle are helping Edward and Bella. It is nice to see Carlisle being the awesome guy we know he can be.
Excellent A/N! ;)
Author's Response:
LOLOL...thanks. It seemed like the natural thing to do when the chapter didn't show. LOL! I"m just glad it worked
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:47 AM Title: Legal Eagle
hahaha in your face Aro! and you too Jane!! great chapter :):)
Kristi
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:26 AM Title: Legal Eagle
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:22 AM Title: The Home Stretch
Looks can be deceiving. I thing it is so sweet that Ben had called for more directions. awww That and they even mowed the lawn for Edward, but that could be more out of fear. lol A heated debate is good in a relationship now and again. It's healthy in life. I think it is weird that Daniels is behaving and Cosma is a little irrational. I wonder what they both know... It's like the twilight zone. NO pun intended. haha
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:10 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
I have to agree with Ben on not being so sure with Edward beating him. I fully agree that he would beat him within an inch of his life. But, I can't say that I blame him either though. I see both of their points. Good thing it's in 3rd POV. haha I feel bad for Edward that Bella wasn't moving in completely on her own. I'm sure that he will take forever to get over it. haha I knew that deep down that once Edward had seen Angela that he would feel better. Bella always has been and always will be a good person. I wonder how long until those whispers turn into yelling.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:49 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
I understand the boring part about Indiana. If it wasn't for living near Chicago I would be dead from my own boredom. I had to think 'Damn that sucks for her problem in Indy.' That is just one city you have to race in. My first thought from reading the title was a mole amongst them. That is very cool that Edward had won that race at Watkins. Karma can be a bitch or a wonderful thing. I truly believe in what comes around goes around. Sometimes good people get mixed up in bad things. Yes, it was a bad decision, but it is about survival.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:34 PM Title: Legal Eagle
i'm glad that aro got what was coming to him.
but i'm a little sad that bella didn't get to race in the chase... i know she probably couldn't concentrate, with edward being hurt the way he was, and all the drama going on with aro, but wasn't it a dream of hers to race in that??? isn't that a dream of all nascar racers??? it seems like she just gave up a wonderful opportunity and i can't help but feel that it's such a waste..
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:24 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Somehow their trouble with money isn't the usual for everyone else. lol Oh how I wish I had that problem. I am glad that Carlisle was more easier to speak with than they originally thought he would. I was pretty giddy myself when I read that they had agreed and more so wanted to be silent partners. I knew Edward would say something to that effect about her last name. :) I am not sure the name Izzy goes with it, though. lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:59 PM Title: Legal Eagle
Haha Aro got his ass handed to him by Edward and Bella. I'm really intrigued to who it is that put Ben up to messing with bellas car I have my guesses that it's Daniels but I'm not 100%sure.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:16 PM Title: Legal Eagle
Great chapter, that little legal interlude was so fun to read- they just handed the Volturi their asses! Cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:12 PM Title: Legal Eagle
Sorry to hear about your loss.I know what you are going through right now. My grandfather died 2 weeks ago, but like you said they are both at peace.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:05 PM Title: Legal Eagle
so NASCAR slapped Bella with a $100,000 fine while Daniels has gotten away with murder? (almost literally) that is just so wrong. Love that Jenks was able to hand Aro his ass on a plate... Still feel it was either Aro or Daniels paying Ben.. but those choices may be just too obvious... will wait and see.. Thanks for the update.. Pam B.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:02 PM Title: Legal Eagle
I can't wait to find out who hired Ben! I bet it was Aro!
Rhonda
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:01 PM Title: Legal Eagle
I love that they have the upper hand, Edward seems to be doing well despite he injuries. Is the prognosis good for him to race in the future ????
Date: 30 Aug 2010 7:48 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
OMG So glad he is ok and Bella kicked James Ass LOL what a tough girl.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 7:19 AM Title: The Home Stretch
something is up with that driver Cosma I dont think he is as nice as they say
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:04 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Normally I don't like flip flopping time in a story, but you did it really well. I felt myself holding my breath at several points in this story, but I am so glad he is going to be ok. I hope he is going to be able to race again. That will break him if he has to be in the pits watching Bella out there alone. I love the proposal. It was very sweet. And I thought it was cool that he gave her a neclace to wear her ring on until they were ready to go public. I also thought it was awesome when Bella kicked the shit out of jackass.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 9:38 PM Title: The Home Stretch
Another excellent chapter. I wonder what the deal is with jackass and Cosma???
Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:12 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
OH THANK GOD!!! I'm so relieved. I thought you were going to kill him off, I would have had to smack someone lol. No I'm kidding but I LOVED the bitch attack Bella put on James. that was awesome. keep up the great work and thanks again for the really soon update. :) thanks bye