Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:23 AM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful ending. I love her seeing "Her" Edward standing and waiting for her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:15 AM Title: Epilogue
The perfect ending to the Perfect Wife. Edward's gift was just right, and I love so much that you gave Esme a happy ever after, too. A husband who cherishes her - absolutely wonderful.
I'm sad to see this end, but so very happy to see you continuing to write. You've thanked us for following you, we thank you for never giving up. You went through hell and back to continue writing this story, and had a lot of grief in doing so. Thank you so much for reaching out there and continuing it. There is a beautiful message in this story, and although it had it's dark and graphic moments, they were integral to the story itself, and made the love and light that much more beautiful. Bravo!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:15 AM Title: Epilogue
Awww!!! :')
Loved it!! I've loved reading this stpory for soo many weeks.. amazing. <3
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:10 AM Title: Epilogue
Yea Bella and yea Edward. They (and *all* of them) certainly deserve this wonderful HEA. Thank you for writing. :)
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:08 AM Title: Epilogue
thank you for such a wonderful story.
Must say i am just a little disappointed with the epilogue i was so hopping for more about their future. but it is still a nice ending.
Author's Response:
I have to leave something for the book...
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:08 AM Title: Epilogue
love the ending..one of the best fanfiction I ever read..I have been following this story since you posted it on fanfiction.net...and followed you here..best of luck with your new story..just wanted to let you know how much I loved your story and characters..bye..
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:03 AM Title: Epilogue
Love the update! :)
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:02 AM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful ending to an amazing story!! Thank you so much for writing this story and sharing with us. Can't wait for more of your stories.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:01 AM Title: Epilogue
Im so sorry to see these characters go.. I dont care what people have said but this story was truly beautiful...
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:59 PM Title: Epilogue
I love happy endings! And congratulations on such large numbers! I hate ffn now, they're getting rid of almost every story with even the smallest hint of sex in it. All because they refuse to have the MA/NC-17 rating.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:59 PM Title: Epilogue
Hey! Love your story. I started reading it and stopped because it was so hard to read the early chapters. I was not going to finish but I could not get the story out of my head. I am glad I kept reading. I loved the ending. I am so glad you made it real and had her leave and get help. would love to read what was is Edwards head after she leaves him. Will you write any outtakes? Looking forward to reading what you write next. :) jpl
Author's Response:
There will be an outtake for Esme when she finds out Carlisle is dead and what she did with his ashes. Edward's pov is saved for the book.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:52 PM Title: Epilogue
thank you so much for wrirting this story. i an one of the people who followed you along the internet and i don't regret it at all.
you're a briliant writer and i feel honoured to read this story.
congrats from Portugal and thank you very much
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:52 PM Title: Epilogue
Awwwww it's over! I can't believe that this was your first story ever, it was absolutely fantastic and probably the most unique plotline I've read to date. I'm so glad you continued to post beyond FF and I can't wait to read more of your work :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:47 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for ending it the way you did. It was "perfect" the way you wrote it. A long journey that came full circle.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:44 PM Title: Epilogue
A perfect ending to an incredible story. I didn't realize this story was your first attempt at writing - you are very talented. I've been with you from almost the beginning, back on fanfiction and "chased" you around the internet (lol) and I wouldn't have it any other way. I became so invested in this story, I always get so excited and happy when theres an update, and I've cried more times than I can count. This story has brought out fierce emotions in me, from sadness, to rage, to hope, to happiness and the belief that people do change for the better, and that there can be happy endings. I'll always remember the opening lines of this story, when Bella talks about how there are no heroes in life, only levels of villians and if you're fortunate enough, you learn how to survive. I feel that throughout this story, Bella has transcended that belief, and she is stronger than I can imagine anyone to ever be. I treasure your story, and I am so thankful you shared it with all of us. Could you please tell me what forum you're talking about to release the novel info? Because right now I'm not a part of any forum, and I really want to know the updates to your novel. Will it have the same name, "The Perfect Wife"? Please let me know. Again, incredible, incredible story. Words can't describe how amazing it is.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words. TPW has a forum on this website as well as twilighted[dot]net. The forum on twilighted has been since the beginning and seems to be where everyone goes the most. I'll update both as things progress with the book.
The book will have the same name (probably-at this time there are no plans to change it). However, there will be new material included so it won't just be the same story. I want it to be worth purchasing.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:42 PM Title: Epilogue
This was an Amazing story from start to finish and I am kinda sad to see it end but hope to see new stories up soon!!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:42 PM Title: Epilogue
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! It's over! :'( I'm sad. Oh my goodness, that was the best story I have ever read in my life and I don't remember how I got started reading this but I think I started following this at like chapter 20-something. Like this is one of my favorite stories that has ever been published on FF and the fact that it's coming to an end is saddening. *gasp* maybe you can do a sequel???!!!!!!!!!???!!! That would be awesome, but if you end it now, I'm glad you ended it the way you did.... beautiful ♥
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:41 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for persisting in telling your difficult story, despite the naysayers, the censure and the drama. The more I read, the more I appreciated it, and you for daring to write it and put it out there for us.
I am happy that everyone is finally happy and able to live their lives in love, without fear. I know for myself that there are many forms and gradations of control, with only the most extreme being the kind of abuse represented by Carlisle and Charlie. Edward had to identify and eliminate even the milder forms of control in order to make Bella happy and secure, even the symbolic control of the gate. Thank you for depicting that even those aspects of control are undesirable. Thank you for writing this story.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:36 PM Title: Epilogue
That was so good I got goosebumps. Finally!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:35 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you, this story has been a incredible journey.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:31 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved this story, thanks for sharing.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:29 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for this wonderful story. I have been following this since June 09. It was worth it. I look forward to reading your amazing stories in the future.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:29 PM Title: Epilogue
Can't believe its all over! I will miss the pumping of my heart as I read every new chapter with the suspense and drama that you weave throught it.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:28 PM Title: Epilogue
Fantastic tie up there missy. I enjoyed this wild crazy twisted ride with you. I think I'm as twisted as you :P Ok maybe not as bad but still twisted. Congrats on a job well done.
Cheers
Lisa
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:28 PM Title: Epilogue
With a story as good as this, we couldn't do anything but follow it until it's final home & enjoy every moment of it! Thank you for a great story...I've always enjoyed it!! Thank you also for sharing it with us!! It was awesome!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:27 PM Title: Epilogue
This has been my favorite fanfiction I have ever read, it's plot is amazing. Thank you for writing such an amazing story, it was fantastic! I'm sooooo sad to see it end, it was better than most books that I have read. I actually believe your writing style and the depth to your story is even better than Stephenie Meyer. Please don't be mad, I know some people love her style (it's very good), but yours is incredible. Again, thanks for the story. -- Ray
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:24 PM Title: Epilogue
iam so glad bella got her happy ever after loved it i can't belive it's over
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:23 PM Title: Epilogue
A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Thank you again for bringing it to us. ;)
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:23 PM Title: Epilogue
ahhhhh!!!
this ended amazingly!!!
i have kept with this story from the beginning and i just have to say that you are an amazing author and got all us readers to really be with your characters!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:18 PM Title: Epilogue
Rmcrms5
Thank you for such an amazing story!!!!!
Good luck with the book deal!!!!
Cory
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:17 PM Title: Epilogue
omg and so it ends...loved it short and sweet...i'm goin to miss this story soo much...i hope to get ur book wen it comes out and i'm so happy for u
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:13 PM Title: Epilogue
YOUR STORY IS THE BOMB!! I look forward to reading what ever you write next. As for chasing this story around the internet, it WAS SO worth all the pain of wondering where the story was and if it would continue. I never lost faith the story would go on and Im sooo glad you killed Papa C, he was a mean a##hole. Looking forward to what comes next.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Congratulations Mic! You did it! I was hooked on your story from Day 1, it is truly an incredible story. As hard as it was to read at times, you wrote so incredibly well that you couldn't NOT read to know what happened next. You made Bella into a true fighter & the bond that brought the family together & took down evil Carlisle! It was a perfect ending to a perfect story! Any chance for any future outtakes? I would love to know if they had children! I actually hate the thought of no future updates from TPW! I have you on author alert already so I will just wait to see what you come up with next!
Congrats again for an excellent story!
LindyP :)
Author's Response:
There will be more in the book that wasn't in the ff story...
The only other outtake planned is what Esme did with the ashes. I had to give everyone an ending but left a lot out of it since I don't plan on pulling the story when the book is published later this year. There will actually be a different epilogue on the book.
Thank you so much for sticking with me, Lindy. I know you've been here from the beginning and I've always looked forward to your reviews. Thank you so much for being such a great friend. I hope you like the next story.
Mic
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:09 PM Title: Epilogue
Im so sad its over, but I loved this story. You did a great job! Im glad everyone got their happy ending.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:09 PM Title: Epilogue
I LOVED the ending!! Awe...I'm so sad this story is over! You are definitely on author alerts so I can't wait to hear more from you. This has been such a fantastic ride :-) Can't wait to hear more from you SOON! Xoxo
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:09 PM Title: Epilogue
YAY!! you don't know how proud of you I am.
Sending my love and gratitude,
Vampluvr
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:08 PM Title: Epilogue
:) i cant weith to se your next story.... but pleas dont forget Alice and Jaspers side story.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:07 PM Title: Epilogue
wow! it's done finally. loved this story to pieces. :) though i was kinda hoping ther would be a EPOV towards the end too. just saying.....hehehehhee
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:00 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful ending! I love that Edward had the gate knocked down. Can't believe it's over. It's so good to see them all happy. :0)
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:00 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us! I hope you have a new story in the works.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:59 PM Title: Epilogue
Great ending. Had me in happy tears. So glad they finally have what they deserve.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:58 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh my goodness! I love it! Im so glad Bella and Edward ended up together! Such an awesome thing!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:57 PM Title: Epilogue
That was so good. I'm sad to see it end. I followed it from FF, then to the blog, and finally to here. I couldn't give this story up. I needed to see the happy ending for Bella. I look forward to reading more from you.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:56 PM Title: Epilogue
Well done. *standing ovation* You couldn't have ended this more perfectly. Thank you for your story. It was hard to get through at times, and I am certain you took alot of angry hits when certain things were brought to light.
The reality of it all is, some of those things do happen to women.
Thank you. *squishybighug*
xo
Corrina
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:54 PM Title: Epilogue
Woo-hoo! If that's not a happily ever after, then I don't know what is. Thanks so much for taking us along on this wonderful ride with you. Best of luck and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:52 PM Title: Epilogue
I read this from the beginning on ff and I was absolutely horrified at first but couldn't stop reading. Great story and great writing. So glad to see her HEA. I couldn't stomach an alternative. Thanks for writing!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:51 PM Title: Epilogue
Sorry to see it end but very glad that it was finished. Great story!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:48 PM Title: Epilogue
loved it very much so sad its over but it was fun thanks for sharing this with us......
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:45 PM Title: Epilogue
sigh....so sad that it's done...i loved this story! Can't wait for more from you :)
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 53
update.........NOW!
Author's Response: I listen well. Loading now. Enjoy!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 53
OMG...I've followed this story EVERYWHERE and in a way I'm sad that it's over, but I loved every word. I am all for the novel thing....go for it...you're very talented and I hope to write like you someday!!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 53
i would completely be interested!!!!!!!!!!!!! i have been following this story from the get-go!!! i swear ill fight the crowd when, NOT IF, it gets published
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 53
This story has keep me on my toes the whole time I have read it. I have followed the story from one website to another because it is that good. Please finish.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 53
Hey Mic!
It`s moth ago, that I really read, but now .. yeah, i hope u can understand me ...
TPW is, was and ever will be the best story i`ve ever read!
I don`t find words to describe, i love the story and i love you for all the things, you gave me, with this story! It was amazing. It was a honor for me. (I hope in english, it`s right, yeah i`m a little german girl *smile*)
Okay, two years ... that's a lot, but i think, she needed it - we all think so, i think (omg, it looks even in german strange, what i write here, but okay ..)
Yeah, also i want to say thanks for a wonderful year, a lot of tears, so much emotions and the best story of the world.
love u, maxi
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 53
Hey i'm suna from germany and i'm crying now, becaus it is so nice and beutiful :D sry my englischc is bad,
normally i read the perfekt wife by anja and tina but i cant wait!
Love you :*
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 53
Renee should be Barbra.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 53
I've gotta say it- You. ROCK!
This chapter had me crying. I'm so happy for Bella and the whole family. I have to admit it, I was a bit worried about how you were going to end it, but now I'm mentally kicking myself for having ever doubted you. You took good care of us:)
This chapter is indescribable. I laughed at Esme becoming the mom she couldn't have been and practically putting Emmet in 'time out'. Oh, and I have to admit it, the two years later thing through me off for a bit, but I realize how necessary it was. Bella, and that entire family, need TIME to heal themselves. And heal themselves they did. Baby #2 for Rose and Esme, not to mention Sophie:). And Esme the world traveller & Rose's garage. Oh, and I loved the idea for Renesmee's House. You've gotta love the irony of it all.
Great story. Can't wait for the epilogue, and your novel.
-Chea
Date: 23 Apr 2010 8:59 PM Title: A Mother's Love
what did carlisles family (specifically his father) think of esme when they got married?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 53
Loved the chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 53
if u turned it into a novel i would soooo read it it will be great
Date: 22 Apr 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
omg i love this story!!! I was going to burst into tears when she told edward to let her go but they are back together yayayayay love it :-)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 53
crazy shit love it
cant belive its finally ending
cant wait for the epilogue
i so knew it was edward lol
Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 53
crazy shit love it
cant belive its finally ending
cant wait for the epilogue
i so knew it was edward lol
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 53
well I have to admit I was sad when she said let me go, but I knew this date was Edward from the start. Just a hunch lol.
glad for a happy ending
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 53
I knew the guy was Edward. I'm glad she went and got help for herself. It was really needed. All in all, this story, in full, gets and 8.5 or a scale of 10. You worked really fucking hard to finish this and I am quite happy to say that I stuck this out with you.
The times were good, bad, sometimes downright annoying, and sometimes just damned unbearable but you made it.
Pat yourself on the back and have a drink.
I was just thinking that you should turn this story into something real with original characters.
Fiction.
It's a great way to discover your imagination and your worth as a writer.
Can't wait for the epilogue!
Author's Response:
thanks for sticking with me thru everything to get to the end. I do have plans to turn this into an original story (series) later this year with new material. The epilogue is all that's left. Hopefully I'll have it ready next week sometime. (I've been bad...I just discovered JR Ward's Black Dagger Brotherhood series and OMG! Freaking Fantastic!)
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 52
Finally.
He's dead.
I thought I'd be all happy about it. I don't know what the hell happened. But I can see you are almost done and we have to let poor Bella just have some reigns over her own life.
That's all I can say.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 50
Well, I completely hated this.
Not you, just the characters.
I don't know what else to say or if I can continue reading.
Psyche!
I'll still be with you to the end....but this chapter......UGH! You know? Just ugh....some of these characters just disappoint me. But I expected it. When I saw Demetri, I just knew where the hell his head was. lol
What a bunch of sick fucks!
But you do keep your characters in tact, so that is itself is what makes the story good.
I just don't know about this....honestly.....I didn't even know if I should leave a review. But something must be said for their crazy asses.
Author's Response:
Well...I'm glad (I think) that you did leave a review and like (maybe) the story? lol
Date: 21 Apr 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 53
yeah Novel would be great! let us know how it goes?
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 53
i always knew he had to let her go in order for things to work.
at the begining of this chapter i believed she was datting someone else and even when i thought 'Oh crap!´ i couldnt really blame her, i would want the same thing too.
thanks cant wait for the epilogue
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 53
OMG I NEARLY HAD A HEART ATTACK YOU GOT ME IN TEARS ALMOST EVERY STEP OF THE WY I CANT BELIEVE ITS COME TO AN END I WANT TO THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS STORY REALLY HEART FELT AND EMOTIONAL
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 53
Brilliant ending!
It was absolutely brilliant. I'm so very speechless.
It was such and emotional roller coaster.
You are a very brilliant author who writes gripping stories. I wish you all the best and that I will support you in all your next endeavors. :)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 53
OMG , I SO DID NOT EXPECT IT TO BE EDWARD!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 53
I totally loved this story. It happened just how it was supposed to. Everyone took time to heal and rediscover themselves. I liked that Edward also took the time to have therapy and that he waited for Bella. They needed that time apart.
This is one story that would be wonderful as a novel. I'd totally want to read it.
COngratulations and looking forward to the epilogue.
Renata
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 49
Hey!!
I know you haven't heard from me in long while but I'm back again. This chapter was so happy and sad all at the same time. I'm really sad that Esme had to go through something as terrible as she did, but as she relived it, I could tell it was coming. I love how Esme's garden was her release and the way for her to heal in a way. Her story almost brought me to tears, I hate that she ended up trapped the way she was. But I'm glad that she has people who love her now. I really hope things get better. I'll read more soon. XOXO TBG
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 53
Oh, I bet the novel would be a great seller! I will definitely buy a copy! Good luck!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:47 AM Title: A Mother's Love
This story is great.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 53
Oh Thank god it was Edward!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 53
I can't wait to see how this ends :) It's almost been a year since I've been following it and I can't believe it's coming to an end. Thank you for uout creativity and I'm glad I got to read this story :). I wish you success in everything you'll be doing from now on!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 50
OMG!!!! ;'(
I'm crying again!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 47
Noooooooooooooo dont do it!! Ed!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 53
oh wow, that was...sometime.
It was good but it could have been better.
waiting for the next chapter
love kova_aly
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
Phew... glad the nightmare is over and Bella has spent the necessary time getting back to herself. You did a great job with this story, even with the horrible events that transpired. I think you should turn it into an original novel. I certainly would take another look at it if I knew you were behind the writing. It's a fucked up story but no one can say it is boring. Thanks for always taking the plunge and posting, even when people were awful towards it. You did a wonderful job of bringing it to life and making me cringe just reading it. But for whatever reason I had to keep reading to get to that HEA. And here we are. It took a while for them to get back to the point of seeing each other but I'm glad they are giving it a second go.
I'd love to hear more from Renee and Esme. They certainly have plenty of story to tell and I'm sure you could conjure up perfectly horrid things for their past. Mwahaha (evil laugh, in case you couldn't tell).
Thanks for the fuckedness. I thoroughly enjoyed it and maybe that makes me just as fucked up as the rest of your readers. Hey, at least I have company in Hell. :)
Can't wait for the epi. This was a great final chapter.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 53
OMG, this story is nearly finished!! I'm sad, but very happy with the ending. :)
I would love to read a novel about TPW, as long as it doesn't cost a shitload. XD
Please update BTP soon, as well! :D :D
Date: 18 Apr 2010 11:59 PM Title: A Mother's Love
if you started a series w. esme and renee would you post it here?
Date: 18 Apr 2010 11:59 PM Title: A Mother's Love
if you started a series w. esme and renee would you post it here?
Date: 18 Apr 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
hii this is my first review like ever :) how is it possible that up until this chapter i have not cried or even been teary-eyed but as soon as i read the line "dont be carlisles edward" i teared up?? i mean it jus hit me and i literally put a hand to my heart those 4 simple words were deep to me .. i soo want edward to be good and to change for bella !! sighhh
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 53
great chappie! it made me cry! im so glad it was Edward! by the way it was written in the beginning, i almost thought that Bella had moved on and she was going on a date with someone else! But the moment you said "crooked grin that I remembered so well" i knew it was Edward!
Gosh... i need to stop crying! i blame you for making me so damn emotional today... LOL! Please dont keep me waiting so long for the epilogue... i dont think i can wait a long time! cant wait to read this if u get it published!
Till next time!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 53
great story and truly heart breaking in the beginning, i would definalty reat tpw if it became a novel
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 53
I love the update! :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 42
Poor Esme getting beat that is terrible but that isn't the worst to come.....
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 41
I can't believe that Carlisle would do this to his own son!!! This is just sick. I really hope that Edward will see what is happening and stop it.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 40
So Embry wasn't a friend to them but a spy for Carlisle. That is sick and twisted and maybe that is why Renee and Phil's will was never found Carlisle was behind it. And Edward came back to Bella just like he had been.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 39
He was really a mean bastard that night to his mother. I am glad that he is starting to be that person that Esme raised around others. I just hope that Carlisle doesn't ruin it.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 38
I never thought I would read that he was actually having a good conversation with Alice! He is going to keep the house and send Bella's car home I wonder how Carlisle is going to react to this? I am glad that he has started to repair his relationship with his mom too.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 37
I think that Edward is going to be the first one to really stand up to Carlisle because of the strength that he gets from wanting to be a better man for Bella!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 36
It is so nice to see this Edward come out on a daily basis!!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 35
I was thinking the same thing about their will! How did she have to go to Charlie if Phil and Renee's wil said that she went to her aunt and uncle?