Date: 18 Apr 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
Edward has changed so much I am surprised that he didn't just take the belt and start hitting but I am glad that he didn't. He wants to change his whole person and that is a good thing.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 53
In the next chapter will they get married? I would love to see that.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 53
Ahh only the epilogue left!! I don't want it to end!! I am def interested in more! It's so good to see most of them doing so good moving on and others trying so hard to.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 46
If Bella is pregnant I will never forgive her, or Edward the little dope!!! Last thing she needs right now!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 53
I must say, I was getting worried. I'm glad her date is with Edward because even though he was a gigantic jerk in the beginning, I really started to like him. THanks!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 53
yay! i'm so glad that it was him at the door - had a feeling it might have been though. great that she's back in school and that everyone is seeing a shrink...really, that's what everyone needed.
about your starting something with renne and esme i think that could be really interesting and see the interworkings of the dad's relationships with their young kids and the conditioning processes. see how they changed from the men they originally married to what they became and how the wives got so broken down. i think it would be a really interesting work - especially out of the whole twi world, since there are so many preconcieved notions about it. i think you have a great basis and can't wait to see where you go from here!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 32
Well Emmett seems to be the first one that has let go of the past learnings from his father and refered to Esme as his mom again.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
I really hope that Edward doesn't revert back to Carlisle's Edward for good because he is a good person when he isn't that one.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 50
I have a qestion:
where is chapter 51??
LG
Sophia
Date: 17 Apr 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 28
That was an amazing breakthrough that he just had!!! I am really glad that Bella told him even though she was drunk because Edward needed to hear all of this so that maybe he would get his head out of his ass.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am really happy with him that he is trying to make her dreams come true!! That is the Edward that we want to see more of.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 53
May I respectfully say that I have loved this story from its very beginning to the final word. It made me cry, cringe, laugh, want to physically harm fictional characters...truly wonderful!
I would love to see TPW in a novel. Please keep us posted on this.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 53
great chapter...i was hoping it was edward when a date was mentioned...hope you update soon!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 53
great chapter. short but great :) can not wait for the epilogue
Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 53
I really love the idea of you turning this into an Original novel, i really have enjoyed reading this story, and seeing the happy ending just within reach.
this last chapter made me cry,im really not ready for it to be over yet, you are very Talented.
i hope to keep going as i'll be an Avide reader as long as you keep wrighting.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 53
Thank you, thank you for being brave enough to start writing this story.
Thank you, for keeping it going, even when you probably felt like not doing it.
Thank you, for not backing down on what you wanted to tell with the story.
Thank you, for giving a voice to such amazing characters.
Thank you, for defending your story and finding ways to keep it alive.
It has been an amazing experience. Shocking at times, but filled with hope too.
I think it's a story that should be published, that needs to be published and recognized the way it has to be.
Again, thank you...
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 53
ohmygod. I love love love it. I can't believe it's almost ending 'cause this story really really rocks!m/ and you also(of course). The best! I can't wait to read the epilouge.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
Beautiful, best story I have ever read!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
Amazing chapter. Thank you sooo much!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 53
Novel... :) YES YES YES..*
Ever since the beginning I have been thinking this would make a great novel..*
Please do..*
And up date soon..*
Alice R..*
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 53
Hi!!!!! I absolutely love your story, and the way it's turned out!!! You're an amazing writer, and you carry the whole story amazingly from beginning to the end!!!
You should definately go ahead and turn this into a novel!!! I'm sure there'd be loads of takers for it... :-) And even though I live in India, I would surely book a copy... :-)
Loved the story, and am anxiously waiting for the epilogue!!! :-D
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:35 PM Title: A Mother's Love
i cant wait for you to write a novel of this story because i have been following this story since it started. when is the novel going to come out
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 53
Very interesting. I was afraid all along that Bella's date was someone new ... not Edward! You are great at suspence!
I find it strange that Bella lets the therapist took control over her life after everything she went throught. I'm not familliard with this, but is it normal that she asks her to stop seeing the Cullen? Why did she strip her bare?
Where is she going to school? What does she study? Jasper help her with which course? I want to know more!
:'( Only one chapter left! It's so sad!
Good luck with your project of novel... Read you soon!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 53
ohhhh yeahhhh!!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 53
Heya Mic,
I would love to see the original story, along with new material - who can beat that? I loved this fic and am sad to see it end so I vote for you to continue and go ahead starting with Esme and Renee. Thanks so much for sharing your writing.
Mick
Date: 16 Apr 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank God that he isn't going to punish her for that. I think that Esme is right and Edward is the key to breaking down Carlisile.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 53
awwww i still can´t believe this story is comming to an end, :´(
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 53
Awww, how cute... i knew it was him when you said wildflowers.. ;] Nice.
I'm sad that it's over.. what a fabulous story. <3
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:23 AM Title: A Mother's Love
Is she going to College in Arizona? Or did she get to go to Texas? I have to know!
I'm glad she got to do this her way! Yay!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 53
Can't wait for the epilogue. I really hope you persue a career in writing... You're so talented woman! Good luck on your novels :)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 53
omg!! awesome story!! this truly an inspiring story since women really have gone thorugh this.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:20 PM Title: A Mother's Love
when do you plan on posting the outtake?
also...if edward and emmett went to therapy, how come esme didnt since she went through the most abuse for the longest time?
Date: 15 Apr 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 53
Such a great idea to turn TPW into novel/series! Best of luck!
Great chapter! A very healthy way to bring them back together.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 53
i'm amazed this was very very sweet,
thanks for it..
i'm looking forward for the epilog...
Sema
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 53
So good to see that Bella got her wish and went to Uni. No doubt Edward has been rather anxious over the last two years but it looks like things are coming good for them now. It was very sensible for them to take a break so that she could be sure of her feelings and have a normal life or at least nearly normal. Yes, publishing this is a good idea especially if you fill in the gaps that have occurred in certain areas of the story. Please make sure you make it available for Kindle so that I can get it here in the UK. Looking forward to the epi now.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 53
<3
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 53
I don't know why I ever doubted that the date was with Edward. I LOVE the name Sophie. Everyone seems to have gotteen thier HEA so that's awesome.
yes I would totally buy this off the shelf. Especiallly since you're planning on putting in NBS material
Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 53
I knew it was Edward. Who else could she love. He proved that he loved her not the Barbie doll.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 53
I'm so glad you didn't go the easy route and have Edward and Bella live happily ever after right after Carlisle died. Both of them definitely needed extensive therapy. I couldn't help but smile at the end at Edward's nervousness. Can't wait for the epi and your original novels.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 53
I'm glad there is such a lapse in time for recovery. I wonder what Edward did in the moment of Bella asking to be let go and in the days afterward. Did he want to keep tabs on her? How did he end up in therapy?
Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
All of the stories that he just heard and he still thinks that he can fix Bella by himself!!! He is very stupid if he thinks that way.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
There is lots of hope for him if he just listens to what his brothers have to say and listen less to his father and he will be ok.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my that is terrible!! I can't believe that James did this and his friend too. Well I really take that back I do because he is a sick bastard and his father too! I hope that Edward listens to what Emmett was saying because that is true.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 53
I would love to see this as a original novel. I can't also wait for the epilogue yikes i am anticipating how you will end this
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 53
Wasn't expecting it to be Edward! Unless I accidentally skipped a paragraph... But still. I can't believe it's almost over! I'm sad!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 53
I can't wait to see what happens love it love it love it
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:00 AM Title: A Mother's Love
I love this work but honestly I had to read the first 13 chapters with one eye closed... and skip over quite a few paragraphs... It would be an easier read if those chapters were more suggestive and less "detailed". Also for the level of abuse to be dealt with in one chapter that spans two years is a bit incredulous... contrasted with the few months of abuse at charlies hands (edward/carlisle) covering several chapters. Having said that; I followed you here from fan-fiction because this story is unique and really really good and it held my interest the entire time.
Im sad but glad its done only because I cant wait to have you finish CAM...
Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 53
You always said that BELLA would get her happy ending, but nothing about Edward, and I was a little worried about that. But I like that he let her go to give her time, to start healing the wounds from her past. Because Edward can't fix everything. Update Soon.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 53
i am would be pre-order such material! while fan fiction is fun and great practice for writers i love hearing that some are taking their work to the streets. i would gladly pick up your work. i have loved every stress filled minute of this story.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 53
Oh my gosh, I knew it! The minute she said date, I knew it was with Edward. Oh, I'm so sad to see it end. This is so terribly depressing, the thought of my favorite story ending. You should publish this as your own book, you know. I would buy a million copies and say "I read this when it was just a fanfic!!!!!' and then I would read it a million times over again until I memorized the entire story. I love this, but I've said that already. haven't I? You are amazing. I really hope my writing is as well liked as yours, but I think that is a hard thing to acheive. I can't wait for the epilogue. I almost want you to write a sequel, but that kind of doesn't make any sense? This is supposed to be her happy ending, a sequel would be a whole new beginning. But I don't anyone would be opposed to you writing one. Just sayng. I've cried, I've laughed, I've covered my eyes. This story is genius. You are a genius.
NYBF
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 53
great story. go for the original fiction!!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 53
I was worried there for a while regarding the date...but of course who better than Edward.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 53
Great chapter. I really love this story.
And I am DEFINITELY interested in your idea for TPW.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 53
one two three: AWWWWWWWWWWWWW :) Loved it bb, absolutely brilliant :) Can't wait to see the epilogue and see where they end up after this longest of journeys.
Thanks for sharing your gifts with us even if they are twisted and frightening sometimes ;)
LOVE,
Deeds
Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 53
Awe! I had to go back and read a few of the last few chapters because I thought Bella was pregnant but that was never said. So whew! Sweet, I hope that it all works out for them!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 53
Beautiful chapter. I so knew it was going to be Edward who was her date. Okay if it wasn't I was going to have serious words for you. You were right this was a happy ending for Bella and for everybody. This has been a fantastic story and I thank you for sharing this little piece of yourself through this amazing adventure.
Woman! Of course I would be interested in an original novel! Honestly you do not need little me to tell you this was a wonderful story. And with the prospect of new material you definitely got me interested.
I can't wait for your epilogue. And thanks for giving these two such a great ending. I am sure the next chapter will be just as good.
You also have me looking forward to your new ideas!
~Jessi
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked the chapter. I hoped everyone would like their happy endings.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 53
Awesome. This is... well the story has gone the way I'd hoped way back when she was still at Charlie's it would go. He let her go, she has gone through major therapy. You were fairly honest about the severe psychological trauma such events would cause, and I have appreciated that effort throughout the story.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 53
I loved it! I so thought that was the epi, and i was like is that it? :( Cant wait for it
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 53
i really like this story and think it would be really cool if you redid this story as an original update soon
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 53
Yes i would be intersted! are u kidding!? lol This is such an amazing and heartfelt story...seriously publish it! I absolutly loved the end of this chapter it made me SOOOOO HAPPY! Thank you ur awesomeness!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:32 PM Title: A Mother's Love
when are you planning on posting the outtake?
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 53
wooow edwards back... i hope that everything works out. with our without edward
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 53
of course i'm interested in reading this like a novel no matter what names the characters are ,you know i would really love to read the healing process of the boys especially Edward or whatever name you give him,i'm not fron the U.S. but i'm willing to do anything to buy your series you are an extraordinary writter and your story really moved me ,cause sad as it is ,all of that stuff can happen even in our "modern" times.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 53
That was awesome. you should totally go for it.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 53
you should definitely make it a series! and I'm so excited that you are gonna focus on CAM, I love that story and have been dying for more, but i understand life doesn't revolve around fanfiction. I think you could get published easily if you turned this into an original novel.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 53
awesome - incredible and YES I would definately read an orignal work by you!
I can't wait for Creating a Mate to pick up again - I love it!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 53
I CANT BELIEVE IT!
WHAT A GOOD STORY (:
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 53
wow he really let her go, edward loved her that much that he gave her what she was due and let her move out, it sounds like bella has had a rough couple of years as she pieces her life back together, bet edward has not had an easy ride either, i was so pleased that edward was her date, and loved hearing that all the other cullens are doing well and the ladies came into their own especially esme,
yes, yes i would definatly buy this as a novel, fab idea
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 53
MERCI MERCI MERCI MERCI BEAUCOUP.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 53
I THINK THAT A NOVEL IS A WONDERFUL IDEA.... YOU HAVE A GREAT STORY HERE AND THERE IS SO MUCH ROOM TO TAKE THIS STORY TO MAKE A NOVEL SERIES OUT OF IT..... GOOD LUCK
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
thank god it was edward so happy
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 53
AMAZING!!! Now I can't wait forthe epilogue, even if it's the last chapter.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 53
Great ending, really satisfying, and everything turned out as it should.
I was a bit disappointed at first that it didn't take up where the last chapter ended, with Bella asking Edward to let her go. I'd love to have some of Edward's POV of the last two years, and his reaction to Bella leaving him.
Anyway, congratulations on a great story! I'm really sad it's is nearly over - it's been so entertaining. Looking forward to the epilogue!
Author's Response:
Edward's pov will be in the book
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 53
Great chapter! I think it would make a great novel.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 53
I'm glad that she's had a chance to find herself
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 53
That was good i like it very much how u ended it and yes i would read it
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 52
Wow that was intense so glad he is dead
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 53
"I have plans to turn TPW into an original novel later this summer with NEW material included. I would appreciate knowing if anyone is interrested in this. "
Yes. yes yes YES.
Please.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 49
That was intense chapter poor esme
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 53
Wow! What an amazing chapter! He really let her go; I'd love to read his POV on that and what he's been through over the last 2 years. I loved the way you've summed things up nicely in this chapter while maintaining reality - that they ALL needed therapy and that Bella needed time away to sort things out and discover herself. I'm so happy for Alice too that she was ready to have a baby of her own. And the idea of Renesme's House is fabulous!
I was saddened at first about talk of Bella's date since I thought she was trying to date other people. I was really happy to discover that her date is with Edward. Yay! I look forward to the epi, though I will be sad to see this story end. I'll happily read any out-takes or side stories that you write (like about Renee and Esme or more about Alice and Jasper).
Author's Response:
All the extras you're wanting to see will be in the actual novel series. There will be a book dedicated to Renee & Esme
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 53
If the novel really come out, do you could send one to Germany?
That would be really cool.
I love this Chapter, even I didnt understand the half of it. My english is to bad.
Author's Response:
I'm sure orders can be shipped wherever when that time comes.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 48
Wow that was intense
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 53
I just say : I LOVE IT, like evry chapter before. Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 47
Oh no that is not good
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 53
That was awesome!!! I was so depressed that it was 'two years' but it was necessary. You wrapped everyone/everything up really well and the ending was epic. Aww, yay, hea's at last. God, even in death, Carlisle is creepy.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 53
<3
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 53
Awe, that was so sweet to end this chapter there. The family is all moving forward and doing very well and so are they. Very nice.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 53
Ohhhh, a novel? You'll have to tell us if it gets a major publisher!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 44
That was a sweet 1st time
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 43
He is learning and its great to see
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 42
That was good i like it
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 53
I love that you have given this a realistic ending and am looking forward to the epilogue! Thanks x
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 53
Hi there.
I just read your storie in german and continued here, and I was very afraid after the end of your last chapter, but I also understand Bella's reaction. I was so nervous while read those chapter, but that all was forgotten when I read the last part =D
She has a date with Edward after 2 years - Wow! I was sooooo afraid she left hin forever or something like that.
I have goosebumps all over my body and tears in my eyes (I am emotional and always feel with the characters)
I can't wait to read the epilouge, but I am also very sad *wipe a tear away* that the storie ends ;)
See you on the epilouge.
Take care, Jay <3
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 53
aww i'm glad she ended up with Edward. but i'm also glad that she left him for a few years to figure her life out and go to therapy. this was a great chapter, i can't wait for the epilogue!
Kristi
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:10 PM Title: A Mother's Love
I've been following this story a long time, and it's sad it's coming to an end, but it is definitely a happy one, as promised. It's been brilliant. And I would Definitely be interested if you were to turn it into a novel or exapnd it in any way!! =]