Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:02 PM Title: A Mother's Love
I so love this story. IT IS GREAT!!!!!! Thank you for showing how everyone has moved on. I am sad that the epilogue is left. I hope we get to read about Edward and how he felt when Bella asked him to "let her go". What did Esme do with Carlisle's ashes???? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 53
Aw what a great chapter! I had a feeling it would be Edward :) So sad that there is only the epilogue left!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 53
I LOVE IT!
I'M EXCITED THAT YOU MIGHT BE TURNING IT INTO AN ACTUAL NOVEL!
I HOPE TO READ WHAT EVER STORIES YOU CREATE IN THE FUTURE!
GOOD LUCK!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 53
WOW...I can't wait to read the epilogue. :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 53
Rmcrms5
You had me very scared there for a while. Thinking that Bella was going to go out with someone new!!!!
Looking forward to the epilogue!!!!
Cory
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 53
I hope you release the epilogue soon and that you'll post the next chapters for CAM!
This chapter was good like everyone from you.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 53
oh wow, I would love to have this sitting on my book shelve!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 53
Awww...that was so sweet. Even from that tiny little glimpse of Edward, you can tell he is a new man...awww...i just...awww...that's all i keep thinking!
Completely looking forward to the epilogue. I can't believe this journey is almost over. I only started reading fanfiction around this time last year, and TPW was one of the first i stumbled upon. It will be so bittersweet once it has finished. Thankyou for the emotions, the memories.
Thankyou for the update. I eagerly await the next installment...
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
Wow. I never doubted that you had a happily ever after in store, but its incredible to finally get to this point. I'm sure its amazing for you, too. I've loved every minute of this story, even the parts that made me cry my eyes out and become so mad that I wanted to kill the characters. You've created an incredible story, and I would absolutely LOVE it if you turned it into an original novel. I would love that. Seriously. Go for it. I can't wait to read the epilogue!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 53
This has been a fabulously well thought out story, and I would love to see you publish it!! I think a series would be wonderful! Can't wait!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 53
Wow! I loved this chapter. Nice job showing how much they all needed time, space and counseling to move on. Thanks for showing that growth is a good thing.Can't wait to see what happens in the epilogue.
I would love to read this as an original novel. Please keep us posted.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:42 AM Title: A Mother's Love
I´m so happy, that they ended up together!
What I really would like to read is Edwards POV, when Bella told him to let her go and his time after she went back to Phoenix. How he handled everything, how he felt...
Maybe you´ll write an outtake some day...
Love this story!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 53
You should definitely turn this into a original novel, I love it!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 53
Oh that was sweet! It's sooo good that they all take their time it was much needed.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 53
yes yes yes. your so good. original novels bring a new voice to the story
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
And there in this chapter is why I had faith in Edward in this story!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow he is going to be the one that is different than the rest of them. He has a heart not that the rest of them don't he just is going to show his differently.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 53
Love the idea of an novel or series! I would pay to read your work.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ok so I am really hoping that I was wrong and that he is still going to be good to her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ok so I am really hoping that I was wrong and that he is still going to be good to her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
So she is going to move in with Edward now? That has to be better for her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well he does have a heart and while he has anger issues I believe that he is going to be good to Bella.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 53
turning this into a book would be great! If you can get away with all the racy stuff of course :P
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
I just hope that he can get her out of the hell that she has been living in soon.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 53
this chapter almost made me cry. but it was expected that Bella and Edward will end up together. thanks
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 53
I almost cried before I realised her date was actually Edward! I knew he'll wait for her and she'll want to be with him.
I really liked how you showed everyone's moved on now. They all deserve their happiness after what you made them go through lol :)
I'm (im)patiently waiting for the epilogue
Take care :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well Maybe Edward isn't a monster in this story and he is going to be her saving grace from James.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 53
oh i'm totally in for getting the book! start the series up! you best believe i'll be one of the firsts people to get it
well, i completely loved this story from the beginning. this is exactly how i imagined it would go...i loved that bella went to college and she got help AND her date was edward *swoon* he was paitent with her which makes it even better.
i can't wait for the novel[s]! please post whenever they come out!
-roxy
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 53
I like how you handled the aftermath. Can't wait to read epi. I think you should go ahead with your plans to make TPW and original work. You're an amazing author and i would love to read anything you wrote. (Hope you are still planning on continuing with A/J story though.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 53
omg..thats good that he let her go..im glad she got the help she deserved....really good story im glad i stuck thru the end i loved it.sad but good..
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
So Edward is going to protect her! I really hope that is the case because James is going to hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
So Edward is going to protect her! I really hope that is the case because James is going to hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
So Edward is going to protect her! I really hope that is the case because James is going to hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
So Edward is going to protect her! I really hope that is the case because James is going to hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
They aren't helping her any by not feeding her just making her weak and then she won't be able to do anything with them .
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 53
When I first started reading The Perfect Wife, it was at Chapter 7. I remember reading it and really loving this story, seeing the way the characters changed.When I was just up to the first few paragraphs and was a bit stunned. Bella was free! She went through with her plans, but there was no Edward.
Then there was a date mentioned, and as it got through I was guessing 'It's Edward!' and there he was a few paragraphs down.
You've done a spectacular job on this story. It would be lovely to see such a rich story converted into a full-length novel with its own characters. Good luck in writing it and getting it published! :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am starting to think that she is really never getting out of there and is going to be stuck there forever.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well I hope for Bella's sake that he is better than Charlie and James because she deserves to be happy in her life too.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
As shocked as I am to say this maybe Edward isn't as sick as James and Charlie are. He is mad because they hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
As shocked as I am to say this maybe Edward isn't as sick as James and Charlie are. He is mad because they hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
As shocked as I am to say this maybe Edward isn't as sick as James and Charlie are. He is mad because they hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 53
Thought it was going to be Edward. I liked how you wrote this chpt
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 53
you should make this story into a novel! it's such a powerful story and you are such a great writer. you should definately do it. =]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
So Charlie sold her to Edward. That is just wrong.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 53
Well, to me two years would be very little after all the horrible things she went trough; but that´s me. Since the beggining (beggining being for me chapter 14, since I couldn´t stomach the first chapters) felt that Edward would have to let her go in the end if he really loved her. About her love for him, I wasn´t sure either, since it bloomed in pretty awful circumstances. It seems that after all, after the whirlwind of ordeals, the therapies and the tries to move on, they were actually in love, unless it is another Edward with tousled hair and a crooked smile.
About you publishing this story, I don´t know. I mean, everyone is diferent; there are awful, unthinkable, unspeakable things beeing done and endured out there that we don´t know about or even bring ourselves to beging to fathom, that reading it could bring diferent outcomes to each reader. It depends on the confidence, assurance and knowledge of each one , that make you stay put, even when you read about these upsetting things
For me, well, is not something I would like to read many times. Don´t get me wrong; it is great that people can be strong enough to survive this kind of thing and be happy. It is somewhat educational to realize that we are really lucky and blessed to be spared such an awful tragedy, to know that life can change abruptly and that these things and even worst things, happen. Altough, I am not really eager on torturing myself by re.reading things that could affect my sensibilities if I am not in a suitable state of mind. I swaer I mean no ofense; to write this things, to tell this story and the way of telling it, well,it also requires a great amount of strenght and ability.
Take care.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really feel sorry that she is having to go through all of this. I have a question though what happened to Renee and Phil's will that she would go live with their friends?
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 53
great chapter
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bella! I am afraid that I think that things are going to get worse for her before they get better.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 53
If you turn this in to a novel let me knnow.. I really liked this story and I would love to read new material on this story.. Your a great writier and I have followed your work...
I could nt beleive that Bella left with her Aunt. Wow that was a shock. but I am glad that everyone is gettig help and that Edward and Bella work things out. I hope that there love will live on..
thanks for sharing your stroy.
debbie grissom
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 53
OMG, yea!! Wow, how do you feel? This amazing, heart wrenching story has come to an end (minus epilogue), how do you feel about that?
I would buy your book, the series, whatever it is, i would buy it and read like Twilight. Your story is that awesome.
You did amazing with this ending, it was perfect. A lot of times a writer will start an amazing story, have all these good characters and all these could conflicts, but then their ending just sucks, because the happy ending that they wanted their characters to have, wasn't earned. You did great in that, Bella isn't quite there yet, but she's on the right road, she will get there, you given us that, and for that i thank you so so much. You never disapoint, so also thank you for that.
I'm ranting i know, but it's been a long day for me, so i'm in a ranting mood. :(
Anyway about CAM, can't wait, i am a major supporter of this story. Yesterday in fact, i went back and reread it i miss it so much. After TPW, i just know you'll do great with it.
Thanks for letting me rant, and just wow, great job on such a complex, emotional rollercoaster of a story.
;)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
I just don't know what to say! I hope that all of this gets better for her soon.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 53
That was really wonderful and I look forward to seeing the epilogue. I for one would love to see TPW as an original novel. Thanks so much for letting us share your work and for asking our opinion.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 53
I love how this is wrapping up!
I am glad Edward let her go and that they all got the help they needed. Some very strong, formidable women came out of this.
Can't wait to read the epi. Making this an original, is NOT a bad idea at all. New material both intrigues and frightens me. I am sure you understand why.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella!!! THis is really a sick situation that she is in now. I hope that she can get out of it soon.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 53
I'm so satisfied at the way this story has evolved!
Love it!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
They are sick bastards aren't they?
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 53
It's nice to see her continuing to heal. Hopefully Edward can keep helping with that :}
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 53
I would totally read your novel :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 53
i'm so going to cry when this story is over. can't wait for the epi though.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 53
Another wonderful chapter - I can't believe the ride is almost over. I know I'd be greatly interested in reading this story as an original novel...& the series sounds great too. Thanks for the update & as always, anticipating the final instalment.
Until next time, take care!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 53
Oh I love this!! SHE WENT TO COLLEGE and SAW A THERAPIST! Thank you GAWD!!
Wonderful chapter clearing up the family!! danaxox
PS I will so be buying this when you release it as an original work!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 53
Wonderful chapter! You've brought everyone forward so realistically that it appears seamless. Babies, therapy, and fulfilled dreams...the stuff that we live for! I can't begin to tell you how much I've loved this piece. I'll be looking forward to the epilogue and your new stories!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 53
oh em gee i was so confused at first and then i smiled like a fool at the end. i was just wondering who the hell could hold her interest at college and then i had a feeling that it was Edward! Thank GOD!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 53
Somewhat predictable. I knew who her date would be from the beginning of the chapter, but a good way to end it. You were right, Bella does get her HEA after all. I might have missed this detail while reading, but is she going to A&M like she always wanted to? Anyway, I am very sad to see this story come to an end. Seems like I've been reading it for years, but I'm glad you aren't dragging it out just to drag it out. So many great stories have been ruined because the authors and/or readers just couldn't let it go. Although, considering Bella still has so much inner turmoil, as do all of the Cullens, a sequel wouldn't be a bad idea if that's what you were planning. Thank you again for the countless hours I'm sure you've spend on TPW and its spinoff about A and J. I can't tell you the endless entertainment it's brought to me and all of your readers. Seriously, it's better than any mindless garbage that's on tv..And I look forward to your future writing projects. :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 53
Yay, I'm glad everybody's getting healthy. It sounds like the therapy sessions are really helping. I can't wait to read the epilogue.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 53
*squee* I just KNEW her date was with Edward.
I'm so proud of her...
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 53
You had me panicked through that whole chapter, I actually wanted to cry. How sad for Bella though, I am glad that Edward waited for her.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 53
Love the chapter and I WOULD LOVE FOR THIS TO BE AN ORIGINAL NOVEL :D
I would buy it :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 53
oh i KNEW it was edward! how would she have been happy with any other guy? such an amazing story, i'm sad to know that it is almost over. it's great that you've dedicated so much time and effort on this story, i would never be able to create something like this(:
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 53
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Original novel? are you serious? Yes! I love this story so much, I would love to see it repolished. I will be first in line to buy all your books!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 53
Loved this chapter...you had me in tears! Glad to see that through all the challenges they were all able to get the help they needed and are moving forward in a positive direction. I would love to see you complete the novel idea.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 53
I got nervous there for a minute thinking she moved on from Edward.. :)
Oh, and I would definitely love to see this turned into a novel!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 53
That was great!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 53
Thanks so much for sharing this story with us. It's been a long and bumpy ride, but I'm so glad that I read this story and stuck with it.
I would definitely be interested in reading TPW as an original novel, I've been looking forward to it and if you need any help with editing or anything, don't hesitate to ask. I've enjoyed helping you when I've been able to.
Anyways, good luck with turning this into an original, I'm looking forward to the epilogue and whatever other story's you plan to post.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:54 AM Title: A Mother's Love
Awww that is such a sad start to this story. I really hope that it isn't always this sad.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 53
This was great!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 53
WOW....i actually feel tears. I followed this story from FF.net to your blog. You r friggin AMAZING!!!!
Whatever novel you write, I will most def buy it!!!!!!!
I was so set to rant about Bella leaving Edward for two years, but it was PERFECT!!!!! XD
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 53
Wow I love it and I would be interested in everything you write. Love the end of the chapter. cant wait for the epilogue.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 53
one thing though: what about the cullens' family in alaska?
esme won't let THOSE poor women be abused, will she?
just wondering...amazing story either way
cant wait until the epilouge :D
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 53
AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!
I (as I am sure anybody else who has read the story) am definitely interested reading an original novel of TPW
update the details when u have them!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 53
What a great chapter!! It is hard to believe that it is almost over. I would read your novel, especially if you were to let readers now the title and release dates. You are a great writer and I, for one, enjoy reading your stories and your writing. I can't wait for the epilogue.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 53
ooooooo i knew it!!!!!!!!!! i dont want this story to end
i would so buy this as a book and any other that u worte
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 53
This chapter was really good!!! I so knew it would be Edward because I mean Bella can't be with anyone besides him lol!! I really love your story it's amazing ans well written! The twisted dark nature has me on Edge every time I read it. But the prevailing of love surpasses any darkness. If you do make this into a original novel I would buy it in a heartbeat!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 53
Awwww....they've come full-circle...I think you handled that great. Looking forward to the epilogue. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us and I am really looking forward to CAM!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 53
Oh was a twist at the end didnt see that cooming but glad it was that way :) I know im going to cry next chapter cant wait to read it :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 53
I was surprised in the beginning of this chapter - and a little worried too! I thought that you did a good job sharing what Bella has gone through over the past two years.
I loved that Esme has moved on and is doing well. Actually, it was wonderful to see how everyone was doing. I wish we could have learned more about Edward and what the past two years have been like for him.
It was a lovely ending and I am glad that she has found some peace in her life. And that Edward is back!!
Amazing job Mic!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 53
whoah i thought that was the epilouge
it would have made a good epilouge
but still an awsome chapter
its so nice to know that everything turned out nicely
XD
but poor edward having to wait 2 whole years to see bella again
UPDATE SOOON!!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 53
Hmmm. I'm not sure about this. I don't want it to be over. Seems to have rushed by in the last 3 chapters or so.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 53
Thank you for the new chapter. What a journey you've taken us on.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 53
Lovely chapter, though I'm sad to see it end. I look forward to seeing the epilogue though I hate to see the last chapter.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 53
wow wasnt expecting her to take off but I can understand why she did it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 53
I am so happy for her..She's free..I understand now and I'm glad it was like this.
Everyone is so happy and contented finally...
I wish I could her and Edward get their HEA together..Their wedding and day and night. A child maybe, just a beautiful life after the nightmare..
You are brilliant! thank you so very much for the journey...
Hope you'll get back to CAM and BTP soon...especially BTP..love that!
I wish you all the best with the original novel!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 53
Wow I can't believe that Bella left, like actually left Edward. But in so many ways I'm glad... she needed her childhood back, to find herself. I'm so excited to read the epi... wonder how everything turned out.
I like the idea of TPW as an original novel. It has kept me on my seat, wondering what will happen next. I felt for each character and what they went through. It was facinating to see how the boys slowly transformed into the men they are now..
Great job with this story hon.
I am very interested in reading Esme's and Renee's story.. I can't even imagine what they went through or how they delt with Charlie or Carlisle.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 53
Oh thank God. The entire chapter I was hoping that Edward was the date. Then when you kept leaving out a name and brought in Alice and the guy being patient with Bella, I thought for sure it was Edward.
And I'm so glad that it is.I want them to be able to move forward...together. :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 53
Really amazing chapter. I can't believe this story is almost over. It has been emotional and gut wrenching and maddening - but it has absolutely been worth it to get to this chapter. I thought that the fact that everyone took a step back to really work on themselves and their mental health was just the right step to take. Now they can all be the individuals they need and want to be, so that they can be the family they want to be. I was a little worried at first that Bella wasn't going to end up with Edward, but it almost became ok after reading how far she's come, but still how far she has to go. I can't lie though, my heart did such a happy dance when I read that last sentence :) Can't wait for the epi to see where everyone, especially Bella and Edward, end up!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 53
Mic, I am sure everyone that has read the story would love for you to send it to print. I know I would buy a book, even though you have to change the names.
I love how they have grown and how they still grow. I cant wait to see what you do with the Epi and I totally understand why it has taken Bella that long to go on an actul date with Edward.
Love this story so much. Thank Mic for writing it.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 53
Oh my goodness! I would love to see this turn into a series! I love this story. You are an amazing writer. I want to know when it gets published!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 53
Two years? Seriously? Edward should have moved on by now. I think Bella's "therapist" wanted to have Bella fund her retirement... Sometimes you just have to suck it up and get on with life. Trust me, I know.