Date: 15 Feb 2010 8:14 PM Title: Family Ties
Can't wait to see what Edwas is going to do to Alice.
I first sound this story over on FF, but I am glad to know that you are here.
Author's Response:
Ohhhh, all I can say is that Alice won't forget it anytime soon.
I am really disapointed by what is happening at FF. Everyone here is great and I'm happy to be able to be a part of this.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 6:22 PM Title: Family Ties
I can't imagine what my DH would do if I spent that kind of cash in a week!!!
Author's Response:
I know it's unreal..... Oh yeah I guess that's why this is fiction.....lol
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 6:05 PM Title: The Most Basic Facts
Will Bella ask Edward if either Rose or Alice would be able to add a man to their family? Thats "THE " big question. If Edward says no, then it is only about control and sex. How could he refuse to add someone to their family that would make his wives complete, just as he feels Bella completes him? Also since Edward and his family are bible based christians, how does he explain God only creating Adam and Eve and not Adam, Eve and Jane?
I also studied world religions in college...to be honest, most of the crap I studied concerning religion, was only the bare minimum of facts. Alot of religions are extremely secretive when it comes to their true doctrinal practices.
I guess what I'm saying is that God is real, but religions are manmade, by men to oppress the weak and to demoralize women.
Love your story.
Author's Response:
No I don't have plans for any other men to enter the story. But I haven't gotten that far in the story yet so it is all in the air. they are following Christian Polygamy and that is a traditional male dominated society. The story is as correct as I can make it. There are polygamist sects that have the women marring multi men (They are mostly in Africian societies.) But for this story it will be One man and many women. There are parts of the bible that people believe that some of the men had many wives, and Christian Polygamist believe that God allowed this.
I am Catholic and don't know a whole lot about it. I agree whole heartly that religions are secertive, and I can only go off what is written and by what other people have told me. I actually know a women that lead these lifestyles. So I just go off of what they have told me and what I have read. I don't even begin to think that I know anything about how they really work. I just thought it would make a interesting story, so I went with it...
I also can't disagree that religions are all male dominated practaces. I don't agree 100% with my own religion, but I believe the important facts and for me that is enough.
Thanks you for your honest opinions. I would love to know what you think in the future.
Denise
Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:58 AM Title: Family Ties
Awesome can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks... Hoping to Post Sunday.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 8:35 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
I can honestly say that I've never heard of this plotline before. This is only the first chapter, but it is original, unique, and very well written.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I was trying to do something that no one has done before. It means a lot to me to know what people think.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:29 PM Title: Family Ties
Great history. Alice is going to have a burning Ass??? Is Bella going to see the punishment?? I cant wait for more
Author's Response:
I can promise Alice will get it. But Edward wont let me say anything else..... ;)
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:51 PM Title: Family Ties
interesting chapter. I feel like you are focusing too much on the little things like what they are wearing...it doesn't really matter what they are wearing...I felt like I had to wait forever for Bella to appear. Just my two cents though.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll keep that in mind. This is my first attempt at a full story. I have only writen one other thing and that was for the lyrics contest. Thank you for your honest opinion, it really helps.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:12 AM Title: Family Ties
story is great ! still going strong. update soon.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. There will be a teaser on Just A Sip Thursday and I am hoping to post on Sundays.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:08 AM Title: Family Ties
I am enjoying this story. Your story line is interesting and your characters are really charasmatic! Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. I am having so much fun with messing with the characters.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:07 AM Title: Family Ties
womdering what alice did. i think it has something to do with her wanting to prepare for bella . i could be wrong
Author's Response:
I'll let you know that you are right it does involve Bella
Date: 14 Feb 2010 2:01 AM Title: Family Ties
it was good.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 13 Feb 2010 11:23 PM Title: Family Ties
:)
Author's Response:
;P
Date: 13 Feb 2010 10:36 PM Title: Family Ties
Now that is some major shopping.......won't he feel like an arse if she has bought something spectacular for him.......
Author's Response:
I wish I could shop like that, just once... Sorry to say but nothing was for Edward......But maybe she bought something for someone else....
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:29 PM Title: The Most Basic Facts
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you take the news of Edward, Rosalie and Alice talking truly to Bella as serious as it requires. That conversation should be crucial.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the honest feedback. The conversation will be intense and in different stages and chapters so stayed tuned.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:12 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
I am enjoying this story - it's different!
Author's Response:
Thanks....
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:27 PM Title: The Most Basic Facts
Definitely intrigued by the story. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Date: 12 Feb 2010 1:37 PM Title: The Most Basic Facts
:)
Author's Response:
I love the happy faces.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 12:57 PM Title: The Most Basic Facts
this just keeps getting better and better and we are only in chapter 3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It really means a lot to me.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 11:32 AM Title: The Most Basic Facts
this was really good to read, wwhats gunna happen nwxt?
Author's Response:
Sorry can't tell, Edward won't let me.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 7:24 AM Title: The Most Basic Facts
HI
Can´t wait till the next one!Great Story!
Bye
Author's Response:
Thanks. I have been fast tracting to catch it up with fanfiction, sorry but soon it will probley go weekly.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:36 AM Title: The Most Basic Facts
It probly helped that Edward did some stress release for Rose before Bella got there and it didnt hurt that it sounded hot and helped break the tention with Alice giggling. I cant wait for the weekend and they get some one on one is this when she figures out what is missing in there relationship?????
Author's Response:
See that was my reasoning..... a lot of people didn't get it. At this point I don't think that anyone realizes that something is missing just yet.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:22 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
ok first... ooo lalala... Eye Opener of Edward buttoning pants and hearing him grunt.. Ok How did you find out about this.. I am curious about this.. Interesting turn of events.. Not to be crass but we are talking just edward and rose .. and edward and alice... not a threesome correct.. Anyway keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
This has to be one of my favorite reviews so far. Thanks for that.
Lets see where to start. I went to Temple University and took a class on modern religions and cults. Christian Polygamy is real and the movement started in the early 90's (I did change it for the purpose of the stories.) I am Catholic so I know nothing about the practical side of it. I have read a lot about polygamy and it happens all over the world. What i write about polygamy in chapter 4 is fact.
Now I have no plans on making it a threesome. it will be just Edward and Rose or Edward and Alice.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:37 AM Title: The Most Basic Facts
Love this fic! Interesting choice of setting but can't wait to see where you take us!
Author's Response:
Thanks I was looking for something edgy and different.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:25 AM Title: The Most Basic Facts
i love how bellas so comfortable around them, and just accepted their relationship.
cant wait to see them together saturday
UPDATE SOON
Author's Response:
I thought that it was fitting after how easily Bella excepted that Edward was a vampire.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 2:54 PM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
love long chapters , hopefully some bella in the next
Author's Response:
Thanks... Bella's POV will be mostly be every other chapter. There will be a few split chapters, but I think it helps understand everything that's happening.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:41 PM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
Oooo...spanking from Edward, I could get into that!
Author's Response:
That is just awesome!
Date: 11 Feb 2010 11:18 AM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
:)
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 7:26 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Woa! This story is very different and I like that. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Good I was defently going for different. There are so many stories with the same basic theme that it's nice to know I am assing to the mix.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 5:59 AM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
Very interesting I did love the part with Rose getting her butt spanked I have always loved Rose even if it was just to be mad at her for her shoting her mouth off so I enjoyed her getting a spanken for just that. I cant wait till they meet Bella. He did not tell Rose how he was feeling about Bella did he????
Author's Response:
I thought that Rose needed an attitude agjustment.. so I went with it..
No Edward has not directly told Rose about his feelings for Bella. But she is a smart women and knkows Edward well, so he really doesn't have to say anything.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 4:47 AM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
i cant wait to see how bella reacts to edward inviting her to do the story, and their way of life. ive never heard of christian polygamy only morman polygamy, but from what ive read so far it seems alot better.
Author's Response:
Christian Polygamy is real, and it does seem a lot better for the women in reguards to respect. But I don't live these lifestyles do I am only going by what I learned in College and what I have read.
I have always felt that Bella was maybe a little too excepting in the books so maybe that will carry over into my story too.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 4:34 AM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
Um...Dr. Cullen....yeah can I get spanked?? *whispers* please say yes =D great chapter
Author's Response:
If I was going to be spanked Dr Cullen would be my first choice too. But alas he only spanks his fellow Twilights...
Date: 11 Feb 2010 4:20 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
OH this is too cool!!! Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks....
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 3:08 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
I would have no trouble with polygamy...if a woman could also have more than one husband. But because it isn't allowed, there is no other way to see it other than womanizing/adultery and using religion as the cover.
I do like your story and am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. I have done quite a bit of research on the topic of Polygamy and believe it or not there are countries where the women are the onces that have more then one husband.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 3:08 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
I would have no trouble with polygamy...if a woman could also have more than one husband. But because it isn't allowed, there is no other way to see it other than womanizing/adultery and using religion as the cover.
I do like your story and am looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2010 9:34 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Wow this is very original i would have never thought of something like this. Great Job!! Uodate soon
Author's Response:
Thanks. I have watch HBO's Big Love and thought it would be fun to mess with the twilight gang in this way.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2010 9:33 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Wow this is very original i would have never thought of something like this. Great Job!! Uodate soon
Date: 10 Feb 2010 4:47 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Okay I have to admit you have me hooked.
Author's Response:
Thanks, it's great to hear that people like it.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 1:50 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Great start sounds like it is going to be a great story cant wait
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouragement.
Date: 09 Feb 2010 10:15 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
This story idea is very original. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you I am trying to do something really different.
Date: 09 Feb 2010 8:44 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Interesting ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2010 7:22 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Interesting begining... Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing..... This story is going to be a wild ride stay tuned.
Date: 09 Feb 2010 7:18 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks