Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:15 PM Title: Jacob Black's escape
Wow Jake seemed to escape too easily. I hope he really escaped. But I am anxious to get back to Bella and Edward.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:02 PM Title: Jacob Black's escape
Thanks for the chapter, looking forward what's next!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:40 PM Title: Bella's punishment
Very intriguing storyline. I can't wait to see how things work out.
Kat
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:53 PM Title: The harem
Your story is awesome so far. I must say your end AN scared me a bit, I'm sensitive :) . I pray readers stop and review because we want you happy and writing. A lot of the time if a fic is juicy, I want to get to the next chpt ASAP to see what happens next... and cruise right by the Review button.
Felix, that dog, taking advantage of B., so disgusting :) ! Bella sure is headstrong, walking thru the halls unattended. Love the story.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:11 PM Title: The journey to Volterra
Jasper is taking his job a little to seriously, punching B. in the face! And poor Jake, having to watch this. This is just horrible for our girls and Jake. Great story so far.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:43 PM Title: Edward and the slave Tanya.
That was Hot! Tanya was a dam* lucky slave that day. I'm loving this Edward.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:28 PM Title: The good doctor and the bad masters.
I Never thought I would feel sorry for Tanya, your writting has me sympathizing for her :) ! So Edward does have a heart, but I like you give him an edge. Sounds like he enjoys pleasure from his slaves. And the Volturi brothers are just sick! Someone should tie them down and give them a dose of their own medicine!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:57 PM Title: The lords of Volterra
Edward could train me any day of the week. Anxious to find out his methods of training the slaves. Sounds like Aro and his brothers are just torturing folks, makes reading damn interesting. Can't wait to see the evils revealed in next chpt!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:20 PM Title: The ship wreck.
Call me stupid, I didn't see that coming! Jasper a bad character? Bella put in chains.... excellent start.
Date: 18 Jul 2010 12:49 AM Title: Bella's punishment
Bella tried to fight herself and Edward, sadly she was unable. It wasn't because she lacked the will, she lacks the skills and knowledge to understand what was going on, and what will be happening there; with Edward and the Volturi. She will have to get more information, from Kate and Rosalie both.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 3:37 AM Title: The ship wreck.
Good job
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 3:34 AM Title: Pleasing Bella.
Yuck Jake. I am still willing to read it as she didn't lose the v card to the mutt. The writting is good.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 3:31 AM Title: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.
Great writting. I hate Jake and hopefully she doesn't sleep with him ( I can't read those stories as I hate Jake so much).
Author's Response:
No, she doesn't sleep with him. Not then and not in the future.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 2:51 AM Title: Bella's punishment
Just keeps gettign better and better.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 2:41 AM Title: The training room
I enjoyed dark Edward! Only he could make the thought of being in a training room and getting a spanking sound good!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 12:40 AM Title: The good doctor and the bad masters.
hmmm how about banding together and killing the three MFers....
Date: 17 Jul 2010 12:13 AM Title: Pleasing Bella.
poor bella.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 11:44 PM Title: Bella's punishment
you know what I think would be an intresting twist is if the volturi gave edward bella as his own personal slave.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 10:35 PM Title: Bella's punishment
Great Chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 9:14 PM Title: Bella's punishment
thanks good chapter
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:34 PM Title: Bella's punishment
Well its not what I expected. I dont really think its necessary to repeat the same thing in different pov's but I guess in some cases it is. I mean it was a lot of the same thing only in BPOV. He at least gave her an orgasm but still I was expecting him to deflower her right away. But even the orgasm she had seemed of very little details. I mean she didn't even moan or squirm around. I dont know I expected him to talk to her more to get her to her orgasm. You know kind of walk her through it. I am just trying to help, I hope you dont get offened by my review. I cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
It would be out of character for Bella to moan and groan the first time Edward pleases her. She doesn't want it to happen, she is pissed. As for Edward, it would be imprudent to play Casanova with Bella, since the last thing he wants at this point is for her to fall for him.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:33 PM Title: Bella's punishment
Thanks for the chapter! Please, update soon!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: Bella's punishment
is Edward going to let her be taken by those pigs???? please say no! Aaah but then the story would be over?? and what of Edward? He is a sex teacher = a slave trainer? How can they end up together? Great chapter - great story :)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:10 PM Title: The training room
hmmm - she probably wants to kill him!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:24 AM Title: The harem
Please don't let lack of reviews discourage you. I love this story! It's unique and erotic-not a carbon copy of other stories and there are so many carbon copies out there. I love the time period your using. This is an extremely well-written story.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:18 AM Title: The training room
Wow I dont really think that was fair. They didn't tell her the rules just like she said, but I guess he wanted to make a statement out of her actions. I wonder what he is going to do to her now? lol. Sounds like he is going to play with her a little bit. I cant wait for the next chapter. I was wondering how often do you update?
Author's Response:
I'm waiting for the corrections from my beta to post the next chapter. Soon I will be able to update every other week.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:01 AM Title: Edward meets Bella
Well at least we know that Edward thinks she is beautiful. I hope he doesn't hurt her for her first time but I am thinking that is what he is going to do.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:45 AM Title: The harem
Well I dont like that Felix got to touch Bella but I guess it goes with the story. I am sorry you are not getting the reviews that you deserve. I usually review every chapter so I hope you continue writing it. I thought when Edward found her lost that he would be nice to her but I guess not.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:26 AM Title: The journey to Volterra
Wow that Bella and Jacob sure did a mistake in kissing infront of them. I knew it would only cause more trouble. Bella sure is a spitfire. I love this story already. Please keep writing. I just found this story by random searching and I love it.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:25 AM Title: Edward and the slave Tanya.
Edward seems like a very loving man that got involved with the wrong people. I wish I had him as a lover. lol. That would be fun.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:50 AM Title: The good doctor and the bad masters.
I am liking this story. I seems that Edward is the only one that is Humane in there well besides Carlisle. I cant wait til he sees Bella and see where this story goes. I love reading Dom stories so I think this is going to be fun.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 6:07 AM Title: The training room
Ohhh, he brought the pain, now bring on the pleasure Edward!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:44 AM Title: The training room
It will be interesting to find out what she thought and felt.
I think her thoughts, or part of them went to Jacob and the amount of punishment he might find himself with.
Edward is surprised, he hasn't encountered a girl like this; she makes him angry and intrigues him. He wants to do so many things to her and with her, all at the same time. It will be an interesting training. And one he might want to take a long time with.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:33 AM Title: Edward meets Bella
So far, I don't want to slap him yet, but something tells me that will probably change and soon.
He takes his job seriously and with how he enjoys it, it can't be that difficult. And now he has reason enough to do so. But how will Bella react?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:22 AM Title: The harem
As you've seen I'm new to the story, and I love reviewing, so at least you'll always get a review from me ;). And yes, your story is as good as any of theirs ;) NO offense ladies.
So Bella is finding out what her fate is, she is shocked to say the least. Not only because of what it is, but of how her body has been reacting. What will her "training" be like? Can't wait to find out.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:03 AM Title: The journey to Volterra
Bella has no clue as to what is to become of her, she is naive and has been brought up in a very close environment. Not that much could prepare anyone for the fate that awaits them. And to make things worse for them, Bella is showing her rebelious side. Not the best idea, but she doesn't know it yet.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:52 AM Title: Edward and the slave Tanya.
Edward might not be the happiest person, but he does get enjoyment out of his work. He is worried about loosing Tanya, but maybe, someone new is on the way....
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:47 AM Title: The good doctor and the bad masters.
It is a strange and unusual kingdom. Edward has accepted and embraced his life, Carlisle hasn't. Each one copes the best way they can. Are they both bitter or is just Carlisle?
Author's Response:
Carlisle is not really bitter, he is concerned for the slaves, which is why he doesn't want to leave the castle. Edward is going through an existential crisis, and Emmett is very happy with his life. But all of this is going to change pretty soon.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:37 AM Title: The lords of Volterra
Edward has a "special" place in court. He seems to enjoy certain privileges and can talk openly to the rulers. He seems to be ambivalent about his work though. I'm waiting to find out more about him.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:33 AM Title: The ship wreck.
They went off to sea and ship-wrecked, how long after? That we don't know. What we do know is that the time for the arrival has passed, so it has to be known, somewhere, that Bella's ship is missing. Will someone do something about it?
Author's Response:
They boarded the ship at sunset Wednesday, the wedding was supposed to be Friday, and they were rescued Saturday morning. How they survive the wreck is pretty miraculous but not detailed in the story.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:25 AM Title: Pleasing Bella.
Girls in that time weren't given too much information, so it's understandable that a girl in Bella's position would be like such. It was a surprise that Jacob agreed to it, he has to have feelings for Bella, but sadly, she is leaving.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:17 AM Title: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.
sounds interesting. Will Bella really go to Jacob and ask him? What would he say?
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:33 PM Title: The training room
plz, update soon! :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:31 PM Title: The training room
intresting very intresting
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:12 PM Title: Edward meets Bella
Please, don't stop posting this story! It's really great! Thanks for translating!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:51 PM Title: The training room
I think I missed this chapter yesterday... That's wierd.. Maybe I got so worked up over getting you some more reviews, I missed that next button.
You know... this "type" of story has been done before...BUT... your twist on it is so unusual. Not only is she stubborn and willful, but she is nieve and sensual...complete polar opposites..AND then there is Edward. He is dark and twisted, but also kind and careing...not that he shows it, but you know it is there. I don't even think he wants to accept it.
I am sure that her fist time with the three Masters is going to be very horrible... but just as I am sure that Edward will be there to help her...OPPOSITES.. see.. this is so different..and I am very excited to read more.
Love the banner...Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Yes, i can portray a creepy Aro too...lol (you ain't seen nothing yet). And without revealing too much of the plot, I can tell you that all my French readers want Aro dead by now...relol. ;-)
Milk
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:16 AM Title: The training room
I would say she is beyond pissed now.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:19 AM Title: The training room
why would it matter if aro or anyone goes to far? Even if they knew they were. None of them are there willingly.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately I can't tell you much about Aro because it would spoil the plot.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:23 AM Title: The training room
Glad you're still posting... :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:48 AM Title: The harem
HEY NOW.. I love your story.. and I was thrilled with the update.. yipeeeee... ok.. you need a PICTURE.. some type of banner to REEL them in.. You are right.. your have a very good story, and I want to have an update.. hehehe.. (selfish me)
So as part of the TSO writing team.. I DEMAND that readers come over and read this fic... How was that.. are you feeling it.
YEAH.. me either.. but I had to try.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 11:31 PM Title: The training room
OH heeeeelllll! The ending are killing me! Love this story!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:06 AM Title: Edward meets Bella
How did the Cullen's get to be there and does being Asses come naturally to them?
Author's Response:
Not all the Cullen are asses; Doctor Carlisle Cullen is a pretty decent guy actually. You'll get to see more of him later on in the story.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:51 PM Title: Edward meets Bella
Oh, Edward finally gets to do some punishing that he's been itching to do. And we get to see exactly what he means by "punishment" and exactly how dark this dominant Edward is!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:10 PM Title: Edward meets Bella
HELL NO I don't want to slap Edward, I love it when's he dark and you have one of the BEST dark Edward's yet! I love this story and I can't wait to see how this is going to go! Please update soon!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 11:15 PM Title: The harem
loved this chapter :)
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:42 AM Title: The harem
Really enjoy this, hope you keep updating.
Author's Response:
Next update coming the week after Independance Day.
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:36 AM Title: The journey to Volterra
Really enjoying this story, can't wait to find out what happens!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:56 PM Title: The harem
This story is AWESOME! Please don't stop writing it! There aren't enough dark, torture, sadistic, sexual stories out there! You are a fantastic writer, I will be sure to tell everyone about this story! Please, please continue!!! OOOO I can't wait to see what Edward's gonna do to her (evil laugh)!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2010 1:47 PM Title: The harem
What no! You can't stop posting! This story has such potential and I think you should keep going! Please don't stop, you're an excellent writer and this site needs more authors like you. So don't let the fact that you don't have many reviews right off get you down. Just keep going!
Author's Response:
That's nice to know that my writing skills are appreciated. Hell, I just posted chapter 12 of the French version yesterday on FF. Chapter 12 in French is the equivalent of what will be chapter 32 of the English translation, give or take. So yes, I will keep going.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:04 PM Title: The harem
I just happened across this story and I would be very disappointed if you didn't continue... I love the dark path you have taken and it has my smutty imagination doing the happy dance! :)
Author's Response:
Since I will update in July, you will have the opportunity to do your happy dance again.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 10:29 PM Title: The harem
i really hope that you continue with this one it is a very interesting take on the normal dom eddie stories.
plus i wanna see eddie smack bella's ass when she talks back! heehee
Author's Response:
The funny part is I started writing this story because tarasueme wouldn't let me translate The Training in French. I guess it's a good thing for you ;-)
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:29 PM Title: The journey to Volterra
well bella sure is a firey one isn't she? and making out with jake in the cart? who thought that would be a good idea?
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:13 PM Title: Edward and the slave Tanya.
well at least eddie made tanya's first time a good one. something tells me that aro and the others won't. and what will happen to b-a-r-e will they have to deal with aro, and the brothers?
Author's Response:
I whish I could tell you B-A-R will be spared, but it's very unlikely. In fact, my French readers want Aro dead, so that tells you the worse is yet to come.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:00 PM Title: The good doctor and the bad masters.
well it would seem that mr eddie is as true of a dom as he can be given the situation. good on tanya for saying no to aro. the creepy little fucker...
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:43 PM Title: The lords of Volterra
oh boy eddie trains girls to be in a harem? sexy!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:38 PM Title: The ship wreck.
well now they are all ship wrecked and prisoners. wonder what will be expected of them now?
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:02 PM Title: Pleasing Bella.
well it seems that miss bella has a lot to learn, and may just be in the market for a new teacher...
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:50 PM Title: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.
yay jake is gonna get some! but ewwww she's gotta marry mike?!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: The harem
Looks like an angel, but he's the devil in disguise! I love domiinant Edward, he's sexy. Mixed with a spitfire Bella, they are one conbustible couple. Can't wait until her training begins. I have no doubts, the sparks will fly and flames will ignite! On another note, while I definitely enjoy a dark Jasper, right now he seems just really mean, punching a girl in the face... yeah, I don't like him so far. As for you AN, sorry, I'll admit it, I don't review on a regular basis. I don't usually like to review if it's just like "good chapter" or whatever; I really only review if there's something I particularly want to comment about. I feel stupid if I don't have anything constructive to say; but if you don't mind short comments, I'll try to remember to comment each chapter. I really do enjoy your story, and hope that you will still feel motivated to write it!
Author's Response:
Somebody pointed out that the most important is to enjoy writing, which I do. So obviously I will keep updating. It's just frustrating to see that some writers out there deliver quantity and not quality and still are overloaded with reviews anyway. About Jasper, he will not stay mean but I can't say more. Punching a girl in the face was terrible, but it's only a fiction, while we all know it happens all the time in real life, unfortunately.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:48 AM Title: The harem
Hey, so I really enjoy your story! I've been anxiously waiting for each update, and I'm sorry that i have not reviewed until now.. please continue your story :)
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:46 AM Title: The harem
I'm still interested. I don't comment on every chapter, because sometimes I don't have anything new to say. But please continue posting, as I would like to find out what happens next... After all, Edward and Bella have only just met!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:56 PM Title: The harem
Well i just found you story today and I am loving this so far
B
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:57 PM Title: The harem
Hi, I just found your story yesterday and I like it very much. Please write on.
Author's Response:
I already told one of the reviewers that I need only one or two reviews per chapter to keep me going, so your wish will be granted.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:56 PM Title: The harem
Love to read your story and I did review on FF a couple of chapters. I do admit I'm one of those readers who not always review even if I love the story and I'm very sad to read your AN. I just hope you keep writing and posting more chapters.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:42 PM Title: The ship wreck.
Evil Jasper .... I like him that way!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:38 PM Title: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.
I am very curious about the characters & this period in time! I am dying to read more!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:19 PM Title: The harem
Amazing chapter, I really enjoy how this is a period peice. The AN at the bottom, not so much. Many authors don't recieve many reviews, I know I sure don't but I still write because I enjoy it.
Author's Response:
Dear, I don't mind receiving only one or two reviews per chapter. But i do mind when people tell me they love my story and yet I get 0 review for a chapter.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:47 PM Title: The harem
Edward and his brothers are brutal and cold-hearted. The poor innocent girls. Is there a happyend? Would be good to know.
Author's Response:
There will be a happy ending when it's over, but even in French we are far from there.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 5:11 AM Title: Edward and the slave Tanya.
Love this story. It is so good-original,unique,intense, erotic, and so well written. I also love the time period. I already love Edward's character. He's good but not too good! I can't wait for Bella to make her appearance.
Date: 28 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: Edward and the slave Tanya.
wow i cant wait for the next chapter. i have to say i am not really loving the whole edward tanya thing but i think that this story has a lot of potential to be absolutely fantastic. i will definately be returning in three weeks for the next chapter in this reviting and exciting story. i will gladly be recommending it to anyone who is looking for a story :)
Date: 27 May 2010 7:28 PM Title: Edward and the slave Tanya.
:)
Date: 27 May 2010 7:18 PM Title: The good doctor and the bad masters.
:)
Date: 27 May 2010 6:58 PM Title: The lords of Volterra
;)
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: The ship wreck.
I hope you can update soon. I can't wait for more but I'm of course at your mercy! I absolutely love a dark and dominant Edward and Jasper and I already love your character of Bella. I have tried to put this story on my favorite list but I'm new to the site and not sure if I'm doing it right!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoy my story. I have to put an update of the French version of it on FF.net, but I will be right back with 2 chapters in English here afterwards. My chapters in French are longer; the three chapters already published on TWCS are in fact only one chapter in French.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 6:25 AM Title: Pleasing Bella.
I have never read a description of someones innocence so well and uniquely written and I'm an avid reader. Perfection!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 6:13 AM Title: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.
I can't wait to read more! I'm a sucker for historical romance(Yeah I'm a dork!) so was thrilled to find this story and even after the first chapter I'm loving it.
Date: 07 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: The ship wreck.
great chapter
Date: 07 May 2010 5:21 PM Title: The ship wreck.
soon, I hope - this is good!!
Date: 06 May 2010 10:16 PM Title: The ship wreck.
Shame I don't know French. Story looks good though.
Date: 06 May 2010 9:55 PM Title: The ship wreck.
i haven't been this intrigued in a story since Les liaisons dangereuses....... not that i speak french but i do enjoy the stories from this time : )
thank you !!
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 1:24 PM Title: Pleasing Bella.
Love it so far!
Date: 06 May 2010 3:49 AM Title: Pleasing Bella.
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Pleasing Bella.
can't wait to read more loved it
Date: 05 May 2010 11:58 PM Title: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.
:)