Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
awww.. poor Bella........ got to love edward........ and a bit of Jasper on the side.....
Date: 15 Feb 2010 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
OMG I do promise to go back and review but your a/n crack me up! I do love this story... really enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
OMG that was about one of the hottest things i have read.. the way he looked at her the whole time... the way he appeared out of nowhere.. it was just very sexy........ very enjoyable reading......going to hunt my man down now and well ............
Author's Response:
*high five* go forth and boink!! lol xx
Date: 14 Feb 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I am so glad I found this story over here. I have been looking at different sites to find my favorite stories. I go to twilighted often but it is nice to have more then one place.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
OMW! I think I near shit meself when your story wasn't on FF!
Jeez...thanks for the heartattack.
But after much searching I found it here.
Great chapter..update soon babes!
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with us hun! xx KB
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Niiiicee. I'm lovin' this. I only made an account on here because a few people were telling me to read this. And then when I went over to your FF page and saw that it got removed...I was so pissed lol. So when I saw that you put your story up here, I signed up so fast and started reading!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
That was a good description of how they came to be. I still say bella is a jackass for going on a date with Jacob.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
She shouldn't have left Edwards house....I know it. She screwed up!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I loved getting the backstory on J+A it shed some light on their reactions to one another!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
God I love this story.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Poor slutella, she is not feeling very loved right now.
Another great chapter.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
Oh my- they are so falling.
And doesnt hornward have quite the sweet side to him?
Excellent.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Explains a lot.
Renee is a total twatbag.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
If it could be arranged, I would very much like for caveward to bite me.
Excellent.
Author's Response:
Get in line my darling- right behind me! <3
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Ohh hornwards getting jealous.
It will be interesting to read his EPOV next.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
JESUS CHRIST!
Worth the wait.
I loved the threat in your authors note. Fucking Renesemee but that's a discussion for another day.
Excellent
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
This shit is hot, so what if they're not screwing yet.
They will and when they do I will most likely require a defiblirator.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
She's getting feelings for the horny little bastard.
The expression 'flicking your bean' is not something I read often enough in fics because most writers are American.
It's a great way to describe getting yourself off dont ya think?
Author's Response:
lolll....no i think its a british thing- its something a few friends and i used to say- i think its the greatest saying ever!
xx KB
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
okay now im up early for a Sunday reading this.
you have a lot to answer for lol
excellent
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
I'm going to bite my husband now and hit the rest of these chapters in the morning. Fuck I need it!!
Author's Response:
lolll! I'm glad you liked that you've seen so far hun, your reviews are brilliant! I love that you were bobbing your head for 'Rock the Boat' I swear i listened to that song a billions times over while i was writing that bit! xx KB
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
i don't even have words for this. All i can say is HOT!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
Oh ya that round goes to Bella she almost blew it with showing her jealous of the girl in her seat and on his lap but she quickly recovered with the little dance and then leaving him with a hard on...... i laughed oh come on .. he said and the comment about he got her off and she's like i showed u how to get me off...lmao... Good chapter............. now Edward has to come back bigger and better............ Really good..
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
LOL....I swear I was bobbing my head in the middle of reading that shit like it was me doing it. How fucking funny. Thanks for making me feel like I was there.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
The shower scene was phenomenal! I need a cold shower!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
yep for sure this bet is bothering Miss Swan a bit more then it seems to be bother Edward.. Sure she got him with the blow job but what guy doesn't like it and really like it when the girl knows her way around..lol.. but she needs to take his attitude and stop....... i about died when i read that part with Jacob i thought oh god another love tringle story but thank god his got a girlfriend and Leah the guard of his body to make sure he stays faithful... good story so far can't wait to read more.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
Now that was some hot shit!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
Ok so he stayed home all day from school came back the next day and got his dick sucked... sounds to me like so far she is the eager one.. but then again he was enjoying that a bit to much for his liking.. i laughed so hard at the end line
Fucking bitch of a succubus from cock sucking heaven. LOL'
that was cool u had his dad going to Ohio , i live in Ohio...
Date: 14 Feb 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
LOL...good job Bella.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
Make his ass pay for my anticipation!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
Oh shit.. i think Bella got the worse of the bet... he only has to give up a car yes it's his baby but she has to do it with who he says ... god what if he picked a really loser like the school loser someone really nasty and ugly... or cut her off from sex... I don't know but i thought it was actually kind of funny what he did to her at the end.. she is a bit nasty and it didn't hurt for her to get knocked down a notch or two...not that he isn't totally into his self too and thinks he is gods gift to woman but I guess the difference i see in his is they fall to him and Bella seems to throw herself at the guys.. IDK .. not really liking her character a whole lot ATM... but always like sexy Edward and in a hot tub.. OH Yea
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
WHY???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW COULD YOU???????!!!!!!!!!!!
You've hurt Life and I so... *sigh*
I really wish BDR was back on Fanfic...
Anyways.... THIS STORY IS MY FUCKING HEROIN!!!!
Love it and always did!!!
By the way... This is Death from The.Twins-Life.and.Death
I hope you continue... and I needa tell Life that you moved!!!!
Author's Response:
Huh?? How could I? What, move it? I had to! I was witch hunted-ed!!
TY FOR LOVING THE STORY IT LOVES YOU BOTH BACK HARD I PROMISE!
lol x
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
ha ha ... Rose is a bitch love it... and that shit with Mike too funny...
Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
Excellent.
You do know your keeping me up right?
Totally worth it though.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
Oh dear lord.....
When they do it Im gonna die.
Good chapter.........again.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
I wrote teacher in my last review where I meant to write chapter.
Do you see what your doing to me.
So they have a bet?
Shit is about to get interesting.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
hmm i like that u wrote his POV (i remembered it as I read it) it's nice to know what's going on in each of there thoughts ........ He doesn't think to much of Bella i can tell that much...... Um maybe next time he bends Jessica over her daddys desk he should wrap that up...... can't wait to read about the party
Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
I quite like the Sugababes version of Freak like me too. Good choice.
I can't tell you how many times I laughed during this teacher.
Jimmy Hoffa's briefcase- fucking priceless.
Onto the next one.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
A-fucking-mazing.
I love a horny Edward.
This made me piss myself with laughter-What, had she been reading ‘101 dirty sayings to use in bed?’
Really good chapter.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Loved the first chapter.
I love stories where Bella isn't a simpering little bitch.
She's a whore and I fully approve.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Hmm Bella is kind of a slut there huh... but then i guess everyone kind of is in this story..lol... Anyways wonder what Edwards problem with Bella is.. I mean she doesn't do anything anyone else isn't doing.. Ok so Alice is liking on Edwards dad?? So no loving on Jasper huh.. And Emmett and Rose too funny. I remember I started to read this story once before but I lost it or something.. glad I found it again.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
i am obsessed with your story! i love it. i hope edward has a good reason for leaving bella and that they can be honest with each other and make a commitment! i'm such a girl. anyway, don't let anything happen with jacob, puleeze!!! and update soon. that's all. thanks
Author's Response:
awwww Thanks for liking the story! xxx
Date: 13 Feb 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Thank god for Mary who got me turned onto this story. This shit is great! I knew right away woth the first line i was gonna love it.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
That was the end? Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I need an update nowwwwwwwwwwwwWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Where did E go? Mary
Date: 13 Feb 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
It suddenly occurred to me today that I hadn't rev'ed this CH (officially) yet! You know I LOVE it, and I love YOU! You've been so wonderfully calm and collected through all the fuckery of the last week; far more so than I would have been! It looks like all of your loyal readers have found you over here, and you've picked up many new readers as well. GO YOU for making it to the top of the New Authors & Fav Authors lists! I TOLD you this would be a good thing!
You make me smile!
FangMom
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Oohh trouble! I like how u add in some dialogue from twilight and mix it up; Its cool. I'm a mutt hater, I thinks he's gross. Taylor lautner is disgusting but I kinda like ur jake. I made my jake likable too. Anyways....so bella has mommy issues, and they both are jealous. Ok....on to the sex! *mary sits in library with glasses on, bottom lip in a pout waiting for edward to make me feel better*
Author's Response:
Jacob with always be Steven Strait in my mind- for looks reasons and also not-going-to-jail reasons!
*Kate snatches wine and guzzles it because she needs it this monday morning!*
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*rubs thighs together for friction* oh man, that was fucking hot! They're in love! They are in love and don't even knoow it!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
Yay! I swear this gets better and better. He's so smug but the jealousy is awesome.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I am glad you did an APOV..it is nice to see what they went through to get to where they are now.
Hopefully both she and Jazz can help E+B get their relationship on track too.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I get the feeling that Edward ran because he has real feelings and needed to clear his head. I think he has spoken of her to Carlisle who in turn has told Esme. Which is why they responded so warmly to her.
I am sad for Bella that she feels abandoned by Edward. It was sad that she felt she was undeserving of love while she watched jasper and Alice declare their feelings.
Another great chapter.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
That was really beautiful... it took them by surprise just as much as it did me.
I wondered if he had rescued her from a dodgy situation before, when she woke up, in his bed that time.
Great chapter..a lot happened.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Never in a million years would I have guessed that Edward would step up like that. I thought maybe he would find Bella crying somewhere..but I never thought he would act so chivalriously. Go Edward.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Owwwww...Groan *Lifts head ...gasps and plops back down* This chapter riped my heart out and tossed it on the floor. Dreaded angst. Please don't let Edward be a complete ass. I know he cares for Bella and was pissed about James. He made love to her ..held her all night and then bolted without even a note? What is up ith that? I am so pissed at him right now and so sad for Bella. I can't wait to find out where the heck he was rushing off to. Was he freaked out about how he feels for Bella? That would be a real crappy way to handle it if he is. But I have faith in your Edward. I'm hoping he'll redeem himself somehow. I know it won't be all smooth sailing or anything. i'm just hoping he won't be such a blatant jerk to her. I know Jake is waiting there in the wings all sweet and perfect boyfriend material. But I'm Team Edward so the thought of that just destroys me..Please update soon. I 'll just crumple to pieces as I wait *no pressure* lol.. This story is so good. You are an amazing writer. Thanks for sharing it with us and screw FF for trying to censor creative minds. For shame on them! For shame!! Please hurry back to us. I hope I get story alerts on here..
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
Awww.Edward is so damn sweet at times. I loved this chapter..
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Love this story so much...GAH!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
soooooo good. My mind is just drunk with joy.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Hot loving.. My heart is still jumping out of my chest from your writing..
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
Please update often. so good.. argh...
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
The chemistry you created for your characters is incredible, You are a master storyteller.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
Love it. I can't get enough.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
This is my new favorite story. :-)
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I love when Edward gets jealous of Jake. I know my reviews aren;t matching with the chapters,. That's because I read them all already and had to come back and pay homage to a queen *bows down*
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
You are an amazing lemon writer by the way. It's not your typical same old same old, It's so hot. i'm totally pimping this story .
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
I just can't get enough. This story will remain with me
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
I love the excitement of the bet and waiting for the magic to happen. Your writing is just captiviating. I'm quickly falling for your Edward and your Bella is so freakin cool! Not your typical meek virgin that I read about so often. GO BELLA!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Read akk 16 chaps . My eyes just devoured them. I couldn't even stop to review. This story is amazing.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
Somebodyisjealous!*standing in shower waiting for Cullen* its not working!!!! So you got the boot from FF? Fucking assholes, I hate them. My fic Closer has over 1200 reviews, its sucks ihave to move it over here but I'm glad that I found u. My friend on twitter said you were up over there...I had no clue! Anyways...*the water is getting cold* fucker, he's probably at Tonic with big boobs mcgee still!!!! Mary
Author's Response:
LOLLLLL omg. Mary, you crack me up! Yes 'the site that shall not be named' is so over in my head. Who cares? I like it here! xx
Did Cullen ever turn up??? NO???? That bastard...
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
Oh dear..they werent expecting to get feelings involved....they are royally screwed!!
You cant fight fate guys!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Oooooohhhhh. I knew I would love Jake in this story...he is all sweet and honest. He is going to give Edward a run for his money.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Yay for an update!!! And I hate FanFic for banning you because this fic is amazing!
I loved this chapter but inside I am DYING to find out where the hell Edward went, what he was thinking, and what Carlisle/Esme were thinking!
By the way... I sooo predicted that Carlisle was seeing "Esme" when he was going on those business trips. Is this gonna make Edward change his view on relationships??
AHHHH Update soon please I am DYING!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
WHAT!!! dont you dare throw in a pregnancy!!
Pool table sex....Whoot yeah!!!
Finally they got it on!! that was a surprisingly tender moment at the end by master Cullen, kissing her shoulder and covering her....OMG swoon!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
Best 69 EVER!!!
By the time they actually fuck..they are going to kill each other...LOL!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
Holy fucking hell!!! That was panty drenching amazing!!
When he shoved her back into the shower stall I just about came!!
Author's Response:
Okay, thanks I just snorted at my comp screen- not so stealthy at work!!!
I love that chapter- i'm glad you loved it tooooo! xxx
Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
OMG! Am I alive? That was so fucking sexy! *speechless* oh man!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
So I'm just going to pretend that I'm the female intuder on Cullens lap shaking her titties in his face...I usually leave long reviews but you're shitout of luck! Too good do write a long one, maybe next time! Told all my girls about you. Those twats better ne reviewing! Mary
Date: 12 Feb 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
*high five for Bella
IMO..Cullen is fucked!!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
Bella is SO going to make him pay for that!!
I think I am really going to like Jake in this story. I am sure he will end up right in the middle of the fuckery that is headed our way.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
*donning smirk and wet panties...
HOLY MOTHERFUCKING CHRIST!!! I fucking love is Bella.
Looks like Edward has met his match. whoot!!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
OMG!! EDWARD CULLEN IN A SAUNA!!! yes fucking please!!
hahaha..I love that Bella kept crashing his blow job with Gianna.
I love the way you write..it has got so much attitude.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
Oh man, that was so fucking hot. So I looked at my review, it said my penname but also said annoymous? Others said signed. I'm wondering why? Ok...that was a fuckawesomw chapter! Mary
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
Hmmmm...so neither of them got their rocks off..could this be leading to the inevitable???
I fucking love this dirty little tale..Whoot!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
Fucking hilarious!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Edward is such a ass!
I cant wait until he and Bella get there freak on together!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Love love love it! I'm new here, originally from fanfiction but since its such a fucking fail over there now I'm moving here...so congrats! Your story is popping my coffee shop cherry, and I'm liking your moves. I'll begin posting my stories on Monday but until then I'm getting off on your fine ass edward. I love that they all screw each other...ok, chapter 3 awaits me! Mary
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
I had this story rec'd to me by Teambella23.
I fucking love it already..and I am only on the first chapter!!
They are so ego driven, and the witty remarks are hilarious.
Cant stop..i'm off to next chappie!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Loved hearing from Alice! Perfect!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I found APOV interesting and it is great to see all the masks falling off. Dying to hear what happens to E & B next. This story caused a few late nights (or should I say mornings) for me to get to this chpt. I just could not stop reading.lol
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
hello, I adore this one, brilliant work, well done! keep up the goog job... (poor Alice & not soo much Bella), monica
Date: 11 Feb 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Do you want to know the really anoying thing. If found BDR on ff.net just before I went to bed so left it open on the browser to read the next day, only to find this really confusing an anoying message that the links to the reset of the chapters are no longer active. WHAT!! FF have pulled it. But I didn't even get a chance to read it. Thankfully I popped over to Twilighted and was able to read up to chapter 12 (thought major disapointment that it was only available that far) but yay after a quick (guilty) check back on FF just to make sure that my browser wasn't having a mental and BDR was really not there, a nice little message from you and over here I come to find the remaining chapters...and a newie too if I'm not mistaken.
I'm loving the B and E interaction, the loving and the hating is so delicious. And the A + J Chapie was so beautiful. I love these two they are so sweet. But really I'm just hanging out for the EPOV when he gets beck to the Cullen house...Please let him be going out for coffee rather than having an arsehole epiphany. Either way bring back Carlisle can wait to see more of the hot Doc father-son bonding.
Can't wait for more
Date: 11 Feb 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
great as always...please update soon
Date: 11 Feb 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Love that the masks are starting to fall off
Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
:)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
:)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
:)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
:)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
:)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
i literally started freaking out when i saw this story only had two chapters. but now it is here and all is well:)
and good lord! why can't i get some mr. pussy action going on over here?!?!?
mmm, jasper;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
This story moved here from another site 15 chapters in so it obviously doesnt have a lot of reviews here yet, which is why I am making sure I leave one on chapter 1...if someone is reading the reviews, trying to decide if they want to read the story or not based on the feedback, let me tell you...YOU DO!! I have been reading fan fiction for about a year now and I have only about 6 stories in that entire time that I LOVE...this is one of them. There are lemons but there is also a lot of heart (especially where we are in the story now!) and I can't wait to see where it goes from here!!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
:)
Date: 10 Feb 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
AAWWWWW!!! I always love Alice and Jazz stories..................very sweet and very "them". :) Can't wait to hear about the date with Jake and why Edward took off before Bella woke up.....................*taps chin*