[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
WTH is wrong with Bella? She's got the guy everyone wants who only wants to be with her and she doesn't know why she's not happier abou it. Child needs some help. I get she's insecure but she's got to take a chance and see where this may go. It may actually be what she needs to break the cycle of their parents.
Love possessive Edward. Have fun in Turkey!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
YAY YAY YAY brilliant chapter. Thank you so much for sharing another bit of your story. You rock. Have I great holiday. Turkey is great.
Date: 30 May 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
'Emmett, of course, was oblivious to anything that wasn’t directly benefiting his dick.' - *gigglesnort*
Interesting how Edward admitted to Jessica that he and Bella were together, but Bella kept denying it to everyone. I believe it's self-preservation on her part and I totally get it. ALWAYS make the guy come to you that way you don't risk getting hurt..........*wink*
Jasper always the voice of reason. *sigh*
Perfect ending to this chapter, Bella deciding to come out of the proverbial closet and give the school a little show. I believe a standing ovation is needed for that little peep show!
Excellent (as always)!
~Paula
Date: 30 May 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
haha i was so confused about the last...scene i didn't get thath they were in the closet till i read the authors note. i completely thought that whole scene happened in the middle of a club full of people.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
AWESOME!!! so glad that i came back to this story!!! i was not disappointed the least little bit!!!
Date: 30 May 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
I agree with Jasper!
Date: 30 May 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Well if that isn't a public gesture of, "I want you - you are mine", I don't know what is. Wow, if only I'd experienced one of those moments in high school. Or university. Hell anywhere really!
Date: 29 May 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
that's exactly what I was going to say: AWWWWWW!!!! that ending was too cute. I loved that they both made the same grand gesture at the same time. :) I can't wait for more. thanks so much. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 29 May 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Love it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
finally. great end of the chapter
Date: 28 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
This story is really great. I love the tension between them, the lemon scenes are written well (realistic, hmmm....), and Edward is dazzling! :)
Thanks for writing and please, don't finish this story soon! Please, let there be some more action, I'd like to see how'll deal Jessica and the other lames with all this, what will happen with Renee, Carlisle etc. And, of course, BxE never cease to amaze me! :) Thanks a lot.
Date: 28 May 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
awsome!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 May 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Ahhhh. I LOVE it! Finally.
They are too cute,to hide it. Please let the new chapter come fast!
Date: 27 May 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
It's about damn time they dropped the pretenses.
Date: 26 May 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
I really thought we'd have a lot longer, more emo wait until to became public. I'm so happy that isn't the case.
High school gossip is so tacky and lame but those kids seem to think it's the most important thing in the world. They will learn someday.
Oh and Jasper Rocks!!
Date: 26 May 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awww yes, their figuring it out, with a little help from their friends.;D) Great chapter.
I'm so glad you updated, I really like these characters, I was missing them.
<3<3
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Excellent chapter, I was so hoping it wasn't going to end here.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Yeah!!! They just need to all out fuck in the hall... that'll show the bitches! ;)
Date: 26 May 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
omigod omigod omigod best chapter yet! I mean, i was kinda feeling frustrated for the most of the chapter but the ending was fuckin' A
My heart's like, palpitating. And yes, i had to google dictionary that before writing this review.
luvvved this chapter and can't wait till the next one!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
It's about time! And Bella actually made the move, which is shocking. Hopefully that means their not denying their relationship anymore and fully in the open
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 May 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
eeeeeeek :D
i'll have you know that... i was in an awards ceremony this morning when my iphone buzzed with your notification and i literally squealed from excitement. i got a lot of strange looks. bwahhahaha. but good news! i made biggest flirt! HAHAHAH. it's official on paper and everything- i have never felt so proud...
oh and i lol'd at this:
Emmett, of course, was oblivious to anything that wasn’t directly benefiting his dick. So, during the whole class, he did his best to lay out all his best lines.
“I missed your sexy mouth this weekend.”
“Your tits look really pretty today.”
“My balls hurt.”
“Soooooo I’m bored. You wanna go fuck in my Hummer?”
the end! now i must go find a way to get into drake's pants tonight as he is coming to my city for a concert tonight. sighhhh. time to put on my see through lace panties! :) :) :)
Date: 25 May 2010 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
:)
Date: 25 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
That was so cute
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
AWWWWWWWWW
:)
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
About freaking time join the coupleville with Alice & Jasper! I love your emotastic thinking bring it on. I knew you were going to bring the heat and you wait until the end to serve it up. Yeah it was fucking awesome and I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter. Until next time.
Date: 25 May 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Dear Kikiblues, I loved it! Awwwww indeed! I'm always a sucker for a grand gesture. I like the way that E & B are silently suffering though feeling the same then come together so sympatically.
Great chapter and I'm glad it's not the end. Wonderful story.
Take care,
Suzie55
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awwwwwww, naw really I'm glad somebody took that first step. Great chapter, can't wait to see what comes next for these two. ;)
Date: 25 May 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
I say Edward will crack first. Everyone knows boys have no self control!!
Date: 25 May 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
LOVED IT!!! great chapter. can't wait for more, don't delay, I check your story every day for updates. Can't live without my BDR!
Date: 25 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
THank you for continuing the story! I love this one so HARD! LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Date: 25 May 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
“So?” she said, eyes wide and sparkling, like a designer-clad bush baby on E.
Bahahahaha...loved that line, though I hope others picked up on the Aussie humor there. Fantastic chapter, as awkward as I would expect it to be between them...And its nice that they're 'coming out of the closet'. Woohoo lemons next time, oh how I love the smut. I'll be waiting patiently.
Date: 25 May 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
woo hoo!!! show them what's what! hahaha great chapter :):)
Kristi
Date: 25 May 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Yah yah yah! So glad that this isn't the end yet. Keep going. Keep going. I love this story too much for it to end!
I love all the games that were played in this chapter. The hiding, the lying, the facades. I love that Emmett and Rosalie are so completely oblivious of everything except for themselves, and that Alice and Jasper seem to be the exact opposite - happy with what they have but concerned for their friends' happiness also.
I didn't think that Edward and Bella could keep up the charade for too long. I hope they can be honest with each other, but more importantly, honest with themselves.
Thankyou so much for the update. It made my day. I eagerly anticipate your next installment...
Date: 25 May 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Thank you. I love this story. Although, I would have loved a grand gesture by Edward, even though driving together all ready was a significant gesture.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
I love it!!!!
Date: 25 May 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Oh really good chapter and i am so glad they both said fuck it and kissed at the end.......screw this hiding from everyone...... they need to be a couple and anyone who wants to gossip.. go ahead......I love it..........can't wait.. but did find it funny he was going to the same thing Bella did.
Date: 25 May 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
woo hoo. Smart Jazzy
Date: 25 May 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Yay! I love how they think they're so badass, but really, their both confused teenagers like every other high schooler with a first love...
Date: 25 May 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
shoes
lets get some shoes
Date: 24 May 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Please do not refer to this story as a mess! I am so drawn to your characters--can't wait for your updates. So glad to see two such unhappy souls find comfort with each other, truly heartwarming. 'Course, it doesn't hurt that your lemons are seriously HOT! Thank you for writing.
Date: 24 May 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Still lovin' this story! U r the shit ms. kiki :) You have to update more often tho, your killing me with the long wait between chapter! LOL...cant wait to see what happens next. I'm glad she made a move in public. One of them needed to!
Date: 24 May 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awwwwww!!!! Well I would say they both just cracked together. They should have done that when they first arrived at school. Thanks for the awesome update.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
About freakin time!!!! Woooohooooooo!!!!!
I am so logig this story.....smutt included :)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Go Edward/Bella!!! Make a statement!
Date: 24 May 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
So, even though you already KNOW how much I love this chapter, I felt bad that I hadn't left you an "official" review in a while! OMG, so much to love about this chapter! I love that you're letting B & E show their vulnerability more. Emmett and Rose just slay me, and I love Bella's little convo in the bathroom with Alice. You really nailed the "high-school" feel of this chapter! Oh, and btw, your ending line: "And I wasn’t sorry at all" - just ABSOLUTE PERFECTION! Sigh. Thanks for the shout-out in your A/N! I know you've been super-busy with RL, but I hope we can catch up one of these days! ILY! <3
Date: 24 May 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Squeeeee!!! Awe!!! Loved it!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Ahhh, these two are so good together except when there is an audiance involved. the whole day was so awkward, even I felt uncomfortable. LOL. I love that Bella kissed him at the end of the day. I'm glad one of them finally had the guts to do it. ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
aaaawwww! loved it!
Date: 24 May 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
WHOO HOO!!!!! Our Baby Bell's got balls!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awesome chapter! I think it was exactly what they both needed to better deal with their new "relationship"
Date: 24 May 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
ah, that kiss..... *grinning like an idiot*
loved it bb!
Date: 24 May 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awwwwww....LOL Let the loving and the snut ensue!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
ohhhh, I so love this kids!!! I hope there is much more in story for us, right???? a few more chappies, please????
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us Kiki! It's awesome!
Date: 24 May 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
awwwww! <3 <3 <3
these two make me so happy now that they're finally together.
thank you, doll, for another fab chapter. :)
Date: 24 May 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Loved the chapter.
Date: 24 May 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awwwww cute
Date: 24 May 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
awww, yeah!!!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
BEST.FUCKING.CHAPTER.ENDING.EVERRRR
Date: 24 May 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
that was definitely "Awww" material! thank god they both grew a pair and finally just thought about themselves.
yay for more!! :)
Date: 24 May 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
awwwww! Yesss! I hope that is not the ending. Excited for the smut. Hoping that they both crack, don't care who does first!
Date: 24 May 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
:)
Date: 24 May 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
awwww loved the end
Date: 24 May 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
i was so waiting for this chapter!
Date: 24 May 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
LoVe It!!!! I'm all doing happy dances when I see that you've updated....awesome chapter...can't wait to see what's gonna happen now...
Date: 24 May 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
awwwww...Loved the ending, they need to quit being so stubborn and come out already and let them know that they are together. update soon =)
Date: 24 May 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
They belong together. Always!!! YEAH!! E
Date: 24 May 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awwwww!!! So, no that I sad that I can say: good chapter. And I never expected this to be the HEA! No, no, I am sure you have planned some more angsty stuff in there. And I think Bella will crack first. She's just to insecure.
Thanks for the update
Till next time,
Lovebel xo
Date: 24 May 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
loved it...awesome
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
All bets are off!!! Finally....2 lost souls finding there way to each other!! Let the good times begin!! (or continue...)
Date: 24 May 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
oh Kiki.... you make me so smiley! i am SO glad you didn't make it all shiney happiness just because they decided to give it a try. i love that Bella denied it to Mike, and i squeed when Edward didn't deny it to Jessica. who knew that he's be the one to let it out? and then THE KISS!!! it was awe inspiring... i think i read the last passage like 6 times. it was fantastic! like i said it made me all smiley and made 3 people ask what i was reading, as i stared starry-eyed at my laptop. can't wait for more, bb!
Date: 24 May 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Oh I loved it!!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
YAY YAY YAY! Fuckhot and awsome chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 24 May 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
aaawwww, nice. Finally they showed the world they are taken! The fact that SHE made the grand gesture first only shows that he was even more scare than her, so cute.
Theay really should care fuck about what others say, they'll talk eitherway, at least this will give them something to talk about.
Loved it
Date: 24 May 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Oh no this is most defiently not the ending. I think they will both crack at the same time. Please update soon. This is one of my favorites.
Marguerite
Date: 24 May 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
ohhhhhhh wow yes,yes
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awwwwww!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
LOVE LOVE LOVE
I freaking love that Edward just went up and kissed her like that!
You totally made me smile on a Monday!
Date: 24 May 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Wow! Love it. :-) Edward and Bella finally getting their stuff right.
Date: 24 May 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Oh, I loved this chapter - these two stubborn asses make for a very entertaining and hot story, you know ;)
I'm sad that it's coming to an end, but all good things must. Or so I have been told, anyway. I'm looking forward to how you tie this masterpiece together in the end.
Oh, and YAY for smut!
/Vic
Date: 24 May 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
*fist pump* yesssssssss. Finallllly!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Oh jeez, I hope Edward cracks first. hahaha Thank you for the update. Loved this chapter.
Date: 24 May 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
i squeed so hard,lol. i love you!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
YAYY!!! Perfect ending my Queen!!
xoxo
M
Date: 20 May 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Cool little story. Funny and sad all at once. Love how OOC everyone is. Just remember, B&E belong together...forever...just saying..E
Date: 17 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
so cute 'it's me and you against the world'
Date: 17 May 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
well he may not know that it is love but he has realized that it is definately more than just lust. he he is obviously a little more than in 'like' with her. and it seems that she is willing to find out where this is going.
Date: 17 May 2010 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
well looks like they are ready to admit a few things...
Date: 17 May 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
hope all went well in the real life department.
man eddie is seriously screwed. i mean with his head shoved so far up his own ass how will he ever be able to even find bella to make things right?
i don't think bella is quite as far gone with the de river nile because she knows she's screwed and feeling way too much she has just decided it is easier to push it all down and have someone (jake) lick her... um... her wounds i mean! man get your mind outta the gutter. oh wait never mind we all loved it so much more when you think in the gutter and bring us all down to your level! heehee
Date: 17 May 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
wow can't even believe it took them that long to come together. but the way people see you can certainly put you in a rut and make you feel you have to be/ act a certain way
Date: 17 May 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
ok what the hell was eddie boy thinking driving away on her AGAIN!?! he saw that it hurt her before so what the fuck? he better have been going out for coffee or something and the note slipped under the bed!
daddy c and momma e, is that new? wonder what eddie is gonna think of that? maybe player daddy c is ready to settle down? and what will momma e do to set right the fuckery of this littlw cullen boys string of fucks? oh she's gonna have to bitch slap the boys! get em' in line and acting like gentlemen. heehee.
and finally we see that alice and jasper are really together and i guess in love. can't wait to see how that all happened and why they kept it quiet.
Date: 17 May 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
wow that was truely awesome and completely out of left field for both of them. wonder where they will take this from here? what will everyone else think?
Date: 17 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
wow poor bella, and i know she would be pissed thinking it is pity but it's not. she just should not have to deal with that kinda crap. no kid should have to feel bad about having people meet or see their parents. no kid should have to be ashamed by or embaressed by the ones who gave them life and should love them and hold them above everything. unfortunately parents suck sometimes and kids get the brunt of it.
but b is a strong woman and will rise above it and move past the bullshit.
glad to see that eddie was able to help pull the spot light off of bella for at least a little while. still more proof that he is a good guy under it all.
Date: 17 May 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
can't do the biting, tried that once and he didn't like it. but i do so it's all good.
well hot up against a tree sex with biting and blissfull orgasms what more could a person expect from a night at the school fair?
Date: 17 May 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
ok first things first. what the fuck is going on with jasper and alice? they both seem way too over sensitive about eachother. are they doing anything? wanting to do something? hate eachother with a passion? come on! i am happy to see that bella can see something there and is going to stay away from jasper for a while.
next loving the 'playing'on the rides that was going on.
but jake?!? and what the hell kind of girlfriend gives out afree pass to 'get things out of your system' to their boyfriend??? i mean am i just an over bearing, possessive bitch? cause i would never! he wants me, he got me, and he better stay with just me! i do not share! but maybe that is just me?
the jelousy is gonna be awesome though. and can't wait for eddie to remind bella the bet is still on durring the 'date' and bella said they would be exclusive for the rest of the time. heehee she can't do anything or forefit on the car and the bet!
Date: 16 May 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
yay they finally had sex and fuck was that raw and hot! i think eddie is starting to feel that maybe b is awesome and not just another girl.
again love the psa on condoms! so glad i don't have to worry about those things anymore! now it is just with my teenagers! oh god going to have a panic attack now!
Date: 16 May 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
again thank you for your words of wisdom and caution on 69. lol
are you gonna let them fuck soon? cause the playing is fun but i think they will both implode if they wait much longer for the main event.
and... you still haven't told us what happened at the end of year party that b can not remember. my guess is he took care of her while she was messed up but no tickling of the cooch. he probably stopped her, cause deep down he is not only a good lay but a good guy. lol
Date: 16 May 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
your shower scene was hot. and not just the tounge to clit action but doing it while there are other people around. hawt!!!
Date: 16 May 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
you go girl! show him who is in control, any guy would be tripping over himself to get a piece of that.
Date: 16 May 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
jake is fuck hot and i so would love to lick something off of him. but sounds like it is time to move along back to the main event.