Date: 16 May 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
gotta love it when a girl knows what she wants and takes it. love it even more when you leave him wondering what the fuck just happened with his mouth hanging open wishing for more! at least he had the presence of mind to put it back in his pants before she left him there.
mmmmm....sexy!
Date: 16 May 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
you are so right em would totally be freaked by any male contact. i guess that's why rose uses jasper and edward to get her rocks off. she'd be lucky to get the 'let's do this but don't touch my junk or i will end you' talk from poor emmy.
but i still love me some emmett!
i do not think either one of them really knows what they are getting into with this bet! but i'm sure you'll take them for a hell of a wild ride finding out!
Date: 16 May 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
luckily for me i have onlyever had a jasper- like man down below! he doesn't need to breath either and always knows just what to do! never had any complaints!
Date: 16 May 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
to good. love the PSA on wrapping it up! lol
looks like eddie-boy needs to find himself a chalenge...
Date: 16 May 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
that's right b you tell him!
Date: 16 May 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
fucking awesome!
Date: 16 May 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
i love this story so much! its so real and theres no bullshit, just honest stuff about how the so called rich kids have it and the others dont, and how they deal. i love how far edward has come, and its been refreshing to see a bella in this way! great writing!! much love!!
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
This story is FANTASTIC!
One of the best I've read in a while. To me your up there with Wide Awake and Clipped Wings and Ink Armor-amoung others...but this is just fantastic!
I also wanna give you a HUGE high five for been one of the three decent writers I've found in the coffee club-if you know some who can write and have a more then decent story, let us know yeah??
So this is great! can't wait for the next chapter and what you come up with next (if you need smut filled ideas with sex games, manipluation, gutter filled minds of characters, and better then a bet polt...let me know).
10 coffee cups
Date: 15 May 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
I'm not mad at Jacob at all, it's not his fault. Bella just has some kind of split personality. One minute she's pissed at Cullen, making him promise not to fuck anymore women, and the next she's trying to fuck another guy. I just don't get her.
I hope she realizes before it's too late, she's going to really miss Cullen when he's gone for good.
Anyway, fan-fucking-tastic story so far, I'm absolutely loving it. Love the filthiness of it all. LOL
<3 XOXO
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
love it, love it! :)
Date: 12 May 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
What a great freaking story...please keep the updates coming this is one I cant wait to read!!!!
Date: 12 May 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Very cool tale. I read it all in one day, and I am still mesmerized by it. Thank you for your interpretation of the usual teenage angst.
Date: 08 May 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
cant wait till the next one
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
awwww they're so cute!!! "You and me against the world Swan"!! Died!!
I so hope they stick together until the end, I'm afraid of Bella's insecurities and self-destruction characteristics but I really hope Edward will keep her afloat and relieve her of those terrible feelings inside..I can't wait for the next one!!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
awwwwwwww our baby is growing up!!! I love how he treated Rosalie and how he's starting to see through all the pretencies and the games! He knows what he wants now!!!
Date: 08 May 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
loved it!!
Kristi
Date: 08 May 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Yay! i love these two lol i'm excited for the next chapter i'm sure their day of school will be quite INTERESTING lmao thanks for the update :)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Loved it. ;o)
Date: 07 May 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
OH MY GOD!! I LOVE IT!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATE SO LOVE THIS STORY!! I HOPE THEY WORK IT OUT.. Please continue as soon as you can and with Edwards POV.. PLEASE!!
Date: 06 May 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
So they're getting closer. It's obviously hard to trust someone when the relationships around them are all kinds of messed up. Wonder how they'll do when they finally get around to talking about the future?
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Anxious for more!!
Date: 06 May 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
wow full on and juicy. excellent!
Date: 06 May 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
Damned funny chapter!! I chuckled all the way through it - what a tease you are!!!
Date: 06 May 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I thought this was a great chapter, showed B & E getting much closer, but I wasn't sure about all the indecision Bella was still feeling. Looking forward to the next one.
Date: 06 May 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I loved them being together and sweet and like a couple of teenagers. I bet Daddy C would be happy to see Eddie all happy with one girl.
Can't wait to see how Monday at school goes :)
Date: 06 May 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
loved it! thank you for your great characters that wont shut up....i'm so not ready for this awesomness to end!
Date: 06 May 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Making out like teenagers.......I haven't done that since I first met my fiance. One thing always leads to another. The good old days of build up *sigh*.
Glad the two of them have finally opened up to each other. The Carlisle situation will be interesting though.
Date: 06 May 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Great chapter! Liked how Jake acted. Very excited that there are more than 2 chapters left as well.
Date: 06 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens to them at school tom.
Date: 06 May 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
i loved this chapter again, as usual. thanks be to god for the talented writers out there who offer their stories to the rest of us non-writers. i'm glad there are many more chapters out there.
Date: 06 May 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
This story has me completely enraptured! I think this is the most honest chapter we have seen from these characters, and it is such a nice change from all the games they have played previously. I am so happy that there will be additional chapters to this story. I feel like there are so many more places you can take these characters, and i don't want to say goodbye to them just yet.
This chapter was so genuine and heartfelt, and it truly read like a story about two young teenagers experiencing new things for the first time, minus all the drugs and Forks lifestyle. Beautifully written.
Thankyou so much for the update. I eagerly anticipate your next installment...
Date: 06 May 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Strides are being made for the new couple, let's hope they can keep it together when they get back to school
Date: 06 May 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
really good chapter....... i am so glad she left with him
the sex as always HOT
i am so glad Edward opened up to her also and in return she opened up to him a little bit. Jacob is a idiot i'm glad he is gone.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Great chapter.
Date: 05 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
(Hug from laptop right back @you)
I'm so glad these two have gotten on the same page and are getting better with sharing themselves with each other[ie the non-physical sense, they already had the other down pat].
Another great chapter. I'm totally hooked on these characters & in need of knowing what's going to happen to them. I like them & want them to have a HEA, maybe that's not in the works. Can't wait to find out!
Thanks for writing;D)
Date: 05 May 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Yeah, I love it when they don't shut up. Nothing is better than a chatty E&B especially in this story.
I do hope Bella gets her shit together.
Thank you for the very interesting update :)
Till next time,
Lovebel xo
Date: 05 May 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Loved it! I love how they spent the night together without having sex. Don't get me wrong, I love the lemons!!! But that was very sweet and tender and I thought it was perfect that the two people who make everything about sex spent the night making out instead.
Date: 05 May 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
The two of them making out for hours and then just sleeping was so sweet. Think Edward is falling hard. Why oh why is Bella so freaking EMO? God I hope she doesn't pull some dumb skank bullshit at school and fuck it all up! I'm getting a bad feeling. :( Keep bringing the good stuff! ♥
Date: 05 May 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
lol I wasn't ready for this story to be over anyway! I love Bella and Edward. I'm glad they are finally getting their shit together. I guess I can see why Edward is mad at Daddy C but I hate that he won't even think about giving Esme a chance. *sigh* Thank you for the update! This was a great chapter.
Ellie
Date: 05 May 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
What can I say you never cease to humor me and make me sigh.........I loved these two lines! The best of both worlds.;)
~ (Jacob) "What, and be stuck in the middle of you and Captain Charisma over there?"
~(Edward) “You and me against the world, Swan,”
I can never aptly express my love for this story, but hope you know you've got a fan for life!
~Paula
Date: 05 May 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
So good, love how these 2 are growing up :)
Date: 05 May 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
oh woman, i just love this story!!! i've missed it, its hard to get on this because I don't get alerts. but fucking fantastic as always!! love love!
Date: 05 May 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
hmmm and Alice is prob going crazy since they still have her phone. LOL
Date: 05 May 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
well, well, well... if it isn't Eddie and Bells falling in LOVE! that had to be one of my most fave chappies yet! and trust me, that's saying alot. it seems they've gone all "Tupac - Bonnie and Clyde" on our asses. (all i need in this life of sin, is me and my girlfriend) and i adore it. i knew they'd come around, i just couldn't see how they'd do it. but i guess that is what makes you the genius, and me NOT. lol. you know i have extreme love for this little tale, and this chapter is no exception! xx~j
Date: 05 May 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Ooh B,D&R! How you make my day!
Date: 05 May 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I loved it. Hot, sweet and down right just good! Bella is starting to freak out a little bit. I wonder what Alice is going to do to Edward about him stealing her phone? Watch your back Edward. I wouldn't think you are getting off easy. Jasper won't be able to save your ass. Until next time. Oh I hope we get to met Ness somewhere in the future. She has Jake whipped and I like it.
Date: 05 May 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
You don't know how fucking happy I am for the characters not shutting the fuck up!!!!!
i liked the chapter and I believe what Bella says... Next chap is gonna be a bitch!!
xoxo
Marianne
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Excellent chapter, glad they took some time to themselves. Can't wait to see what's in store for them at school. ;)
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
That was just so.....human. Who knew these two had it in them? And I like it.....REALLY! So will Edward and Bella get normal, hold hands, hang out at each other's lockers, go the drive-in on Friday nights, and out dancing on Saturdays? Or will it be drama like Winona Ryder and Christian Slater in Heathers? I'm really hoping for something in between and I know you can deliver.
Date: 05 May 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Oh i like where this story is going. These are two people that belong together. Keep up the great work and update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 05 May 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
i'm happy that they're finally figuring things out between themselves.
the line... "You and me against the world, Swan," .. that was adorable!
can't wait for more :)
Date: 05 May 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Loved the two of them connecting in a whole new way, but I really hope they manage to lean on one another for support when they return to school, otherwise things could get very ugly. Great chapter.
Date: 05 May 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
YAY fucking hot and brilliant chapter. I bow my head I awe. I'm totally thrilled about the next chapters. THANK YOU so much for sharing. You rock.
Date: 05 May 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I seriously love this story! I dont want it to be over. I cant wait for the next chapter to see what SCHOOL brings. Ahh love that they are FINALLY on the same page!
Carlisle is one bad cockblocker. grrrr
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Amazing what peer pressure and societal pressure can do to young kids. Sorry....but where are the parents in all of this?? Oh right....doing the same thing but now they are adults!
Hope B&E can help each other and stop the circle of destruction. Sounds like they want off the carousel and hope they can make it!
Good Job!
Date: 05 May 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Go ahead and hug your laptop...great chapter! I love how Edward threw the bet and was honest with Bella. Can't wait to see what happens next :D
Date: 05 May 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I wonder what would happen the next day. I can't wait.
Date: 05 May 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
What is going on in Bella's fucked up head? I can't wait to see the reactions they get at school. Maybe someone will get a Bella beat down. That's always fun. Maybe it will be Rosalie. She deserves it.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Oh I hope things will work out for them... cant wait til the next chapter!
Date: 05 May 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
loved it!
Hope it all doesn't go to shit when they are back at school! I imagine Jasper & Alice will be ok, but I bet Rosalie will def be a bitch!!
Date: 05 May 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
loved it!
Hope it all doesn't go to shit when they are back at school! I imagine Jasper & Alice will be ok, but I bet Rosalie will def be a bitch!!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Thank you for this update. I love this story. There will be no way to keep thier relationship a seccret. I can't wait for Edward's public declaration. Rosalie will be pissed.
Date: 05 May 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
another good chapter! Still lovin' this story. Wonder what will happen when they get around their friends? Hmmm... Update soooooooon please.
Date: 05 May 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I'm glad there's more chapters left, I like this story and I just couldn't see how things would be over in two chapters. I mean, they just got together, that would've sucked. I bet school is going to be interesting.
Date: 05 May 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
If you hug your laptop really tight and you get a warm feeling from it, that's just me hugging you back with the love! ;)
Great chapter - I'm so glad the angsty stuff was left behind for this one.. but I'm anxious to see what Monday will bring for them! *squish*
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Great chapter.
So glad they got their heads out of their asses and are really talking to each other now
Can't wait to see how everyone at school will react.
Date: 05 May 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
loved it kiki these two sol deserve happy ending
cheers
AllyinPerth
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Great story!
Date: 03 May 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Well i do love your song selections, i never thought i'd ever see someone use Chase and Status with a fic! I don't bump into that many British people in the fandom so when I do it's always fun to see things only British people know. I loved most of the song choices actually, i'm so damn excited for th next chapter! Any idea yet when it will be up?
Date: 03 May 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
wow....great chapter....its staring in his face but he refuses to look at it with eys wide open....loved it
Date: 03 May 2010 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Okay seriously, not only do i love this fic, but Chase and Status and Mumford and Sons!!!!!!!!!! You have excellent taste my friend. Have you heard Heartbeat by Chase and Status? It's amazing.
Anywho, back to the story, I only found it today, and then proceded to read the whole thing start to Mumford and Sons and I'm hooked! This story is one of the hottest damn things i've ever read and it sure brightenes up these gloomy british mornings!
Author's Response:
Oh wow- I love Heartbeats - such a great song! I think thats what directed me to Chase and Status!! I'm so chuffed you like some of the song selections- some of them just fit the chapters really well.
Aw, you've made my morning and certainly brightened up the shitty, rainy bank holiday! x KB
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Yay Edward!The closet sex was hawt. Thank god Bella didn't let Jacob put his peen in her! Jacob's wanted to have sex with Bella since he was ten? Isn't he older than her in this story? How old was she? That's kinda creepy. I loved Edward's emotionally bravery, looking forward to his POV!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Suuuppp???? I was so pissed that I totally missed this update, I'm trying to get the hang of this site...I thought I had this story marked so that I'd get updates...apparently not...FAIL..but I love this story and I'll be sad when it's fin. So, hope you update soon since I have no idea when this chapter came thru...thanks for sharing chica!
Corina
Date: 29 Apr 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
I love stalker Edward
Author's Response:
Right there with you- he's my fav!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
I wasnt really sure about this story at the start...I thought OMG...they are a bunch of whores! But I kept reading and Im so glad I did...this story has been friggin awesome! I love that Edward and Bella may have the potential to stop whoring around and finally love each other! I love it and cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
lol- thanks hun- they're whores with hearts? Well, we'll have to wait and see! x KB
Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Simply amazing! Glad these two are finally starting to get a few wake up calls and realize that there is another way to live their lives that is more fulfulling than what they had before. Just hope they realize they can do it together :)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
so. i just realized i didn't leave you a review for this chapter. i would know because i have this story bookmarked on my safari browser...
THE FUCK?! only two more chapters??
are you tryyyyying to depress me??
i will collab a sequel with you! and it can include bill compton, sookie stackhouse, and..... KE$HAAAAAA!
it'll be great. i already have the plot laid out in my head... ;)
it can be called "Vampire, Waitress, Trash." I AM SO EXCITE:D
Author's Response:
LMFAO- oh ilu!
Uh, yuh, thats the plan- doesnt mean its set in stone! And knowing how i talk and talk and talk and talk it probably won't be!
But I think I may just wrap it up, because 'Vampire, Waitress, Trash' sounds like the greatest fic that has ever been thought of ever ever.
It will be all SOOKEH, YAU ERE MEHN....AND SO ERE YOU KESAHH.....ect and then they will all be covered in glitter!
Oh, its fabulous! xx
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
only two more chapters?? Really?!! I'm so sad :( Well its been a fun ride i'm super looking forward to the last chapters than! Thanks for the update!!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Oh such a good chapter and I'm so glad he went through what he did with "the other girls and slutty rose " to realize this really isn't what he wanted anymore he wanted Bella and Bella only....i hope to god she goes to him.....screw Jacob he is going to his girlfriends any ways Bella needs to do what is right for her and Edward and he belong together...... i so can't wait for the next chapter..
Date: 22 Apr 2010 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
wow now how is fuckin how???? LOL
Date: 21 Apr 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
cool. luved it. keep 'em coming! :) ha ha
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
epov was fantastic as usual!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
This cracked me up:
Giving up on my mental plans of turning into a fucking emo-tarded romantic lead, I made my way to the bar. As I waved my hand at the usual barman, I was quickly greeted by another pair of shiny, surgically enhanced tits.
This wasn’t my father, this was Mike fucking Brady.
Team Douche had to stop off two times for chicken wings, once for another beer run and three times for a piss.
It meant that I could close my eyes and at least try to focus on the beat, instead of Emmett and his band of douches pondering the usual sex queries: Shaved or not shaved? Tits or ass? Ass to mouth?
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Good chapter. :)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
No hangover cures here...just try to sleep it off like the rest of us ;} Thanks for the update!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Great chapter, thanks for the update, I've been going through some BDR withdrawals.
Great burn on Rosalie, she's so deserving of it.
I'm so looking forward to next chapter, let me help you out w/hangover cures:
3 Advil or NSAID of your choice. along with non-greasy cheeseburger[bread works great at soaking up alcohol & protein good for you]
And there's always the: 3 Advil & restart the party all over again, preferably not with the same thing you got soused on, don't want to get sick. Champagne & O.J or Bloody Mary in the mornings doesn't make you look like such a drunk either.ha But ya know, we love that saying around our house...get a little Sheryl Crow going on in the morning, ie "All I wanna Do" you know the rest if not well...
Author's Response:
I'm liking your thinking about the party restart! I swear, going out in your late twenties just isnt as easy as it was when i was 19!!
Thanks for the review! x
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
:O update soon... i love this story!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
haha i don't know why, but Carlisle made me laugh in this chapter. i think it's because i read this after watching Nurse Jackie lol. sigh, i love PFach. anyway, great chapter, update soon!
Kristi
Author's Response:
lol- aww I dont watch Nurse Jackie!! Maybe I should for the Pfach-factor! TY for the rev! x
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
I do want an edward doll but i will just hug my legolas doll untill i can get my edward doll.
Author's Response:
LOL!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Awesome EPOV.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Geez still great....I loved it....
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Thank you for this chapter. I love this story. I can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
OMG I love this story! You've done a great job creating a smutfest that gave justice to E & B's contentious relationship. Many "smut" stories have great lemons, but they don't do a good job of creating an emotional bond between the characters. You have been quite sucessful my friend!
Edward has finally seen the light...I hope that he can make Bella see it too! :)
Author's Response:
oh ty! Thats so sweet of you! xxx KB
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
sumone told me fastfood works
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Hangover cures? Easy. Lots of water, drink at least 2 Litres, 2 Advil, and a very large cup of black coffee followed by Toast, with organic butter, and Free range eggs. You'll be ready to go for a 5km run after. I always am!
As for the chapter...It was really cool to hear Edward's side of things. I feel bad for him about the Carlisle thing. What a dick. The least he could've done was sat Edward down and talked to him about his "new revelations" regarding Love, and Women. I can see why Edward would be mad at him.
It's sweet that he went looking for Bella. Jasper was right. The two of them needed to grow up, though I must admit I really enjoyed their debauchery, and am going to miss it if it ends.
I loved this chapter and the last. Great writing as always!
Author's Response:
OMG- why werent you there Sunday morning to make me said breakfast??? :(
TY so much for rev-ing- glad that you liked E's pov! x
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
This chapter was so sweet!!! I love that you can see some true feelings blossing between them!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Renee really showed her ass in this chapter! Thank godness for Edward. I feel so sorry for Bella! I hope that she can recover from her bout with public embarassment.