Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
So Edward is surrounded by men in love and doesn't know where he fits in. Little does he know he is knee deep in it.
Author's Response:
Preach! xx
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
great chapter
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
:)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
The best hangover cure is McDonalds coke and fries. Works everytime!! Salt and caffiene. LOL Great chapter. Loved hearing Edwards pov of everything. So what will Bella decide to do? I hope run after the boy. Thanks for the update.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
2 chapters left???? really???? :((((
Great update but hated where you left us! Cockblocking much???
Thanks for taking the time to write this and share it wit us! I really like this story and have been following from Ffic, to twi to here...so maybe I am a little stalkerish?
Thanks again!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Just 2 chapters??? NOOOOO.... *pouts*
I love your E! He is so fucking clueless and sweet and than not so sweet but still .. love him! :)
Thank you for the beautiful update!
Hope you're feeling better soon
Lovebel xo
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
My best hangover cure? gotta be just sleeping through it, then having a full english breakfast ooooooooooo yeah!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
fucking awesome.. please continue as soon as you can.. I need to know what happens next..
Love ya..
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
'Then it hit me: I needed her. And I was pretty fucking certain that she needed me, too.'
AAwwww.......just beautiful. I always appreciate when you show both POV's, but I'm definitely a little biased towards Edward's. Everything seems more pure and honest coming from him somehow.
Thank you for this heartwarming chapter. I was starting to go through BDR withdrawals wondering when I'd get my next fix!
I'm sorry to hear it's almost over, but I've so enjoyed the journey so far. You've done a wonderful job with the story.:)
As for the hangover cure? HHhmmm.........*taps chin*.............not sure. Still trying to figure that one out.;) But a full glass of water before going to bed definitely helps since alcohol dehydrates you and causes the headaches. Won't help now, sorry, but maybe it'll help for future nights!
BTW.............thank you for having Edward finally put plastic Rosalie in her place! That was classic!
~Paula
Author's Response:
TY! Even water didnt help me with that badboi hangover- lol. I swear its 3 days later and my muscles STILL hurt!
Thanks for reviewing!! xx
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Loved it! Sometimes you are just amaze the hell out of me with the way you string everything together, from the plot to the dialogue it is impeccable.
Author's Response:
I'm a little in love with your right now for saying that- sweetest. comment. ever. xx
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
You made my day!! I was so excited to see a chapter update! I've missed this E&B :) It was fun to see his POV and that the boy is finally admitting his feelings for her to himself. Great chapter, as always!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Hang over cure huh?? a couple on Tyles and pancakes with peanutbutter... Works for me! ;)
Great chapie!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
great chappie bb! i can't believe there's only 2 chaps left... :(
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
only two chapters left? =(
liked the EPOV but I do prefer BPOV and to keep Edward mysterious! :P
looking forward to what is still to come
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
greasy ass cheese burgers always make me feel better...its crazy but it helps..lol
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Finally!!! Great job!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
loved it
Allyinperth
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Thank you for Edward's pov. It makes the story alot more interesting. Plus shows what he feels. I am very glad I found it on this site. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Jeez Carlisle....just throw the kid under the bus and wonder why he's confused.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
I do love EPOV!
2 chaps left is that all!
I loved that chapter, Rosalie is such a skanky whore, lol.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Another fine chapter. Well-written as always. THANK YOU for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Two chapters left?? Oh, this makes me sad :( But if things keep going like they are now, this will be a good place to end this amazing story.
As long as there is some more boinking, I'll be happy.
As for this chapter: I think I just fell in love with this Edward. I adored how he internalised his way through the Bella-issue and came to his conclusion that they needed each other. Thank you for giving us his perspective of this very important event in their relationship too.
Author's Response:
awww- loving you <3
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Ugh. Only two more chapters??! Damn! I love, love, loved getting EPOV of events on this! So good!!! *love*
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
WOW - only two chapters? I am going to be absolutely devastated when this story ends. I am totally loving every word of it.
That moment at the end there was so sweet and beautiful. I love it when a guy caresses a girl's cheek like that. It is so affectionate!
Thankyou for the update. I eagerly await your next installment...
Author's Response:
siiigh- so do i, honey. So do it!
Thanks for the rev! And thanks for loving it <3 It totally loves you back lol
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Omg only two chappies left!!! Ahhhhhh it's soooooooo good. I simply love it.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
love this story, please update soon, missing BDR
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Jeez, My heart is heavy for Bella. Great chapter.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
that last part make me remember of a song by Pavel Nuñez, solo somos tu la luna y yo(theres only you, me and the moon)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Aww; as fucked up as they are, you've created likable, relatable characters that make you care for them. You're a talented writer and it obviously shows in your work.
So, what's Edward's proposition exactly? He's cryptic and it's confused me, LOL. Relationship, bet, fuck buddies etc. ?
And: 'My eyes rolled into the back of my head as I let my mind take it in; his smell, his taste, his touch.'
Do her eyes roll back because she is enjoying Jacob?
Date: 10 Apr 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Loved that chapter one of your best. Thank god Jacob is a good guy because I was hoping Bella wouldn't go through with it - guess we'll never know. So happy as you said Edward manned up. They need each other to deal with their crazy lifestyle. Which will hopefully be changing. I thought the closet sex was hot.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Loved that chapter one of your best. Thank god Jacob is a good guy because I was hoping Bella wouldn't go through with it - guess we'll never know. So happy as you said Edward manned up. They need each other to deal with their crazy lifestyle. Which will hopefully be changing. I thought the closet sex was hot.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
purple headed womb broom is not eww, its fucking funny. As a strictly Team Edward player, I am happy to read the Jacob scenes go as they did. No womb sweeping, phew. I like big brotherly type Jakes in the FFn world.
I am a bit floored, I really didn't expect you to go there with E&B so quickly - I thought they'd both be sooky little bitches trying to one-up each other at every turn for at least two more chapters.
I am shocked at their honesty with each other - but very happy, and impressed with their apparent maturity. Now hopefully any angst / drama will only be in them working on themselves and their 'realtionship' and not second-guessing the others intentions and third party involvement. And more sexing, definitely. Actually that was meant to be my first request, at the very top, in caps.
MORE PEEN PLEASE! hahahahhaah more specifically, Edward's peen, btw Jake peen does not count in double peen, more like prohibited peen. Don't do that ever, ever again. It's not that I'm anti-Jacob (well, I am) but more that my brother's name is Jacob and the images all meld as one and leave a bad taste in my mouth that threatens the contents of my stomach with a body slam onto the keyboard.
ANYWAY, I can't wait for EPOV which will tell me what gave him his epiphany to stop standing around playing with himself and grab his nuts with both hands, (or mine, if that's easier for him). Because last I heard he was (paraphrasing, exagerating) gonna make that bitch jealous.
Or at least that's what I think happened. I'm going to go back a couple of chapters because I just randomly checked this fic and am now questioning why the fuck I haven't been getting updates, now I want to cry because I can't keep track of all the FFn pulled fics and where to find them all now.
I'm devastated - it's all so hard to manage and no one seems to give a shit that I neglect my kids as much as necessary and without a second thought to sate my ffn addiction *sob**wail**scream in frustration*
Sorry about my outburst, love you and your brilliance, kthxbai
Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Oh, thank god Edward manned up and stopped that damn bet!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
LOVE THIS STORY. i've been reading this since it was on FanFiction.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
god i missed this story soooo much, glad i found it again!!!! keep it up!
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I loved that chapter. Keep updating please!
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I loved it!!! I don't like Jake but I enjoyed that Nessie 's got him by the balls so to speak!!! ;)
I loved Edward maned-up!
xoxo
marianne!
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
great chapter, Im glad they are finally getting there, it about time.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
oh yay! i loved it i'm so happy one of them finally spoke up a least a little bit, can't wait for more
Date: 06 Apr 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I'm loving your story so far. Twisted, sexy, dirty, hot. Awesome combination.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
yay for the manning up of edward and the lack of jacobian sex! haha
can't wait for the epov and to see these two really sort through this shit :)
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
ooohh liked this chapter.. nice.. hot....
Date: 04 Apr 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Things are changing . . . can't wait for Edwards POV!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I am so glad Edward pulled his head out of his ass and said something to her. Maybe, just maybe, they can actually make it work afterall.
Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Loved it. I hope you update sooner next time. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Wow! I wasn't expecting that from Edward!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I think I missed the yoga joke, but I'd love to know where it was.
Thank GOD Edward finally manned up. Curious to find out exactly how it hapened though. Was it the fact that he slugged Emmett out of nowhere? Was it Alice saying how alike they were? Was it Jasper telling him he was over all the bullshit with him and Bella? Or was it just seeing her out with Jake?
Dying for the next installment! Keep up the fantastic work!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
i really liked this chapter! i'm happy to see that they're both realizing this is more then a stupid bet.
can't wait for more!! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Team Jacob here! I'm just glad Jake is trying to get Ness back and keep Bella as a friend thank God! I love that Edward finely manned the fuck up since Bella couldn't do it but it was fun times in the closet that was hot as always. I was very entertained and can't wait for Edward's POV. I love your story and that Jake's not a jerk yay! Until next time!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I can't wait to see how Edward came to that conclusion. I love that he and Bella are gonna put aside the bullshit and try to be together. I'm a bit sad that there is no lovely "Next" button for me to click on. I've enjoyed reading this story and can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I'm thinking not Jacob. He seemed so giddy about just asking Bella out on a date. I just don't see him jumping to get laid. I also want to think he will feel guilt concerning Nessie.
Poor Eddie's world is being turned upside down. I think if Daddy C hadn't changed his tune he would be able to cope better with the whole Bella situation.
I just wonder how much B &E are going to hurt each other before they finally pull their heads out of their asses and realize they love each other.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Awe, Alice and Jasper are so sweet. Glad they finally got their shit together :)
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
*drops to knees* you have done it again my friend. *hails 'makes my vagina tingle just a little...ok, a lot' Queen* seriously..this E+B are fucking hot! They are starting to realize its there. Glad the bets over..looking forward to the confused 'do we love eachother' fuckery that's sure to come. *kisses cheek* love you Kiki and I'm glad ur back.
*looks around* Edward?
*spots Edward by tree, runs* ...
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Awe, they've almost told each other how they feel or are at least trying to show each other. They are pretty messed up though, I think Jacob's idea of getting the hell out of Dodge is a good idea, but how can she do that & be with Edward?
I'm excited they're back together though. Team Jacob? I thought that was like unicorns.
Soooo looking forward to next chapter, thanks for writing;))
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Hmmmmmm.......I wanna have hot closet sex with Edward too!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!! I am glad he manned up and apologized!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Whooot!
never thought I would ever say it...but Jacob almost sex..was kinda hot!?!?!..shhhh dont tell anyone I said that..I am Team Edward all the way.
OKay..so Edward turning up and going all 'I dont want this to end' on her..was extremely sexy.
I love a guy that isnt afraid to share his feelings....*swoon.
great update.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I want to think the best of Edward and assume he was going out to bring her back breakfast or coffee or something. How horrible to have Daddy C find you attmepting the walk of shame. Obviously he's happy with Esme and was bringing her home to meet Edward. Wonder how all of that will play out and affect Edward.
Yay, Alice and Jasper are in love and together :)
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
They are falling hard. Too bad I have a feeling there will be some major heartache before they can be happy.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
How long before Alice and Jasper finally give in and say we are a couple?
Poor Bella. Having to deal with a mother like Renee really sucks.
Yay Edward for sweeping in and saving the day :)
Date: 03 Apr 2010 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
phew that was so intense and i am so glad they had that talk
my heart is racing
Glad you are back and missed you
AllyinPerth
Date: 03 Apr 2010 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
LOOOVVVEEEEEEDD CHAPTER!!!
gah.. this tenson between them is amazing,you wrote it soo good..and hot...and sexy...
Thank you for update!
I am happy that you are back!!!
*mwah*
Adriana
Date: 03 Apr 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Ewwww, 'purple-headed womb broom', that's so creatively and fantastically disgusting, as is the prospect of Jacob smexing... but always glad to learn a new expression that I can gross out my friends with. Preferably in public. Loved the new chappie - what an interesting turn to the story. Edward has really grown a pair, what a mensch.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Thanks for the update and posting here. I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Brilliant as always :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Yay!!! I'm glad you are doing okay :) It's so good to have this story back - I missed these two!! And seriously? That was a hot chapter. Loved both little hook ups really. I like that Jake stopped because of his girlfriend. That was sweet :) and they can be friends, which of course, is what they should be. I am soooo soooo proud of Edward for apologizing. Good boy. Now hopefully he can be honest with her and tell her how he really feels about her. There's still a lot of baggage for them to get through but I can't wait to read about them getting there. Now don't leave me hangin' for another month pls - update soon!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
Possessiveward is total win! I'm dying to know what' going through Bella's head because all of that from Edward just had me thinking he's falling for her. I wonder what Daddy C would say about Edward falling for a gril. Especialy one from Forks.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Woohoo... a new chapter! I think i just about jumped out of my skin when i saw the update notification in my inbox. I was so happy and excited!
After reading previous chapters, i was really angry at Bella for planning to still go on the date with Jacob, as it seemed like just another manipulative move to make. But i think she really needed this date to sort some stuff out. I can't believe how terribly awkward i felt for both Jacob and Bella in the garage. It just felt utterly wrong, and could have completely ruined a potential blossoming friendship with the awkwardness and regret. I am so glad that they stopped and realised that it wasn't for the best. And am also glad that they were able to remain friends and speak candidly to each other with no fear of repurcussions. I think this friendship with Jacob will be very healthy for Bella and will help ground her and move out of the Forks mindset.
Edward, while dancing around true honesty, was also quite candid in this chapter. There was definitely an obvious change in him, but he was being open without being forward, which i think leaves his motives and intentions open to interpretation by Bella. Neither of them stated explicitly what they wanted - what they were to each other. But, either way, it was a massively monumental step forward for both of them.
I think some important questions, which will probably be answered in EPOV, that came out of this chapter include:
- Why was Edward at the bar? Was he following Bella? It is unlikely he was at that same bar if the general rule is that no one from the Forks click goes there!
- What was Edward thinking when he saw Bella with Jake? Could he see that it was completely platonic between them? Could he see the difference in Bella without the alcohol/drugs/pressure, and see her honest happiness?
- What happened to the freshman and the party Edward was apparently going to attend that night?
- Why did Edward just leave the closet after the talk he and Bella had?
- Did Jake see any of the interaction between Edward and Bella?
OMG - I can't wait for the next chapter and to hear what happened with Edward that night. This story is getting more and more intense, and i completely captivated by it. I never want to stop reading and wish your chapters could go on forever (even though i know that they can't).
Thankyou so SO much for the update. I anxiously anticipate your next installment...
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Oh shit! I can see Bella going out with Jacob and then getting flashes of her mother's life.
I love that Edward and Bella were able to talk and joke and then he was so nice to her in the library.
It seems like every time they take a step forward something happens and they end up taking two more steps back.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
go jake for stopping. and revenge sex never solves anything,.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
yay, love it! glad to have you back. looking forward to the next chappie.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
as usual great and very nice we being waiting for this update thanks..........
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
:)
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
It's about damn time and holy hell. Okay, Edward seemed to enjoy that a bit more than he should've. I can't wait for Bella's thoughts on it.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
can't wait for 19
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
I just know that Alice and Jasper are hooking up and both are emotionally inolved and getting pissed with each other over their little escapades.
Um, it seems that Jasper ain't got shit on Eddie when it comes to head ;) I just love it when Cullen gets cocky like that.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
You've got me wondering if he did anything with the slag at the bar.
Cullen definitely is good fighting fire with fire.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I think the sentiment "Fucking Yeah!!!" Sums it up for me this chapter!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
That was great. Does Edward really know what the hell he's gotten himself into?
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
Loved Nipslip. Too bad Jakey is happily attached. Bella sure could've used a little something-something to face Cullen.
LOL. Sheer genius having Edward looking so happy with some random chick and ignoring Bella.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Edward is the Edward I like. At the very least he seems to be. I love that he's telling Bella the truth - exactly what she never realized she wanted to hear. I really love that Jacob and Bella are all platonic now. It made me go into fits of giggles when he offered her his carl. It was so random and so fitting that I loved it. It got her attention at the very least and I was dying for him to answer 'you' but I don't suppose they're quite ready for that yet. Sure the closet sexing is one thing but talking and confessing is not exactly this Edward and Bella's way. I cannot wait to find out what Edward has to say for himself. Cheers.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I am so ready for them to pull their heads outta their arses... so I love this chapter. Thanks for the update!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
i'm soooooo glad you're back, bb!!! i missed you so ;) ok, let's talk sbout the closet sex... YES, PLEASE! i thought that it was awesome sauce, and wouldn't mind more "throw her up against the wall, and rip her panties" sex. and just for the sake of saying it... i threw up alittle in my mouth when i thought that the puppy lovin' was gonna go down. *wipes brow* and i'm diggin that Eddie is finally stepping up and admitting his feelings, it's kinds refreshing, since they are usually so incredibly selfish and immature. lol. i can't wait to hear his POV. don't go away for so long anymore, Sweets, it was breaking my heart!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Team Edward here........loved it....Jacob finally decided he does love his girlfriend and couldn't do that to her.......but him and Bella are just gonna be friends like they always were meant to be just friends and Edward finally step up to the plate and laid it out for Bella how he felt and he just wants them to be and I loved it.........I was getting so pissed off at Jacob when he kept up with her leaving town cuz i don't want her to leave town without making up with Edward. So anyways as long as the mutt leaves them alone they can go off and work this out between them........loved it.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
Bella, you are one evil bitch. I love The Boots. What guy is honestly going to be able to resist a professional deep-throater like that?!
I can't wait for Eddie's revenge.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
he cracked and i think i may have fell for him a little bit more than i should...
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I really think Bella should leave town, she has nothing to lose and no reason to stay, until now... but then again, Edward wants to get the hell out too, so maybe there is a way. Fuck them all.
She is so much better than any of them, and so is Edward, they just got caught up in this clusterfuck.
They are so scare having these feeling for each other, can't wait to see how they're gonna manage to be in a relationship or whatever the hell it is they're gonna be in.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
YES YES AND YES!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally they realize they belong together. Now if they can just work things out and stay together. I almost think Jacob is worth something for not screwing Bella. HE almost deserves to live. (NOT!) Please update soon and keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
I'm glad Eddie could show a little shame at his sexcapades with Skanky Stanley.
OMG, after that stunt I don't know if Crowley would even be able to look at Bella again. He just doesn't seem like the exhibitionist type.
I love that Edward left Bella hanging at the end. Can't wait to see her revenge for that stunt.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Great chapter. Missed this story. I'm so glad Edward finally decided to be a man.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
ROFL! OMG, neither of them seem to be having luck getting off at that party. Honestly, I was surprised Edward didn't get bitchy with Rose for getting off and leaving him hanging.
*snort* Fumbling Newton is too funny. I can totally see him not knowing what the hell to do.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Okay, Edward, WTF? You'll stick it in skanky Stanley without wrapping it up but you keep blowing Bella off. Can't wait to find out more from dear Eddie to see if he really did screw Bella at that party and what he really thinks of her.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Brilliant chapter. Thank you for sharing. You rock so much.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Hey great to see you back love the new chapter
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
huh? Jacob who? was he even in the story? man your Edward is so fucking intense and sexy as hell.......i'm still dizzy from that club closet sex!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I'm so glad you're back from the land of the lost! Great chapter and I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Oh my god!!!!! I so powerfully want that they were together!!!!! This tale keeps me in full voltage and me constantly to want else!! Thank you for new chapter!!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
omg finally ur not dead anymore
resurection!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
phew!
it's great to see you again, and a KiLLER update after the break. i was... needless to say, dying for an update!
i loved it. vulnerability, feelings, realizations, incredibly bravery. plus hot sex. i bow at your feet!