[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
awesome..can't wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
This helped immensely with Edward's character development. The conversation with Carlise made me realize just how much was role modeled to him.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
omg please let it be edward's peen next chapter! =)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Awesome chapter, so good to have EPOV. While I love Eddie, definitely would like a little Jacobian for a change and while E is on the denial river he might end up sailing with jealousy. Whenever the next chapter comes along, I know it will be worth the wait. It's terrible when life cuts into your fun stuff, but what can you do.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
awesome, i loved that chap. hope all is well and you can update asap. love your story!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
Ah yes this is truly an awesome fucking story!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Great chapter. I'm guessing since it won't be Edward's peen- I guess it will have to be Jacob. LOL With these two it makes me want to yell and scream at my computer and maybe throw it against the wall. UGH!!! Why do they have to be so stupid and not see that they are in love with each other. I know build up and I love it, by the way.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
thank you for updating finally
cant wait for bella's date!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
oh baby, that was the funniest fucking Emmett-ism i've heard in along time! tears... ok, totally laughing my ass off. and thank god for that, because i want to beat dumb ass Eddie to a bloody fucking pulp. like now. he really needs a shrink, bb. maybe lcy will let him see Dr. Banner. his idiocy is fan-fucking-tastic. but, then again so is Swan's... they totally deserve eachother. can they just sit and talk like normal human people for once in their sex tainted lives...PUHLEASE??? and can they do it without any jacobian fucking? i'm not sure i will be able to stomach the Amarok inside my Bella. ugh. and why are jasper and bitch ass alice not telling him how upset B was? i mean, i get it. she's not your normal chicklet... but she gave him everything that night, no? *le sigh* *slams head against desk* thanks for the update... must go ponder the dumb ass and the ice queens future. i heart you hard baby, and hope that RL eases up for you soon.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Fuck, please don't let it be Jacob's peen; I hate that fucker!!!!
I am 100% Team DenialWard all the way!!!!
LOL
I love this story HARD!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I couldn't have said it better, fucking men! Thanks for Edward's POV. It is nice to know what he is thinking when his head is up his ass.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
I love this story. I hope everthing goes well for you in RL and things settle down so you can get back to enjoying writing this which is almost as much as we enjoy reading it.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Knowing how our girl flies it's probs gonna be Edward, Jacob AND stranger peen. All in one night..........But hey I'm assuming she's emotionally raw - she'll probably angle for Jacob and Edward will intervene! They'll end up at the same place at the same time! A huge meteor will hit our planet Earth leaving Edward and Bella alone together in a giant crater and THEN they'll have to figure out their relationship.
Pissing-in-my-pants rating for your A/N today? A seven out of ten. I challenge you to do better :P
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Please tell me they get together next chapter...after bella kicks edwards ass for being a stupid baby and bailing on her ofcourse lol! Please dont take too long to update!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
WOW! Great chapter. Really raw emotions from Edward. Ahh, but when will these boys learn...I hope he is only trying to fool himslef b/c he sure as hell isn't fooling anybody else!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Talk about denial!!
This is going to get ugly.
Thankgod for Jazz and Alice,hopefully they will make them see sense.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Okay so I read this first at 1 o'clock this morning on twilighted and was bummed that there wasn't any confrontation or a territorial Edward breaking up Bella's date or maybe a lemon or two...but now that I've re-read it in the daylight :) I liked it much, much more. (Of course, I'm a huge fan of your writing no matter what!!) I still want to smack him for walking out on her but I also get why he did it, having never really had more than one night stands. Loving that Jasper is totally into Alice and makes no apology for it. Can't wait to see how Edward handles having a woman living in his house! Hope Carlisle is sensitive to him, having literally dropped it on him without warning. Can't wait to read about Bella's date.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
men and denial.. hahah
can't wait for the next chapter.. i really hope that its edward. ughhh don't be jacob!
.. and hope everything in your RL gets straightened out! :)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm betting on edward, she might get close to jacob but I don't think she'll acutally do anything, ooo or edward could interrupt.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Wow so is Carlisle going to act like a proper father now? Because I think he may be slightly too late. What with Edward being fucked up and all. And really he did do a complete 180 on him with no warning.
I'm betting Edward. But only 'cause I don't want to read about anyone else's peen.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Wow..............Edward probably feels like he entered the "Twilight" Zone, for sure! (No pun intended) ;) First his father and now Jasper coupled up.
I did really like the fact that he realized he wanted to get back to Bella and made it back in record time. Such a shame it was a little too little, too late.
I'm guessing Edward is going to run into Bella and Jacob tonight and things are going to get mighty interesting. Can't wait til your next update. Hope RL eases up on you, Hon!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I love your story!
I'd like to know what will happen next ... I'm waiting!
Good luck!;)))
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
A remorseful Edward? Who would have thought possible in this story. I'm anxious to see how the date with Jacob plays out for Bella. Great story!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I hope its Eddie she gets xD
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
poor bella.......
eddie's an idiot...of course he didnt exactly have a great role model.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
umm Edward, defensive much? just admit you really like Bella already! lol great chapter. i'm glad Edward realized he was being a douche by leaving her by herself. can't wait to read more!!
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Well now, that was very interesting -- I figured our boy had his head up his ass when he took off. But if he had not done that, then again, this story would have HEA and we couldn't have that now, could we? Particularly when there was all kinds of angsty fuckery yet to be had! Hells to the no to that. I loved the line about the stop, drop and roll -- I snorted at that. I enjoyed Edward jumping on Emmett faster than a duck on on a june bug for talking shit about his new significant other. Edward's world has just shifted on its axis bigtime with all the new coupledom. His head is so far up his butt that emo boy is gonna require an enema to get regular again. I believe our Bella is gonna do what any other self-respecting dick magnet would do -- she's gonna ride Mr. Right Now until Mr. Right gets his shit straightened out. As an aside, RL sucks bigtime sometimes -- wishing you all the best while you weather the storm.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Wow - i'm a little frazzled. Edward is all over the joint. I hope he works out everything soon. I can just see Saturday night ending in disaster!
Thanks for the update. I eagerly await your next installment...
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Great chapter. Please don't let it be Jacob. I am soooo not cool with that. She needs Edward and vice versa...they both need an epiphany and to get their heads out of their asses!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
update soon please!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Dear Kiki:
you know i love this story -- i've told you many times. Rock on!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Ok - it's been weeks now since our little Edward ditched Bella "the morning after"....I've convinced myself that a really long chapter must coming next. Put me out of my misery and update Ms Kiki :)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
please update!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2010 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
hot hot hot
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Jake is so cute! Ed and Bella are so hot !
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
thank God and the writer
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
so hooooooooot
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
so f..ing hooooooooooooot!!!!!!!! I loved the shot on Jacob ... OMG! aND bELLA´S lap dance/lesson how to get her off was pricelesss
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
priceless and funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
so funny
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Ed is hot always
Date: 19 Feb 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Oh i really liked reading what was really going on with Jasper...and i loved that Jasper used Alices line when he was talking to Edward in a earlier chapter.about once u been bitten really good chapter...........
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Oh god when i thougth i couldn't feel more sorry for Bella i do.. she had to do the wake of shame the next morning and to make it worse Carlise and his lady friend just couldn't let her leave... and then to find out Alice knew what happened and chose to hang out with Jasper and not even call Bella first to make sure she was ok.. Ya i think this time Bella has every right to be pissed at Edward and at Jasper and Alice...... and now Bella feels she has no one.. that's sad........
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I am LOVING this story!! I am so anxious to find out where the heck Edward went after he left Bella! I'm also interested to see how Bella acts on the date!! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Love this story, SUCH an unusual take! Like the Alice and Jasper but can't wait to get back to B and E. And you write something so funny every chapter - like Mike Newton thinking Hogwarts is a real school - howling! Really excited to keep reading
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
OMG i loved it i just loved it he was so sweet to her and then they made love and then cuddled after wards... and we found out about the night they were together before.. and she told him everything and he never told anyone.. I love it.. best chapter so far.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
oh man i forgot about her stupid date with Jacob. i'm really glad you wrote Alice's POV. that stinks that she has to pretend to be something she's not. at least now she doesn't have to pretend anymore with Jasper. really great chapter, update soon!!!
Kristi
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
OMG that was a very heartfelt chapter well at least the part with Jasper and Bella.. i like her like this why can't she be more like this... And then her mother OMFG....... where the hell were Jasper and Alice poor Bella.. thank god Edward came and helped her how the heck did her mom find out about the party?? I wonder if Rose called her or something to get back at Bella for always giving her shit.. I don't that was a really sad chapter i feel so bad for her.And where the heck was her step dad..
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
WRITE FASTER!!!!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Read through your story in a day, and proceeded to dream about it. (very few stories have done that to me, trust me. You're good)
Poor Bella, I so want to kick Edward's ass right now..no excuse will cut it, I think..Please update soon!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
what a sweetheart
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
Poor Edward. Bella is all giggly over Jacob, and all he sees is her.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
I don't care if Bella and Jacob get together. As long as Edward gets someone nice too. I'm a nice person... I want everyone to get a happy ending, lol.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
I love how Bella is ALL OVER Jacob. And then freaks out when Edward is with another girl.
These two BOTH need to get knocked off their pedestals, lol.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
Lol, Bella is such a hypocrite. She's a whore... and a cocky, arrogant whore at that. Jasper is right. She really is the female version of Edward! Maybe even worse. It seems like she has gotten, or tried to get with more people so far in this story than Edward has. And talks just as much smack about how awesome she is, as Edward does.
Good times, lol.
I'm really liking this story. I just hope it doesn't end up like all the other stories like this, the ones where Bella and Edward are both sluts and full of themselves. Bella always has the upper hand... Bella always wins in the end... and even though Bella is just as bad, if not worse, than Edward, she gets played out like some martyr. They are both pretty bad. So I hope neither of them gets too glorified.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
great story so far, i just found it last night & couldn't put it down. i really want to know what's going on in edwards head after the last chapter... a & j's story was adorable. i'm happy they finally realized what's good for them. now only if bella and edward could... i'm not a jacob fan at all, but i am curious about their upcoming date. i hope it tanks, hahah.
can't wait for the next update! :)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
wheres the next chapter???? please write another........ and what happens with edward??? he just left like that??? please write another one...........
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
So, it's your fault I'm tired and my eyes hurt this morning...I stayed up way too late last night reading this story! I just couldn't stop, loving it! Please, tell me Edward had a good reason for leaving Bella alone in his room. He had to know it was just like the last time. I'm really saddened that he did that. But it was nice how cool Carlisle and Esme were to Bella, by the way, who is Esme? The contact of Carlisle's in Ohio? Oh Bella, don't be a fool on this date. But she's hurt and confused and feels like everyone has abandoned her, so I'm expecting some prime acting-out behavior. Thanks for posting your story here, I'm new to this site (stupid ff.net), but I'm thinking it's about to get a lot more popular. :)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
Ok so he was jealous but she liked it... and then when he said sorry about that and she could go she got upset because she liked the fact that it bothered him so she was thinking he liked her for more then just a fuck (which i think he does ) but now she doesn't know that and by saying he doesn't care she got her feelings hurt , right??? Anyways god stupid mutt boy gets all in Edwards face hello girlfriend go run back to her u pig.. what gonna fuck Bella out of his system then go back and play the good boyfriend...... i thought he was different i actually fault sorry for the nasty mutt for a minute.. anyways can't wait to read the next chapter........Controlling Edward is very sexy he started to get controlling needs to get a bit my controlling.. make her scream. only him...lmao... anyways loved the biting ....... very sexy...i love to bite and get bitten too...lol
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
OH NO NOT the stupid mutt come on, god why does she have to be like that.. just encourage him to work things out with his girlfriend.. she doesn't like him she just wants to fuck him and taste him and all the other shit she does... SO ruin a good relationship he has with Nessie so she can bang him.. god she is so damn mean and nasty......Plus I just don't like Jacob but in this case he is just to good for her....... UGH i want him gone..........(Jacob) come on Edward step your game up and Fuck Jacob out of her brain...........
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Oooh such a great start... excited to see where you take this (even if the mental images of Bella+Emmett/ Edward+Rose are a tad too much for my E+B die hard heart to take!)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I am so happy that Alice and Jasper have gotten a happily ever after and have finally found each other. The chapter was beautifully sweet.
But i am still so nervous about what is going on between Bella and Edward (although i do wish that Bella could stop being self-absorbed for 2 seconds, and be happy for A&J). I am anxiously anticipating your next installment...
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I can't believe Edward left. De ja vu?
And yah for Jasper and Alice!
Still want to hear Edward's POV!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
I have been waiting since chapter one for Edward to call Bella by her first name, knowing that it would be a turning point...but i completely missed it! It wasn't until Bella mentioned it in her POV that i realised it had happened!
Big changes in this chapter. I am very curious to see what Edward is thinking right now, and to know what is going to happen the next morning. GREAT CHAPTER!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Poor Bella - i just felt so terrible for her in this chapter. And how sweet of Edward to come to her rescue. It kind of reminded me of something i read in a previous chapter that Edward somehow knew about Renee - i wonder how?
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
I think Bella is winning at this stage. She seems to really be getting into Edward's head. I am really loving EPOV at the moment.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
I am really starting to love Edward and Bella together...and i don't mean 'together together'. I mean just the daily interactions and the talking. I think Edward's perspective of the world will be good for Bella, and likewise for Edward.
I am glad to see Jacob come back into play, because, quite frankly, who can resist the muscles? But i also think he is an important character for Bella to see what the real world is like, with morals etc, and to help her see that she can avoid the path her mother took. I am a little confused though - didn't Edward and Bella agree they would be exclusive til Monday? And now Bella is going on a date on Saturday?
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Totally just realized I already read this. Blaahh.
Can you do me a favor? Can you PM me when you upload the next chapter, on fanfiction?
Just so I can be sure I get it.
User name : Janiceelynn
Thanks :)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
So... I still didn't find out how to get notifications. You've udated twice since, and I'd never even know about it if I didn't decide to take a gander through the stories on here for once. Jeeeesh, lol
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
Have i told you yet how good your lemon writing skills are. If i have neglected to do so until this point i will rectify that right now and tell you they are brilliant steamy goodness.
I love how you are portraying Edward and Bella, and i really like the new terms to the bet. I think the next 4 days are going to be extremely interesting, and i am going to carry around a spare pair of panties with me.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
Lol...i love Emmett. Absolutely hilarious. I love how he cried about Rosalie, but was back to his old ways later at the party. And the comment about the numb tongue...gold!
So, i'm guessing Jasper and Alice have developed some real feelings for one another, because they are both acting strangely. Am interested to know when more of all this strangeness will be revealed.
And Edward and Bella - they are still so confusing. It's so hard to keep up with what is going on in each of their heads...but i love it!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
That was damn hot...that's really all i can say!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
How sweet is Jacob? And i like that Bella's morals came into play in this chapter. Jacob isn't from Forks, so there is probably more meaning and commitment in the relationship he is in. But maybe this will mean that Bella will be able to have a 'guy' friend with no physical aspect at all?
And who is this girl that Edward was smiling at? He is really throwing me for a loop at the moment. I can't work out what his deal is.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
Finally, and in the Lambo no less...impressive. And did i sense a moment of vulnerability from Edward there? Calling her beautiful and perfect? Those descriptions don't seem to fit with the Edward we have come to know throughout this story! I am really liking where you are taking this plotline though. Stories that are based around a bet are always pure gold!
And what is going on between Jasper and Alice...curiouser and curiouser!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
That is so mean...i wanted some hot sweaty sauna action :(
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Okay I'm here!!! I need a teaser for the next chapter if I may add ;)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
Oh - I feel so utterly disappointed for Bella and Edward not getting their releases in this chapter. Hopefully the next one will be more successful for them!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
I'm afraid to think what sort of diseases are floating around Forks with all this sexing! Curious as to what will happen at the party. On to read the next chapter.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
Loved it.. this was a really good chapter........... and the end too good... now it's just the two of them for four days oh this just got a lot more interesting...On to the next chapter.......
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Ohh i'm liking this story so far. I am sensing a steamy hot story here and i can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
Oh i loved this chapter and I'm actually happy Edward won this round... Bella's attiutude and behavior kind of puts me off ....... I don't know.. i'm glad Jasper wasn't stupid enough to fall for her trick....... and the 69 was umm very good to read.......enjoyed a lot... but i think Bella really needs to relax knock off the pissed off attitude, being so slutty and take a note from Edward and play it cool (even if he isn't really) and she will have better results with him........ can't wait to read more.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I'm so glad Alice is making Jasper a better man. Now, how will she get his whoring ways to stop? Can't wait to read more and see what happens now. Love it!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I love your story, you're so talented. I can't wait to read more. Thankyou for writing.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I love your story, you're so talented. I can't wait to read more. Thankyou for writing.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I love your story, you're so talented. I can't wait to read more. Thankyou for writing.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
I just realised you responded to me.........yes you did cockblock us......... you know what happens to cock blockers don't you? *lights up fiery torch and picks up pitch fork*
Joking! I was clearly typing so fast that I didn't realise I had put "eyesballs" ah well - that's just what your writing does to me! Anyways, get back to your cockblocking ways madame and I shall catch u on the next chapter!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
brilliant!
Author's Response:
Um...hello new crush! Your comments are making my monday, seriously- ILU! I'm so pleased you like this little fic xx
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
Great!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
the whole Dirty in the title works for me! Perfect.........
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
I have to say I love emmett and Rose in this.. it cracks me up!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
love the story it is so......... fucking good
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
great chapter!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
:) - sorry just want your reviews to go up but no idea what to say anymore!
you know I am enjoying it!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
I didn't know what to expect when reading this.. but I have loved the story so far..
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
thanks for bringing BDR over here it is a brilliant story I am really enjoying it I am going back to review the other chapters now!
Loved it.. can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
oh it started in New York............... nice........
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
ha ha ha ha I love the little sex education in your a/n.. I might try that instead of condoms!! freaking brilliant
great chapter.. loved it......