[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
he got his
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
poor ed he makes me soo sad!! at least one thing he did turned out well. her and bella!!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
Karma does come back when u least expect it! Update soon!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
:)
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
I cant believe this story is almost over. I am really dissapointed that we only got one lemon in the whole story. I know it was hard because of her situation but still, they should have had more than just one. It was an amazing story though.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
Wow. I'm glad they caught the others that were involved. I'm also glad that it wa someone else who tortured and killed him. And the fact that he was tortured before being killed.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 34 Karma Police
im glad that everything is starting to work out for them ! looking foward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Aug 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
i so hope they get out of there before Roy finds them...
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love on this story! I'm glad you like it :)
Katie
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
knew it and those guys are still after him!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
well that is progressing... i still feel something bad is going to happen
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
there is going to be trouble i can feel it!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
oh the drama is going to rev up again!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
how sweet i am glad they got a break from the drama!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
again i love ed he is a sweet guy!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
oh boy the drama is thick!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
oh boy not cool i think charlie is going to be a piece of work! stay cool ed!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now
agin ed is sweet and i like him a lot!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
Hi
Great story! Looking forward to the next update. Hi from Aust
Penny
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 Crossfire
ed is soo sweet! love him!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour
oh boy here goes!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
poor ed... i know bella has been through a lot but ed doesn't feel good enough...
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
i hope they are on the road to happiness... ed is going to go through a lot though.. he is so insecure
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
yeah ed way to go!!!1
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
oh ed get your crap together!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
it's carlisle!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
oh boy can't wait to see how it is going to go. I am sure they are going to run into the cullens!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
ed is sooo sweet.. poor bells
Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
poor bella! how terrible. i love your ed by the way!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me
yeah it's about time!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
jacob is really messed up!! glad things seemed to improve for ed and bell
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
Glad Charlie was there to rein in the cops.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5 Spies
oh boy... what a rotten life. again i hope happiness find them
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
again i hope things improve.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
this is so sad i hope you let them find some happiness
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
two lost souls... so sad
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
wow ed that really sucks!!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
well i hope that they catch him fast becuse i dont know how much more they can handle
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
there seems to be such much more than just 2 chapters, but we will see
Date: 08 Aug 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
Oh this is so great. I am hoping that the douche bag will be caught at one of the borders. Love the way everyone is warming up to Edward, who really deserves it.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
His body and mind finely had enough now maybe he can heal also. Where is the scum sucking creepy bastard hiding???? Poor Alice she feel so much to blame.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
:)
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
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Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 33 Worker Bees
I'm so glad your updating more frequently.
Dumb cops. bleh.
Date: 05 Aug 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
OMG! Please post the next chapter soon!!! I'm DYING to know what happens next. This is getting intense!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
catch the soab, Edward!!!! Alice, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease call Charlie!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
I didn't see this coming! I was shocked! What a great chapter. I'm waiting patiently for the next one!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
oh my damn!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
well i hope that they can catch him ...
Date: 02 Aug 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
HOLY JESUS! this chapter was amazing! i just knew as soon as Edward started feeling suspicious that it was Alec! Oh i cant wait for the next chapter I need to know what happens!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
run Edward run hopefully him and Edward will kick his ass before the police get there
Date: 01 Aug 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
loved the chapter. loved edward punching alec he really had it coming. cant wait to see what happens next.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
Eeeeeeep!!!!! Update soon!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
Holly Shit he cant get away.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
holy crap!!!!!!!! i can't wait a week!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
awww man. alice brings the shit storm to bella. crap crap crap.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
Wow, I didn't expect this. I certainly hope they catch him.
Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
That was a great chapter I think Edward sees his future for the first time. So great about Jake such a great thing that Charlie has done for him. I am worried about who Alice is date I have a bad feeling about him.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
well it seems things are coming along. i am glad jake is getting the help he needs and that charlie is helping out. love it
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
Great chapter. I loved the part where Seth is playing cars with Edward and he lets him. Cute.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
This chapter was awesome. Glad they are making progress.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
loved the chapter. cant wait to see what happens next.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
Aww i'm glad they made it back to the Cullens in one piece.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
I really liked this chapter. I liked seeing Edward interact with Seth and Charlie. Yah for Charlie for really getting Jake help. Great chapter, can't wait to read more!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
what a happy chapter!!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
glad taht in the end they are with family!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
great chapter. Glad they are home safe and sound....although you had me worried with that chapter title.
Date: 10 Jul 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
i love this story!!! the story line is amazing and your writing is out of this world :) keep up the wonderful work! i cant wait for more and to find out what happen when they get back to washington!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
I am really getting into this story, and it breaks my heart to think how accurate this story just might be...
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
Well, I have to go on to the next chapter! I especially like your integration of Sam and Jacob as 2 personalities in one. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 04 Jul 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
Hurrah!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
I was so glad to read that Bella got over some of her demons. Thanks goodness Edward wants to leave his past behind and start new.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
WHAT A GREAT, GREAT, ABSOLUTELY GREAT CHAPTER. It is about time and I am so happy that everything is working out for them.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
I am so happy they finely got to this point of trust and love. Bella has came along way and Edward I think is finding peace in his mind and heart it is something they needed each other to find.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
awww they are so cute together.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
im excited they took it to the next level and im excited for them to go back home
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
beautiful and sweet
Date: 28 Jun 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
I enjoyed the chap - they have grown together.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 30 Dancing
Great chapter...it was sweet that Bella wrote the letter to Edwrad's mom. Can't wait for an update!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
It was nice to hear about Lucy, that was a wonderful touch. Loved that he has his grandparents rings.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
I think even Edward can only take so much before he snaps.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
Aww I'm so glad that these two are starting to get theirs lives back together. I'm still worried about the guys that are looking after Edward though :/ If everything's been going good so far, you know that something bad is just around the corner...
Great story though, love it! :)
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
What a beautiful chapter. Hopefully, everything will fall into place with the both of them.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
I am so glad they did not run into trouble in Portland. They have been through enough. Bella is great support for Edward as he is for her. It just makes your heart sing.
Can't wait to see what Forks brings them. Luck and Love I hope.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
WELL DONE
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
omg that was awesome i am so ready for them to move forward together they deserve it keep it coming i await the next chapter you are a great writer they need to be able to be more normal and couply
Date: 19 Jun 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
I liekd this chapter. I'm gla dyou had Bella by his side. Also, loved the part about his mother's nexklace and his grandparent's rings. That was sweet. h and I like how we (and Edward too) have closure on Lucy.
Great chapter.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
That was amazing how wonderful to put things at ease he has worried so long about things he didnt need to. That was so great that he is getting so much of his info and the rings so cool.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
im glad that she was there for him this time !
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
wonderful chapter. Glad Shelley saved that stuff for him
Date: 15 Jun 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
i love thi story;)
Date: 10 Jun 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
oh... thanks for the update, i totally wanted to give Edward a knuckle sandwich because he yelled at bella but he's on the up and up and really feels like shit for yelling so that's cool. I'll let him slide for now.
I like that Charlie is trying to help. That's cool. :D
Thanks for the update can't wait for the next. Until next time.
Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
I've stayed up till 3am reading this and then carried on as soon as i woke up today. I love this story, the way your write the characters and how all their reactions are consistant throughout with the minor changes as they develop. It's truly amazing and i thoroughly can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 09 Jun 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
I am glad you are ok I hope you didnt get hurt bad in the wreck. It sounds like the rest of your life has been crazy I was just so happy to hear from you Thanks. I am glad that Charlie is helping out with Jake he is trying to prove that he can be there for them.??? What is Roy's problem and please dont let him find them.??? cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
Wow charlie stepping up to help. cooolll
Date: 09 Jun 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
Great chapter. Sorry all of those bad things happened to you in real life, but really appreciate the update. Take care.
Date: 08 Jun 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
I love it!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
I love it. Please keep Edward safe and free of other bad things