Date: 07 Jun 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
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[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 28 The Best of You
Welcome back I have missed you and them
Date: 20 Apr 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
AWK! Poor Ms. E. Wow... *blinks* poor Crazy Jake. I hope Roy doesn't find them.
Thanks or the update, cant wait for the next.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2011 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
Damn poor Mrs. E and Jake he really needs help. I'm glad Bella stayed in the room and I hope no one followed Edward back to the hotel. I really hope Ben didn't rat out Edward to Roy and the idiot crew. Until next time I loved it even though I was on edge.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
loved this chapter. Thanks for the update. I cant ubelieve Jake stabbed her and I wish Edward would just get Bella and leave.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
They need to get back to Forks after seeing Mrs E. I hope they dont run into Roy and Jake needs help maybe he is in the right spot
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
I really hope that Bella and Edward don't run into any trouble on this trip.
Best Part:
I don't have to live like this anymore and don't want to. I've been resisting every chance for help from the Cullens due to my pride. I don't want a handout but at this moment I take it for what it is - luck. I'm damn lucky to be in the position I've found myself in and finally see it. I'm being offered the chance I've been fighting for, for years, and while it hasn't come the way I thought it would, it's still come. I determine that when I get back to Forks, I'll go with this new perspective. I've been given a chance that the majority of these people will never get a taste of; I won't waste it.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
Poor Mrs E., at least she is alive still. Jake really needs help but Edward cant mess up what he and Bella have in order to help Jake.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
loved the chapter. poor jacob really needs help. this is the first story where i actually felt sorry for him. cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
well i hope she dosent take it the wrong way ! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
:)
Date: 08 Apr 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
Oh sad chapter. Hope things get better.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
omg please keep them two safe and get them out of there i dont want them hurt especially since they are making progress together i am so scared i await the next chapter you are a great writer
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
excellent job hurry back soon
Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
I wish he would get his things and go. Mrs E will be fine. The best thing they can do is stay away for their sake and everyone elses. OR the paperwork online.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 27 Chop Suey
awww poor ms E.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
YAY BELLA'S COMING OUT OF HER SHELL!!!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
Big steps for both of them. I hope it all doesnt turn to shit for them know. They trust and love each other so much.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
They are just so good for each other. Maybe by the time Edward has grey hair they may be able to go all the way. Love the chapter and the entire story.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
WOW THAT WAS A BIG STEP FOR BELLA TO TOUCH EDWARD LIKE THAT AND GET HIM OFF AS WELL, I'M WONDERING WHAT HAPPENS IN THE MORNING I HOPE IT'S NOT TO BAD. I WILL BE WAITING TO READ MORE OF THIS STORY I LIKE IT SO MUCH
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
O no when are they going to catch a break. Of course something bad in going to happen in the morning. I hope it has nothing to do with what they just did together.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
well im excited to see this other side of her! cant wait to see what happens while they are there
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
:)
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
I was so ready to write "Oh yes!" but then you had to throw in that last sentence and change it to "oh no!"
Teasing- I enjoy the journey even when it's hard. So glad they were able to take that step together, and I hope whatever the morning brings they face it together.
I also loved the way you played the way Edward backed off from physical contact in the books into this situation.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
It was an awesome chapter! It's good to have you back!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
i loved it as usual. yay they had a very steamy and initmate moment and they deserved it. omg i know the shit is gonna hit the fan next chapter and i canit wait. i read and reviewed on my cell so that is serious how much i love this fic. keep up the excellent work. until next time.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
great chapter. he is so good with her.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
welcome back great chapter
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 26 The Only Exception
I hope when he awakes - it is the a healthy bella.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
I really love how Edwrd is progressing. He is accapting help and letting people through his walls. I still say this is one of the best stories on the net. Keep it coming.
Marguerite
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Ok first off sorry this review is so late but RL has a way of kisking your ass when you least expect it. As for this chapter it made me smile. She is making tremndous progress and it shows. I alre very much like how Edward feels like he has a family and the lock picking was hilarious. Judas????? I wonder if he will go back to portland alone? Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 09 Feb 2011 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
Love it! Your story has kept me up way past my bedtime!
Date: 09 Feb 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
Loving this story!
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
I loved it as usual. Until next time. Aw their first fight it was so real and I love Alice and Seth.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
I WOULD HOPE THERE TRIP WILL GO OFF WITHOUT ANY TROUBLE BUT I'LL BET THERE IS SOME TROUBLE THERE WAITING FOR THEM TO FIND IT, IT'S JUST THE WAY LIFE GOES ISN'T IT? I HOPE EDWARD AND BELLA GET BACK TO THE CULLEN'S WITHOUT EATHER OF THEM GETTING HURT. I REALLY ENJOY READING THIS STORY AND AM ALREADY WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER UNTIL THEN HAPPY WRITING.
Date: 02 Feb 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
Happy to see you have updated, keep up the good work.
Date: 02 Feb 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
Their first fight. Hmmmm. Loved the outcome and I am glad she is going with him even though I wanted her to stay. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
I was so excited to see an update from you. Your updates might be far apart in time but they are definitley worth it. I loved this chapter. Thanks for the update and I am sooo excited for the next chapter of them in Portland.
Date: 01 Feb 2011 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
To bad they had to have the fight but I am glad they were able to work it out. I dont think either one would survie very well without the other. I hope things go well in Portland,
Date: 01 Feb 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
I love hte compromise. They can speed a birth certificate and SSN to you. I hope this does not have a sad ending. This has all the earmarks of it - I fear. It would be nice if Edward woudl get a GED and later at least an associate degree.
I do enjoy the story - I just an not a sad ending type.
Date: 01 Feb 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
I'm glad their fight didn't last long, and although she is going with him i think he is right to be concerned for her safety.
Carlisle and Esme are wonderful, i love that they are so caring to both of them specially Edward when he isn't really part of their family.
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
omg please keep my couple safe till they get back and can start their life together let his walls come down and hers and let them finally have their passionate night together
Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
Oh, the first fight! Glad they worked it out so quickly. The Seth thing was hilarious!
I hope everything goes smoothly on their trip, but even if it does, I know it will be emotional.
Will check out the new story soon!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
Wonderful compromising!!!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
glad they talked and worked it out. Too bad someone couldnt go with them.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
im glad that he didnt make the choice for her ! keep the updates comming
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
seems like it has been forever, but I enjoyed this chapter, please hurry back
Date: 31 Jan 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
I hope nothing happens to them while their in Portland. They deserve to be happy.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
Good chapter. I am glad that Edward is letting Carlisle and Esme help them.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
:)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 25 Delicate
great chapeter as always. cant wait to see what happens in portland, hopefully nothing too bad.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Pls continue soon!!! Pls continue i really want to know what happends next!!! So pls continue soon!!! Good luck with school and i hope u can updat a few more chapters soon!!! BIG FAN!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
i want to say that i love the story so much, that i think i fell in loce with it.LOLz. also this was the kind of story i was hoping to find .it made me cry when they said there story.also pleaze updated soon cant bear not knowing wat happen next and may u have a happy new year
Date: 30 Dec 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
I understand why towards the end he is having second thoughts, he just wants her to be safe! Hopefully she doesn't wig out... :) love the update, your story is awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
You have got to know that Edward and (only) a big red bow is all it would take to have a very merry christmas...who need any other presents? Fantastic chapter, I can't help but wonder whats happening with Jake. Is Edward and Bella going to get him help through the tribe at LaPush? Is he in jail or hurt in Portland? I'm really interested in finding out. Im really enjoying the way the relatinship is devloping between Bella and Edward, the redemption and hope in the stroy is downright addictive added the contrast to the profound tragity the story began with. Fantastic writing, amaizing characters that I care about and am hoplessly in love with. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE write more soon, this is one of my all time very favorite fic's. And, as always, thank-you for sharing it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
omg that was so great for them maybe he can call for his copy of birth certificate and not leave bella otherwise you are a great writer i await the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
I love sweetward
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Aw happy holidays to you & your family too! I took a beta break aka sneak reading your chapter. I had to know what these two were up too lol.
I loved it as always here's my long review just kidding okay not really. See around twitter. Until next time.
aw & lol: "I was teaching them how to pick the lock," I say, thinking the situation is hilarious.
Two grown men stumbling and trying to hide what they're doing from their wives. I hear a chorus of names coming from the women, each one scolding their respective partner, and Bella doesn't leave me out. Both men shoot me a look, and Emmett flips me off. I laugh and bring the beer bottle to my lips, only to get it ripped from my grasp.
"No! No beer for you, traitor," Emmett says, mocking hurt and fury all in the same expression, and I about choke I'm laughing so hard. I wonder if this is what it feels like to have a family and if it is... it isn't so bad.
I see Emmett's pickup pulling into the lot when I exit the building.
"What the hell are you laughing at, Judas?" he asks with a smile when I jump in the passenger seat. That's what he calls me now. I've learned not to rat Emmett out; he'll never let you forget it. I also won't tell him that's exactly what I'm laughing about.
omg these guys are so cute & I love their relationship as its growing before my eyes: "Today, Judas... today, is the day you learn to drive," he says with a wicked grin. I have no apprehension and grab his keys. I put the keys in the ignition, and Emmett's hand slaps mine away. I raise an eyebrow at him.
"Now, Edward, there are some basics you need to learn when it comes to operating a motor vehicle," he says in a snobby way. I pretend I'm listening to him, because I'm amused by his act.
"This," he points to the steering wheel, "this, Edward, is a steering wheel. Can you say that? Steer... ring wh... wh... eeel. Can you say that, Edward?"
"Fucker!" I say, punching his arm as hard as I can. I let him play his game a little longer. I'm not going to tell him Carlisle has been giving me lessons for weeks. I go to turn the key again, but he stops me.
"No, seriously. There are some things you need to know before you just drive off."
"Just let me show you what I know," I say rolling my eyes. I turn it on and smoothly pull out of the parking lot.
He looks at me with his mouth open. "I thought you'd never driven before?"
I laugh at his disappointed expression. "I hadn't... until your dad taught me," I smirked.
"Shit," he sighs, sitting back in his chair. Disappointment paints his face. I just laugh as I drive us to the store.
I love that Edward is a guys guy if that makes sense: "So what's the deal?" he asks, as I push the little cart around the store trying to find all the shit on Bella's list.
lol: "Nah, we just don't want her to leave again." I nod to let him know I understand. "My little heart might break if you go, too," he says in a sickly southern accent.
"Well, we can't have that, can we?" I laugh.
lol: "Yeah, I won't have you start training for three weeks or so; it's not rocket science. You just need to get your license before you start."
"Uh... Thanks, Emmett," I say sincerely.
"Not a prob, Judas. You'll basically be my bitch," he says with a big grin as he walks down an aisle getting distracted by something shiny.
I shake my head, laughing, and make my way to the register, appreciating the surprising friendship I've found in Emmett.
lol: "Uh, I just waited downstairs. I... don't like to go very far." And I guard the door to see whose coming and going like an obsessed stalker - I leave that part out.
aw & lol plus its just cute: I nod, my smile growing to match hers. I'm waiting for her to jump in my arms, but she doesn't.
"What is it?"
"I just... you've made so many sacrifices, Edward. Before I showed up that night you had your own life your own-"
"And it sucked, Bella. My life... sucked before you."
I don't think she grasps that every change has been for the better, even though some of the changes haven't been easy or fun; they've been for the better. I've been resistant and probably have made some things more difficult than they needed to be, but I can't imagine going back to the isolation I lived in before, especially now that I know what it's like to live without it.
A huge smile spreads across her face. "You want to stay, don't you?"
"I do."
Then she's in my arms. I spin her around, and she laughs. I trip over a damn log and almost bring us both to the ground, so I set her down.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
kinda figured they'd go back at least for a little bit.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
I cant believe they are going back. I bet there is another way to get the stuff he needs.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Well here's to a great chapter and hoping that you will get your Christmas wish of Edward delivering a present to you in person. Okay come to think of it, maybe all you need is Edward and forget the present. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
I was hoping that Edward would somehow end up "in therapy"...hell, he needs it as much as Bella does. Hopefully, he will deal with more of his issues and begin to heal too... I worry that he may lose it when he has to go back and get his birth certificate. I really don't think it is a good idea for Bella to go with him. Also, I am glad that Edward is allowing the Cullen's in.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Love this story more and more with each chapter!!!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Thank you for this update. I have been waiting for one and now I can return to my happy place and wait for another update. Loved this chapter. I don't blame him for not wanting her to go there with him but that will just be pure torture for him to make her stay behind. Don't like it nope don't like it one bit, but you said not to freak out so I'm not going to. Can't wait for more :)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
wow, wow, wow.
i cant even begin to tell you how much i love this story
and i love how dependant edward and bella are of each other, i cant wait for them to have mind blowing sex. lol
please dont keep us waiting to long for an update. xx
Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
:)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
im happy that they are staying ! keep the chapters comming
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
okay - I will wait before I freak out, but YOU CAN'T LET HIM LEAVE HER!!!!! maybe Carlisle can take them or something but this is going to be impossible for them. sorry, I just had to get that out there.
This was a great chapter, happy holidays.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
great chapter. i love the relationship that edward is forming with the cullens and his relationship with bella is great too
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Why can't Edward get another copy of his birth certificate? Normal people would pay a fee and get a new copy...
If Edward bails on Bella, I'm done with this story
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Wow! Great chapter! Keep up the good work.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
You can order a birth certificare online - for the cost of postage. Perhaps Portland is needless.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
OH SHIT EDWARD IS GOING TO SCARE BELLA TO DEATH SHE IS GOING TO THINK EDWARD ISN'T COMING BACK TO HER. THEY ARE SO IN LOVE AND ARE VERY GOOD TOGETHER HE COULD SEND FOR HIS BIRTH CERTIFICATE THROUGH THE COURT HOUSE IN THE CITY WHERE HE WAS BORN IN WITHOUT HAVING TO GO THERE, SO WHY DON'T HE DO THAT. AND TO CHECK UP ON JAKE HE SAID WHEN THEY LEFT HE COULD CALL THAT LADY WHAT WAS HER NAME AGAIN AT THE PLACE EDWARD GOT A SACK LUNCH FOR HIMSELF AND THEY GAVE HIM ONE FOR LATER AND HE GAVE IT TO BELLA THAT LADY COULD TELL EDWARD HOW JAKE IS MAYBE EVEN BE ABLE TO CALL AND TALK TO HIM ON THE PHONE. SO THEY DON'T REALLY HAVE TO LEAVE TO GET THE THINGS THEY NEED TO TAKE CARE OF. IT'SS A VERY GOOD STORY AND I HOPE TO BE READING ANOTHER CHAPTER VERY SOON.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
I am so happy things are going well for them and the plan to stay in Forks. They need to talk to the Cullens about needing to go to Portland I am sure they would make a little trip out of it but I am sure Edward wont want that. He cant leave Bella????? He cant go back by himself??? Emmett love him.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
WELL NOW FOR A FIRST DATE IT WAS VERY SWEET AND EVEN THE FOOD HE PICKED OUT WAS GOOD. AT A LAKE THE TOUCHING KISSING ALL GOOD VERY GOOD CHAPTER
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 13 Dec 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
This was such a sweet date. They really did need this getaway. Love the chapter and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 11 Dec 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
ohOHoh hurry!! I can't wait so long again!! I simply love this story, one of the very best fanfiction stories I've ever read. Thank you.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it!!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
AWWWW! Loved how you made the first date!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it!!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Vrey sweet date
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
nice date
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
these two are just too cute
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
hopefully the Cullens are still there and help them
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
poor Bella, but now she has Edward
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Awesome chapter :) cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
nope don't speak italian
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
here's some love, keep going
wha dies the title mean?
Date: 08 Dec 2010 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
I really love reading this fic... :) Really great job!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
That was the most perfect date so sweet it was time for them to feel good. I love the fact that Carlisle is going to teach Edward to drive.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
The pukey bum and cardboard bum really made me laugh... poor Edward...
I'm looking forward to reading ahead, :) very interesting homelessward?
Date: 07 Dec 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
:)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
I love how protective he is over Bella and how sweet and romantic he is trying to be for her. The picnic was a fabulous touch, and this chapter was a nice break from all the previous drama and more drama to come, I am sure :)
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Oh I really liked this. Very sweet how he wanted their first date to be special. He loves her so much. I think that date was what they both needed. Alone time to enjoy each other & to heal. I hope Bella talks to Jessica. She doesn't seem that bad. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it, bb! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
What a sweet date. I love the image of a clueless Edward and Carlisle in the grocery store.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
Go Edward. I really like that nurse that told Charlie off. I feel for Charlie. He does love her but doesn't understand all she went through. He made the effort towards Edward so I hope they can work things out. I also hope they find & execute Alec. Keep up the very amazing work.
Marguerite
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
this is a great chapter - Edward is so proud of his work and Bella is getting better!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
So glad you are back. I can't wait for the next chapter. Loved the picnic, and I love that Edward and Carlisle seem to be bonding a bit.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
What a sweet day they had together. I love that Dr C is willing to teach Edward to drive.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Great chapter
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie