Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Yay! I'm so happy they got to have a carefree experience! I wondered about Jessica in the store- it seemed too good to be true! Awww, I'm kind of sorry you're moving away from day to day- I wanted to read about Edward's driving lessons! I could imagine him gettting frustrated and trying to control himself, or just being so grateful that he was the perfect student! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
What a nice date.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
I loved it. It was so sweet and super funny this was my favorite highlight only because Jessica is trying to sneek her way into Bella's life for the inside scoop: lol yep Jessica ain't receiving no call from Bella she was mean to Alice: "These are so good," she says eating another one. I think about feeding her but push the cheesy thought out of my mind; it's just not us.
"You made these?"
I laugh hard. "No. I bought them at the store. Actually, from your friend, Jessica." Bella's face goes a little white.
"What?"
"Nothing, we were kind of friends in school, but I guess she was really nasty to Alice when she got pregnant."
"Ah, well, she sent home a note for you. She was hoping you'd call her." I let the subject drop, because this isn't what I want to talk about on our date, and I understand loyalty.
If there's anything you learn on the streets, it's loyalty. I respect Bella for sticking by Alice's side.
Until next time.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Edward is so sweet!!
Author's Response:
He is, isn't he!? We could all use an Edward or two in our lives LOL
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
i love the date
they deserved a little happiness without having to worry about anything
i love that edward is going to let carlisle teach him how to drive
loved it
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
welli hope for her sake it gets better and better keep the chapters comming
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
I'M SORRY I WAITED UNTIL NOW TO MAKE ANOTHER REVIEW BUT MAYBE YOU CAN FORGIVE ME WHEN I SAY I WAS AND AM SO INTO YOUR STORY I JUST COULDN'T STOP READING I HAD THE GO ON TO SEE WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT/ I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH THE WAY EDWARD IS THERE FOR BELLA AND THE WAY BELLA TOLD CHARLIE TO GET OUT BECAUSE HE WAS BEING SO MEAN TO EDWARD WAS THE BEST. I AM GLAD CHARLIE SAID HE WAS SORRY TO EDWARD SO NOW MAYBE HE WILL GET A CHANCE TO GET TO KNOW BELLA NOW. I HOPE YOU HAVE ANOTHER CHAPTER UP SOON.
Date: 30 Nov 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
I'M SO GLAD EDWARD IS HELPING BELLA I LIKE YOUR STORY SO FAR SO I'LL GET BACK TO IT AND LET YOU KNOW LATER WWWWWWWWHAT I THINK OF IT IF THATS OK.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
OMG! Charlie sucks. I know i is just the stress ans seriously I would be worried at first too if my daughter came home with someone that had a record like Edwards. I really hope he is sincere about wanting to try.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Of course it was the god damn mall. I knew nothing good could come out of hose places.....lol
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
Bella and Edward are doing so well. I is nice to see them both growing.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now
Seeing Edward and Alice togeher was really nice.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 18 Crossfire
Emmett is great, the big protective older brother. And Seth is amazing, it was so funny, I love his 'bad' word, and how he was tryingto be like Edward.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour
I am so glad that Bella is okay.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
The Cullen's are so great. I am so glad that they are not being too pushy. I don't blame them for not wanting Bella out of their sight.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
Edward is right her mother would be proud.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
Poor poor Bella.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me
Are we finally going to find out. I bet her mother left her with some husband she had no choice but to marry and he was the one that hurt her.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
Just when things are getting better something has to happen to set them back.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 Spies
Poor Bella and Edward. Loving this story, just wishing I had found it earlier.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
Edward is so very sweet. I'm really glad that Bella found such a kind heart
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
Even in this sad world they are till really cute together.... I am really loving this story.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
I'm glad Edward took pity on her.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
Oh shit that sucked...
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
I loved it even though Charlie got me a little heated because he was being so damn rude but it was understandable. Also J. Jenks needs to work on his people skills but now Jasper is in the mix please don't let Alice just fall head over heels with him right at first sight omg that annoys me to no end but anyway I really did enjoy this chapter. Until next time i glad Charlie & Edward's relationship made that turn all for Bella of course she has good guys all around her yes!
Author's Response:
Hey, bb!
I'm glad you liked the chapter!! I already have the entire thing planned out... including Alice and Jasper but don't worry, I'm trying so hard to keep this entire story realistic - including them. The next chapter should be out soon, I hope you like it!!
Katie
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
Glad bella is better so happy they will have their first date. Love this story so MUCH thanks for the update can't wait for the next!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
omg i love you you are a great writer keep it coming i can not wait till the next chapter i love how they are slowly moving forward together and hopefully therapy will bring them even closer to a great hea which i hope is a long way off
Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
Gotta love Edward standing up for Bella against all around him, especially Charlie.
Can't wait for the date!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
Amaizing, and thank you, as always. This story just keeps getting better and better. I love this depiction of Edward more than and of the rest I've read in fanfiction or the origional books, SM could learn a thing or two about character development. PLEASE HURRY! I can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
this was a great chapter - their first date...hmmm sounds good!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
Yay Edward!!!! He handled that much better than I thought he would! Loved Officer Whitlock- I'm guessing he and Alice did some heavy staring during her interview, lol! Can't wait for more!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
So did she really see Alex??? I know you wont answer but I have to ask lol. It is a good thing Charlie pulled his head out of his ass. I loved the nurse she put Charlie in his place.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
I can see Bella getting worse before she gets better.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
great chapter. cant wait for them to go on a real date
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
Great chapter! Love that Bella's reaction to Charlie made him stop being such an ass.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
I am glad to see Charlie realize his behavior was unacceptable.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
So glad you updated. This was an awsome chapter. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
great job
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
I am so proud of Edward in this chapter. He was so mature with dealing with everyone.
I love that Bella stood up to Charlie when he disrespected Edward!
Best Part:
"Mr. Williamson." Her voice is low and calm as to not wake Bella up, but there's no hiding the fury in it. "Is that he brought her home. This young man saved her, and you'd do well to remember that. Another thing you should remember is that this young lady is over eighteen, so you have no parental rights over her. Until she says different, this is her fiancé, and if you don't like it... well, you can just leave."
Flustered, she checks Bella's IV and temperature. She walks over and grabs my free hand placing it on a button on the bed.
"You just push that button, and I'll be right back in here," she promises. "I've talked to Carlisle and most of the town's a buzz. You've done a good thing by her, and don't let anyone tell you different." She gives me a smile, throwing a nasty look Charlie's way she leaves the room.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
well at least charlie apoligised! cant wait to see what happens on their date!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
I was so afraid that that bastard would show up. Hopefully, they will catch him soon, but I have a feeling not before he terrorizes Bella once again. I just love how Edward takes care of her.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 22 Runaway
wow they have been thru so much. i like jasper in this. jenks comes off to harsh. i hope he softens a bit and they both do a good job on the case.
i ma glad bella stuck up for edward. i am thrilled that charlie came around and apoligized to edward for his behavior and hope he gives edward a chance and maybe bella will see if she can salvage her relationship with her dad. looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
aww poor bella!
Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
From the heart of a Social Worker working for Child Protective Services, I am greatful that you had the mindfulness and heart to address this issue, giving, once again, from yourself to others. The story I enjoy, immensely, but the cognizant concern you illustrate is in your commentary, I admire. There are no words, except, again thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your kind reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Katie
Date: 06 Nov 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 18 Crossfire
We all love that Streetward is a gentleman, its exactly why he is so very hot...but, you almost killed me with that whole "but, I'll keep that to myself" bit. It was literally painful, and sort of cruel. However, the story, the amaizing characters, and the heart-breakingly beautiful sentiment, without a doubt, more than makes up for it. So, again, thank you and you own, of course.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour
I will SO hold out for that visit. Streetward (which is funny as hell) can fix my shed, anyday. As always, you own. Again, and again, thank you for the wonderful story and sharing it with me and everyone else.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
I am so glad I'm reading this story late and don't have to wait for updates. This one would have KILLED me. As always, you own me, and thank you.
B.T.W... I LOVE the music quotes at the beginning of each chapter, they are so suiting, and the track list ROCKS.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
All I can say is...Thank you, again.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
You own me (that statment is less compelling after what Ive just read in this chapter, but, none the less true), and I thank you for doing so. Stellar story, Im already afraid to finish it. I do hope you've written more.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
How you have made homeless Edward so blissfully amaizing is so far beyond me. I'm already finding myself emotionally attached to these characters. Your story, so far, is excellent. Thank You.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
I've read three chapters, and already, I love the story. Good writing, interesting story, and engaging characters, so far... Thanks so much!
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
i'm sure lots of people have said it, but something's wrong with your story. i keep trying to click the "next" button and it's like a blank page with the website layout. it's weird. and, also, there's like 5 chapter 21's listed, but it always goes to the last one. site malfunciton? faulty technology? just wanted to let you know....great story, btw. totally lovin' it:) hope you update super soon and that the site stops being gay.
Author's Response:
Hmm I have no idea what's going on. It's been this way for a while now. I'll email one of the mods and see if they can do anything. In the mean time if you haven't been able to read all the chapters this is over at ff.net too :)
Thanks for letting me know
Katie
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Oh I still do not like Charlie the asshole. He had no reason to talk to Edward like he did. Edward has done more for Bella than he ever has. As for the panic attack, who knows what caused it. It had to be bad if she didn't recognize Edward. Now I hope Charlie stays out of it. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Date: 25 Oct 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Holly shit poor Bella what freaked her out did she see someone from her past ???? I know Charlie is worried about Bella but pull the stick out and lisen to what Edward has done for her.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
awesome....!!!! was totally missing this story!!!!
teaser??? ksoares@circajewels.com
PLEASE :)
Author's Response:
Hey bb
Glad you liked the chapter! I don't have a teaser as of yet. If I come up with one I'll try and send it your way ;)
Hope you like the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
omg that was so upsetting why would you do that to edward and bella they have been there for each other and you let him get fucked over by charlie and then you don't even ley him calm bella down like he normally does are you tearing them apart i am so sick about this it isnt even funny i hope they are fine by the next chapter
Author's Response:
I'm sorry this chapter was so upsetting for you. Don't worry too much though, I have a plan, promise :)
Hope you like the next chapter
Katie
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
awww crap... who'd she see in the mall.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Damn, I feel so bad for them! They just can't catch a damn break! Charlie was being an overprotective dad...but you can't really do that when you don't know your child. So much drama for them all...great chapter!
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Wow, that was intense with Charlie. I can see why he doesn't just embrace Edward, but he was pretty judgemental without knowing the whole story and just ignored how Edward has helped her.
I felt so bad for Edward at the mall. It's terrible not to be able to help the person you love.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
What caused the panic attack? It seems pretty severe. Good chapter.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
great chapter. hope that bella will be okay
Date: 24 Oct 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Well I really thought it would go over better with Charlie. After all if it were not for Edward Charlie wouldn't even know where she was. Poor Bella, I am wondering what happened. Maybe she saw the guy at the mall???? And poor Edward.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
I really hate Charlie...
I hope that Edward is able to stay for Bella's sake.
I wonder if Bella say her kidnapper at the mall? I am convinced it was Alice's ex who was only with her because he thought Bella would contact her.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
What an action packed chapter! I'm assuming Edward is now going to be reassessing his thoughts on that fact he has never failed Bella, since he feels so helpless.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
wow what a way to end a day. man oh man edward. they both need help. but hey that is wishful thinking. edward needs to forgive himself for his mom's death. it wasn't his fault. they have alot to get through and deak with that is fer sure. i sure hope they do it before someone is really injured. edward i hope you see that you can rely on people and not everone is your enemy. i know you want to be there for bella but it seems you guys need others help to make it through all of this. i hope you see it and try.
love it
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
well charlie is an ass! cant wait to see what happens next !
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Wow that was awesome and Edward & Charlie brought their attitudes with them whoa mama I loved it. Omg Bella can never find out about how she was about to be sent to the Cullens Omg it would be a wrap and she would have a one way ticket to regret ville. Until next time.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Wonderful chapter. I hate that Charlie cant see that Edward has helped her. What caused a panic attack so severe Bella cant even focus on Edward. Please update soon.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Charlie is an asshole, he should have said 'Thank you' to Edward for keeping Bella safe. If it wasn't for him who knows what could have happened to her. I think Charlie was a lousy father and just because he just found out that he had a daughter doesn't excuse the fact that he neglected her when she was there. He better not try and break up Edward and Bella. I don't think he had any right to question Edward the way he was. I think Charlie owes Edward an apology, and I don't think Bella really wanted to go to the mall I think she was pressured into going from Alice and Rose. I'm hoping that Bella is going to be alright.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
wow i printedt his out and have finished all 20 chapters. what a story. man they both have tear jerking stoires. just pulls at your heart strings.i am glad edward helped bella and never gave up on himself and ended up not leaving her like he wanted. they are good for each other. they each bring a different dynamic to their realtionship. i am glad he knows she doesn't pity him and is proud of him. i was thinking that alice was raped and that was why the knew so much of the work that the dr cope did.mike is a good guy in this story which is great. he has been a great friend and boss to edward. i so love the cullens but whio wouldn't.i love how supportive they are and what they are doing for both bella and edward. hey if worse comes to worse edward can always go work for edward. this has been a difficult but wonderful story to read. i can't wait for charlie and edward to come face to face. love it all and look forward tot he next chapter. thanx for writing
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
man jake is messed up as well. i am dying to know there stories and what brought them together
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 5 Spies
well i am thinking it is a family member that has hurt her and made her run.but i am curious if she has anyone else she can turn to but is to proud to ask. living on the streets is so rough for them. i am glad they have a change of clothes and a roof over there head for a little while
love it
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
man bella what are you running from and where did you get 500 and how did you know not to keep it in your purse. i hope james and the other boys get what is coming to them
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
well slowly but surely things are coming out.
she seems to be getting a little more comfortable with edward
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
man so much shit to go thru. it is sad how easy it is to be on the street. i wish there was more help for people and families and kids.
can't wait to see what the story is behind these guys
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
man that was a rough chapter. i can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 18 Oct 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
Oh man this was a tearjerker. And not just for the part at her mothers grave. Edward thinking he isn't good enough when he is the best man out there. He loves & cares for Bella more than her own life and they are perfect for each other. As for Charlie I will reserve judgement on him until we meet him. Although I still think he is an ass. I like the realism you put into this story. You show the ugly part of life on the street. I think however that it is much uglier than what you portray. Please keep up the wonderfully amazing work. Personally I think this would make a better movie than Twilight.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you so much bb! Your compliments always make me blush LOL
I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
aww
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
omg that was so sweet and so sad i can not wait till the next chapter edward is good for bella and they need each other hopefully things will turn out perfect for them keep it coming you are a great writer
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
I wonder what Carlisle means by there is more to hear?
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
- You did a great job with this chapter which could have gone wrong but you rose to the occasion wtg!
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I loved this chapter and can't wait to meet Charlie he's one of my favorite characters. I hope Edward doesn't snap on him yikes!
omg Rose having braces added to the charm of the chapter too I loved that. - damn Edward's being kind of harsh well judgmental as hell but then again he doesn't know Charlie and loves B so its to be expected.
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Esme made me love her even more this chapter. I was proud of Bella how she handled visiting her mom and edward there. you go Bella!
Until next time.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
I hate to say that I don't read the spoilers because I kinna like the surprise of waiting to see what happens next. I really hope that Charlie doesn't try Edward's nerves too much.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
Can't wait to see what goes on with Charlie! I'm really enjoying Fuggiasco! It's one of the better stories out there right now! Keep up the good work.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
HAHA! LURVE Rosalie in this fic!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm trying to keep all my characters somewhat ooc but not too much LOL
I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
kina short but still a great chapter. Guessing the charlie meeting is next.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
The graveyard was poignant but perfect. Looking forward to Edward's interaction with Charlie, and to finding out what Carlisle says Edward doesn't know yet.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
I love your story. Just read your bio and I think you are a beautiful person. I myself am single, but wanted to help a child and winded up adopting foster girls. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the sweet review! And how awesome that you could help 4 children! Thank you for sharing your story with me!
I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
Date: 10 Oct 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
great chapter. cant wait to see what happens w/ charlie
Date: 10 Oct 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
I love how Bella and Edward understand what each other needs. I also like the small changes you made to some of the Cullens...they are definetly more human with flaws!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
oooo charlies gonna be a hard ass (i hope edward lays right into him if charlie wont accept him) :-D love the story! keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
great chapter
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
Interesting chapter!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
Love that he was there for her the hole way but not push his presents on her just let her do it on her own. Cant wait to find out what all Charlie has to say and how he reacts to Edward.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
Great chapter. Can't wait for Edward and Charlie to meet.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
well i hope that charlie thanks him for what hes done for bella ! cant wait t osee what happens next
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
Great chapter! I'm so glad that Edward had his little epiphany about his love for Bella being enough while they were in the cemetary.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sing it Out
Your writing is excellent. I love the tender way Edward cares for Bella and how he can defend her in a violent situation. I hope the allow the Cullens to aid them. Edward is deeply intelligent. He could really benefit from even a community college education.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie