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Just so you know, none of the stories on the site right now are actually working. Anything updated by any author today has just shown the author's notes, but not the actual text of the chapter. It's a problem with the site I guess, but I just thought I would let you know- you are not the only one this is happening to

hey so why can't i read any of the chapters anymore...?

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Well I guess that they are going to be staying with the Cullen's in Forks for a while then aren't they? I wonder if they will go back where they were or if they will try to make a new life for themselves somewhere else.

Oh I just love your story. Edward is so wonderful and I am glad that they will be staying with the Cullens.

Author's Response:

So glad you're happy with how Edward handled things! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Nice chapter. You made me smile in Edward wanting to ease Bella's pain by telling her story to Carlisle: he's really come a long way himself in this story, hasn't he? It seems he's always had a strong ethic about the treatment of women and girls because of his experiences when he was young with his Mother, but he's definitely put himself more on the line.

I knew the Cullens would only want to support and help them - nice turn that they found an "acceptable way" to help Edward and Bella.

Author's Response:

So glad you're happy with how Edward handled things! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

I'm really with how this chapter played out.  I hope Edward will keep slowly realizing he is good enough for Bella.

Oh this was deff my favorite chapter so far! Great Job :)

I love this story!

Yes!!! I loved this chapter and haven't been able to read much or review at all because my computer was all messed up. That is until now though. Loved this chapter, so glad they are going to be staying with the Cullens, and can't wait for more.

great chapter. happy that bella has some normalcy in her life along with edward

I am so glad that Bella and Edward are finally moving a little forward in their relationship.  I love that Carlise offered him a job so that he could earn his way to stay there.  I cant wait for the next update and for more intimate times for these two they definetly deserve. it.

My heart feels a little better after reading this.  I feel so glad that at least there was always someone looking for Bella even if she didn't know it and I'm glad that Edward is giving this a chance.  He needs someone to look after him, too, even though he's been on his own for such a long time.  Love it.

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So proud of Edward this chapter.  Can't wait for the next one!

WOW at least someone else knows now Edward had to be very strong to tell Bella's story.  I love the Cullens they are good people and will take care of Bella and Edward but it will be tough for Edward to be taken care of????

Oh man it had to be very hard for Edward to tell Carlisle all of that. And you know he really loves her if he is willing to stay there so she can heal. He put his pride aside for her. Real love. Keep up the awesome work. I still say this is one of the best stories out there and should get an award.

     Marguerite

surprised carlisle didnt have charlie their waiting.

so happy that they were able to progress their relationship. it may seem like a small step to most but this is a giant leap of faith for both of them. simple trust is totally foriegn to both of them and has been for so long.

eddie needs to learn that asking for help is normal and ok. but again asking for help is a form of trust and he has not been able to trust anyone but himself for years!

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I loved it. Edward really is steeping up to the plate to help Bella but also recognizes he needs Carlisle's help. I'm really proud of Edward. Oh and he waited so they can make love with the timing is better you go boy! Until next time.

I wonder if Bella will let her dad back into her life. This is all a shock to her and I don't know how I would handle all of this if I were in her shoes but I am glad that Edward has seen that the Cullen's can help them and aren't trying to hurt either one of them.

I'm overwhelmed and I am not even there. So much suspense. Hope Alec doesn't come after her. Love your story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it! I hope you like the next chapter!

this we have to talk- doesnt sound good.  please, he cant leave her- that will further prove to her that she doesnt have what it takes to keep the people she loves around her- he just cant leave her, he needs to convince her that they should talk to the police to get some justice for herself and any others that might have endured the same fate she did,

what's up with all the cliffies lady? but good work, i can't wait to read more.

great chapter

This is a really beautiful story. Love it.

I'm so proud of Edward for going back!!  Poor thing, it gives me chills that stuff like that really happens to people.  I was cheering at the ending!  Good luck not getting eaten by a bear and I hope things go well with your mom!  Will be waiting when you get the time to post it!

Good one.  I'm glad that Edward didn't run; that he went back to Bella and told her about his past.    I think he needed to do that to be able to move forward, with Bella.    And I'm happy that he told Bella that he loves her, too.   I think now that they've both said it, and told each other about their past, hopefully, things will get easier between the two of them and they can start opening up to each other.

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so... Lucy. will we ever get to know what happened to her or where she is

finally edward wakes up!!!  i love how his mom and grandparents taugtt him to treat women with respect that saved Lucy!

poor eddie! he didn't really have a chance with helping his mom but he took control and saved lucy. will you have him meet up with her again? i think it would do wonders for him to have her thank him and tell him she ok thanks to him and what he did.

have fun on your holiday!

poor eddie.

Another great chapter i really feel for your characters. Great writing :-)

WOW... his back story is awful... i literally had tears in my eyes reading this... and then a big goofy grin on my face towards the end... :)

HE TOLD HER! LOVE IT!

enjoy your vacay... hope the surgery goes well... and after all of that is taken care of.... POST MORE!!!!!!!!

tell me it is daddy c! yay they are there and it is time to feel safe and at home!

Oh please please tell me she meets with the rest of the Cullens. She needs some peace in her life and I bet they miss her a lot. Her father too. I also have a feeling she will need all of her friends when Alec shows up. What happen to Edward to make him so afraid that she would leave him??? She loves him?????? WOW! WHat a cliffhanger. Keep up the awesome work.

   Marguerite

Well I glad it was Carlise that they ran into. I was affraid it was someone else. I am glad of the way that Edward handled the situation and I am glad that he took the business card.  I was surprised that Edward ran out because he was affraid to talk to her.

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next!

Well at least she knows that they have all been looking for her including her dad. I wonder what Edward's secret is and why he would hthink that Bella would leave him.

Ugh, I feel so bad for both of them!  They just can't seem to catch a break!  I hope Edward doesn't do anything stupid.

OMG, OMG! I can't believe he just walked out instead of sharing his love for her. He needs to believe in her love and know that she won't abandon him.

Good writing I felt like I could put myself in their place and felt their emotions!

Poor Bella & Edward.  They can never catch a break.  I hope once he cools down that Edward will come back and tell her how he feels.

Oh Edward, you really need to fix this, and fast!!!  

"Every single second. I won't even go to the bathroom... scouts honor," I say. She laughs and shakes her head.

"Well, I know I don't know that much about your past, but I'm almost positive you were never a scout," she says, laughing.

"I was," I insist in mock seriousness. "My mom, she uh... made me do it when I was younger. She and my grandma thought I looked cute in the outfit," I admit, trying to continue to loosen her up a little with my embarrassing confession. It works. She laughs and agrees that the outfit would be cute on me. I just roll my eyes at her.

"I'd like to hear more about them," she says quietly. I don't respond.

Poor Edward you're a good guy and just need to be a little more patient Bella will get there in no time: I take my time in the shower, exhausted from not only the trip here, but also the unexpected meeting with Carlisle. For the first time in a long time, I don't do anything other than bathe in the shower; I'm just too worn out... and tired of fucking myself.

Aw poor Edward and Bella she loves you man let her in plus I wanna know too lol:I rip my hands out of hers, stepping back. I'm pissed, but not at her. I'm pissed at myself, because I want to tell her so badly. I just can't. I'm pissed I'm so fucked up that I can't let her in even though I want to so badly.

Because I am the way I am, I react out of anger, not knowing what else to do. "Why the fuck do you even care? Why do you even want to know?"

She looks at me, shocked. She steps forward, anger in her eyes.

"Because I love you! That's why I care and want to know!" Her body stops. She freezes and throws her hands over her mouth, shocked she let the words fly out.

There's no way she's more shocked than I am. We stare at each other, not moving. Even though I thought I wanted to hear this all along, that I have admitted to myself I love her as well, I can't get the words out. In my mind, I know we should have a cheesy movie moment where we run and embrace each other while I declare my undying love for her, but I can't. Now that the moment has come, I can't, and I hate myself for it

Before I even know what I'm doing, my feet move and take me to the front door. I walk out, hearing her sobs as I walk away into the night.

The above were my favorite parts I am so wrapped up in this story I stopped updating my blog to read the update. Yeah I know it would have been here later but I keep seeing it in my inbox and I couldn't resist. Until next monday!