Man, I really thought it would be Charlie!!  But Carlisle was a good choice too!!  =)

Oh Dear.......walking out is not a good thing

Omg please let it be Charlie! I'm praying its Charlie. I'm just saying. Omg twitter is down right now and I miss my twitter buddies. I guess when its back up I can follow you and you can follow me if you like? Here are my favorite parts: That's love Edward scary huh?: I feel like a fucking tool for becoming so invested in her. I've learned in my time on my own to not believe in other people, they always let you down.

I find myself wishing I would've just kept her in Portland with me, never giving her the opportunity to heal and grow - never giving her the opportunity to grow away from me. I feel guilty for even thinking this way.

She's been through so much and deserves nothing but the best, and that's not me. I can't blame her for wanting more and when she decides she doesn't want me, I will step back. Until then, I'll try to show her I love her the only way I know how, by keeping her safe and taking care of her. I can't regret meeting her or falling for her. My life has been hell since I was twelve, she's the only good thing that's happened to me, and I will hold on to her as long as I can.

Lol: If Jake were here and knew what I was thinking, he would tell me to stop acting like a pussy. I decide to take his imaginary advice and actively shut down my thought process and join Bella in sleep until we reach our destination.

Lol: We step onto the platform at the station and are blinded by the bright lights. Even though it's pitch black outside, they have the station lit like a fucking football stadium. I see Bella take her free hand and rub her eyes.

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Another great chapter, looking forward to the next update :-)

I'm thinking her dad.

it is awesome!! loved this chapter

OH COME ON!!! YOU CAN"T LEAVE IT THERE!!!!

Love it.. really love it..

can't wait till the next chapter..

Love it hope you update soon

This story is getting so good. It's great to see both Edward and Bella letting their guards down and letting each other in!

OH NOW that is just MEAN.. hahahaha.. Loved the chapter. Great job.

will the rest of the gang join us in this chapter? i hope so please!

Is that person Carlisle Cullen?  I hope that Bella doesn't run now that she is facing part of her past.

This was sweet. He is so protective over her and even though he might deny it he is head over heels in love with her. AS I think she is with him. And they met some good people. I really want to know who she ran into at the end., I think it may be Riley. Lord I hope it isn't Alec. I hope he comes to a very gruesome ending. Keep up the awesome work. You are one amazing writer.

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CLIFFY!!!!!! love the "girlfriend" dilemna.....

"I wonder if there's any chance that maybe she loves me too." - LOVE this...

MORE!!!!!

PS - who is it that drops the food???? who, who??? :)

the momma inme wants to hols bella and make her see that her momma would be so proud of her. she survived, she got away, and now she is trying to build a life.

and eddie well i wanna tell him how proud i am that he is wanting to do everything he can to give bella the life she deserves, a home, a friend, love, and joy. she will love you, i just know it.

wow... this was just wow.. I love edward.. how cute is that?

wow... poor Bella..

oh god this is fucked up.. poor jacob..

awww... would love to know what bella is doing!!!

Got to keep reading..

great start!!!!

That is so sweet that he is taking her back to Forks. Maybe them going there is the best thing that they could do for themselves.

Wow that is a terrible story and I really hope taht Alec doesn't find her because they both could get hurt if he does. Maybe they should try finding her father and see if he could help them.

Wow that was kinna scary I thought that he was going to hurt Bella because he thought that she was Leah and wasn't listening to him.

Wow I never thought that she would have hidden money but I am glad that she did. I just hope that she can convince Edward to stay with her.

That is sad that she has been hurt so badly that she can't trust anyone that is trying to help her.

I cant wait till they get to forks.  I am so happy they admitted they have feelings for each other and kissed need more of that.

dun dun dun dun....the plot thickens....

I enjoyed this chapter and I'll see you Monday. These are the parts that I loved because they ar cute, funny or just Edward on some messed up kind of level. I hope their trip goes well but I'm thinking there's going to be drama I hope Alec doesn't show up or some shit. I hope Jake shows up at the shelter even though he is crazy and needs some mental help. I'm still a little upset and disappointed with family over this. Anyway keep up the good work.

She flutters her eyelashes at me; I assume this is an attempt to flirt. She really just looks like she has something in her eye.

"Do I look like a map?" she asks rudely. I'm tempted to let her know that while she doesn't look like a map, she does look like a cheap hooker.

I have a key, but I still knock as I open the door, just so I don't catch her changing or anything. Not that I would mind all that much.

I'm shocked to see her eyes start to well with water. She bites her lip in an effort to control her emotions. She thinks I bought this shit for another girl, and she actually cares. Fuck, maybe she cares about me more than I think.

"Yeah, she is really nice," I say. She looks up and gives me a fake weak smile.

"Oh, good," she says, giving the snacks her attention once again. I can't stand to see her hurt so I give up the gig. I already feel stupid I bought the shit, now I have to tell her why I bought it. I walk over to her and take the food out of her hands.

"No, it is Edward. It's a big deal to me," she says, taking her gift out of my hand. I lean forward and kiss her on her forehead. I'm happy that she likes the gift so much... but I still feel stupid for buying it.

hey,I really like your story so far... please update soon! :)

I am loving your story - I hope the Cullen's are still in Forks and Edward and Bella have an easier time.

Awww... I love how Edward shows how much he loves her! You are doing a wonderful job of developing the relationship between these characters! An update in this story always makes my day!

I just love this story.. They are so sweet together.. Great chapter.

I really like your story :)

loved it as usual .

update soon and let us know what happens in Forks and give Bella a little boost of confidence she really needs it.

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LOVE LOVE LOVE....

lipgloss, lemon (tiny one but sweet) and handholding...

i hope Bella finds closure... what did Mrs. E whisper to her?????

MORE... QUICK! need a fix already!!!!

he is going to take her home??????

Poor Bella.  I'm glad it's not the mob though, that's what I was thinking.  I'm so connected with these two characters.  Great work.

poor jake.  my heart aches for people who really deal with this situation.

I"m just breathless is all!  I was so worried for them, and I swear I feel the cold rain even though it's like 109 today!

Oh, I got all mushy inside!  I feel like I'm right there with them!

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oh gosh this sounds good

is edward going to take her to see her mom???

So Jake is schizophrenic?

I loved it. I'm glad Bella is talking about her mom again. I love that Edward is learning Italian from Bella. I can't wait to hear more of Edward's story. I'm curious as hell. Until next time. I hope Jake/Sam's okay? He really needs helps but that does happen a lot in that population. Until next time keep up the good work!