Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:43 PM Title: The Letter
Thank you for the excellent chapter. Rene real bitch. She mother. I just do not understand how she could give such advice. As the mother she should want for your child only the best, and Bella's relationship with Edward is the very best. He brought her back to life.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :) And I totally agree with you.
The update is in a few hours!
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:11 PM Title: The Letter
“You think I'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me,"......thats the quote from miss congeniality....hope i'm right
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:02 PM Title: The Letter
the quote was "you think i'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me!" right? from Ms. Congeniality??
i liked this chapter, even though it was short :( i can't believe her mom would suggest something like that!!!! i really don't like her mom! i loved the christmas tree bit :) i can't wait for next chapter!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:50 PM Title: The Letter
Love how close they are getting, keep up the good work. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I do too! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:47 PM Title: The Letter
Deep but pulled back out at the end with great humor! Stellar chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:04 AM Title: The Letter
Love the chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:45 AM Title: The Letter
Renee is a wack job Bella needs to just act like Renee dosent matter and believe that she and Edward are ment to be together
Author's Response:
Yeah, but it's still her mother. But she didn't agree with her, that's a start ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:44 AM Title: The Letter
"You think I'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me" Miss Congeniality, awesome movie. I love how Bella seems so much more outgoing now. Her mom is a real biotch and someone needs to tell her about her shit. Who tells their kid to get a divorce when their the happiest they've ever been?
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:17 AM Title: The Letter
Edward is a really nice guy. He knows how and when to comfort Bella, when to say no, and when to say yes. She does try his patience from time to time, though.
Renee's letter wasn't what I expected, it hurt Bella, a lot. Those aren't the things you expect to hear from you mom, but that's who she is. Fortunately Bella has Edward now. So it will help her, when something like this happens.
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward is really good for Bella. I don't think she would do so well without him...
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:06 AM Title: The Letter
Quote was easy Miss Congeniality (think that;s how you spell it). I loved the little fight they had over the tre in this chapter.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:47 AM Title: The Letter
I was so shocked at the letter Renee wrote. I didn't see that coming. I am glad Bella didn't fall for it. I was afraid she would run out or something.
I am glad Edward told her no and why he was telling her no. She took that pretty well. Love the whole Christmas tree thing. I am sure Edward was done after that.
I think the quote is "You think I'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me" from Miss Congeniality.
I love it as always! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:39 AM Title: The Letter
It is really sad that Bella's mom basically told her to get divorced so that she wouldn't end up like her. And the christmas tree that really sounds like something that I would do because I have done that only for it to go back to the first place that it was and then having to fight about it.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it is, but it needed to be done!
I hope you had a patient Edward to help you with the tree! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:56 AM Title: The Letter
“You think I'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me,” I sang. Miss Congeniality?? Loved the husband/wife interaction here.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:54 AM Title: The Letter
write more:)
Author's Response:
I will, I'm almost writing my fingers off ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:35 AM Title: The Letter
Welcome to married life Edward!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, haha. But he's such a good husband! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:05 AM Title: The Letter
her mother is MESSED UP! she should cut all ties
Author's Response:
That she is! But it's not easy to cut the ties to your mother.
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 11:55 PM Title: The Letter
I recognized the quote from Eclipse.
Bella was such a child in this chapter. Very unbecoming of her.
Looking for the update!
Author's Response:
Yeah, but it wasn't the quote I was looking for. Sorry..
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 11:54 PM Title: The Letter
love it and renee is a bitch
Author's Response:
Thank you, and that she is!
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: The Letter
The quote was from "miss congeniality"...Woo-Hoo a new chapter already!!! lmao that was a great chapter! I loved it :) They are so cute together.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:55 PM Title: The Letter
Oh I have had the Christmas tree fight many, many times. It wouldn't be Christmas without the Christmas tree purchase breakdown, and guess what, it goes in the same spot every year and there is still a fight. So I dumped him and now have my son help me. Christmas is so much better!
Author's Response:
Wow, good that you have your son to help, then! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:06 PM Title: The Letter
lol bella is too awesome and the quote I think is from Miss Congeniality, right? :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye P.s. falling asleep on Edward's cock? is that girl insane? lol
Date: 06 Aug 2010 9:34 PM Title: The Letter
hey is the quote "You think im gorgeous...You want to kiss me" From Miss Congeniality?
Date: 06 Aug 2010 9:18 PM Title: The Letter
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 9:12 PM Title: The Letter
Bella's mother is a piece of work!
The movie is Miss Congeniality
Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:52 PM Title: The Letter
Well hello and welcome back Miss I have just come back from tea with the Queen of England, the country of Shakespere's birthplace and home of one very gorgeous Mr Darcy.
Yes here in the UK we have it ALL:-)
Hope you had a fab vaycay - couldn't see any pics from your hols on FB?
Anyway lovely we missed you and glad you are taking us with you on your next journey.
Looking for the quote was it in the letter? i.e When he moves, you move - as that was definitely Eclipse.
If not can I have preview anyway cuz I love this story sooo much and you have indeed missed me too much!
Laters Debs.x
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Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:22 PM Title: The Letter
Yup that sounds like something a woman would do. Decide on a spot and have her husband try out everything else first. I like how close they are getting.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:07 PM Title: The Letter
raises hand alright girls raise your hand if you have done that to a guy before too. awesome chappy.
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:07 PM Title: The Letter
"'We should get a piano, so you can play for me every day,' I mumbled against his lips.' 'The apartment is too small, it wouldn't fit,' he answered disappointed."
I would just like to point out that if they got an upright piano, it would fit even in a tiny apartment. Very few real musicians can afford a baby grand, anyway. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your point! But yeah, this is fiction, though ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:04 PM Title: The Letter
Thanks for the update! It wasn't too short at all, although the ending was a bit abrupt. Is Bella being a little overharsh towards her mother from her letter? I can see how it could look like she's recommending a divorce, but it could also mean other things! When I read the letter, I didn't have any of the same negative reactions Bella did. But then again, Bella had to live through all of the carelessness and neglect of Renée, so maybe she's right to be upset. I'm not sure, but either way, thanks for updating! Oh, and one last thing, I am very proud of Edward for turning down sex when it's not the right thing for them! Way to step up for all of mankind!!
Author's Response:
You're welcome! ;)
I know the letter could mean different things, but I intended it to be a little harsh.
Thank you for the review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:51 PM Title: The Letter
Thanks for the chapter! UGH...I loathe Bella's Mom!
Author's Response:
You're welcome! ;)
I do, too!
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:49 PM Title: The Letter
Edward and Bella are creating relationship memories for the holidays and I love it! Bella even suggested they buy a house so that Edward could have a piano to play for her. Another point that Edward noticed was Bella's reference to future Christmases together and their future children!
Great chapter and I am impatient for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:45 PM Title: The Letter
Love this chapter. Christmas tree shopping is my favorite :)
So the quote:
“You think I'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me,”
Ms. Congeniality :)
One of my all time favorite movies.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:28 PM Title: The Letter
lol Renee is such a Biatch
Author's Response:
That she is!
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:48 PM Title: The Letter
Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 8:04 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Pretty Woman "Can I call you Eddie?" "Not if you expect me to answer" God I love that movie, classic. Also "Come on, babe. It's just a movie" don't know if you did that on purpose with only changing the word game to movie but that's what Emmet said in Twilight to Rose at the baseball field after Bella called her out. Love it, can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 05 Aug 2010 6:38 PM Title: Secrets
This story most definitely doesn't suck I'm just a lil late with reading my updates. “Take me now, or lose me forever.” God I love Top Gun, great movie
Date: 03 Aug 2010 5:21 AM Title: Thanksgiving
lmao "I'm horny, so you should take me home and fuck me"...that was such a funny line...Love your story...update when you can :)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 4:18 AM Title: Secrets
That was awesome!!! I love that Bella initiated sex with Edward and that they made up :)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 10:42 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Thank you very much for a wonderful story. I love this Bella and Edward. Very interesting characters are heroes. And I'm delighted with the development of their relations.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 6:08 AM Title: Thanksgiving
i just read your entire story and despite the crink in my neck i loved it...but i am sad because i dont know when you are getting back from vacation :(
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Quote is from Pretty Woman: Can I call you Eddie? Not if you expect me to answer.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:32 PM Title: Secrets
Enjoy your vacation!!!!
Their first really big fight, it wasn't pretty, but fights never are. They were both upset and said things they shouldn't have. The good thing was both were willing to accept their mistakes and get pass it.
There are many things they need to find out about each other, Bella opening as she did was really good.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:18 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Bella is too cute when she's drunk and I love how you have from Edward's pov too just like a man. She asked for a hotdog but I didn't know why when it was right there she could easily have gotten it herself. too funny. lol I loved that chapter and have fun on your trip. I'll be on Twitter waiting for your trip info. :D thanks again bye
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:12 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Amazing Chapter! They've come such a long way and it's nice to see them so in love :) Have fun o. Your vacation!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:17 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Okay, I caught that quote. It's one of my favorites from Pretty Woman!
Will be waiting for the update. :)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:01 PM Title: Thanksgiving
My apologies for not reviewing sooner - once I started reading I just couldn't stop! What a fun story - thank you! I'm glad Bella is finally lightening up a bit - boy was she uptight. :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:36 PM Title: Thanksgiving
This is by far a great story. Renee is just crazy, I think she means well in her own wierd way. Charlie as always is a good father. E is a loving husband and Esme is a awesome monther-in-law.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:34 PM Title: I love you
Love this!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:32 PM Title: Leaving on a jet plane
TWILIGHT QUOTE: Look After my heart - I have left it with you!!!
I will be back before you have a chance to miss me
Look after my heart I have left it with you :-)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:51 PM Title: Thanksgiving
well, have good holidays, and after that I'm first in line to read your new update!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:19 PM Title: Husband and Wife
love this
Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:45 AM Title: Thanksgiving
awsome chapter thanks
Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:16 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Love it :)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:27 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Well Bella wasn't kidding when she said that her parents always fight when they are in the same room together. I am just glad that Edward was there for her to help with that . And Drunk Bella is quite funny.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:20 AM Title: Thanksgiving
great chapter.thank you
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Together
Bella was aware that her first time wouldn't be too pleasant for her, she was prepared, so even if uncomfortable, it wasn't a surprise. Edward was tender, gentle and as careful as possible, which was really great.
Sadly Bella is a bit sick, the rain was fun but it brought consequences. To top it, she is just learning Thanksgiving won't be a quiet, small, family gathering. She isn't too happy about it.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:28 AM Title: The Date
It was a really nice date, it probably didn't finish as Edward had planned, but that doesn't mean it ended badly. Bella has thought about what is going to happen a lot. She is certain it's time, and Edward couldn't be happier, although he will keep following her lead. Where will it take them?
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:48 AM Title: Thanksgiving
lol drunk bella is funny
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Bella's mom is a piece of work...M.I.A. and passing judgement on everything and everyone...WOW! I'm glad to see that Rose put her in her place and that Edward was able to calm Bella down.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:26 AM Title: I love you
It was really good. Bella pinching herself thinking it was a dream. And just as she promised, the first thing she told him was "I love you". Edward's reaction was priceless, he couldn't believe it. She really made him happy and glad to have come home earlier.
Then the Aunt Flow comment, and Edward having no clue, that was adorable too.
Bella is so much more confident in this chapter, I loved it, lets hope she can keep up with herself.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:33 AM Title: Goals
He did hear her say it, and then... neither are talking about it, and by not doing so, they are just hurting inside. I understand that Bella doesn't want to say it over the phone, but perhaps one or the other could have hinted something about it. Now it has been some time after it, could they still say something about it?
Bella overcame a huge fear, she is proud of herself. It was a lot to take and she did really well. Lets hope the next step she takes right besides Edward.
Usually when trips are written into a story it's hard to really give the impression of how long it feels to the characters. Here you've done an amazing job at making us feel as desperate as Bella and Edward. It has only been half of the time!!!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:23 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Thanks for the chapter! Have fun on vacay!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:57 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Great chapter.
Tipsy, horny Bella is great.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:45 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Renee what a peice of work she is dont see your daughter for 4 years and start in on how she looks I dont think I like her. Love Edward can I have him PLEASE
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:11 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Bella is coming out of her shell...YES! What is up Renee's ass anyway.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:42 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Very interesting how all their friends know each other. Thanksgiving was different but they did seem to get along except near the end. Can't wait to find out what bella's letter says.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:33 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Have fun on your vaca! Just wanted to say I loved this chapter. Can't wait till you're back. ;)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:56 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Yay! I'm happy with the way everything worked out in this chapter. There was drama during Thanksgiving, but no worse than we expected; Renée was terrible (do we get to read her letter next chapter?) but Bella wasn't devastated by it, and Esme and Rosalie were both awesome! I'm proud of Bella for what she said when Esme apologized for inviting her parents without asking; I half-way expected her to just lie and say it was fine, but she told the truth instead. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:42 PM Title: Thanksgiving
”Can I call you Eddie?” she asked.
”Not if you expect me to answer.” Pretty Woman for the quote!
Loved the chapter - so glad you didn't leave us with a cliffy and then skip the country:-)
Our girl is a hilarious drunk! I wouldn't mind seeing more. Renee is shameless as the part time parent!
Have fun in Blighty! - Laters Debs (Blighty).xx
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:40 PM Title: Thanksgiving
I think Bella may surprise Edward when they return to Cullen's house after the bonfire! She is awaking her inner sex beast! I am relieved that Esme and Edward witnessed the tension and anger that happens when Bella's parents are in the same room. I feel more hopeful that the Christmas season will be less stressful.
Please have a safe trip and update when you can!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:21 PM Title: Secrets
You're story is amazing. :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:52 PM Title: Thanksgiving
I'm curious as to what that letter says and I'm pretty sure that Edward's learned his lesson when it comes to Bella's family.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:50 PM Title: Thanksgiving
This story just keeps getting better and better, Thanks
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:39 PM Title: Mrs. Cullen
WOW -love it :-)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:29 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Girl, you have a gift with words! I was rolling when Edward was correcting Renee about Bella's tits and how they were just fine.
This chapter was awesome. It brought reader up that I was laughing to the point that I was sad or crying to mad and ready to smack Renee.
I love this story and your gift of words! I am always so excited when I see you stories have been updated!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:18 PM Title: Vegas
i like it so far
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:18 PM Title: Thanksgiving
good chapter, Edward was so loving as usual :) can't wait for him to get that b-day present
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:16 PM Title: Thanksgiving
write moree:)))))
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:13 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Wonderful chapter!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:06 PM Title: Thanksgiving
hate bella's mother for what she said. love the rest
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:02 PM Title: Thanksgiving
I loved it. It was cute and funny for the most part. I really dont like Renee though for being all judgemental. I loved Carlisle's talk on where the extra linens were. Talk about awkward.
Can't wait for your next chapter!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:00 PM Title: Thanksgiving
great chapter!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:55 PM Title: Thanksgiving
SO good!! and Pretty Woman..
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:50 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Great chapter. Can't imagine why neither Esme nor Edward figured that that's how Thanksgiving would go. After all, there's a reason people get divorced. And why did both of her parents agree to go anyway? Bah! Cute drunky MacDrunkerson Bella at the end.
Have a great vacation.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:32 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Can I call you Eddie? Not if you expect me to answer is from Pretty Woman
Great chapter, when are we going to find out about Bella's letter from Renee?
Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:27 PM Title: Thanksgiving
can i call you eddie? not if you want me to answer. Pretty woman, right?
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:47 AM Title: Leaving on a jet plane
Bella misunderstood things and made a huge scene before listening to Edward. She is still scared, insecure, thinking he might leave her. Not that this makes her conduct acceptable but at least understandable. Work is work, so Edward and Emmett need to go, it will just be for two weeks. They will miss each other, but time will fly faster than they will think in will.
Staying with Rose is a good idea, they can keep each other company and help with the nursery.
Also, very important, she said it!!!!! He might not have heard it, which is bad, but she said I love you.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:25 AM Title: Unknown
What's going on??? Things were going better, not perfect yet, but better, and now Edward says he has to leave? Where? Why?
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:01 AM Title: Birthday
I loved the presents, and Edward's never crossed my mind. He was paying attention and gave plenty of thought to it.
Bella had a great birthday, she was happy, even with her tantrum at the restaurant.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:20 AM Title: Secrets
thanks awsome chapter i
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:28 AM Title: The Past
Edward got scared, watching Bella standing there and after how she was, it's understandable he would be worried. But Bella isn't that kind of girl. She needed closure, for a long, long time, she hadn't dared go there. Thanks to Edward she did.
The worst thing for Bella was not saying good-bye to her friend. When you loose someone, that's the worst of all.
As for their kissing, things are changing between them. Edward has known he loves her, she has just began having feelings for him, feelings she still can't describe or understand. He knows it and will give her as much time as she needs.
I guess now things will go better and easier.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:40 PM Title: Goodbye
Bella needed to go to the wedding, a part of her was aware of this, while other still tried to refuse it. Edward helped by being by her side.
Meeting Charlie went better than either one expected, he was shocked and surprised, but he is seeing things in Bella he hadn't in a long time. A father always wants his kids to be happy and what ever makes them happy and keeps them safe is good for them.
As for Edward "ignoring" Bella while watching TV, just as you said, he is good but not prefect ;)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:14 PM Title: Time goes by
The past can't all be bad, Bella just realized that. She has happy memories of Emily and her friends. She just needs to take a bit of time to remember them. It was good to hear that one.
I have to say Edward has been more than amazing. He is patient,caring, and truly loves Bella deeply. She is starting to see it and it still is a surprise to her, a very good one.
It was good that she let know she is now Cullen and not Swan.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:52 PM Title: Breakdown
It was a tough one to read, even not knowing what was wrong with Emily yet. Her death really affected Bella, it still does, and in a very bad way. She loved her friend deeply and misses her a lot.
Edward was amazing in this chapter, his love for Bella was proven. To be right there next to her, scared and not knowing what is going on. That's commitment and love.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:31 PM Title: The Wedding
Bella has some stories in her past that make her uncomfortable. Some stories that don't involve Edward. She promised to share them, perhaps she will do so, sooner rather than later.
The wedding went fine, Bella wasn't as happy as she could have been, and in a way it's understandable. She is trying and so is Edward. There are changes that people around them have begun noticing, is this good? I hope so.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:17 PM Title: Secrets
I did not realize that my review was submitted under the first chapter! Anyway, EandB should have an easier time planning for Christmas with the families now that they have discussed some issues, shared secrets and cleared the air for the November holidays.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:15 PM Title: Husband and Wife
Is Bella giving into this so fast? Or is she wanting to avoid uncomfortable situations in the future and just playing along with Edward? Hard to tell. At least dinner with his parents went fine and they were able to "compromise" at certain things.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:13 PM Title: Vegas
I loved this chapter! I think it is great that Edward answered and spoke to Alice from Bella's phone,letting Alice hear Bella's flirty teasing in the background.
It is time for Bella to put quality time with Edward first and she is letting her friends understand this, too. E and B are overdue to spend a hooky day together in bed!
Update soon!