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Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:58 PM Title: Road trip

High school can be tough and we do the weirdest and strangest things there. Even some we later can believe we actually did.

Is Bella being too easy with Edward? I don't think so, they both got married, she had to agree to it at some point. Yes she was drunk, but there are things going through her mind now she can't explain. And for what we get, she doesn't have too many other options to consider.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:41 PM Title: Mrs. Cullen

Where did Bella and Alice go? When did Bella get a tattoo? There are a lot of questions that we will need answers to. 

Edward seems repentant  for what ever he did in high-school, but if Bella tells her friends, he knows he will be in trouble, so what could have happened?

As for what Alice did, I have to agree with Edward, I would want to kill her too. Not that he isn't grateful.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:25 PM Title: Purple Nurple

Bella decided to follow her friends advice, to drink and party. Then when she thought she saw the person she never wanted to see again, she kept on drinking, to make the hallucination go away. That's the thing when you have little or no experience, no clue what the consequences will be.

As for Edward, it turns out he loves her??? They why torture her all through high-school? I can't wait to hear what he has to say about that.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:09 PM Title: Vegas

Bella's life hasn't been a fairy tale, she has just read about them. She thinks that's not in the cards for her. She hasn't done much of an effort it seems. Shyness? Fear? At least her friends have never given up on her. She has to feel good about that.

Reviewer: Autumnltd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:51 PM Title: Secrets

Nope - We are still here and still loving your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support!! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:29 PM Title: Secrets

I'm still here! Don't worry about your fanbase; just be glad that you have a following on more than one website! I loved this chapter. Poor Edward! I felt so terrible for him; maybe an EPOV outtake for this chapter is forthcoming? I would appreciate it. And also, what was Alice calling about? She sounded pretty determined to speak to Bella. Is it important news, or is it just Alice being Alice? She's always been a bit domineering... Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support!! :)

I will definitely do a EPOV of this! I wanted to do it in this chapter, but BPOV meant much more. So, yeah. When I have the time, there will be an outtake on this!

Alice didn't call for a special reason. I just put that in as a 'distraction'.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Quincy1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:04 PM Title: Secrets

Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Next update should be in a few hours!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:49 PM Title: Secrets

I am glad these two talked.  I hope they keep talking.  I think Bella overreacted just a little bit, but so did Edward.  She said she just wanted to be alone for a little while.  Maybe now these two can settle down and communicate better. 

I don't know why, but I never thought that Bella would say she went to her Grandmothers. 

I think I finally know a quote... “Take me now, or lose me forever.” from Top Gun, right???

I can't wait to see what happens next with these two.  It is a struggle but I think they will get there...  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:39 AM Title: Secrets

Love your story.
Good to see that Edward and Bella worked through their problem.
Can't wait to see what thanksgiving will bring.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:13 AM Title: Secrets

Well I guess they had their first big fight followed by their first round of make-up sex. I am guessing first because I am sure that they will fight again.



Author's Response:

You're a good guesser! ;)

Thanks for the review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: im exactly ur brand of heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Secrets

i LOVE this story!!!!!!! can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Next update should be up in a few hours!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:09 AM Title: Secrets

I love this story.  I just end up closing the tab before I remember to review but don't worry its with all my stories that I read.



Author's Response:

Maybe you should review, and THEN close the tab ;) I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:45 AM Title: Mrs. Cullen

can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:37 AM Title: Secrets

Hey, we're not all gone!  I'm still here.  I'm glad that in the past couple of chapters you didn't portray the sex as totally mindblowing immediately.  B/c it did hurt like hell at first, and not just the very first time.  So kudos to you for some realism.  I think these two are both a little emo and overly reactive to things.  She's having dinner with the fam and totally freaks?  So in turn he assumes she's leavng him?  Chill out and take a breather.

Anywho, can't wait for the next one! Cheers,

Balti K

 



Author's Response:

Yes, and thank you for the support! :)

Next one should be up in a few hours I hope!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:35 AM Title: Secrets

Your story is wonderful I love it I know on a couple of times I tryed to review but there was something going on with the site so I dont think it is us your readers I think it was a glich in the system.  I am so happy that they worked these things out and sex was finely good for both of them Bella makes me giggle about lets do that again LOL.  I cant wait for more I hope you have a good time in the UK and if you have to take something out so you can get you pc in just do it LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much! I'm really glad you liked the chapter (and my story!)

Next chapter should be up in a few hours!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:34 AM Title: Purple Nurple

oh god edward had the kid in the sandbox syndrome. He threw sand in bella's face bbecause he liked her lmao

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:30 AM Title: Secrets

I love you're story, it's great. I love it and can't wait to see what happens with those two.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: teebiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:13 AM Title: Secrets

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:00 AM Title: Vegas

I love it already!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:28 AM Title: Secrets

Good chapter, but what does Alice have to talk to Bella about.  I would kill my husband if he had ever kept something like that from me.  You don't just make plans or agree to plans withoht checking with your significant other first.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

She didn't want anything special. It was just a 'distraction' I put in.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: elizabethjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:13 AM Title: Secrets

woohoo the was orgasmic....



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:24 AM Title: Secrets

i love how they have worked things out and i want more right now



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:00 AM Title: Secrets

I would be some upset also if my family was invited to a holiday dinner and I didn't even know. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, me too! ^^

Thank you for the review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:56 PM Title: Secrets

ok, this quote was from TOP GUN right??? :) i'm glad they cleared up the drama, that fighting killed me

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:16 PM Title: Secrets

still not sure why she freaked..... it was like she was looking for a reason to be pissed off at him  so she made one up.

anyway the writing is still good and story is still good .. cant wait for the next instalment



Author's Response:

Maybe it will clear up for you in the next chapter which is being posted in a few hours!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:37 PM Title: Secrets

Alot to take in in this chapter.  I am glad Bella finally enjoyed herself.  I can't wait for the Thanksgiving chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! It should be up in a few hours! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: macca_99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:58 PM Title: Secrets

just got to say i disagree about the big mac, the quater pounder is gods gift to earth, not joke xx



Author's Response:

NOO, the BigMac is the best! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:23 PM Title: Secrets

Sweet first fight.



Author's Response:

You're the first one to say that! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: MelissaJHackett Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:11 PM Title: Secrets

LOVE LOVE LOVE this story  hope u update soon 



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much! :)

Update is in a few hours!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:34 PM Title: Secrets

Take me now or lose me forever....what freaking movie is that from?  It's going to drive me crazy ....pls tell me!!  Great chapppy, too!

Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:31 PM Title: Secrets

Typical new couple blowing things outta porportions... wonderful chapter additon as always :) cannot wait for the Thanksgiving crazyness.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

That will be tomorrow! so be sure to check out my story then!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Yuriseth Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:21 PM Title: Secrets

Love the story keep it coming !! Bring on the hoilday drama ...lol



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Tomorrow, I will!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:52 PM Title: Secrets

I think Bella should of been a little harder on Edward after the drunk comments.  Thanks for the chaper!



Author's Response:

Yeah, but I didn't want them to fight forever either.. ^^

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:51 PM Title: Secrets

Top Gun? Given that was take me to BED, but then they were already in bed.

Reviewer: mzvez Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:49 PM Title: Secrets

This story does not suck.  It is one of my favorites and I can't wait for the update.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much! :)

And thanks for the support!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: ilovecherrypie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:41 PM Title: Secrets

“Take me now, or lose me forever.” its from top gun, loved the chapter ^^

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:35 PM Title: Secrets

They are too cute. What does Alice want?

Author's Response:

I know! :)

Nothing special. It was just a distraction I put in! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:09 PM Title: Secrets

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: devildogbully Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Secrets

Is the quote from top gun?

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:59 PM Title: Secrets

Great chapter...glad to see they were able to overcome that little tift.  I am so loving your story...don't think that we've abandoned you...people are probably on vacation.  Please continue to post as I'm sure others like myself look forward to your story.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:57 PM Title: Secrets

I'm still here! don't worry ;)

I'm looking forward to your next update



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support!! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: exler930 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:55 PM Title: Secrets

Oh that was so good!  I am so excited to see what happens at Thanksgiving with the folks. Should be interesting.  Anyway...Top Gun...Love that movie!!!  Have a fun time in the UK, and oh, I so am not leaving so I hope you aren't either.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:22 PM Title: Secrets

Very hot chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: Secrets

hmmm  too easy... Top Gun of course.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: Secrets

I'm surprised that I didn't catch the Titanic quotes; I've seen the movie enough! 

I'm sorry to hear about your reviews droppin off; I have that w/one of my stories too.  But I will still be here, ready and eager to read about B & E's relationship.  :)

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

It's easy to skip them when you read! ^^

Thank you so much for your support. It means a lot to me! :)

The update will be tomorrow sometime!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:34 PM Title: Secrets

“Take me now, or lose me forever.” Ha Ha TOP GUN me thinks :-)

Now to address a more serious issue :- Does my story really suck, or have you ALL gone on vacation?

I don't know how to tell you this so I will just go out on a limb and RIP THAT BANDAID OFF!!

Your story Hun well it's kinda....................fkn awesome so what the hell are you on about????????????

We readers are greedy and selfish we take take take when we should be in awe of your talent and keep on giving as I for one could not write for shit - but in the next breath I read a hell of a lot so I know when something is good.

1. Don't take it to heart!

2. Don't you dare leave us (as I would find you)!

3. Welcome to my home turf from Tuesday and have a great time:-)

4. Laters my lovely Deb's (UK).xxx

 

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:57 PM Title: Secrets

sorry i havent been able to review, my keyboard was broke. I spilt hot coffee on it. apparently u shouldnt do that.

 

this story is amazing, keep on going chickadee



Author's Response:

Wow, that sounded smart! ;)

Thank you so much!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:52 PM Title: Secrets

Excellent chapter, a little bit of every kind of emotion in this one. Loved it! I don't know what happened to the reviewers on this site but I'm still here. If you decide to quit posting here, I'll gladly follow you to FF, though I'm not a big fan of that site and all their "rules". Again, great job, keep it up. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

I won't leave TWSCL, no way! I like it here, too! Thank you for the support! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:47 PM Title: Secrets

I'm here and that make up sex was AWESOME! lol the line was also from Top Gun right? keep up the amazing work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:46 PM Title: Secrets

Well, I'm still here and I love love love this story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, and thank you for still being here and for the support! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:43 PM Title: Secrets

Good chapter;  Sure they had their fight and they both said things that they regretted in the morning, but at least they talked it out and got through it, which is what they should do.    



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 8:25 PM Title: Together

great job with the chapter......i wonder who the new boyfriend will be?????

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

You'll see that in chapter 19! ;)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:49 AM Title: Together

THANK YOU!  What the hell is this girl gonna do when she has a kid?  Lord! ;p



Author's Response:

You're welcome! ;)

I don't know, but she is! ^^

Thank you for the review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:02 PM Title: Together

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: im exactly ur brand of heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:45 PM Title: Together

the quote was from titanic again; "i forced a smile at him and was everything a well brought up girl should be, inside, i was screaming"

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 11:07 AM Title: Together

The sex scene was very realistic.  Trust me!!!!!!  That probably the only one I've read that came close.  LOL



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you! I was hoping I was somewhat realistic! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 6:49 AM Title: Together

I thought the sex scene was great I dont remember any talking during my first time and thank god I did not have that kind of pain.  What is going on with Aro and Thanksgiving?



Author's Response:

Yeah, you were lucky. Everyone I've been talking to have complained about the pain. Aro is going to spend Thanksgiving with the Cullens :) It will all be further explained in the next chapter!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: dustlandfairytale14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 5:23 AM Title: Together

THANK YOU for writing a realisitic sex scene lol, I think it was well written! Looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

You're welcome! ;)

And thank you!!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 3:00 AM Title: Together

i think the quote for this chpater is from titanic.....the last line....i hope i'm right

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:53 AM Title: Together

Very good job on the sex scene.  It was definetly real and I'm glad you wrote it the way you did.  Great job and love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:45 AM Title: Together

really good keep writing:)



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I will :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:41 AM Title: Together

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:39 AM Title: Together

Finally! A realistic lose-the-v lemon! Thank you. I bow to the greatness...



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:04 AM Title: Together

Well I hope that things work out better next time for Bella. Now she has to stress out about Thanksgiving.



Author's Response:

I hope so, too! :)

Thanks for the review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:09 AM Title: Together

You did a great job with the lemon.  I hope you don't make Bella suffer too long before they both can enjoy it.       Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I won't. I'll just try and keep it as realistic as possible!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:29 AM Title: Together

thanks a really good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:07 AM Title: Together

Honestly I really don't understand when people portray their first time as being painful.  I had no pain and the guy I was with was not small by any means.



Author's Response:

I guess you're one of the lucky ones, then :) Because everyone I've been talking to had pain, and their references was everything I had to go on.

Thank you for the review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:54 PM Title: Together

Bella and Edward's first sexual experience was fun to read, but I hope that BandE progress with their sexual intimacy. It seems as if Bella needs someone to talk with about her self-esteem issues as related to sexual intimacy. Rose is helpful, but Bella needs professional help.
I feel sorry for Edward when Bella confronts him about Thanksgiving at the Cullens! Bella is not accustomed to large, extended family gatherings and she may freak out. Let's hope that Edward and his parents can help Bella to relax and enjoy her first "Cullen" holiday party as a member of the family!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and your thought on my story. We'll see how Thanksgiving will go for the lovebirds, hopefully pretty smooth, but you never know! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: padalf2510 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:48 PM Title: Together

Good job!!! Two thumbs up!! Sweet!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:45 PM Title: Together

Very good chapter. Can't wait to see how thanksgiving dinner is going to work out.

Author's Response:

Thank you, and that dinner will be in two chapters! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Wendu Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:37 PM Title: Together

well I can't relate to the sex scene since I'm still a virgin. but I thought it was pretty good. I loved how she was so nervous about him tasting her. and I really love the scenes between Edward and Bella, I love how he us just so normal and sweet with her.
Quote Time: Was everything a well brought up girl should be, inside, I was screaming. It's from Titanic, Rose says it.

Reviewer: kljluvu1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:51 PM Title: Together

"...everything a well brought up girl should be, inside, I was screaming." -- Rose, Titanic :)

This chapter was amazing! Update soon!

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:20 PM Title: Together

Atlast!  Glad to see the happy couple has sealed the deal.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, then! :)

Thanks for the review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:12 PM Title: Together

I think you did a great job.  Very realistic.  I am really glad Rose is there for Bella to talk to.  great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

I think it's good for her to have Rose, too!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:14 PM Title: Together

I forced a smile at him and "was everything a well brought up girl should be, inside, I was screaming."  From Titanic

I thought the sex scene was realistic but i hope we get to read a "pretty" one soon.  Can't wait to see Bella get mad at Edward for not elaborating about Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:50 PM Title: Together

Very realistic Gelix - love the way the following day real life gets in the way an he deffs her out to go to the Gym (typical bloke)!

Now as she is poorly this may have an effect on any contraception she may be taking hmmmm???!!!! As sure as hell I didn't notice the use of a condom.

Thanksgiving with the "Outlaws" to look forward to ;-)

Laters Debs.x



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Wow, you really want a little baby for them, don't you? ;) It will be later on, I promise. Just not one day after they had sex for the first time. And no, they didn't use a condom. They discussed that in the end of chapter 16 ;)

The dinner will be in two chapters!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:45 PM Title: Together

I thought everything was fine.  Sex isn't always enjoyable the first time.  I don't remember the pain, though.

Waiting for an update....



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Maybe you're one of the lucky ones who it isn't painful for.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:23 PM Title: Together

i liked it because it was so realistic. it always bugs me when people just pretend that it goes away in a few seconds. loved it



Author's Response:

Yeah, me, too. That's why I put so much energy on making it as realistic as possible! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: Together

Poor Bella and now she has a cold. poor thing. as for the line, TITANIC! I can't wait for more. hopefully that's all it is, is a cold. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:58 PM Title: Together

I think you did an excellent job with the lemon, one of the most realistic ones I've read. I also love how realistic you make them. Edward getting annoyed, Bella getting cranky. Alot of fics keep them in a perpetual state of happiness or the exact opposite. That's why I love your characters. Again, great job. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That means a lot that you think that :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:55 PM Title: Together

Uh oh, I think Edward's gonna be in some hot water



Author's Response:

Yeah, maybe so! ;)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:47 PM Title: Together

Liked the chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: earthwolf24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:09 AM Title: The Date

Love it! cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Only six more hours to go! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Wendu Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:42 AM Title: The Date

okey, this time i know the Quote. It's 'Maybe you were looking, but you weren't really seeing' from The Cinderella Story.

Reviewer: exler930 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 8:39 PM Title: The Date

I'm torn!  The quote is either from Cinderella Story or the Notebook.  If the quote isn't The Notebook, it was at least the scene right?  Oh i just LOVED it!  The anticipation is killing me!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:00 AM Title: The Date

OMG please let them go through with it how much foreplay can we take LOL



Author's Response:

We'll see what they are about to do tomorrow! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:26 AM Title: The Date

Quote is from Cinderella Story.  "Maybe you were looking, but you weren't really seeing."

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:13 PM Title: The Date

Great chapter. Finally, I hope they do! Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Jackie84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:39 AM Title: The Date

Wow! This is my favorite chapter so far! I love this story and am so pleased to have found it! Thank you for taking the time to share your story with us :)

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you! :)

You're welcome, and thank you for taking your time to write me a review!

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Gelix

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:38 AM Title: The Date

oh my my .. plz no cock blocking .. they need to get together fully



Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry about that. really. I just had to stop somewhere before the chapter got too long!

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Gelix

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:29 AM Title: The Date

love the way that he is with her and takes the time to make sure that she isn't freaking out. can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:05 AM Title: The Date

I think it will finally happen.  I think Bella is ready and I know Edward is ready.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

We'll see on Wednesday!

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:59 AM Title: The Date

thanks awsome chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Gelix

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:57 AM Title: The Date

I hope they go through with it!



Author's Response:

I hope so, too. And they will.. eventually anyway ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Autumnltd Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:45 AM Title: The Date

Fabulous update and I love the progression of the relationship....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:14 AM Title: The Date

you are wrong? LOL



Author's Response:

I don't know what you mean, but I hope I'm not ;)

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Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:09 AM Title: The Date

i think they're ready......

Author's Response:

Yeah, maybe. We'll see what they think on Wednesday!

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Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:51 PM Title: The Date

Tease!!!  Looks like Bella is wearing her big girl thong today! 



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that you think so! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:51 PM Title: The Date

ahww, they're so sweet!

I'm looking forward to your update!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:33 PM Title: The Date

WRITE MORE:))))



Author's Response:

Yeah, I will. On Wednesday! :)

xx
Gelix

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