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Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:30 PM Title: The Date

Wow!Bella has really made progress with communicating her feelings to Edward.I love the matching hearts and the romantic boating in the park. Update soon because I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

You'll get to read a lot more on Wednesday!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:25 PM Title: The Date

Nooooo you stopped right before the good stuff...damn! lol



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah, I know. That was kind of my intention! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: karo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:19 PM Title: The Date

thanks for your story. it's really amazing!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: xtothey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:18 PM Title: The Date

Uh, I hope they do it. Please?!?!?!?!?!?



Author's Response:

Haha, I'll see what I can convince them into doing! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 7:23 PM Title: The Date

I am glad that Edward has been paitent with her because she needed not to be pushed/..



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know. He's kind of my Prince Charming! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 7:01 PM Title: The Date

:)

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:36 PM Title: The Date

Oh Gelix so near yet so far how cruel you are to us at times - this is almost as bad as the chapter where I thought you had thrown "our girl" off a cliff!!!

 

Ha ha (Then I'll have a surprise... or two in store for you!) You now have my full attention and if I were to analise that statement I would be thinking Twins, hmmm you now find me tapping my foot on the floor impatiently.

If you love me send me a teaser - laters Debs (UK).xx



Author's Response:

Haha, I know! But I had to do it! :)

Okay, I can guarentee you that there won't be any babies for ExB for another few more chapters. But keep on with the speculations! :)

I don't have a teaser yet, but it's only two more days left! And I do love you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: The Date

aww  sweet date



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:14 PM Title: The Date

I SWEAR TO GAAAAWWWWDDDD! You did not really just stop it there?! You are evvviiiillllll!!!  lol AWESOME CHAPPY WOMAN!

Im still mad tho.

PS-If and only they bone in the next chapter will I forgive you!



Author's Response:

Haha, I had to stop it there or it would have been too long! ;)

Thank you, and I hope you'll stop being mad at me when you've read chapter 17!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: hkimberly Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:04 PM Title: The Date

Sweet.... I can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: The Date

Holy Crow! Now I seriously cannot wait till Wednesday, I loved this chapter. I really hope they get to make that finaly connection, if not then I'm sure you'll have a really good reason. Excellent job, ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

I hope I'll meet your expentations on the next chapter!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:50 PM Title: The Date

Great chapter. Can't wait to see how far Edward and Bella will go.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:20 PM Title: The Date

COCKBLOCKER! lol no I'm kidding. I can't wait till Wednesday. they're going to finally do it. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Haha, SORRY! It's only two more days and then I'll post it, so it's not very far away!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:03 PM Title: The Date

Yea!  Great chapter.  Edward is so sweet and understanding.

I'm guessing that something will happen to muck it up; it wouldn't be as exciting otherwise.

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 9:43 PM Title: I love you

Yay! I love the end: I love your tits! Oh, and you too.



Author's Response:

Haha, I'm glad you liked it! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 8:31 PM Title: I love you

Great chapter. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:50 AM Title: Goals

I was one of the reviewers that got erased! I can't particularly remember what I said to you but there was something in chapter 13 that made me guffaw (in public) and I wanted to share that with you. I was trying to be self-contained, but as always, as soon as you're in public and stifling laughter, that's when the extreme laughter (complete with snorts) comes...



Author's Response:

I wish I could remember (if I ever saw the review, that is) because that sounds funny. And I would've LOVED to see that! haha, so funny! Although, very embarrassing ^^

Thank you for sharing it with me now, because it made me laugh! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: KarenT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:07 PM Title: Time goes by

Interesting twist with Aro being Edwards godfather, i didnt see that coming :)

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 8:06 AM Title: I love you

very sweet surprise for her, and another big step taking a shower with him

Author's Response:

Yeah, I know! :) And more steps it will be!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:18 AM Title: The Past

hmmm well James confirmed that Edward was watching her alot.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:12 AM Title: I love you

I am so glad Bella finally said "I love you".  I loved Edward's reaction.  He really needed that from Bella.  Great job...thanks so much!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:45 AM Title: Time goes by

hmmm aro is his godfather.....interesting

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 12:03 AM Title: The Wedding

hmmm wonder what that reaction is for.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:28 PM Title: Road trip

Marriage isnt consumated so she could get a divorce....but I know I know....its a story.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but like you said, it's a story. And what kind of story would it be if she got a divorce. Plus, she doesn't know that ^^

Thanks for all your reviews, keep them coming! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:19 PM Title: Mrs. Cullen

Oh I'd kill Alice...... or book my own flight home.

Reviewer: twi-love300 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:48 PM Title: I love you

Hey Gelix i think the quote for the this chapter "You are the only man that who makes my heart beat faster and slower at the same time," is from Hot Chick. Am i right? Great story btw!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:47 PM Title: I love you

I'm still here, Gelix!  Until the end.  :)

The Aunt Flow was great, I couldn't stop laughing.

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for that! :D

I'll see you on Sunday, then!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:56 PM Title: I love you

Hi Gelix, great chapter and am thrilled our girl has admitted her true feelings they can now really start to move forward with the relationship.

Laters - Debs.x



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I was almost on my way to report you missing! ;) I've missed your reviews!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: rosaliehale1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:56 PM Title: I love you

Loved it!

So glad Bella finally said ' i love you'

And LOL Edward not knowing what 'Aunty Flow' is!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:59 AM Title: I love you

Love your story. the aunt flow statement is funny as hell and from some move but cant remember witch one.  so glad she said she loved him.  there was something wrong last week with the site pepole probly couldnt leave there review.  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I know something was wrong because I couldn't access the site, I just didn't know it would effect my story that much! ^^

Thanks again,

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: I-Love-Peace-Tea Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:46 AM Title: Time goes by

I love this story so far and i like how you added my fav tv show supernatural lol :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

And it's my favorite TV-show too so of course I need it to be in my story! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 6:15 AM Title: I love you

that was totally hot non sex in the shower! and funny as hell when he didnt know what aunt flow was! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

I'll see you on Sunday for the next update.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:23 AM Title: I love you

THANK GAWD she said it!!!  Good night sweet Gloria I was gonna smack her!  Now GET SOME SEX FOR THAT POOR BOY!  NO more excuses, he needs to get laid by his wife!  She needs to stop acting like a wimp and smexy time with the hubby!  For crying out loud already!  She's an adult and he is mad for her!!!! Big girl panties....off and let him poke you, Bella!



Author's Response:

Yeah, you're not alone with that. She would probably be bruised like crazy by now. But it's not easy to trust someone THAT fast, and then give your virginity to that person. Things like that takes time. There will be sex within the next three chapters though, but I won't tell you which one!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:04 AM Title: I love you

GLAD she finally told him .. good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:45 AM Title: I love you

Don't worry, I haven't left. I think there might be a problem with this site though. I haven't been getting my alerts for updates. I just keep checking the site. Anyways, I so happy that she finally told him, I don't even know how Bella can think that they won't make it. Of course you can always throw in some twist that could make it seem possible. Great job as always. ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know there has been problems, I just didn't know it would effect my story :(

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: kljluvu1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:45 AM Title: I love you

Oh my gosh! I'm completely in love with the love story between Edward and Bella. Great Job on this(: Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so, so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:25 AM Title: I love you

So Cute.  I'm glad she waited.  You shouldn't hear that for the first time over a phone line spanning half the world. 

CTW, just found your story today, and read the whole thing.  Loving it!

Cheers,

Balti K



Author's Response:

I know, but the readers was mad at me anyway ^^

Thank you so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: FFstories Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:23 AM Title: I love you

Loved the quote my heart beats faster and slower at the same time. But can't for the life of me remember where I heard it. Loved the chapter though.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: I love you

i still love the story but i have been sick to review. can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I hope you feel better know! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:03 AM Title: I love you

I <3 the new banner!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll be sure to pass that on to the maker! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrscullen912 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:34 AM Title: I love you

I really love this story. I can't wait to see where it goes. I feel your pain about the reviews. No one reviews my story either! haha Anyway, great job. Keep up the great writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I know, it sucks. The reviews is what keeps me going! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 12:44 AM Title: I love you

Awwwwe he came back :) And she loves him :) We all knew that, but it's still nice to see them grow as a real couple. Great chapters.



Author's Response:

Of course he came back! :)

Thank you! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 12:31 AM Title: I love you

She finally told him that she loved him!! YEA!!! I am glad that he came home early otherwise he would have had to wait to hear her tell him that.



Author's Response:

I'm happy that he did, too! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 11:05 PM Title: I love you

I am so happy that Edward surprised Bella by returning home 3 days earlier than planned. Bella's opportunity to say I LOVE YOU was perfectly timed. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I'll see you on Sunday for the next chapter!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Molliegoodgolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:53 PM Title: I love you

I still love it! :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do, and thank you for that! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:48 PM Title: I love you

I LOVED this chapter! Edward is too cute!  I just hope that Bella gets her groove on soon!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:47 PM Title: I love you

:)



Author's Response:

;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:45 PM Title: I love you

Thisis a great story,  I love that she finally told him that she loved him.  I think they will be great together.  He seems to be caring and will do right by her when he take her.  I hope so anyway.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

And Edward couldn't be anymore right for Bella! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:23 PM Title: I love you

wonderful chapter! So happy she finally told him she loved him. Loved the Aunt Flow!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: nomadil Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:20 PM Title: Vegas

I am still really enjoying the story. You asked about reviews. I gotta say the site updates really screwed up my favorites. When I get a notification, it won't open the chapter from the email. I caught your update when I was browsing by category. I had a few chapters to read! I will keep a closer eye out for the story now. Keep up the good writing!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do! And I hope the problems on this site are fixed soon, because they're driving me crazy!

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: padalf2510 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:19 PM Title: I love you

Awe good chapter!! Sooooo sort of lemony!!! And a first 'I love you'!! Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:15 PM Title: I love you

I love this story!!  I'm glad she finally was able to say "I love you".  Still glad she didn't say it over the phone too.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I'm glad someone agrees with me on that! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: sweetremembreance13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:01 PM Title: I love you

o so funny i love a in the dark edward



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: juliaerica Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:55 PM Title: Time goes by

Eftersom jag såg att du var från sverige så skriver jag till dig på svenska. Jag hittade din historia idag och har lite svårt att slita mig från den, den är en av de bästa jag har läst. Ville bara att du skulle veta.

Ulrika



Author's Response:

Wow, tack så jättemycket! :D

Blir superglad utav att höra detta!

TACK!

xx
Gelix

P.S. Väldigt roligt med svenska läsare ;)

Reviewer: jhearte Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:45 PM Title: I love you

love the story.  aunt flow...too funny.  can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

I'll see you on Sunday for the next update!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: renren Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:27 PM Title: I love you

As soon as I read the quote I knew it was from "The Hot Chick" it's also one of my favorite comedies!

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: I love you

Happy to see that Edward was able to get home quicker than the two weeks they thought. It seems Bella is getting a little more bold. Can't wait to see if she is going to try anything with Edward.

Reviewer: xtothey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:03 PM Title: I love you

FINALLY!!! so glad she told him and they are moving forward!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I am too! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:59 PM Title: I love you

Love that Bella took the next step!  Can't wait til they let it be known there will be no annulment



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And that will happen within the next three chapters, I promise!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: I love you

I really enjoy this story, so I look forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I'll see you on Sunday for the next update, then! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:49 PM Title: I love you

its probably because you cockblock us, you meanie! lol no I don't know why but I'm still here so that's counting for something right? lol I love this story and I LOVE that Edward didn't know who Aunt Flo was. :) I thought for sure that Bella was going to say yes to Edward's fingers but instead she said doesn't mean she can't play with him. LOVE IT. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yeah, that does definitely count! :)

I'll pick up right where I finished in the last chapter, and the sex will happen within the next three chapters! I promise :)

Thanks!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:37 PM Title: I love you

You are the only man who makes my heart beat faster and slower at the same time.” Hot Chick, I love that movie. Good one, I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:34 PM Title: I love you

Perfect timing with the 'I Love you's.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:16 PM Title: I love you

I love your story but i honestly wish they would take the next step of sex because bella seems a little whiny at times. She is not really the bella in the books because that bella wouldnt be so hesitant i mean i know she had to get to the point of loving him, but now that she is there "Aunt flow" kind of sours the mood. Also I know this is a weird thing to point out, but in the shower girls shouldnt be wearing tampons thats just plan gross and makes no sense when you wash yourself lol. I just had to point that out because you put it in the story i really think you shouldnt have. Other then that I love this story and I just cant wait for more loving between the two of them.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but I don't think it's right for my Bella and my story for her to just give up her virginity ten minutes after she said 'I love you,' but it will happen within the next three chapters, I promise.

And I DON'T want my Bella to be like Stephenies, it's my story so I want to use my own characters even though they have the same name as hers.

As for the tampons. Some girls wear them in the shower, and some don't.

Thank you for your honesty and your thoughts. Not many give 'bad' critic, so thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: NaMaDRI Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:14 PM Title: I love you

i love that they finally 'i love you-ed' each other!

 

xoxo

NaMaDRI



Author's Response:

Yeah, I love that, too! :)

Thanks!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: im exactly ur brand of heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:09 PM Title: I love you

the quote from this chapter was from the Hot Chick movie: "Your the only man who makes my heart beat faster and slower at the same time."

love the story!!!!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:01 PM Title: I love you

Aww so sweet.  I like that Bella is getting more comfortable...cannot wait to see how things keep on progressing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: exler930 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:45 PM Title: I love you

Oh I am so happy!!  I just love this story. Crazy with the flashback to graduation. Will we find out what was wrong with Bella or did you already tell us? BTW...love the banner. Can't wait till Sunday. I hope she ends up giving it to him soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Yeah, go back to chapter 10 and you'll get to read most of her 'problems'. I still have some left to tell you, but most of it was told in that chapter!

Thanks again!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:11 AM Title: Goals

I am truly into this story.  I am so glad B finally talked to someone.  I am also amazed that she is still hung up on the v card.  Give it to him already!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

She will give it to him sooner than you know! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:06 AM Title: Leaving on a jet plane

I'm so proud of B saying she loved E even if he didn't hear it.  Niff, Niff!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:05 AM Title: Unknown

Great chapter!  I truely loved Eclipse.  The did a great job with the fighting scene.  I truely love your descriptive writing.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:48 PM Title: Goals

Awww.. I hope that Bella tells Edward that she loves him when he gets back becuase I think that would make his day.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU for all of your reviews! I've loved each and every one of them! :)

And I think he'll be happy, too!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:05 PM Title: Leaving on a jet plane

That was sweet until Emmett had to go and ruin it! LOL

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:49 PM Title: Goals

:)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:47 PM Title: Goals

Poor Edward!  When she says it, he'll leap from the rooftops with joy.

 

Waiting for the update....



Author's Response:

I think so, too! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:04 PM Title: Unknown

Why is he saying that he has to leave?? I hope that it isn't bad.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:34 PM Title: Birthday

Ok if you are still doing the movie thing there was totally something from new moon in there! I loved that Edward bought her a dog for her birthday.

Reviewer: lene Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:36 AM Title: Time goes by

hi :-) you asked so nicely so i thought i would write a review ;-)

i like your story so far. I often can´t decide if i want bella to be harder on edward or if i want her to kiss him already.^



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Haha, I know the feeling!

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:50 AM Title: Time goes by

I love this story, its is so orginal and I am waiting for the HEA.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:00 AM Title: Goals

Great chapter!! You did well! ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:09 AM Title: Goals

I have to agree with Edward, she needs to start giving him more. He's been amazing and it doesn't seem like it's give and take you know. I would hate for him to look else where for what she's not giving him. Also I think that if she keeps it up that he's going to start to get mad at her and they're going to start to fighting. Didn't find the quote but I had to tell you that I loved the chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for your thoughts, and I agree with some of what you said. It's just hard to tell a person you used to hate with all your heart that you love him. Give her some time! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:14 AM Title: Goals

He's not gonna wait forever and he shouldn't have to, she needs to pull on her big girl panties already!!!



Author's Response:

I know, and she will... soon! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:25 AM Title: Goals

aww, poor Edward, he wants that ILY so bad

Author's Response:

Yeah, and I would've too! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:23 AM Title: The Past

It is good that she told Edward about her past and Emily. I can't believe that they ran into James too and the present is her dog isn't it?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:37 AM Title: Goodbye

Ok did she jump off the cliff or was she just saying goodbye to the sadness??

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:30 AM Title: Goals

Great chapter!
Let's hope Bella can say the magic three words in the next chapter. When Edward returns home,I hope that Bella plans a special DATE NIGHT that includes a romantic bath.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And we'll see what will happen when he gets home!

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Gelix

Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:59 AM Title: Goals

Aww sweet chapter addition... cannot wait to read more.



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Thank you! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:52 AM Title: Time goes by

I really didn't see Bella's boss being Edward's Godfather coming. I am glad that she is starting to  be able to have memories and be sad about them.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:09 AM Title: Goals

It would probably be easier to text or say the words over the phone the first time that way by the time she sees him she is used to it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but that's not very personal. But she'll say them to him eventually ^^

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Gelix

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:08 AM Title: Goals

lol great chappy waiting for her to call Edward back with a love you too :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:59 PM Title: Goals

cute chapter thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:56 PM Title: Goals

that poor guy. he's expecting an answer and not getting one. :( I love where this is going. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you, and he'll hear it very soon, I promise!

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Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:46 PM Title: Breakdown

That is so sad that her friend died and it is even more surprising that she let Edward in and let him comfort her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:15 PM Title: The Wedding

Why did that make her sad? Edward and Bella seem to be getting along very well don't they?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 10:52 PM Title: Goals

That was good distance makes the heart grow fonder she knows how much she misses him.  I cant wait till they see each other again.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

They'll see each other soon again! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 10:33 PM Title: Husband and Wife

I wonder how this lunch is going to go since she is still mad at Alice.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:56 PM Title: Road trip

Well I am glad that he is fighting for her. I am glad also that he is going to make her give him a chance and I think that a year is fair enough.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:20 PM Title: Mrs. Cullen

I am really surprised that Alice is on Edward's side in all of this. I am glad that she is though because if she hadn't been then they wouldn't be traveling to Seattle by car.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:06 PM Title: Goals

uggg she needs to grow up and say it already these excuses are getting thin , very thin.



Author's Response:

Yes, she does. And she will eventually.

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Gelix

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:00 PM Title: Leaving on a jet plane

Ok the goodbye,totally made me cry.Makes my heart so effin happy to see them making the marriage work out.Edward is so drewl worthy.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I was able to touch you with my words! And I totally agree with you about Edward! ;)

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Gelix

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