Date: 22 Nov 2010 12:10 PM Title: On our own
Loved it :) Brilliant as always! Cannot wait for more! Oh.. I like fluff... Have a fantastic Thanksgiving/Holidays! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
You have a great holiday too! We don't celebrate it here in Sweden, so I had no idea it was the next weekend ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:58 AM Title: On our own
I love the fluff
Author's Response:
Yeah, me, too! ;)
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Gelix
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:04 AM Title: On our own
aww they are too cute. thanks for that chapter. we got daddy/daughter time mixed with mommy/daddy hot sexy time. lol love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:43 AM Title: On our own
good chapter thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you!
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Gelix
Date: 22 Nov 2010 1:09 AM Title: On our own
Nice to see them at home with the baby. It's so tiring at first when they don't sleep but it gets better. Is Bella pumping now so Edward can help out with feedings?
Bella will be nervous the first time Edward goes to work for the day and leaves her home with the baby alone. Maybe Rose can come and visit for a while that day to ease her into it.
Author's Response:
No, Bella hasn't started pumping yet. I'll let you know when she does :)
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 12:41 AM Title: On our own
New parents are so cute :) Alice needs a baby too....
It cracks me up when you have Edward change poopy diapers :-)
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked that, haha ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 22 Nov 2010 12:15 AM Title: On our own
lol new parents are so cute.
Author's Response:
Yeah, they are ;)
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Gelix
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:36 PM Title: On our own
I don't like when people say that I hope they will make it through loved it update when you can thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I promise that this story has a happy ending :)
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Gelix
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:15 PM Title: On our own
great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:13 PM Title: On our own
I love daddy Edward, great chapter as always. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I love him, too! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:31 PM Title: On our own
Will they fight?????????/
Author's Response:
We'll have to wait and see ^^
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:04 PM Title: On our own
Got to love a little smut.
I like how these two are coping. I was worried that Bella would freak.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:47 PM Title: On our own
well poor edward cant have sex yet! cant wait to see what happens next to these 2
Author's Response:
Yeah, he will have to be satisfied with other things until they can have sex again ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:09 PM Title: On our own
Very cute.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:50 PM Title: On our own
i loved it and they are such a cute little family!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'm glad you liked it! :)
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:44 PM Title: On our own
Good to see they are doing ok by themselves in taking care of Emily.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:01 AM Title: Mrs. Cullen
hehe..interesting
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:44 AM Title: Vegas
omg... this sounds interesting.. i cant wait to read more
Date: 17 Nov 2010 8:02 AM Title: Coming Home
I love the sweetness of this chapter. I love babys
Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:12 AM Title: Coming Home
I'm not sure about this quote but I've figured out most of them so far...
When I told him that it was okay for him to speed up a little, all he answered was, "No, these guys can honk all they want, I ain't going faster than twelve. It might take us around three hours to get home, though." I laughed at his silliness and turned to my daughter, saying, "Your daddy is a little overprotective. You might want to get used to it." "Of course I am," Edward scoffed. "I have my two most precious girls in the backseat of my car. I'm not going to risk that." From the movie Knocked up
Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:31 AM Title: Coming Home
Well I really hope that there is nothing wrong with Alice and that is what is causing her to be sad.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:13 PM Title: Coming Home
Awww such a sweet daddy
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:59 PM Title: Coming Home
What a sweet chapter. I am glad that everyone is there for them. I am worried about Alice. I hope she has not gotten bad news about not being able to have kids. I hope it is just taking longer then she wants it to. I love the chapter. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:15 PM Title: Coming Home
Aahww.. I'm scared Alice can't get pregnant.. :( She doesn't deserve that!
Well, I'm waiting till Sunday for next chapter! Keep up the good work!
xLiss
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:53 AM Title: Coming Home
Don't know what the quote is this time, but i think Alice is wanting a baby of her own. both her best friends have babies and maybe her and Jasper are trying but having problems. I hope things dont get too angsty but it has been a bit to fluffy lately and don't want this story to end any time soon so bring on some drama. Cant wait till next week.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:49 AM Title: Coming Home
when babies arrive then angst needs to die down.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:29 AM Title: Coming Home
Excellent chatper, it is good to see that they have settled.
My guess with Alice is that she either cant get preggers or really does not want to.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:26 AM Title: Coming Home
"No, these guys can honk all they want, I ain't going faster than twelve. It might take us around three hours to get home, though."
Is it from Knocked up?
Loved the update!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:24 AM Title: Coming Home
I would guess difficulty conceiving
Date: 15 Nov 2010 4:37 AM Title: Coming Home
how about LEMONY?? lol no I'm kidding. I know Bella's probably super sore so its going to be awhile before then but one can hope right? lol and Alice well Alice is upset because she doesn't have a baby of course. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye p.s. please expand on Edward's thoughts of wondering what Bella's breastmilk taste like. that would be a great great outtake or lemon. :D thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 4:36 AM Title: Coming Home
Great job, I'm wondering if Alice and Jasper are having problems concieving? Just a guess. Can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:26 AM Title: Coming Home
Great chapter!!!!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 1:02 AM Title: Coming Home
Loved the quote from Knocked Up, but honestly I think when guys do that its taking it a step too far. Anyways great chapter. Can't wait to find out whats up with Alice.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:17 AM Title: Coming Home
i'm thinking that alice maybe can't have kids? i really hope she can though because it looks like alice and jas really want a baby!! i love that edward is so understanding and sensitive and that bella isn't pushing him away because she doesn't look the same, i loved it and i can't wait for more!
Date: 14 Nov 2010 11:56 PM Title: Coming Home
Wonderfuly written per usual. Brought back so many memories of bringing my oldest one home it's scary.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 10:40 PM Title: Coming Home
i love dadward..lol
cant wait for more chapters and was that a knocked up quote in there?
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:32 PM Title: Coming Home
she could be jealous ? of all the attention is now on the baby and not her? but whats to say that theres something a matter with her
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 8:43 PM Title: Coming Home
I think either Jasper is not ready for kids or they have been trying and found out they can't or it will be really hard to have on loved it very much and I liked the "Knocked up" quote that made me laugh when he had all those cars behind him and he was only going 12 MPH on the freeway update when you can thanks....
Date: 14 Nov 2010 7:45 PM Title: Coming Home
Great chapter and loved the quote from "Knocked Up".
Date: 14 Nov 2010 7:35 PM Title: Coming Home
im in love with your story and i hope her eyes turn out green! keep up the amazingg work! :)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 7:12 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Loved the chapter. Only one thing Bella should have chosen the epidural so she didn't have to go through the pain. Well that's just my own preference, But seems like she still managed.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:03 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
AWWWW!! Welcome Emily Grace, You want to go wacky and give her the "David Bowie" and make one eye brown and the other green... lol Great chap made me cry. Can't wait for more.
E/k
Date: 09 Nov 2010 7:20 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
That was such a great chapter!!! I miss having a little baby! I can't believe that my son will be 3 in 5 months, it seems like just yesterday he was in the hospital with me and a little one.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 2:40 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
green
Date: 09 Nov 2010 1:33 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Killers: "Really? You wanna poke mama bear right now, does that seems like a good idea?"
Green! A mother is always right after all! :)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 8:49 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
green..............
luved it
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:35 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
That was go great thank for no complications and a perfect baby. I so love this story and look forward to it every week
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:23 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Love it.. Green!!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:31 AM Title: Together
There first time was cute
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 5:37 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Awww!!!
Loved the chapter!
You did really well for writing the birth....loved the bit when she's screaming at Edward it was liking walking down memory lane!!!
Much love,
xoxoxooxxoxo
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 4:05 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
green
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:23 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
may i ask why bella is so weak just weak
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:01 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Great chapter, I think brown hair with green eyes. A little of both. ;)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:01 AM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
I'm curious what her actual eye color will be.
Great Chapter.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:47 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
I loved it and I like that you tried to make as realistic as possible! I'm kind of hoping for green eyes!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:13 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
hazel is both brown and green lol
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:01 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Green eyes! I think she have Edwards eyes and that her hair should be a cross between Bella and Edwards! The birth was very spot on. I had two and didn't find anything wrong with the way you had written it. Well, actually...I thought it was a little bit selfish to keep Edward from watching the head coming out. Her vagina will recover and he deserved the right to see his child being born. But aside from that...good chapter!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:53 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Wow good to see Emily arrived without any complications. I think the quote for this chapter is from the movie Killers: "Really? You wanna poke mama bear right now, does that seems like a good idea?"
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:17 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
GREEN EYES
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:02 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Well I wanted his hair and her eyes but since she has Bella's hair, I want Edward's eyes. :D lol I loved that chapter. it was too sweet. Edward was so caring and sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:01 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
bellas hair and edwards green eyes for sure!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:41 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
they need to be green! im so happy that everything went ok with the delivery! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Aww soo cute, I've been waiting for this, I soooo want to have another baby now, lol!
Her eyes better be green!!
<3
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:30 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Yeah - I'm so glad she is finally here! Awesome chapter - and I think Emily needs Edwards green eyes :)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:27 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Green eyes! Bella's hair and Edwards eyes!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:09 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Enjoyed it. Green eyes please!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:00 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
I would like to see her haved green eyes :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:51 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
I want them green and I loved this chapter very much and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks for sharing this with us.....
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:41 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
write more!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:35 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
GREEN!!! Brown eyes are cool and all,but if she's gonna have Bella's hair, she needs to have Edward's eyes. :)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:35 PM Title: Emily Grace Cullen
Perfect birth by the way. You did a great job writing it. Wonderfully written as usual and I'm looking forward to the first night at home by themselves.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 10:42 PM Title: Starting of a new life
The quote was from "My Best Friend's Wedding" this time. The wedding suited them perfectly. Every time she complains about how bad the kicking is I think she is going into labor. You keep faking me out. Keeping me on my toes, I like that. I also loved Edward's interaction with Lily in the last couple of chapters. When he put those headphones on her, I cracked up. But it worked! I can't believe that I am finally caught up. I am looking forward to following the rest of the story as you write it.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 1:07 AM Title: Starting of a new life
Cute wedding.
I can't wait to see these two in the delivery room.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 1:04 AM Title: Starting of a new life
I loved it! I loved the wedding and I can't wait for Emily!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:45 PM Title: Secrets
This quote was from "Top Gun". I finally got one! By the way, this was a very sexy lemon. It is so touching that they are so patient with each other.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: Together
You did a great job with the sex scene. I thought it was very realistic. I can't imagine how hard it is to write lemons. Let alone virgin lemons.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:44 PM Title: I love you
I really love that Edward is being so patient with her. All of this build up is awesome and will lead to a very great 1st time for her. i also like that your chapters are longer.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 2:14 AM Title: Starting of a new life
OMG!!!!
E/k
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:54 AM Title: Starting of a new life
Nice chapter, even though I hated the cliff hanger, but all is good. lol!
At first, I thought the quote was that one by Emily Bronte, but then I found it!
"I had the strangest dream. I dreamt that some psychopath was trying to break the two of you up. Luckily, I woke up and I see that the world is just as it should be. For my best friend has won the best woman."
I'm pretty sure that quote was in My Best Friend's Wedding.
Please update soon!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:28 AM Title: Time goes by
Ok, you guilted me into a review. I never know if authors still want to hear from me if I am catching up on a story that is already going. I am really enjoying this story. It is different and I have been reading a lot of fan fiction lately. I like sweet Edward and sassy Bella. Your writing style is very easy to read and follow. You don't appreciate that until you read a story that is hard follow. Can't wait to hear more about Bella's past and also delve more into their friends. Are Aro's feelings going to be hurt that he wasn't invited to the wedding? Also is that the reason that Bella got the job "on the spot".
Date: 01 Nov 2010 10:30 PM Title: Starting of a new life
Is she in labor? I'm excited to find out what happens in the next chapter.
I loved the wedding and am glad they were able to have this renewal of their vows w/ their friends and family there to see it.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:13 PM Title: Starting of a new life
oh-oh........whats with the pain..........hahahah........it was a sweet and sexy chapter
loved it
Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:28 PM Title: Starting of a new life
Oh man is Emily coming now?? I really hope so just as long as everything is ok with her.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:14 PM Title: Starting of a new life
Sunday Wednesday 7th? Wow someone's been putting too much time in writing for us fans...hugs awesome chappy and now i go slip back into my chocolate coma filled with dreams of Edward ....
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:59 AM Title: Starting of a new life
oh oh oh the beginning of that speech sounded like Julia Roberts in My Best Friends Wedding
Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:38 AM Title: Starting of a new life
That was the best sweet and so loving.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:18 AM Title: Starting of a new life
lol for alice
Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:03 AM Title: Starting of a new life
Damn, what a ending. Wonderfully written as usual.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:47 AM Title: Starting of a new life
I had the strangest dream. I dreamt that some psychopath was trying to break the two of you up. Luckily, I woke up and I see that the world is just as it should be. For my best friend has won the best woman
My Best Friends Wedding
Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:06 AM Title: Starting of a new life
Aww they're married! YEAH!! and the baby's coming. Even bigger YEAH!!! I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 11:37 PM Title: Starting of a new life
Loved it very much and so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks Is she going to come early or is there something else going on I guess we will find out next week....
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 9:40 PM Title: Starting of a new life
What a beautiful wedding and oh Emily is coming!
Author's Response:
Thank you, and maybe she is! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 31 Oct 2010 9:38 PM Title: Starting of a new life
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:52 PM Title: Starting of a new life
well i hope for her sake nothing happens wit hthe babby cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Author's Response:
We'll see what happens to Emily!
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:44 PM Title: Starting of a new life
Another wonderful chapter - thanks so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:42 PM Title: Starting of a new life
Everything went very well at their wedding. Funny how Edward was found by Alice in the end. Glad to see Esme was on their side and put Edward in that room. I hope nothing goes wrong with Emily. Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:28 PM Title: Starting of a new life
Perfect chapter, can't wait to see if the baby is arriving or not. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:41 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
Enjoyed it! Looking forward to the wedding and your "something bigger." Will Bella have the baby after the wedding?
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:40 PM Title: Scared of something beautiful
I was shocked to find out the Emma was Jessica's daughter. That poor girl.
I'm glad Edward went to sleep w/ Bella. I find that rule of the bride & groom being a part the night before the wedding, especially when they are all ready married quite ridiculous. I can only guess that they will get caught and the rath of Alice will come down on them.
I loved the chapter and look forward to your next update.