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Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 8:12 PM Title: Surprise

DAMN!!!!  What a chapter.  Wonderful a usual.  Looking forward to you teasing me later in the week.

 

~Ella



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Yeah, you'll get two teasers this week too!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mzvez Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 8:04 PM Title: Surprise

"I don't want u to see my wobbly bits"   Bridget Jones the Edge of Reason

 

Love this story.  Can't wait for your new one too.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:49 PM Title: Surprise

Fab chapter!  I remember having nightmares like that when I was pregnant..not fun at all!  I just hope for Bella and Edward they are just dreams and not a premonition!

 

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lenecarter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:46 PM Title: Vegas

 

Yes I am Brazilian, but I am studing Swedish and Norwegian. For five months...it's ..and is very funny...

Great chapter .Worth the wait.Good as always...

Quote :''Bridget Jones .The edge of reason.

 

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:02 PM Title: Surprise

Good job on the chapter this week.  Though I imagine Alice is going to be cranky about having fewer things to buy for the baby.  Aren't you supposed to wait for the shower to see what you still need, or register somewhere so people can give you presents? But I'm sure there's still tons of things the baby will need, like it's own laundry service.  They always seem to be leaking from one end or the other and messing their clothes.

See you in a week. Cheers,

Balti K



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I think that's optional. besides, they only bought the basic stuff. There is still things for others to buy :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 7:10 PM Title: New Body

hmmm yuumminess in the office

Reviewer: cullenbabe44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:56 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Good Twilight quote. One of my favorites!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 4:27 AM Title: New Body

I wonder what Edward has done??? Did he get a piano or something for the baby? I was cracking up when Edward was feeding Lily because guys sometimes are so funny they think that they will break a baby if they touch them. My sister acted like that last week when I was holding my neice I was thinking that I have a 2 1/2 year old son and he is still alive so she needs to calm down.. I think that it is funny now though.

Reviewer: exler930 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 9:19 PM Title: New Body

Ahh that was a cliffie from hell!!! I don’t even have words for it because I want to know SO BAD what it is!! Aaahhhh!!!!!!  I love it as usual.  Can't wait till Sunday!!!!!!!

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 9:00 PM Title: New Body

Have a nice break - Great chapter - Debs xxx

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:04 PM Title: New Body

Bella is happy at her new house, she wants to enjoy it, sadly it wasn't that easy since most of their stuff is still packed and she doesn't know exactly where everything is. 

The babysitting with Lilly was sweet and much needed practice, I hope they get to do it again. Also that Ros and Emmett will get to enjoy their entire night. ;)

Reviewer: cullenbabe44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:31 PM Title: Time goes by

Good 10 Things I Hate About You(movie not tv show) quotes. Good story so far, keep up good work!

Reviewer: 2journey Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 6:14 AM Title: New Body

Love it!  The surprise...hmmm  maybe Bella's old crib?  Who knows?  Can't wait for the next posting but know that RL can raise it's nasty head.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Good guess. We'll see on Sunday!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:36 AM Title: Vegas

hahaha...I actually laughed when I read--"What are the odds?"

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:48 AM Title: New Body

YAHOO, I got a quote right finally. I thought I was losing my touch. lol the quote is from 10 things I hate about you with the conversation between Emmett and Edward. :D ok question also, don't laugh but what does it mean to stork someone's ass? you said that and I thought it was funny but now I'm curious. I've never heard that before. As for this chapter, it was sweet and then HOT at the end. very sexy sexcatary look. lol I also loved Emmett and Rosalie. too good thanks again bye

Reviewer: devildogbully Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 1:55 AM Title: New Body

:)  I want and need a greek god!!



Author's Response:

Who doesn't?! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 1:30 AM Title: New Body

excited that everythings going as planned and well! cant wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: devildogbully Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 1:27 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

:)

 

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 12:56 AM Title: New Body

Great chapter. I like the idea of Bella writing her friends a letter. It might be easier for her. I do think eventually she will need to speak about it, but something is better than nothing. It's cute that Edward and Bella want to practice their baby caring skills on Lily.  Looking forward to reading more.

The quote is from 10 Things I hate about You: "You're not surrounded by your usual cloud of smoke."

"I know, I quit. Apparently they're bad for you."

Reviewer: rkelekoma Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 11:58 PM Title: New Body

good chapter. the quote is from 10 things I hate about you.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 11:49 PM Title: New Body

love it and can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 11:43 PM Title: New Body

Hot office sex oh bend me over fuck me like a dog please lol.   I think Leah and Jacob should be godperants I think Bella needs the conection with them.  Looking forward to next Sunday



Author's Response:

Yeah, but it's hard to have someone you basically don't know very well anymore. But thank you for letting me know what you think :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 9:34 PM Title: New Body

I love it!  These two babysitting was cute and so were Rose and Emmett.  I loved it when Edward was talking on both phones. 

I can't wait to see what the surprise is.  I have no idea.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 9:13 PM Title: New Body

I loved this chapter. The lemon towards the end was very interesting.  I wish I knew what the surprise was.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

You will know after Sunday!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 9:11 PM Title: New Body

10 Things I hate About You! I normally don't pay much attention to the quote but I love that movie! That scene was hilarious, too. "You think?" I love the look on Julia Stiles face when she says that.

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 8:57 PM Title: New Body

Excellent!  I cant wait unyil next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lenecarter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 7:29 PM Title: New Body

I love this chapter...even more because of   the quote is from 10 things I hate about you...I love this movie....

I'll be waiting the next chapter, and Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

Jag ser fram emot nästa kapitel.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 7:24 PM Title: New Body

Loved the chapter.  Looking forward to the surprise.

Waiting.....



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 7:17 PM Title: New Body

Hmm... What did he do to surprise her? Can't wait to see.

Well done on the chapter. I'm glad she's actually planning and taking real steps in her therapy and trying to communicate with her friends. I think it's also really good for her and Edward to see what Rose and Emmett are struggling with right now, so they have a better idea of what this will be like for them.

Nicely done on the Office sex.  I've always wanted to do that, but as I work in a lab, and the BF is a stage hand, it's very difficult. Though we have messed around at his gigs in the past. Good memories...

Can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers, Balti K



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And wow, seriously? That sounds kind of hot! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 7:17 PM Title: New Body

write more:)

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 7:10 PM Title: New Body

I loved it once again.. I'm not very original in my comments actually xD

but, I think Alice and Jasper should be godparents.. just because I want Alice to freak out ;)

xLiss



Author's Response:

Thank you. It's okay, I'm not very original with my responses ;)

And Alice would sure freak out, if not more! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 6:42 PM Title: New Body

Great chapter, I cannot wait till the baby is here! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you, me neither! ;)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:55 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

It's a hard decision to decide who will be Emilys godparents. Can't wait to see who you choose.

Reviewer: lenecarter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 10:23 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

My mother love the recipe...Love the name...so pretty...and the godparents ... maybe Alice and Jacob...or Jasper...

I am afraid of Renne ... you know the reaction she may have...

The quote is from the Amazing movie...the Proposal...

Wow. Barely made it out with my life. I mean, did you see those teeth.

 

 

Reviewer: exler930 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:36 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

Im a shit. I've read but haven't had a chance to review. I got your FB comment which reminded me to do this.  Wonderful as usual.  I'm getting so excited for the end result. BTW...I love the name.



Author's Response:

I didn't mean to make you feel like that, I was just worried that you didn't like it ^^

Thank you so much for taking your time to write me a review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:10 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

so damn awesome everything writte & described well



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:09 AM Title: The Honeymoon

so very awesome

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:08 AM Title: I love you

so veryn awesome this here is everything written well

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:18 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

They know the sex of the baby and they are thrilled about it. Bella knew it before, but as she said, just as a hunch, still the right one. The name was a great idea and an amazing gesture by Edward. Bella needs to tell her friends why, therapy is helping, but she needs a bit more time still.

The new house seems great. Esme did a great job. Now they just need to get to work on the nursery, and yes, a shopping trip for Bella ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: juliaerica Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:24 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Stuvade makaroner ja det borde alla testa perfekt när man har barn som inte vill äta nått. Plättar/pannkakor var också roligt att du skrev om. Jag tycker väldigt mycket om din historia, följer varje kapitel med spänning men är inte så bra på att lämna ett litet meddelande om vad jag tycker. Det är roligt att du skriver om graviditet och du gör det väldigt bra.Min yngsta är 4 och det känns så länge sen jag var gravid eller hade en liten bebis. Har 7 barn så jag har gjort mitt för att befolka sverige :)

Tack för att du delar med dig av denna historia, du skriver väldigt bra och hoppas jag kommer få läsa många saker som du skrivit.



Author's Response:

Tack så mycket! :)

Det är så grymt svårt att skriva om det eftersom jag aldrig varit med om det, men jag är glad över att du tycker det är bra!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: rosaliehale1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 10:56 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

Yay! A baby girl!

I think Alice and Jasper should be godparents! it would be so cute!

the first thing i bought my baby was and i still can't believe i bought the damn things *stupid hormones* a freakin boys mickey mouse crib and sheets.....but i found out i was having a girl (palm to face) just my luck.



Author's Response:

Haha, funny! ;)

Thank you for sharing!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:30 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

Fab chapter.x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: 2journey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:59 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

godparents should be alice and jasper.  good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:48 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

have both sets of friends be the godparents



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:21 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

I've seen Twilight a gazillion times, HOW did I miss that quote?

Totally missed this one too.

Godparents should be Jacob and his girl.



Author's Response:

Because it fitted so well? ;)

Thank you for your opinion!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: sweetremembreance13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:08 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

jacon and leah make it jacob and leah



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:25 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

I love that they are having a girl and her name is Emily.  That is very sweet of Edward.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:24 AM Title: Boy or Girl?

OMG could not stop laughing. LOL the qoute is from the proposal.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:19 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:16 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

I think that the first thing that I bought for my son was cute outfit that he went home from the hospital in.  I think that Rose and Emmett should be Emily's godparents. Let me just say that I am really excited that they are having a little girl!! They are sweet.



Author's Response:

Yes, they are! :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:37 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

A girl I was hoping so and the name is perfect.  I love this story I look forward to your updates Thank you.  I want to try the macaronis need receipe I have not check facebook you probley have it there??? 

I am a foster mom and on Friday I recevied a baby girl named Lillyana and we call her Lilly.  To show you how adicted to your story I am the first thing I thought about is that her name is the same as Rose's baby LOL  I think I need to look for a Married to the Enemy anommou ahlolices meeting LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And congratulations to the little girl!! The news actually made me smile even though I don't really know you! ;)

As for the macaronis, no, I haven't posted it on there, so I'm giving it to you here instead!

It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:22 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

Godparents.....hmmmm  dunno   Em and Rose I think.



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:08 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

Awesome chapter...I'm so glad they were finally able to move into their house. I'm nervous about Renee's reaction to Bella being pregnant. Also nervous about when Bella tells Rose and Alice about where the name Emily comes from, but excited about Charlie and Sue finding out the name of the baby.

I love your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:45 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

First off, I never got the recipe for the macaroni, would love it though. Second, the first thing I ever bought my oldest was a stuffed baby Taz from Looney Tunes and last but definitely not least, I think Alice and Jasper should be the Godparents. They're not really connected to either couple and their baby. I think it would be nice for them to feel included. Another good one. ;)

Author's Response:

I like your reason to have JxA as godparents! :)

As for the macaronis. It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:34 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

Great chapter as usual.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:33 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

Loved the chapter. I love the name for the baby. About the Godparents, I would probably pick someone that has a connection to Emily since that is who the baby is being named after. Maybe Jake and Leah? If not them, then I would go with Alice and Jasper since they are very close. I think either couple would be a great choice.
The quote in this chapter is from The Proposal: "Wow. Barely made it out with my life. I mean, did you see those teeth?"
Still haven't tried the macaroni. We haven't cooked this week. I'm looking forward to trying it though.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:12 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

Great chapter. Looks like Bella is getting to the "i'm so horny, I could hump the wall" phase of the pregnancy. Glad her self confidence didn't take a flying leap out the window when Edward fell asleep.

I'm still looking forward to trying the macaronis. Any tricks to it, or just boiled in milk? Any other ingredients?

Cheers, Balti K



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:02 PM Title: Boy or Girl?

happy its a gir! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

I'm glad! :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 5:10 PM Title: Together

Jane???? As in Sam's, Jane? This should be really interesting. Love it, can't wait to read the next chapter, which I'm going to get started on right now!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:47 PM Title: Goals

I understand why Bella wants to tell him in  person, but I have to admit I feel bad for Edward. I loved the chapter and I love your story.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:05 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

I just found this story and i think it is fantastic and i can't wait to read more.

Would i be right in assuming that English is not your first language. Just i noticed through the chapters there are a lot of misued words or joing words missing from sentences. It doesn't really bother me, you can figure out what it is supposed to be most of the time i was jsut curious.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And you're right, English is not my first language. I'm from Sweden ;)

I've asked my readers before if they would prefer faster updates or beta'd chapter that takes longer to update. They chose the first option so that's why there is a few misspellings and errors ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:16 PM Title: The Past

When you started talking about ALS I was wondering if it was a Motor Neuron Disease and then you classified this in the bottom.  I have to say that I started crying in this chapter a good family friend has just been told she has it and only has 3 - 5 years to live.

It has hit us all hard as she is such a lively person and does so much good in her community with fundraising for different charities.  It make me wonder sometimes why is it always the good people and then I take that back because in the end he has a purpose.

Thank you for this wonderful story



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry about your friend.. It's never easy to deal with things like that.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:01 AM Title: The Past

It is so sad that Emily had ALS. That's an awful disease, I have known two people who haved died of that, but they had had a chance to live long, happy lives. To get it at such a young age is heartbreaking.

I was quite surprised by them seeing James....I found it funny that he referred to Bella as being the girl Edward always watched. Did he know how Edward really felt about her?



Author's Response:

Two people? I can't even imagine to go through that. It was hard enough with one..

Yes, James knew Edward had something for Bella.

Thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:29 AM Title: Blossoming Flower

Still loving your story and looking forward to your next update.  When I was pregnant, I guess I was one of the lucky ones.   I never had morning sickness or mood swings or terrible cravings or anything.  Easy pregnancies and easy deliveries. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Yeah, I believe it's different from woman to woman, but Bella is in the group that isn't as lucky as you were :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:27 AM Title: Blossoming Flower

It is kinna sad that they are moving out of their apartment. I am glad that Bella has decided to not tell her mother about the baby because of stress because while she did say that she was sorry for the letter I still think that she would get angry at the fact that they are having a baby.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :)

Like Edward and Bella said: "New memories can be made."

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:19 AM Title: Goodbye

I've been reading this story on Twilighted and thought I would see if I could find this story on here as well. I was extremely happy to find it here and can't wait to keep reading the chapters you have posted. I love the story and absolutely loved the Jessica situation in this chapter.

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:11 PM Title: Vegas

Sounds good, just without the ketchup. I'll try it next time I make macaroni and I'll let you know how it turns out.

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:13 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Quote had to be 'Its fine Bella. You won't hurt her' from Twilight.

Good chapter

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:55 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Will the kids actually eat it? If it means i can get my kid to eat hell yeah i want instructions. Btw great chapter, I remeber those days of my pregnancy, my ex thought I was psychotic.



Author's Response:

It's very popular with the kids here in Sweden, but I don't know! I would say: it doesn't hurt to try! :)

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It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usually do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

 

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:37 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

ok i do love this story and have been reading it from the get go, but i can not stand this bella she gets more and more bitchy and its not even the pregnancy that bothers me. i just wish you would make her a little less mean....especially when it comes to her weight she isnt even big and when i read this it makes me almost hate the self image problems...especially since shes really tiny in the first place. other then that this story is great.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and honesty!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 3:37 AM Title: Secrets

Your story continues to keep me riveted.  I personally have had trouble leaving reviews on this website.  Sometimes, it just won't submit it.  I'm so glad they worked things out.  Looking forward to next chapter. 

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 3:03 AM Title: Together

Your sex scene was very tastefully written and your Edward was everything a first time lover should be.  Well done.

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:30 AM Title: The Date

God, your Edward is such a romantic.  B is one lucky girl.  Onto the lovin' in the next chapter (hopefully). 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:25 AM Title: Blossoming Flower

god again I didn't get the quote.:( that sucks but the chapter was sweet. especially with the fighting and making up. call me a perv but when does Bella's hormones kick in. that I can't wait for. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you! Better luck next time! :)

The story isn't going to be about sex, but there will be some sexy times ahead! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:37 AM Title: I love you

Love your story.  I've had to toggle back and forth between FF site and this one because sometimes this site goes down without notice.  Anyway, love these guys and I'm so hoping everything will work out for them.  Bella really needs some happiness in her life. 

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:19 AM Title: Blossoming Flower

yes i would love the instructions on how to make that. love the bannerand bella was smart for not telling renee about the baby until she is sure that renee is sorry. my email is my-st-y@hotmail.com. you can send it there

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:39 AM Title: Blossoming Flower

Edward is right, Bella needs to find a way to control her temper, at least a bit. Yes, hormones can be a pain, but she needs to balance things, for everyone's happiness.

It was good Bella finally talked with her mother. Things are moving along to a better place, slowly, but it's an improvement.

Lilly is here!!! Huge reminder of what is to come for these two.



Author's Response:

She will start working on that in time!

Thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: monkeymansgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:29 AM Title: Blossoming Flower

ohh instructions pls they sound interesting. great chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Okay, so for the macaronis. It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

 

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

xx
Gelix

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:59 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

I love it.  I am sure moving is going to be a little hard.  They are giving up the first place they made good memories together.  Living close to Rose and Emmett will be good though. 

I have never heard of boiling macaroni in milk.  I will have to try that.  Let me know if there is more to it then subsituting milk for water..please!  As a kid we always had macaroni and tomatoes (just add canned tomatoes instead of cheese).  That is my favorite!

I love this stroy as always!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Here is what you need to do:

It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

 

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

I've never had tomatoes, but I hate the taste. Otherwise I would have tried, it sounds interesting ^^

xx
Gelix

 

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:44 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Stuvade makaroner. LOL Å pannkakor... you're educating the world with swedis recipies one reader at a time.



Author's Response:

Så klart, måste ju dela med mig! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:23 PM Title: Grandparents

I love it!  Charie was so funny.  I am glad that Edward found out what Bella was thinking.  He needed to help her through that quick before it got way out of hand.  Great job...thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:23 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Twilight....It's okay Jasper, you won't hurt her!
And yes I would like the recipe please!!! And thank you!
Another great chapter!!!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:46 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

I love how your not making this pregnancy all sunshine and rainbows. It's very real with the mood swings and swellings. Also how you've made their marriage. Fights and arguements, very real, again I love it. I would also like to get the instructions for the macaroni, I bet my kids would enjoy that! Great job as always, keep it up. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)
I'm trying my hardest to make it real!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:34 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

I love the new banner. It's great.
Great chapter. Loved it. I think Edward needs to realize that Bella might be bitchy her entire pregnancy. She's allowed to be moody, he is not. LoL. It kind of seems like he reverts to his old self when he snaps at her. What's up with Renee? Is she really sorry for what she did? I'm not sure I believe her, but I guess time will tell. Can't wait for more.

The quote is from Twilight: "It's okay, Bella (Jasper). You won't hurt her."

Elli :)

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:20 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

I can sympathize with Bella on the hormones making you a bitch, it is like you aren't in control and you know you are being bitchy, but you just can't stop. 

I would love to know how to boil macaroni in milk.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :)

Okay, so for the macaronis. It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you dont! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

 

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

xx
Gelix

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:19 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

I would love to have the directions on the mac and milk sounds interesting.  Bella needs to breath instead of rip poor Edwards head off he is a real trooper to take it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :)

Okay, so for the macaronis. It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you dont! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

 

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:14 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

As someone who's never been pregnant, I can't sympathize with Bella and her mood swings.  I agree w/Edward that she should tone it down a bit.  But I'm glad she's making progress w/her mom.

Waiting....



Author's Response:

Thank you for you review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lenecarter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:57 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

 I Love the new banner . Great chapter.

The quote is from one of my favorite scene from Twilight ...''It's okay Bella, you won't hurt her”.

I love the facebook page...it's bewleytiful(beutiful) ...all the banner .

                                                  Love ...(H)ellen.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:50 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Good chapter. I'm totally glad I'm not pregnant, nor are any of my friends. I remember having to deal with the mood swings and all when I was becoming an aunt, and I wasn't even that involved.

I'm curious about the call from Renee. It seems unlikely taht a simple convo with Charlie changed her whole outlook. Perhaps I'm just cynical, but I don't really trust it. I wouldn't forgive her either, at least not until she proved it. I'd love to see a POV from her or Charlie about it though. (Perhaps an outtake?) Just a thought.

Can't wait to see what's up next for these two.

Cheers, Balti K



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'll think about doing an outtake :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:48 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

A hidden twilight quote in a twilight fanfiction... I love it.  The quote was "It's okay, Bella, you won't hurt her."  Like you said you changed the name from Jasper to Bella. 

I enjoyed the chapter.  I think you a putting in the right kind of stresses when a couple is preparing for a baby.  All the hormone induced fights and such.  Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:44 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

welcome to pregnancy! cant wait to see what the pregnancy brings them next ! and he just needs to remember the pregnate woman is always right! keep up the good work 



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Thank you for the review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:30 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

I'm so happy for Rose and Emmett!  What a great chapter and I would love the recipe for the noodles :)

(Love the new banner!)

Thank you for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

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Okay, so for the macaronis. It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you dont! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

 

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:18 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

write more:)

 



Author's Response:

I'm on my way! :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:10 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Love the new banner and another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:06 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

OMG Lily is here. The qoute is from twilight. "It's okay "Bella" (Jasper) you won't hurt her."

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:02 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

I love the new banner... loved the chapter too btw!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:56 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

neer thought about boiling them in milk



Author's Response:

You should try it, it really is great! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:48 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

Good to see Lily was born without any complications. Can't wait to find out what Bella and Edward are having. Hopefully bella's emotions will get better.

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:44 PM Title: Blossoming Flower

;-) gotta love the hormones. Quote: Twilight.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:58 PM Title: Grandparents

They will have to tell her eventually, but if they wait a bit longer, I don't see any harm on that. Both will be feeling better and if things don't go with Renee as good as with the rest, it won't affect them too much.

Edward understood that Bella needed to do things in her own way. That she needed to go visit Emily by herself. He might not have liked it, but he got it.

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