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Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:38 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

That was cool :) I couldn't figure out the quote, but it's also 1:40am and i'm tired, so i didn't think i'd find it lol

Anyways, that was great :) Sneaky Rose think's something is up :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:35 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Well, the only pregnancy story I have is my Mom's when she was pregnant with me. Her water broke three months before her due date, so she and Pop immediately rushed to the hospital. She stayed there for 5 weeks, on bed rest with her legs raised so she could keep as much amniotic fluid as possible. They were running out of fluid quickly, so the doctors recommended a forced feeding tube so she (and I) could gain weight. They anticipated that I would be 2 pounds 14 ounces, but when they had to perform the emergency C-section (when the fluid finally ran out) I was 3 pounds 14 ounces!! Even though I was over 2 months premature, they didn't have to put me in the incubator, because my lungs were fully functional. The doctor anticipated that I would be physically small and delicate, and possibly some cognitive impairment, but I am 5'10" with a high IQ! So, Mom and Pop said I was a miracle child!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sharing that! :) It was a really interesting story!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:22 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Great chapter. Hope they get the house they like. Rose sees a lot. I wonder exactly how crazy Bella will get with the pregnancy.  BTW, is she in therapy yet? Thought her resolution was to fix herself. She really needs it if she's going to be healthy for the baby.

BTW, I rec'd your story in my new chapter today.

Cheers, Balti K



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Therapy will be brought up in the next chapter, and a few after that. So no, she hasn't started yet, but she will!

And a big thank you for the rec! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:10 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Pregnancy story of mine.....when I was pregnant with my son I had 4, yes 4, ultrasounds done by 4, yes 4, different techs in 2 different states. (We moved when I was 6 months along) every single one of the ultrasounds indicated that we were having a girl!!! EVERY SINGLE ONE!!!! Well, lo and behold, "she" was born a "he"!!!! NO LIE!!!! We had everything for a girl....pantyhose, hairbows,ribbons, dresses, lacy sox, pink car seat, pink bedding, the whole nine yards!! I had even cross stitched stuff with "her" name on it! He had to leave the hospital in a pink car seat!! So little Kennedy Anne turned out to be little Michael Alexander!! I wouldn't have it any other way!!!
BTW he's 13 now so this was before 3D ultrasounds were commonplace or maybe even developed yet.

Author's Response:

Haha. Wow, what a shocker to have a boy when you expected a girl! I hope you were able to change the things so he didn't have to wear pink clothes! ;)

Thank you so much for sharing that story! I laughed a lot actually.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:10 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

'My name is Emmett, and I'm addicted to porn and I masturbate constantly"Sorority Boys awesome movie. I can't wait to see what happens at the doctors app. I bet she's having twins since she made such a big deal out of the size of the house they could buy. That would be some funny shit

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 1:55 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

I knew it!!!! Yeah for them both! I love how you had Emily come to her in a dream to help her. Bella really needs to start taking better care of herself for the baby. I hope they have a girl and name her Emily or what would be a better kicker if she had twins.

Author's Response:

Thank you! That was the scene I enjoyed writing the most. that one and the Edward/baby-talk! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:50 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

I am so glad they are pregnant!  I think they are going to be great parents.  Bella just has to start eating right so she won't pass out.  I love that they may move just down the street from Rose and Emmett.  Things are looking good, but I am a little worried about what she dreamed the the second time she dreamed of Emily.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Bella will be sharing her dream someday in the future!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: AmeliaCullen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:46 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Loved this chapter but I don't think that Edward should take Emmett's advice.  i don't think that ignoring Bella would be in his best interest.  Maybe he needs to talk to his dad!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

We'll see how his 'ignoring' goes. I wouldn't take that advice either.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:36 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

love it. my aunt would make me go on walks with her when her husband wouldn't go with her. i also had a friend who you couldn't tell was pregnant until she turned to the side then you would think that she had ate a basketball



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And thanks for sharing! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:11 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital

YES! definitely preggo!..lol can't wait till they get the house :)

Author's Response:

Yes, she is! :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:59 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Great chapter!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:49 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

write more:)



Author's Response:

I will! :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:25 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Ha! Baby or Babies Cullen are on the way!

Loved the Chapter, was this the quote "We don't need a mansion with seven bedrooms. That's just too much work."

I think that was Half A Sixpence?? God i'm old!!!!!!

Laters Debs.xx



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

No, sorry. Never heard of that movie actually! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:48 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

i knew it, my pregnancy was complicated. I kept going into premature labor and was on bed rest my last three months.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing! : ) It must have been a pain in the ass to be on bed rest that long!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:22 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

I loved this chapter. I'm actually glad she is pregnant. I thought it was still too early in their relationship considering they didn't even date, but they are happy so all is good. I guess when you know if it's the person for you it doesn't matter how long you date. I met my hubby when I was sixteen and he was almost twenty and he always says that if it had been legal he would have married me that same day. LoL. I guess we will have to wait and see how Edward and Bella's relationship goes from here. I never had any strange cravings when I was pregnant, but I did get hungry in the middle of the night a lot. My poor hubby would always have to go buy me something because I never wanted anything we had at home. He was great about it.

They really do need to watch it with the bad words. Trust me, I speak from experience. My hubby is very bad about controlling his mouth and lets just say our parents were not amused when my son was only one and would say "fuck" all the time. My hubby thought cursing in a different language would stop the kid from saying it and that didn't work either because the kid still picked it up. My son who is now eleven can curse in english, spanish, and italian all thanks to the hubby. At least the kid can control himself and doesn't do it often.

I laughed when I saw the quote you used for this chapter because we were watching that movie last night so it was fresh in my mind. The quote is from Sorority Boys: "My name is Emmett (Roberta), and I'm addicted to porn and I mastubate constantly."

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 8:52 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

That was great I new she was pregers and I got so excited when they were told.  Poor Emmett he is in trouble I like how Edward tryed to get himself out of trouble before he was even in it LOL.  As always cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Yeah, most of you suspected that she was!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

I am so excited for EandB to be pregnant and looking for a house. They have so many changes to face.
Love the story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 7:52 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Love the chapter. Yay Baby Cullen will soon arrive. The qoute is from sorority boys right?

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 7:43 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Yippee!!! Glad to see that the newlyweds will experience parenthood as well.  When I was pregnant with my son, I had mad cravings...McDonald's french fries and a vanilla soft serve ice cream cone where my favorites, when eaten together.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing! That was a very strange craving, haha! But McDonald's=yummy! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 7:29 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

I'm curious to know more about Bella's past.  Not that I don't love her and Edward now, but it doesn't seem like he was so bad to her in high school.  Just curious if anymore was going to be rehashed.

Waiting....



Author's Response:

One word: THERAPY. That's when things from the past will be resurfaced (?) :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 7:21 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Pregnant...

 



Author's Response:

I'm just going to tell you to read the next chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 7:18 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

im happy shes preggo!!! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

If you're happy, then I'm happy! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:45 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

okay that was funny and I was totally laughing at the line, I'm Emmett and I'm addicted to porn and masturbate constantly which is from sorority boys isn't it? lol I can't wait for more. I knew she was pregnant. just knew it. thanks again bye

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:28 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

Thank you for this! I was worried at first, thinking they needed more time for just them, but now I'm so excited. Excellent job. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm glad I managed to 'turn you over to the other side'! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:10 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital

LOVE the chapter :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: deargravity Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:16 AM Title: The Past

This chapter was really heart touching and I have to admit that I got tears in my eyes when I read about Emily. I'm very sorry to hear about your friend Hanna, but I'm sure she's watching over you and in a much happier place. Amazing job! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: dolfin1189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 4:13 AM Title: Time goes by

I loved that Edward was watching Supernatural. Thats my favorite show!!! I own alll 4 seasons and am super-pysched for the fifth to come in september!! Plus, Bloody-Mary is one of the best episodes! I was delighted to see this in your beyond amazing story. This is the first reviews I have ever written. Keep going with this story, it's by far one of the best ones I've ever read!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

It's my favorite show too! I just watched a episode a few minutes ago! ;)

Thank you so much!! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: deargravity Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 10:30 AM Title: Time goes by

Great chapter (:



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 9:26 PM Title: The Honeymoon

like i said last chapter bella's pregnant.



Author's Response:

Hm, we'll soon find out! ;)

Thank you for your reviews!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 9:08 PM Title: The Honeymoon

god!Is she pregnant??? love your story!!can't wait until sunday!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Just one more day!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 8:56 PM Title: New Year's Eve

i think she is pregnant and had a bad test or something.

Reviewer: dizzykaz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 8:31 AM Title: The Honeymoon

Bella is having Edwards baby. i'm sure of it. especially after the single pregnancy test 



Author's Response:

We'll see on Sunday! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:36 AM Title: The Honeymoon

She has to be pregnant!  Everything just seems to point to that.  I hope that is what is going on.  I love it...great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: The Honeymoon

She's so darn stubborn! I hope everything is fine, though! Thanks for the chapter, I hope you give us an update soon! Okay, I have one critique, and it's just a pet peeve of mine, but the word "literally" was misused when Edward is describing the beach house. "It literally screamed Bella and I had no problems in understanding why she had chosen it" only makes sense if there is an actual speaker in the house that shouts out "Bella!" over and over again. It's just a tiny thing, but literally gets misused all the time, and it bugs me. You made me really happy in the club scene, though, when you used "ravish" correctly! I always see people mistake "ravage" for "ravish" and that drives me even more crazy than "literally"!! Thanks again for the update! Bella's greeting to Charlie made me snort, it was so funny! It wasn't pretty.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I will take your critic to my heart and replace the word literally with practically as soon as it gets back from the beta! Thanks for pointing it out!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: exler930 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:55 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Ok so she is serioulsy preggers or something is def wrong with her.  And the qoute is from that movie with Renee Zellwegger & that one dude and I can't remember the title of it for the life of me but I've always loved the saying...oh oh Bridget Jones Diary!  "Bridget Jones sex goddess..."  I just love it!  Oh Huge Grant!  I knew I would eventually remember!  LOL!

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:19 PM Title: The Honeymoon

She's soooooo pregnant!!!! I can't think of anything else, plus it would just be cruel of you to make Bella terminally ill...Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Saphira Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 4:16 PM Title: The Honeymoon

I hope that Bella isn't seriosly sick and that she is waitin for a child... :P

I truly hope that Sunday would come sooner...



Author's Response:

It's just three more days!

Thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:00 AM Title: The Honeymoon

I hope that she is pregnant and it is a healty baby and pregnancy.  Maybe with no food or much water in her is the reason she passed out and not anything really wrong.  Poor Edward he is gonna have a major freak-out with this one.

Please don't make us wait until the 22nd....Pretty Pretty Please



Author's Response:

Sorry, but the chapter hasn't even been written yet. I would've caved into your wishes if it was because I'm always superexcited to post a new chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: tcv204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:29 AM Title: Vegas

Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. The quote is from Bridget Jones Diary. Although the way you used it is by far funnier than in the original movie. It would be by far more embarrasing to say that line to your father than to your mother.

Reviewer: kcmbrown2445 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 4:49 AM Title: The Honeymoon

GREAT!!!!!

GREAT!!!!!

GREAT!!!!!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: AmeliaCullen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:59 AM Title: The Honeymoon

Bella sounds so pregnant it's not even funny!  The first test was probably just a couple of days too early to get a positive result.



Author's Response:

We'll see. It could be something else as well! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:26 AM Title: The Honeymoon

I think the preg test was a false negative!  Great chapter and please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:20 AM Title: The Honeymoon

oh lord lether just be preggers and not really sick



Author's Response:

We'll see what's wrong in the next chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:53 AM Title: The Honeymoon

i think that she might be preggo after all



Author's Response:

Yeah, maybe she. We'll see :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:29 AM Title: The Honeymoon

write more:)



Author's Response:

I will! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:33 AM Title: The Honeymoon

yup, she's preggo....and she just probably gave Edward a heart attack

Author's Response:

Yeah, she tends to give him minor ones from time to time! ;)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:28 AM Title: The Honeymoon

awesome chapter. The qoute is from Bridget Jones' Diary. Bella is so preggo right?

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:09 AM Title: The Honeymoon

She is so pregnant!

Author's Response:

Maybe! ;)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:54 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Im thinking that quote (maybe) is from Bridget Jones's diary but not really sure. :D also you totally suck with leaving us on a cliffy like that. i can't wait to find out what's wrong with her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:47 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Something isn't as it should with Bella, what can it be? I guess we are going to find out now. Edward is surely taking her to a doctor right now.

NOt considering the sickness, it has been a nice trip. ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I would love to go to L.A with Edward :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:38 PM Title: The Honeymoon

I'm betting she's pregnant this time.  That would explain the lack of appetite and the mood swings.  But her fainting might prove a problem.

And I know the quote!  It's from Bridget Jones's Diary (I love that line).

Waiting.....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:36 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Is the quote: Do you kiss your mother with that mouth? I don't remember where I heard it but I am thinking that is what it is! Well I guess Bella is going to the Doctor after all isn't she?



Author's Response:

No, sorry. I think it's a pretty famous 'bitch' line, though..

We'll see what Edward makes her do in the next chapter! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Alotalittle Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:05 PM Title: The Honeymoon

"Bella Cullen, wanton sex goddess with a very bad man between her thighs," is from Bridget Jones' Diary!  Yay, finally got one I think... 

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:06 PM Title: The Honeymoon

hmm sick...alot over food and stuff tender breasts...pregnant



Author's Response:

We'll see! ;)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 9:04 PM Title: The Honeymoon

shes pregggooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not.

Thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:57 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Maybe Diabetic or pregnant!



Author's Response:

We'll find out in the next chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:54 PM Title: The Honeymoon

I'm only hoping that she's pregnant and not some serious medical condition. Great job as always, Edward just boosted his sexy for putting up with Bella's crazy mood swings. ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And Edward's practically always sexy!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:43 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Hmmm what are you up to!

The quote wanton sex goddess with a very bad man between her thighs was from one of my favourites of all time "Bridget Jones"

All pointers aim towards pregnancy - but I got an awful feeling we are heading for Angstville and I am both worried and intrigued.

Just maybe I was wrong all the time and infact it's not triplets but quads!

Laters - Debs.x

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:33 PM Title: The Honeymoon

she preggo .... has to be after all that sex they have  cant wait to find out whats going on ! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, but she's on the pill, though ;)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:20 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Damn it, Boy!!!!  Take her ass to the doctor already.  LOL

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: im exactly ur brand of heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:15 PM Title: The Honeymoon

she's pregnant. bella is sooo pregnant.



Author's Response:

Hmm, maybe! ;)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:12 PM Title: The Honeymoon

I still think she is pregers or at least I hope she is if she is not there is something bad wrong with her.  So is it the 22nd already LOL I cant wait.  I cant ever find the quotes because I am so into your story that is my excuse anyway.



Author's Response:

It's the 19th, so it's three more days! ;) They'll go by quick, though.

I guess the quotes fit in so well in the story that it's hard to find them. I don't blame you! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:58 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Okay, so I'm really worried about Bella now. I hope she really is pregnant because I'm afraid of what the alternative would be. Can't wait to find out. Please say it's in the next chapter.
I'm pretty sure the quote is from Bridget Jones's Diary: Bella Cullen (Bridget Jones), wanton sex goddess, with a vey bad man between her thighs.
Elli :)

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:27 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Bella is so pregnant.



Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not! ;)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:16 PM Title: The Honeymoon

hmmm just hope its not cancer or something like that.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that would be bad, and sad.. :/

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:57 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Wow Bella has blacked out. Hopefully the next update will be an epov to see what he did when he got to Bella. Good to finally know what Edward was thinking about during new years. I think the quote for this chapter is "Bella Cullen, wanton sex goddess with a very bad man between her thighs...dad?" from the Bridget Jones's Diary.

Reviewer: pr_honeybun81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:54 PM Title: The Honeymoon

SHE'S PREGNANT....i HOPE IT'S NOTHING BAD SINCE THEY REALLY WANT A BABY.



Author's Response:

We'll find out in the next chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:47 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Oh great chapter!  So either Bella is pregnant or she is really sick with something else...hmmmmmmm  What would Gelix do...  :)

Thank you and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And yes, that is a very good question. You'll see what I came up with in the next chapter!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:46 PM Title: The Honeymoon

Great chapter!
I think Bella is pregnant!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:33 PM Title: The Honeymoon

aHHHHH, someone's prego!!  Can't wait till they find out!



Author's Response:

It could be something else, too! But we'll find out in the next chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 11:35 AM Title: New Year's Eve

Seems Edward is planning for the little pitter patter of feet in the near future.



Author's Response:

Maybe he does! ;)

I loved that expression (?). 'Little pitter patter of feet' Sounds so cute!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: MissKay Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:26 AM Title: New Year's Eve

I am going to take a wild guess and say that Bella is already pregnant based on her behavior and Edwards obsession with her stomach. I think he knows she is before she even thinks its an option. I can't wait for this to play out! Its a really good story so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And I guess time will tell about Bella's behavior!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: 2journey Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 12:44 AM Title: New Year's Eve

love it!  can't wait for the next one...



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:19 PM Title: New Year's Eve

Okay....huge hints that Bella's preggers and doesn't know it yet??? Am I reading it wrong???...lol

I love how caring Edward is with Bella in this chapter, even w/ her acting crazy sometimes :)



Author's Response:

I'm not telling! Time will tell ;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:14 PM Title: New Year's Eve

Awh, her feelings was hurt.  Maybe next test, LOL



Author's Response:

Yeah, maybe! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:23 PM Title: Christmas

hmmmm he's not as sneaky as he thought he was...... or Bella is just that much smarter



Author's Response:

Bella is a smart girl! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:06 PM Title: New Year's Eve

Cant wait for the update!!

Excellent chapter



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Thank you! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:09 PM Title: Christmas

Glad Lily is ok for now

Edwards paranoid LOL

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:44 PM Title: New Year's Eve

Loved it! So it sounds like she really is pregnant! Can't wait to find out!



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Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:37 AM Title: New Year's Eve

I still think she is pregers.  What is up with Jake he still doesnt trust Edward why is there something we dont know that he does.  ??????????



Author's Response:

Jake was just being supersticious about why they're married in the first place. Just like he was at the wedding.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:34 AM Title: New Year's Eve

"You're practically glowing!" 

"I'm starving!" "Pull over. I want a BigMac,"

My emotions were all over the place, and I hated it. It was like I couldn't control myself anymore.

All the signs are there my lovalies either she's having a phantom or there be a bun/buns in that oven.

Loved the chapter.

Laters - Pfft! Junkmail (UK).x



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm keeping the answer to that a secret for now ;)

Thank you so much!

I hope I'm forgiven for the e-mail accident. I promise I've fixed my mail so it shouldn't send your mail to the junkmail next time!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:48 AM Title: New Year's Eve

Good for Bella.  She could use a little help.  It's good she recognizes that. Nice way to ring in the new year too.  And Bella's not the only one left without a facebook page, I don't have one either.

Can't wait to see what the honeymoon is like.

Cheers, Balti K



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :)

Facebook is overrated, I barely use my personal one. It's just there ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:02 AM Title: New Year's Eve

I found Bella to be a bit pathetic in this chapter.  How can she be so upset over something she never had?  I've never been pregnant though, so I unfortunately can't sympathsize.  I hope that doesn't make me a hateful, cold-hearted person.

 

 



Author's Response:

You're not a hateful, cold-hearted person. At least not in my eyes. Bella just overreacted, that's all. Deep down, she was happy for them.

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Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:21 AM Title: New Year's Eve

I love it!  What a great day for these two!  I can't wait for the honeymoon. 

What is up with Jake.  Did he say something to Edward?  I have a feeling he did.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Jake was just being supersticious to why they're married in the first place, just like he was at the wedding.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:15 AM Title: New Year's Eve

They are so cute!! I think that Bella had a good resolution and I hope that she can do what she wants reguardless if she is scared.



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Thank you! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:24 AM Title: New Year's Eve

hmmm, could she possibly be preggo???

Author's Response:

Maybe, I'm not telling :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:34 AM Title: New Year's Eve

Awesome chapter. i think edward and bella are gonna have a baby cullen and the qoute is from Katy Perry's Hot and Cold.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:55 PM Title: New Year's Eve

Oh very HOT chapter - love the shower :)

I'm glad Bella is going to seek some help - she really needs to put things to rest in order to move on.

Thank you for the chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:45 PM Title: New Year's Eve

i think it should be a false negative!!! cant wait till the next chapter!! keep them comming



Author's Response:

It's just two more days until the next update! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:45 PM Title: New Year's Eve

amazing chapter. made my day



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Thank you! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:22 PM Title: New Year's Eve

awww they are too cute and I think bella is pregnant. She has all the signs. the quote I THINK is from Katy Perry's Hot and Cold: You change your mind like a girl changes clothes. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: New Year's Eve

I like that Edward knows that she could have left him if she wanted. The fact that she stayed says a lot about how she feels about him. Okay, so I'm really starting to think that her test was wrong and she really is pregnant. She seems to have the symptoms. What is up with Edward? Is it about the baby? Are we going to find out soon. Can't wait.
The quote in this chapter is from Hot n Cold by Katy Perry; "You change your mind like Alice (a girl) changes clothes"
Elli :)

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:47 PM Title: New Year's Eve

Great chapter!



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Thank you! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:32 PM Title: New Year's Eve

write more:)



Author's Response:

I am! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: New Year's Eve

:)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:25 PM Title: New Year's Eve

I want to know why Edward is behaving really weird to Bella. Also, what the hell is happening with Edward's facebook account? I hope that he is behaving himself.
Something seems off about Edward in the last couple of chapters. Bella's statement about going out on dates shows her own insecurity about their daily routine of hanging out in the living room and watching TV. I think Edward's weekend habit of working out in the gym most of the day while Bella is doing laundry is going to become a problem...Edward's thoughts to himself about how much they stay home may plant seeds of trouble.

Author's Response:

That will be explained in the next chapter! :)

As for the rest, all I can say is that it will all work out and be dealt with in future chapters! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:19 PM Title: New Year's Eve

another fantastic chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:03 PM Title: Christmas

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:43 PM Title: Plans

:)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:35 PM Title: New Year's Eve

I'm thinking Bella's pregnancy test wasn't accurate.



Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not! ;)

xx
Gelix

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