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Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:34 PM Title: New Year's Eve

she seems totally pregnant though based on her behavior. And what is Jake's deal?



Author's Response:

Jake is just being supersticious to why she's even married to Edward, just like he was at his wedding!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:21 PM Title: New Year's Eve

Seems like they both have babies on their minds, great job. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:09 PM Title: New Year's Eve

I have a feeling that Baby Cullen just might be making an appearance soon!!!!! Or I coule be completely off.   Great chapter and keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

We'll see. Only time will tell! ;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:52 PM Title: The Letter

:)



Author's Response:

Hey, I've missed your smilies! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:50 PM Title: New Year's Eve

Bella seems to be acting a little different...so many different behaviors. I wonder if there is a reason for that?
Can't wait to see their honeymoon.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:56 AM Title: Christmas

I am glad that they have come so far in their relationship that they are going to renew their vows and not let each other go. Poor Edward is now getting to see that Bella was going to resolve to end their marriage but all that is before she realized that she was in love with him. Oh and before I forget I am going ot guess but I am bad at this but the quote from this chapter is from Eclipse isn't it??

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:41 AM Title: Christmas

write more:)



Author's Response:

I will! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 12:22 AM Title: Christmas

Chapters 14 and 15 were great. I think Bella wanted Edward to know that she chose to live with him in a trial marriage shortly after Vegas, but she knew the annulment was a legal option. She indicated her feelings for Edward even at the beginning of the marriage in her confession.
I can't wait for New Year's.
Update soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 8:43 PM Title: Christmas

Great chapter.  I know that's how I would prefer my holiday to be, if I could get away with it.  And I'm glad there's no baby yet.  Even if they both really want it, it would have been too fast, i think.  As for the last sentence, I think since the marriage wasn't consummated until months later, she would have been eligible for annulment rather than divorce.  Doesn't Edward know that?

Always looking forward to next time,

Balti K



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

He knew about the annulment. He just thought Bella was clueless about that information and kept his mout shut so she wouldn't leave him!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: sparkle_me Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 8:36 PM Title: The Past

i adored this chapter.

But it seems like Bella has more secrets from her traumatic past.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: xtothey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 6:46 PM Title: Christmas

Awww, I wanted a baby Cullen :(



Author's Response:

There will be, I promise! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 8:10 AM Title: Christmas

3 more days before the next update!god I CAN'T WAIT!!!! did Bella know all along that she could have had an annulment?! I really like the way you write!! can I ask you something? How did you get your Beta? I've started to write some stuff...and I wanted to know if I could have someone to help me with the grammar....anyway thank you for this great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

You can ask me anything! As for the beta. I got in touch with Project Team Beta, and they've been betaing my 9 first chapters. Then I had another girl offering who beta'd chapter 9,15 and 16. She quit, though so now I don't have a beta except for Pjoject Team Beta.

I would recommend PTB since they don't fix the mistakes for you, they just tell you what you should change. So, therefor you learn A LOT! I mean, my grammar has changed so much I can't believe it!

Good luck with fining a beta and your story! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Saphira Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 7:57 AM Title: Christmas

To bad, that there is no baby Cullen comin', yet...

I ilke to read your story. :D



Author's Response:

YET is the keyword ;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 5:28 AM Title: Christmas

Bella new she could get an annalment all along she is a smart girl duh!!    Not all test work they did only do one so I think she is pregers or at least I hope???



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella is a really smart girl! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 5:09 AM Title: Christmas

Loved it. Okay... So I thought it was too soon for a baby, but I felt really bad for them because they were both so disappointed. It could always be that the test was wrong, but since I don't know where you are taking the story I won't speculate too much. About the annulment, my guess would be that she did know she could get one but chose to give the marriage a try. Edward just assumed that she didn't know because she never mentioned it. Okay.... so the quote in this chapter I'm not too sure about. The only one that I can see is from Eclipse: "I promise to love you every moment of forever." That is the only one that pops out at me, if there is another one I can't see it. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait.
Elli :)

Reviewer: twimom220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 4:27 AM Title: Christmas

legally Bella could have had an annulment within 90 days of the marriage if the marriage wasn't consumated, at least that's the laws in Florida, not sure about anywhere else. An annulment is easier than a divorce, it's like it never happened. As to why she said it and Edward's reaction, I couldn't even begin to fathom.



Author's Response:

Yes she could. She'll explain it in the next chapter :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 3:02 AM Title: Christmas

Ok, I didn't want Bella to be pregnant yet - but that was so emotional between her and Edward...

Wonderful chapter - thank you so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: im exactly ur brand of heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 2:43 AM Title: Christmas

i think bella knew all along that she could get an annulment, she just didnt act on it. love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 2:41 AM Title: Christmas

Well I think that Bella always knew she could have walked away, gotten an annulment and went on with her life...Maybe she thought something good could come of there Vagas incident :) Can't wait to read more...See you next week. Have a great weekend!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! And have a great weekend you too, and I'll see you on Sunday! (Or when you decide to read the new chapter^^)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: devildogbully Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 2:21 AM Title: Christmas

I really like these two. I am sad no baby Cullen but glad no annulment.

Author's Response:

Thank you, and I promise a baby Cullen soon! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 1:53 AM Title: Christmas

Given Bella's attitude at the beginning of the story, it's understandable that she would have wanted an annulment. 

But luckily, that's in the past.  :)



Author's Response:

It is, but she has some explaining to do, though! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 1:25 AM Title: Christmas

Wonderful as always!!!!! I think Bella mentioning the annulment, or lack there of,  is her way of getting it out there that she really does belong with him!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:30 PM Title: Christmas

I can't wait to find out what is going on with Bella.  I hope nothing is wrong and if she is not pregnant, I hope is something that can be fixed pretty easy. 

As for her last question, well if I was in her situation and got married to someone like she did and wanted out, I would have looked into an annulment.  Edward might be surprised to find out she was thinking that way though. This is going to be an interesting conversation! 

I hope all is well with Rosalie and Lily and there will be no more scares!  Great job...thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And Bella's 'problem' will soon be revealed!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:24 PM Title: Christmas

She knew she was still crazy about him since high school.  She would have ended that marriage as soon as she realized if that was the case.  Great stroy.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:43 PM Title: Christmas

Oh boy, I sense some potential fireworks...maybe mini ones.  I liked the chapter.  It was very sweet.  I'm glad you made the test negative because their reactions promise a future child but three months into a newly formed relationship that started off rocky is really too soon to have a baby.  Looking forward to Sunday that's for sure!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:29 PM Title: Christmas

ohh no baby? but those home kits can be wrong right? :D I don't really know what Bella's thinking about the annulment but I'm so happy they're engaged to be "remarried" lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

They can, yeah. The question is just if their test was wrong ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:49 PM Title: Secrets

love your storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:25 PM Title: Christmas

I'm not having that you can't kid a kidder Gelix (currently I am now wiggling my finger at you) No baby Cullen indeed!!!!!!

I am betting that the test was a false negative and that our girl is indeed pregnant with triplets!!!! Oh yes you heard it here first!

Tut Tut Tutting Tut!

But Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww for the engagement ring.

As for Wait, did she just say 'annulment?' The jury is stillout so Hmmmm!

Did you get my email by the way?

Laters Debs.x



Author's Response:

No baby Cullen... YET! ;)

And triplets? Seriously? Poor girl! haha ;)

And I'm SO sorry. When you said you sent me an e-mail I had to look. And yes, there was an e-mail from you, waiting in my junkmail. I rarely check it. So I'm really sorry! Especially since you got the quote right and everything. Let me know if there is anything I can do to make it up!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:15 PM Title: Christmas

At the time since "nothing" happened between them, Bella could have asked for the annulment, but that's all in the past now.

Who would have thought that a false alarm would have upset Bella that much? Edward's sadness was expected, but not hers.

There were several things that seemed to be clues in this chapter, the annulment things, of course, but also, what Bella said of her still feeling so tight. And that her period is still late, or nothing stating the contrary was said. What do you have under the sleeve? 



Author's Response:

You'll just have to wait and see what's hiding under my sleeve, because I'm not telling ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:46 PM Title: Christmas

I think little Miss Bella isn't as naive as Edward thought. Loved this chapter!.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:34 PM Title: Christmas

Maybe when she got home from Vegas she researched it and knew that she could have gotten it annulled regardless of what Edward said. And then she just didn't do it.



Author's Response:

Maybe. We'll see what her side of the story is on Sunday! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:33 PM Title: Christmas

Well it seems that Bella knew about a possible annulment the whole time. Can't wait to see what you have planned.

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:19 PM Title: Christmas

Bella is a really smart girl. I can't wait to see how this conversation goes!



Author's Response:

That she is! :)

It's being posted on Sunday!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: hkimberly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 7:01 PM Title: Plans

Well shit. Shit. shit. shit. shit. OMG! SHIT. I can't believe you did that! Let's let them be preggers!!!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: AmeliaCullen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 12:56 AM Title: Plans

Loved it and oh yes let Bella be pregnant!

A little baby Cullen would be so adorable.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And yes, a little mini Cullen would be great, the question is just when. ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 6:10 PM Title: Vegas

So far so good!I can't wait to read the next chapter! good ideas!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:58 PM Title: Plans

pff.. I'm curious! I like it though that we're receiving the news on my bday: so make it good! =D

xxxLiss



Author's Response:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :)

I hope the next chapter will be a good present, if not, then I'm sorry! ;)

Have a great day!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: SecretWisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:03 AM Title: Plans

I personally think too soon.. but it all works out in the end.. I am still loving the story!



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for letting me know!

And thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 2:03 AM Title: Plans

OMG!!  SO wrong for leaving it like that hahahaha...  But it's great.  Question, how long has it been since Bella last took her BC?  At least two weeks worth right?  Just wondering.  Either way, loving this story :)



Author's Response:

Sorry? (A) The update is just a few hours away! ;)

I would answer your question if I knew what BC was, or what it's standing for, but I'm sorry, I don't. I've tried to look it up, but all I can find is that it stands for 'Before Christ' and I'm smart enough to know that's not what you meant.

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 9:37 PM Title: Plans

thanks great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Plans

Should or shouldn't them??? Tough question, the most logical answer would be not yet, it's too soon, they are still getting to know each other. But on the other side, what if it is what they need to get closer to one another? They both are doing fine professionally and have support from friends and some family members... Would it be too bad?

Guess we'll find out soon enough...



Author's Response:

Some questions you got there, but I'm with you! It's the same questions that runs over and over in my head! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mnky Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:24 PM Title: Plans

Thank you very much. I love this chapter. Poor Edward him  is so not lucky. Instead of pleasure was damaged. Although he was himself to blame, Bella needs practice does not always get everything right the first time. I think they need a child. This is the part of their family, which is not enough. And it is not too early. Having a baby does not happen on schedule.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

And thank you for letting me know what you think about a baby Cullen! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:23 PM Title: Plans

YES BABY CULLEN! that would be awesome and A walk to Remember is the movie the line is from. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: im exactly ur brand of heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:58 PM Title: Plans

i think a baby cullen would be so cute but youre probably gonna make it say negative for a twist, right? love the story and can't wait to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

And you'll have to wait until later today to see what I did! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:22 PM Title: Plans

def a baby cullen...edward can use my friends fiance line of  "yup i'm that good that i got my baby pregnant when she was on the pill." ok in his defense we were commenting on the fact that she was told it is unlikely she would have kids but funny all the same.



Author's Response:

Haha, wow, is it okay if I use that line? I LOVED IT! When Bella is pregnant of course, I'm no telling that she is, but when she is. You'll have to tell me if you don't want me to!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twilightgirliej13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:46 PM Title: Plans

I hope that she is pregnant would be so cool!! but if she is please no twins everybody does that becomes kind of boring. i love the story its cool please update soon!!



Author's Response:

I hate when people give them twins as well, so no, there won't be any twins in my story! I promise :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:38 PM Title: Plans

What the....oh so not nice to leave us hanging right here!!!!!!

Terrific chapter and IMHO - too soon for a little Cullen yet :)

Thank you and I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Sorry! But I'll post the chapter in a few hours! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:18 PM Title: Plans

I think it's too soon for a baby - a good scare never hurts though LOL



Author's Response:

Okay. Yeah, it would probably be a really good scare! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:17 PM Title: The Letter

:-) LOVE THIS



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: devildogbully Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:01 PM Title: Plans

oh, I think it would be it would so could so cool it a baby cullen came into the world they are ready.



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:23 AM Title: Plans

She bit him poor guy but you are right poor Bella more.  I cant decide i think a baby would be great i think they are ready for the resonsiblity but then i think they just more time just being the two of them and her mother will be a bitch about it.



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: twi-love300 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:56 AM Title: Plans

hey is the quote "Are you trying to seduce me?"  " Why? Are you seducible? from a walk to remember?

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:47 AM Title: Plans

Oh Baby Cullen PPPLLLLEEAAASSSEEEE *Begs on hands and knees* Great chapter BTW!! This story owns me.LOL

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D

And thank you for letting me know what you want!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:39 AM Title: Plans

I think its to soon .... let them have more fun and sexy times... there is always time for rug rats later



Author's Response:

Okay, I'll keep that in mind! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Twylightfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:38 AM Title: Plans

Yes!  When it's right, it's right! Baby Cullen is a definate go!



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: kljluvu1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:34 AM Title: Plans

The quote was from "A walk to Remember" A fabulous movie I might add! :)

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:02 AM Title: Plans

Please please let there be a baby cullen!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, I'll see what I can do! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:42 AM Title: Plans

no baby cullen yet! they are just starting their relationship! cant wiat till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for letting me know what you think!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:37 AM Title: Plans

You suck!  That was the evilest cliffie ever!  Please update again soon!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry! (A)

The update is tomorrow! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:40 AM Title: Plans

“Are you trying to seduce me?”

 

“Why? Are you seducible

A walk to remember, awesome movie by the way. I think they should have a baby. Bella was thinking about it when she stayed with Rose. I believe it will only bring them closer

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:10 AM Title: Plans

that cliffy was evil but no i don't think that it is to soon



Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry about that one! And thank you for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:16 AM Title: Plans

Ugh, I hate cliffies, but this one is a good one, so I'll let it slide.    I don't think it's too soon for them to be parents.   I think the two of them would be great parents.   I really do.   And I think it would give Bella the chance to be the mother that Renee never was. 



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you!

And thank you for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: elizabethjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:06 AM Title: Plans

aaaarrrrrgggghhhhhh



Author's Response:

Sorry? (A)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:42 AM Title: Plans

wow, that's a shocker.......i dunno how i feel about it...i don't think theres been enough time for just them, i know that doesn't matter, but they're still getting used to each other.....

Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:26 AM Title: Plans

Poor Edward and Bella.

Is the quote "Are you trying to seduce me?" "No. Why are you seducible?" I think its from the movie A Walk to Remember.

I love playing guess the quote.

 

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:54 PM Title: Plans

I think they would have a beautiful baby, but I am worried about Bella's health. There may be some other reason for her to not have her period.

Author's Response:

Yes, there are a few reasons. We'll just have to wait and see what could have caused it!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:48 PM Title: Plans

write more

 



Author's Response:

I will! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:26 PM Title: Plans

Yes they should have a baby cullen.



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: chelsea-anne22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:37 PM Title: Plans

I want a baby Cullen :)

Haha.

Great chapter, cant wait for more!

Chels. xx



Author's Response:

Haha, okay. I'll keep that in mind! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:16 PM Title: Plans

I think it's too soon; it'll be negative.  There are other reasons she can be late.

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: montainer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:54 PM Title: Plans

I think is too soon! I love your story!Thank you for your time!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: MelissaJHackett Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:41 PM Title: Plans

YES  we need a baby CULLEN



Author's Response:

Haha, okay! Thanks for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:36 PM Title: Plans

They need to be a little shaken up.  They are complaining about being boared.  Yes, its time.  The bite was cute too!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your opinion! :)

I don't think Edward thought the bite was cute, but I'm glad you think so ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:33 PM Title: Plans

Too mean! I'm glad that Edward let her try again after such a ...painful earlier attempt. And also pleased that Alice and Rosalie were such supportive girlfriends what with the tutorial and all, when they could have just laughed about it. But really, again I say that you are TOO MEAN! Now we're all just going to be chomping at the bit, anxious for a new chapter! Update soon!

On another note, whilst I am glad that your vacation day was rainy (it's selfish of me, but I got an earlier chapter! Yippee!), all in all, I hope the weather clears up for you and you enjoy the rest of your fabulous time off! 

Even though I'm mad at you over the cliffhanger. ;-)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry! I hope I can make it up tomorrow with the new chapter (A). I'm glad you liked the rest of the chapter, though! :)

And I've had some sun today, so now I need to catch up on my writing! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:29 PM Title: Plans

sure have the baby cullen. it would be cool. 



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Plans

Of the cliffies! No fair. Oh, and the quote- "are you trying to seduce me? Why, are you seducablea?" From a walk to remember.

Reviewer: charlotte Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Plans

What a lovely suprise to find another chapter of the story up so soon. I love the stort so far and can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I felt like being nice since I was so bored in the rain! ;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Plans

"Are you trying to seduce me? Why? Are you seducible?" from a walk to remember....i hope thats it....cant wait for the next update..wont mind a baby cullen around

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:24 PM Title: The Letter

Nice pictures.  Great story too!



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:24 PM Title: Plans

Too soon....i really dont think they need to have a child. I really would perfer her not be pregnant in this story till way later on, but thats my opinion.



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! I needed it. :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:54 PM Title: Plans

Can't wait for Wednesday :)



Author's Response:

It's just a few more days left! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:53 PM Title: Plans

Baby Cullen



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:49 PM Title: Plans

I've just recently found your story so I read all the chapters you had. Sorry about not reviewing the other chapters, but honestly once I started reading I didn't want to stop. I'm loving it so far. You are definitely doing a great job with this story. I'm thinking it's kind of soon for them to have a baby, but I am a firm believer that things happen for a reason. I guess if they are pregnant we will have to wait and see how things go. Can't wait to see what happens.
I love this whole quote thing you have going on. It's fun to see if I can figure them out or not. Some of them I haven't been able to guess. I'm pretty sure the one in this chapter is from A walk to Remember, "Are you trying to seduce me? Why? Are you seducible?" Atleast I hope I'm right.
Elli :)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:48 PM Title: Plans

Aw.. I think it would be cute that they have a baby it will get to grow up with Rose and Emmett's!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, that would be cute! :)

And thank you for your opinion! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:46 PM Title: Plans

Baby Cullens are never a bad thing.



Author's Response:

Nope, that they are not! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: Jazz09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:32 PM Title: Plans

Love the story. And the chapter but I think that it's too soon for them to have kids I mean she just got use to having sex. And they have issue to workout . I think that adding a kid just might like repeating history for them. If u know what I mean.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I know what you mean, and thank you for your opinion! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:12 PM Title: Plans

too soon! but it should make them both realize that they do want a kid sooner rather than later...and that they are ready to take that next step when the time comes.



Author's Response:

Okay, well, thank you for your opinion! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:10 PM Title: Plans

Oh man!!! now we have to wait to find out! I am hoping for a baby Cullen!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, you have! :) But it's just for a few more days!

And thank you for your opinion!

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Gelix

Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:03 PM Title: Plans

Baby Cullen would be great :)



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:03 PM Title: Plans

***GASP*** nooooo you left us high and dry...Damnit!!! ok...honestly, i think the test will be negative, but this will make them think more about having a family. Then again it could go either way...



Author's Response:

Yup, that I did! ;)

And thank you for your opinion!

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Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:02 PM Title: Plans

I felt so bad for Edward and Bella!  It looks like she made up for the it though.  I can't decide what I want to happen.  I would like it either day.  A baby would be good though.  One it would so Bella what a great mother she will be, two, the baby would be close in age with Rose and Emmett's and three, to show her mother she doesn't know what she is talking about!

Great job...thanks!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

And thank you for your opinion!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:00 PM Title: Plans

Way to soon for a baby. I think the year for the agreement to end afterwards is when it will be okay. It would feel wrong and obligatory if they had a baby before they even made the desion to stay together or get a divorce.



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion, I needed it! :)

We'll have to wait and see for the result!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:58 PM Title: Plans

I think it would be great if they had a baby. Can't wait to find out if she is pregnant.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:55 PM Title: Plans

hmmm  maybe a little soon



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Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:54 PM Title: Plans

Damn you!!!  That's on hell of a cliffy, but I would except nothing less from you.  Great chpter and I think a baby Cullen would be great.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And I'm sorry about the cliffy ^^

Anf thank you for your opinion!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:50 PM Title: Plans

I have to wait?  Oh jeez.  I'm not sure how I feel about them having or not having a baby.  It seems a little soon, and it seems that so many people get Bella pregnant like right away when all human stories are written.  I think I'd like to see them stay together for a little while longer before taking that step, just because of their rocky past and stuff.  But this is all up to you of course.

I liked the chapter a lot.  Poor Bella in regards to her first attempt at oral sex, but things always improve if you dont give up. 

Your chosen quote in from A Walk to Remember (Are you trying to seduce me? ... Why are you seducible?).

Reviewer: oompaloompa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:49 PM Title: Plans

i hope that bella is pregnant



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Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

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Gelix

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:37 PM Title: Plans

Great job! I was mortified for Bella...that was just...so sad. Anyways, I would love for them to have a baby, but I think that they still have so much to go through. Whatever you decide I'll love it. Again, excellent job. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

And thank you for your opinion, I needed it!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:35 PM Title: Plans

No baby yet!  She's only just given her first blow job!  They need some time to discover each other and just have some fun.  Plus, a baby would only give Renee more reason to be a bitch.  Just my opinion.

Cheers,

Balti K



Author's Response:

Well, thank you for your opinion. I needed it! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: exler930 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:53 AM Title: The Letter

I LOVE the quote this time.  It's actually one I always use at my hubby!  Miss Congeniality!! Great chapter can't wait for more.

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