[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:07 PM Title: Music
Iam very happy that Bella got the hell away from both of them she needed to think ,but i love his e-mails and songs he is trying i just don't know if she can ever get over that much hurt loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:36 PM Title: Phoenix
hmmm will she start working there???
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:36 PM Title: Phoenix
This is a great story and you've got me hooked!!! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:33 PM Title: Eyewall
I am so sad for Bella right now. I was right about James, but I realize now that I wish that I was wrong. I can't believe that Edward claims that he wants Bella back but yet he brought trashy Tanya to Em and Rose's wedding. I hate to say this...but your Edward is a real bastard!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:22 PM Title: What He Said
I can't BELIEVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG Edward got that two-timing bitch pregnant and then she has the nerve to brag about it like she's won the lottery!!! I wish I could whip her azz myself!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:12 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
I am glad that Bella got some from someone else!!! Go Bella!! I can't help but feel as if the shit is about to hit the fan!
I have a theory...I think that James is pursuing Bella to get back at Edward for something. I bet he's the one that started the rumor about them dating so that it would get back to Edward...
It's only a guess...
Date: 27 Aug 2010 9:31 PM Title: Surprises
I am glad that Bella accepted James offer to date!! I can't wait to see what Edward does when he finds out!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:40 PM Title: Phoenix
so, is she really leaving town forever????? is she never going to let edward explain> I have a feeliing there is much more to his story
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:11 PM Title: Phoenix
She is still on the wrong path
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:24 PM Title: Phoenix
I need more backstory on Tanya, cause it seems like she probably had some grand plan to get pregnant. I need to know the setup, so to speak. James is gross; I can understand how he feels, but he was innocent in it just like Bella was... and to hurt her just to spite Edward? A total dick move. And if Edward doesn't want to be with Tanya, why would he bring her to the wedding? Are they living together now?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:15 PM Title: Phoenix
That's right girl don't take shit from nobody. I think it's great she left but she didn't go far enough in my opinion. I mean really she's just around the way from that other life. Like yes she got away but she's scared to move further and really see what the would has to offer.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:09 PM Title: Phoenix
You go Bella! So proud of you for not letting these stupid men ruin the rest of your life! Seriously, what the hell was Edward thinking!?! I can kinda understand James wanting to get back at Edward but Edward had no excuse for fucking the bitch Tayna to begin with! No shit he wants Bella instead of Tayna but the question would always be Bella not being able to trust the bastard again!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:52 PM Title: Phoenix
Woah ! I love your story ! I think it´s even the best Cheatward story i have ever read.
I like how your bella is strong in this story and simply refuses to break down because of two scumbags.
whereas in other stories bella gets totally emo and thinks that she can´t go on without him because he is her everything ... bla bla bla
I can´t wait for the next chapter :D
And if you don´t mind a want the copy of the interview with James >.<
good job !! keep going :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:34 PM Title: Phoenix
I'm really glad that Bella found her strength. This will be good for her. I'm still really curious about James' intentions, and whether or not the baby is actually Edwards. Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:43 PM Title: Phoenix
I'm glad she left town and is going to take time for herself. I can't wait to see her become stronger. I still would like to know what Edward wants to say to her. James is just an ass, plain and simple.
Please send me the interview.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:14 PM Title: The ER
I'm glad Bella has taken time out for herself to discover who she is or wants to be as a person, but has not crumbled into a pathetic ball ( I cant stand those Bella's.)
She derserves some happiness after being treated so badly by both Edward and James - preferably with a tall dark hunky man - I envision a total stud muffin Peter or Garrett - someone who know who he is, a true man who will stand up for her and be there every step for her - oh swoon!
Go Bella!
Please send me interview with James - pretty please!
Oh and EPOV on what is happening with him - with cherries on top!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:14 PM Title: Phoenix
Great chapter. Can I please have a copy of the inteeview.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:18 PM Title: Phoenix
Well I must say the whole story is very compelling and exciting to say the least. I have gone to the thread and have only lurked.
At this time I do not care if I get sent an interview with James or Asshole #2 as he has been dubbed by Tinke on the thread. LOL
Anyways I do feel for Bella and honestly if I were her I would get the hell out of dodge to. Not 1 but 2 guys did her wrong and one she was with for 9 years.
I have read where a few reviewers do not like that she is running and hiding her head in the sand but sometimes when your flight or fight insticts kick in that is the best thing to do.
If what I gather from this chapter Bella hasn't been taking care of herself and at thistime she needs to put herself first.
I hope she enjoys her time away and can get rest and do some soul searching to find out what she wants to do with her life. The only thing I was going to suggest was since she was a Nurse that she should look into taking a travel job and see some of the country but I think the LOA is a good thing as well.
Thank goodness Bella has some savings and can live and do whatever she wants for six months.
I look forward what happens next in Bella's road to self dicovery. It should be an interesting ride to say the least.
At this time I really don't care if she gets back with Edward. I realize you will give us his POV of what went on but at this point I only want a HEA for Bella. If that means with someone else or alone that fine by me.It is 2010 and neing happy and healthy with oneself is a good thing.
I hope you don't mind the long review rant, but I felt that I needed to express myself.
Thanks for the story and I look forward to more.
=-)
PLV
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:12 PM Title: Phoenix
Good for her! I'm still hating on Edward, and since we're still in the dark with Bella about what actually happened, I'm just gonna keep on hatin. :) He has only himself to blame either way.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my little story. Here is the James interview. Enjoy!
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:01 PM Title: Phoenix
I love this strong independant Bella. Glad to see she has no intentions of going back to thing 2. Will there be a showdown between Bella and Edward. well it wouldn't be much of a showdown really Bella is strong and independant and Edward is a pathetic excuse for a man with no balls, he seems to have handed them over to Skankya.
Loved this chapter can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:34 AM Title: Eyewall
i am so confused. i knew not to trust james from the start but i was giving him the benefit of the doubt. man can she not get a break. really edward didn't completely say he cheated. it seems it was more complicated than just a fuck. so here i am still reading but very confused. i am not 100% that the baby is edwards. I am thinking it is james or tanya was sleeping with someone else. bella needs to be on her own for awhile and figure shit out. she never had closure with edward. she never listen to him to tell her what happened. she shut down and told him to fuck himself and that nothing mattered. she needs to get the facts make a decision and then move on
Date: 24 Aug 2010 11:35 PM Title: Eyewall
Great chapter. Poor Bella. Is Edward really the father of the baby? Was it a one time thing before Bella found out or was it a full blown affair?
Kat
Date: 24 Aug 2010 10:19 PM Title: Eyewall
Ok, first of all, did Bella even look at the child to see if it resembled Edward? And Edward?! WTF was he thinking taking the girl he cheated on Bella with to the wedding? Why does Tanya think this is her business, and Edward is adament it's not? If he can spout to Bella how he still wants her in front on Tanya, then I doubt they are together. Maybe they became friends and Tanya needed to talk to James?? I'm pulling at straws here. Bella needs to leave the hospital and take a road trip by herself. Take some time away from men and just enjoy life for a while. Screw everyone else.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 5:20 AM Title: Eyewall
Are we ever going to here what actually happened from Edward's point of view? I'm still hating on him, but i'm also curious.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 4:25 AM Title: Eyewall
Please tell me this is going to have a happy ending somewhere? And is Tanya's baby really Edwards?
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:43 AM Title: Eyewall
Good chapter. She should have kneed both the guys and punched Tanya on the way out though.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:40 AM Title: Eyewall
Well that was a bit of a shit storm. Got to feel bad for Bella she sure knows how to pick them.You really know how to make me feel like I'm right there feeling the angst. Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:33 AM Title: Eyewall
so who is the babys daddy??? I dont think it is really edwards, I think he convinced Tanya to keep the baby.
I am glad James ended up being a sleaze. I just hope Edward can earn Bellas trust back- good luck with that!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:56 AM Title: Eyewall
That's some messed up shit, so who's left for her to get with Riley? Damn I thinking ma needs to play for the other team because men seem to be fucking her over.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:34 AM Title: Eyewall
So James is a creep after all. I am like Bella, he can't be trusted. He only went after Bella to get back at Edward. To me it doesn't matter if he started having real feelings for her later.
I still don't get why Edward cheated with Tanya. How stupid. Is the baby even his? It was never said. Maybe he only dating her because she wouldn't leave him alone and Bella wouldn't talk to him. I know that sounds bad, but he can't really care about her if he can tell Bella while she is standing there that he made a mistake and wants to fix thing with her. I can't wait to see what happens next. I don't blame Bella for wanting to get away. Great job....thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:23 AM Title: Eyewall
Holy Crow, I knew it! I knew James was using her to get back at Edward. One question, is little Parker Edward's or James'? Or is that a secret for now? Great job, as always. :)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:17 AM Title: Eyewall
I knew it!!! James is such scum! I'm still not happy with E, but I'll reserve judgment til we get the rest of the story...what the hell??? he doesn't want to be with Tanya, then why is she there with him--kid or no kid!?!?! great chapter, great revelations and lovely suprise for a monday!!! (would it be greedy to hope there will still be a thursday update? hahaha!!!)
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:10 AM Title: Eyewall
OMG! I had a bad feeling about James but I can't believe Edward thinks Bella should just take him back! How could she ever trust him again after what he did? Is Parker even Edward's child or is he Jame's kid???
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:50 AM Title: Eyewall
SHIT! I really wanted to believe that Edward hadn't actually cheated on her! I can't believe Tanya's baby is his! UGH. I am so glad that she dumped James's ass. I knew he was evil. Okay, phew, now I have to wait for the next chapter! Thanks for the update, it was a crazy ride. Good job.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:42 AM Title: What He Said
wow wonder if the baby is eddies or james' for real.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 10:19 AM Title: What He Said
Grrrr! I hope something is answered soon...Like wtf Edward? Explain! Jesus *palms face* I really hope Tanya is not pregnant with his baby. This Bella and James relationship is squicking me out...*shudders*. Why Edward???? I just dont think any reason is excusible. If you want to be with someone else break it off with the other person first, it is so completely selfish...Great story by the way! I really dont like this Edward at all...I dont know if this was your goal? I am trying to figure out why Edward is so desperate to talk to Bella? Is he pining? Or does he just want a clear conscience? I want to pluck his short and curlies out one by one.
Author's Response:
We will get some answers in chapter 12 but not all. But I promise that all of those questions will be answered in time. Thanks for reading!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 2:01 AM Title: What He Said
You're killing me here. I want her to work things out with Edward because I just have a hard time accepting James as the sweetheart that he is portraying. At the same time Edward needs to suffer for cheating on her, but something tells me that Tanya either seduced or manipulated him. I hope the baby belongs to James not Edward!!!
Can't wait to see what happens next. Great job. Kat
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. Chapter 12 is my fav so far. Hope you like it!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:50 AM Title: What He Said
Good chapter, but I still wonder if James and Tanya were in it together to break up Edward and Tanya so they could be with them.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:27 AM Title: What He Said
great story please keep updating thanks
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:54 AM Title: What He Said
I hope Bella finally talks to Edward in the next chapter. That is going to be the only way she gets answers. I think Tanya is up to something. I have a feeling this baby is not Edward's. I really, really, really hope it is not Edward's baby!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 11:26 PM Title: What He Said
Not sure why B can't see it but, James pursuing her prior to her finding out E was having an affair makes way more sense now that she found out about Tanya. But maybe I'm just suspicious since I've had similar situations in my own life. Great story, look forward to your updates every week.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 10:41 PM Title: What He Said
so James was together with Tanya- and she cheated with Edward- i DONT know if buy she cheated with edward-she would have mentioned that to Bella in her snide comments- I really hope she didnnt anyway- I still want them Bella and Eddie to get back together- yes I am hopeless-but I will not apologize
Date: 19 Aug 2010 7:37 PM Title: What He Said
I don't know if this is suppose to be a Bella/ Edward story but I really like that James is the good guy for a change. I want her to be with him not cheating ass much. Can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 19 Aug 2010 7:30 PM Title: What He Said
I have to say, I don't think Bella and Edward should be together. He clearly didn't tell her all about him in the 9 years they were together. Then he cheats on her with someone like Tanya? They deserve each other. What could Edward possibly have to say to Bella to make this all okay? I'm not to sure I trust James either. Poor Bella, my heart breaks right along with hers.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:17 PM Title: What He Said
hmm, not sure James is so squeaky clean now
Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:19 PM Title: What She Said
Oh wow..... and he had to cheat with someone Bella has to work with too?!?!?!? WTF.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:31 PM Title: What She Said
WOW...well edward is really messed up if he got tanya pregnant....cause she probably did it on purpose...ugg i am so likeing james more now
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:55 AM Title: What She Said
Okay...*blows breath out* I uh, I hope to Jesus that Tanya is a slut and the baby is not Edward's. I also hope that James doesnt break Bella's heart because she is moving on and a huge secret between him Edward and Tanya is imminent I can feel it. I am sorry but I read these infidelity stories and I believe their is just no excuse for the cheating, none whatsoever. Edward is an asshole. My co-worker's husband was caught cheating on her she's my neighbor and friend and it was heartbreaking and devastating. I believe everyone deserves a chance, but man UGH it was gut wrenching to see someone I care for going through that. Edward will be redeemable (for me) if he has learned his lesson and isnt still screwing around with any woman. If he loved Bella he would truly wait for her, I really enjoy this story. Thank you.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:32 AM Title: What She Said
write more and fast i want to find out what happens:)
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:58 AM Title: What She Said
I so wanna run Edward down with my car after that last line.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 12:36 AM Title: What She Said
please he left Bella for Tanya- ugh- he didnt want a commitment but a pregnancy is pretty big responsbiblity.
I cant stand Bella and James together, there is something off about him. I know Edward was jealous, but he knows something about James, there is something that James is hiding-maybe he is Tanya's babys daddy? PLEASE
Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:49 PM Title: What She Said
Oh hell no that biotch would need to be put to sleep and Edward ugh. Thank god for James, at least now she knows she made the right decision. She better stay strong
Date: 12 Aug 2010 9:29 PM Title: What She Said
okay i am leaving my review here as well since i screwed up fanfiction's website and instead of saying tanya i said victoria. since i cannot correct it there i will have it here.
Let me start by saying that I do love this story but you are right I did not like this chapter and already know I will not like the next 2 as you stated.
The whole sex scene with James made me nauseous. I really hope this is not Edward’s baby. I still can’t still help but think that there is something going on between James and Tanya. I wonder if Tanya's comment about it being Edward's fault. Perhaps it's possible it really is James's baby and when Bella left Edward because he cheated then it resulted in James and Bella ending up together and thus leaving Tanya by herself? I know I am grasping at straws here but I really don't want it to be Edward's baby. It's bad enough that he cheated on Bella. This would make the betrayal so much worse. I just do not trust James. I know whatever Edward did which still I am unsure of since we have not heard from him yet was wrong but I am still Bella and Edward all the way. Hopefully all the angst will make their reunion which I still hope will happen that much better. I mean this is listed as a Bella and Edward story. All I can say now is I hope there is some Bella and Edward interaction soon because I am really getting tired of James.
Again just so you know I DO LOVE YOUR STORY and have faith in you that it will all turn out okay in the end. I'm just being a bit whiney now because I miss Edward!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: What She Said
Ouch. Poor Edward. Bella has moved on and built a life with James. Why should she care.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 8:24 PM Title: What She Said
Excellent chapter ha bring on the shit storm! I love this story! You read so many E & B break up stories where they stray and go off with other partners but of course it always mean't nothing.
It's refreshing that Bella has fallen in love with someone else! I am totally always Team Edward but at the end of the day the guy fucked up and needs to pay - if what Bella feels for James is real then Cullen you gotta suck it up!
Would love EPOV do you intend to do one?
Can't wait to see if Vapid Tan is carrying Cheatwards baby! If so there really is no return for E&B!
Laters - Debs (UK).x
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 8:02 PM Title: What She Said
Holy shit please tell there is another Edward in the hospital or her chiropractor's or spa therapist's name is Edward anything but Bella's Edward... great chapter I can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 12 Aug 2010 7:20 PM Title: What She Said
Wow...I really hope there is another reason this could be all Edward's fault. Ok he cheated, but does the baby really have to be his??? I hope not!!! Maybe Tanya is just trying to blame it on him. Don't get me wrong I am not happy with Edward. What he did was wrong, and I feel bad for what happened to him and everything in his past. I just don't like James. I don't trust James and it just makes me sick to think that Bella thinks she is in love with him...yuck! I really don't know if Edward and Bella can come back from this. Bella would have to talk to him for that to happen and I am not sure that will happen now.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 7:03 PM Title: What She Said
:O That was literally my expression. I CANT BELIEVE HE DID THAT !!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 6:59 PM Title: What She Said
I have to be honest here: I really don't like James with Bella, I feel that I can't really trust him, maybe it's all a prejudice because of the canon James, but I don't like it...all the same, I'm totally hooked wth this story so I'm just gonna keep on readin'!
WOW, Edward's past with trust issues is a real possibility that he sabotaged his entire relationship whit Bella, and the Tanya issue proves it, but I kind of feel that there's more to it...
Date: 12 Aug 2010 6:36 PM Title: What She Said
Wow just when I though I couldn't hate Edward any more what an arsehole, If it's true and he knocked up his skank whore it opens up all new questions did Alice know about this before she tried to excuse Twatwards behavior? if she did what does this say about her friendship with Bella if she was my friend she'd be quickly kicked to the curb. If he has knocked up tanya then does Bella need to be tested for STD's if Edward wasn't using condoms with either of them sheesh, as if ruining Bella's hopes and dreams wasn't enough he's risked her sexual health too? And with someone that works in the same hospital as Bella talk about rubbing her nose in it. I hope Bella get her answers and walks any and I hope Edward gets every bit of pain, heartache and humilation he's dished out to bella tenfold. So so pissed off, How on earth there be a HEA after this i don't know, but I can't wait to see where you are going to take this story.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 6:22 PM Title: What She Said
Oh shit! I know he cheated, but please tell me Tanya is not pregnant with his baby!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:06 AM Title: Unexpected Turn
I'm glad Bella's moving on. Of course, I'm still pissed off at Edward. Cheating is not okay. I'm bitter though, I've been in Bella's shoes before.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 3:31 AM Title: Unexpected Turn
I thought it was a great chapter. I just hope sleeping with James doesn't come back to bite her in the ass later. lol I wonder what Edward has to say to her? I hope that comes up next chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 2:55 AM Title: Unexpected Turn
I am really liking james..it hurts me cause i am a edward/bella lover but i actually want things to turn out great with james..i wonder what edward wants i dont want to hear crap like u were to busy things werent the same ...whatever dont cheat then break up like a man.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 1:18 AM Title: Unexpected Turn
I don't like the idea of James and Bella, but good chapter.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 12:36 AM Title: Weird
so we know that edward doesnt like james-but whats up with the phone and edwards
Date: 06 Aug 2010 12:29 AM Title: The ER
james is trying to get bella to loosen up maybe a little too much
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:23 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
I can't wait to start getting pieces to the puzzle of why Edward cheated
Date: 05 Aug 2010 9:02 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
don't know what is going on with ff website. the chapter was there and now it is not so i will do it here and there later. i hated that bella slept with james. i can see her still devastated and trying to move on by doing this but feeling she is in love with him when she said she loved edward and he has only been gone a month doesn't seem right to me. i still think james will change into something bad eventually. not sure if edward really had an affair. maybe james was threatening bella somehow to edward to pretend and get her upset enough to leave her. or perhaps he really did have an affair but i feel there is something more to it than him just being tempted by another woman and cheating. bella needs to TALK to him and hear his explanation. hope that happens soon. i love the story and hope that edward and bella talk soon so we know what is going on. also curious why he doesn't just confront her at the house instead of emails if he really wants to talk to her so bad. she didn't move. something is just not clicking here
Date: 05 Aug 2010 7:47 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
No hate mail here I liked it! Edward should have explained in an email he was dumb!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 7:39 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
Is this a E/B ending I dont know if its been answered or not just wondering??
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:52 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
If she is in love with James now will anything she finds out about Edward matter? Loving the story, looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:49 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
omg. sorry, its hard to wrap my head around bella and james and...ewww. nicely done though. i really hope some of the answers start coming out next chapter. i feel a combination of excitement and sick to my stomach every time i see an update on this story. personally, if i were in that long of a relationship, i would have demanded answers long ago, the curiosity and anger would have killed me, haha! i mean, there is never a good excuse for cheating but my mind would still be screaming WHY???
Date: 05 Aug 2010 2:54 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
Bella is being mean - at least listen to him.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 1:51 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
i hope this wasnt just a game to get her into his bed.
Author's Response:
Poor James. No one ever thinks anything he does is on the up and up. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 1:23 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
Ok, I will admit I don't like Bella and James together...I'm a Bella and Edward girl and always will be. That being said, I am not happy with the way Edward handled things and I believe there is a lot more to the story then Bella knows. I understand the need for this chapter, but I can't wait for the next one and to start finding out what is going on! Great job...thanks so much!!! Don't worry I will be here 'til then end!
Author's Response:
LoL you are not the only one that doesn't like B & James together. I promise to give you some answers next chapter. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 1:20 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
I loved this chapter. I'm so happy she let herself go and didn't second guess her feelings for him. I also really like how they didn't do the whole I love you thing yet. Sometimes it doesn't need to be said out loud to know it's there. God I love that he makes her feel special. I hope he keeps it up, can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully good things, I think she's been hurt enough
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! The next chapter is a doozie. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:51 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
I really like this story. every chapter makes me more curious to what the hell is up with Edward. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Next chapter we are going to start learning more of Edward and what he's been up to.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
well what a cliff hanger. edward is calling after all this time. what is up. well james you are making me feel uncomfortable. i am thinking he was with edward and now he decided to go for bella. but i guess sooner or later we will really find out what is an was going on. i still think though if she is going to move on she does believe it or not need to talk with edward to get that closure or she will always have that question in the back of her mind. i can't wait to read more, thanx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Stick with me please. The flood gates are about to open!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
I like that she is being strong I hate that everyone thinks that she is not facing or dealing with things because she is not all crying and shit. He messed up and she is moving on with a nice guy so far. That's what she needs. Please keep her strong and not some lost puppy that Edward can run over? Also please don't let her hurt James due to Edward that's so not right? Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you appreciate my strong Bella. I don't do well writing weak women so trust me that Bella will stay strong!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
Good chapter, but are we ever going to get an Edward POV?
Author's Response:
I have plans for an EPOV but not until close to the end. His secrets are about to start flooding out though. Don't worry!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
How exciting. Craziness starting soon, I'm looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
LoL yes we have one more chapter of building and then BAM the craziness starts! Thanks for reading!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
i love this story. it is really different. but i am a canon couples kinda person i want edward to beg and plead for her to take him back let her get the answers and let james turn into a prick i don't care just have them end up together. i also don't know how long they have been apart, but a baby would be awesome! thanks
a loyal reader
Author's Response:
Lol I can't promise a baby will happen but have faith in me about the canon couples part! Thanks for reading!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
Great chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
I know Bella has to go through all this...whatever it is. I don't trust James, but I never do. Bella is putting up a good front, and I bet she thinks she is over it, but she's not. She didn't get answers and she will need them someday!!! Great job...I can't wait to see what is really going on. Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you honey! No one ever trusts James. Poor guy, can't catch a break. Bella is going to have to deal with it, trust me! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
Great chapter, I have faith that you'll fill this story to its potential. Can't wait to see what Edward had to say and for the drama to start. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I just have a little more developing of this blossoming relationship before the flood gates open. Their relationship is a vital part of this story.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
hmmm just hope James stays a nice guy.
Author's Response:
Lol don't we all?! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
i can't wait to hear what edward has to say i know what he did was wrong but i still think bella needs to hear him out loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you hun! Yes, she does need to hear him about but she is stubborn scorned woman right now and isn't listening to anyone but herself.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:46 AM Title: Surprises
okay i am fustrated, she kicked him out. she didn;t listen to any of his messages. but after 9 years of their life together if he wasn't happy he needed to say something not cheat on her. she loved him and thought eventually they would get married. what did he expect when she found out and he confirmed that he cheated. so was it male or female. your a/n said edward wasn't gay but it sure seems as if he had slept with a male. i am stumped and can't wait to here what really went down
thanx
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading honey. All of the dirty details are going to come out trust me! :)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:47 AM Title: Surprises
ugh not James......noooooooo. wonder if eddie told alice the truth.
Author's Response:
Yes, James....sorry! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:26 AM Title: Surprises
I wouldn't be surprised if James had a hand in getting Edward to cheat so that he could have a chance with Bella.
Author's Response:
That would be interesting huh? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:37 AM Title: Surprises
Well, I'm sorry Edward is hurt but, hey you did it to yourself. Don't worry, I still thinks he's sexy. Is the sad woman at the bar his mystery lady? I just think there's more to her than just her being a frequent patron at the bar. Anyways, great chapter. I'm dying to see when Edward shows his face again. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks honey! Edward will survive...he's a tough guy. The lady at the bar serves a purpose and it will all be realized.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:31 PM Title: Surprises
I want to hear from Edward. I think its time to hear his side of things. Great chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks honey! I can't promise and Edward POV, it would mess up my whole plot line.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:17 PM Title: Surprises
thank god hes not gay I was starting to worry hahaha
Author's Response:
LoL Def not gay!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:14 PM Title: Surprises
LOL. I would kick him in the nuts too. I'm a bit miffed that he would take the bed and all the pictures with him. Can't wait to see what explaination he has when the time comes.
Author's Response:
It will all be explained I promise! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:06 PM Title: Surprises
Oh My Goodness! This story is fantastic!!! Please update soon. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I usually update every thursday, real life permitting!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:55 PM Title: Surprises
I'm cautiously wondering if James is going to be the good guy in this story...
Author's Response:
That seems to be everyone's concern, considering James is never a good guy in anyone's stories. Thanks for reading hun!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 10:31 PM Title: Aftermath
He hasn't been cheating repeatedly althrough their nine years together right?
I was wondering if you could confirm where the story is set? I have it in my head their in Seattle as most Fic have there stories based there but you have made reference to Atanta, surly Bella would of noticed Edwards disappearance for several days? Forgive me i'm British so it's sightly confused me.
Author's Response:
All the answeres regarding the cheating (length, who, why, etc.) will all be revealed but I have a whole plan for that. The story is set in Atlanta. And Edward's never disappeared for a few days. That would've been too obvious. I h ope I've helped clear up some thing! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:44 PM Title: Aftermath
Poor Bella
My guess is Dr Hutton knows Edward was cheating...and thats why Edward doesnt like him he was afraid that he would tell Bella.
So is this a Edward/Bella or will we end up James/Bella
at this point i am so mad at Edward so bring James on if he is a decent guy
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I would love to confirm or deny your theories but unfortunately that would ruin the rest of the story. Just know that all of the dirty details are going to come out and Bella will end up happy.