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Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:07 PM Title: Aftermath

The good news is they didn't have kids.  Even if you get be together after a seperation it still takes and toll and has lingering effects on the kids.  Good chapter, I believe you got her emotions down pat.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Yes, thank God there are no children involved!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 9:26 PM Title: Aftermath

So sad and I wish she would have gotten some answers from him.



Author's Response:

Those answers all going to come out soon! Trust me! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:06 PM Title: Aftermath

Great chapter. So he cheated. Is there only one kind of cheating? Just curious if he is saying one way and she is thinking of the other. Thanks



Author's Response:

LoL if you're asking if he's gay...the answer is no. Never even entered my mind.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:37 PM Title: Aftermath

So will James come in and be her knight in shining armour?  Edward is an idiot!



Author's Response:

Lol. I don't usually like to give things away but yes, it was with a woman. My Edward isn't gay!

Reviewer: courtney1022 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:36 PM Title: Aftermath

he did cheat withna girl right?????

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:57 PM Title: Aftermath

poor b.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:35 PM Title: Aftermath

I loved this chapter even though it was sad because you didn't make Bella weak and naive. She did the right thing and put his ass out, not excepting any excuses. Really there is non, that shit is never okay. Please keep her as strong throughout the whole story?



Author's Response:

I'm not a fan of weak Bella's.  Bella got her answer and sent his ass packing!  I promise she's going to be strong.  She's hurt and she'll cry but she's not gonna let this ruin her!

Reviewer: brit77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:01 PM Title: Aftermath

Ack that was soo mean I thought we were gonna find out the juicy details of the affair!!! And we got nothing! Bad writer person!



Author's Response:

So sorry! Bella had finally gotten confirmation of him cheating and by that point she was just done with him and the situation. She wanted him out of there.  All of the juicy details will come out. Believe me!!!!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:30 PM Title: Aftermath

I wanna kick Edward in the nuts!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol feel free. Someone else has already slapped him this morning. Might as well kick him too! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: The ER

I kind of wonder if Dr Hutton has anything to do with Edward's "wierd" behavior...you know?  And it sure sounds as if a man is involved.  You won't believe this, but I read the last chapter last night before bedtime, and I dreamed about where the story was going...now I'm stoked to see if we think alike about the plot!  Very well-written!



Author's Response:

Ya know, that's funny because I often dream about fics that I read just  before bed. It's crazy how that works! Thank you so much for the kind words and for reading and reviewing.  The next chapter isn't far away, promise!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:31 PM Title: Confrontation

He better be ready to come clean.  I can't wait to see what he says.  I feel so bad for Bella.  Dr. James Hutton needs to take a hike.  He can not be a friend to you Bella!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

So funny! Take a hike! LOl Thanks for reading hun! Next chapter isn't far away I promise!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:17 AM Title: Confrontation

go bella......



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my Bella! I like her being fiesty!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:29 AM Title: Confrontation

OMG i can't believe you left us hanging this way. i am dying. my blood is pumping so fast and my heart is beating a mile a minute. i am more pissed and ready to kill edward than bella.



Author's Response:

So sorry I left you like that but I promise the next chapter isn't far away! I'll hit Edward for you!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:14 AM Title: Signature

he is having an affair. OMG my heart is racing so fast. i am bad i have jumped to conculsions and have already strung him up. he'd better have a good excuse but i doubt it.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:03 AM Title: Pushing

I am either thinking edward and james had a relationship or they both liked the same gal. not sure

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:36 AM Title: Confrontation

ugh, way to leave a girl hangin!



Author's Response:

Sorry hun! Thanks for reading though!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:01 AM Title: Confrontation

Fascinating



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:11 AM Title: Confrontation

OMG!! Is he really about to tell her the truth about what has been going on? UGH, patience is not one of my best virtues. lol Love the story and can't wait for more. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you hun! I promise the  next chapter isn't far away!!!

Reviewer: brit77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:03 AM Title: Confrontation

Uggg... that was a horrible cliffy lil lady!



Author's Response:

Sorry! :( I promise the next chapter isn't far away!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:24 AM Title: Confrontation

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: The ER

Does Edward have a wife already and that's why he's so anti-marriage with Bella?  An entire family?  Sounds to me like he's cheating...hotel charges, odd phone calls, odd behavior...hmmm.  Please hurry and get more plot out.  I really hope Bella doesn't wind up too broken because of whatever he's doing.



Author's Response:

The next chapter isn't far away, I promise and it's very BUSY! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 7:49 PM Title: Signature

hmmm  hotel charges.....strike 1



Author's Response:

Lol Indeed

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:14 PM Title: Signature

Uh oh, so is he cheating on her? Oh gosh, please say it isn't with Dr. Hutton. He has to be connected with it because Edward doesn't won't her around the other dr. Ugh!! Its killing me here, not knowing what is going on. Great chapter. Thanks Update soon, the suspence is killing me.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I can tell you that Edward isn't gay. the next chapter isn't far away!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:04 PM Title: Signature

Oh Edward, you are messing up you life!  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. next chapter will be up soon, I promise.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 3:22 AM Title: Signature

I knew it, thats how I caught my husband was the credit card statement.  Men really are stupid!



Author's Response:

Wow, really? Men are stupid though. Let's see how Edward explains this one! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 11:35 PM Title: Signature

Hmmm

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 9:13 PM Title: Signature

Ok the vibe I'm getting here is that maybe he had an affair with someone connected to James and James knows about it and that's why Edward doesn't want her around him.  Of course it's your story and I'm usually really bad at figuring things out.  But I am anxious to see what Edward has to say for himself.



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks for reading! The good news is that i'm almost done with the next chapter so it shouldn't be long  between chapters! Thanks for the insight! :)

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 5:42 AM Title: Pushing

Good chapter, I still think Edward is fooling around or James has something on Edward and is using it to blackmail him in some way, cause James has the hots for Bella.



Author's Response:

Interesting theory! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:52 PM Title: Pushing

hmm  she'd overreacting if its only 1 day of "oddness"



Author's Response:

She's concerned of his 1 day of oddness  because it's so out of character for him. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:58 PM Title: Pushing

Well. Bella you have a right to be suspicious.  I can't wait to find out what is going on.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Lol thank you!!!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:33 PM Title: Pushing

I'm still nervous about Edward. But I'm glad they tried to talk.



Author's Response:

LoL at least they tried! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:05 PM Title: Pushing

Yes, we definitely need to find out what is going on between Edward and James. Is there some kind of wierd lovers twist or have they had a wild past involving women. Come on 6 chapters in we need a little bit of the twist. Congrats on getting married! Vegas Baby! thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

It will be revealed soon, I promise! Thanks for the congrats. It's good to be home!

Thanks again.

Reviewer: mroth22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 10:55 PM Title: The ER

Great start.  I have a feeling Edward is cheating or doing something he isn't supposed to be doing.  Crap!  he isn't cheating with James is he!!  Can't wait for next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! I wish I could tell you what he's doing but that would ruin it.

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:33 AM Title: Weird

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:36 AM Title: Weird

what the hell is up with edward???



Author's Response:

It's all going to come out. Trust me!

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:57 PM Title: Weird

cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!!! Hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:33 PM Title: Weird

OMG, he is cheating isn't he? Why didn't she just look at the caller ID just to see who it was calling him so early. I know I sure would have. LOL Maybe just a drop by at the office and check things out wouldn't hurt. Thanks for the great update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and enjoying. I hope I don't disappoint!

Reviewer: eitak Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:28 PM Title: Weird

Very interesting story so far, I'm hooked already! Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Next chapter shouldn't be too far away!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:04 PM Title: Weird

This can't be good.  I'm afraid to find out what he is up to. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm afraid too!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:30 PM Title: Weird

He's screwing around. 
Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:57 PM Title: Weird

:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 11:15 PM Title: The ER

this sounds really good!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!! I'm hoping to have the new chapter up by wednesday or thursday!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 4:39 AM Title: The ER

So excited to see you have another story I cant wait for more sounds great so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: AKR Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 9:46 AM Title: The ER

Hmmm... interesting. Waiting for more. What have our little E. been up to?



Author's Response:

THank  you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We will meet Edward next chapter but as for what he's been up to....it will be revealed soon!

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 6:53 AM Title: The ER

So James is a good guy?? And when do we meet Edward???   :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Edward will be introduced next chapter. James a good guy? Is he ever a good guy?

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 4:05 AM Title: The ER

Great start. Is James going to be a bad guy in this one? Can't wait to find out what the deal is with Edward, though. I thought all guys were jealous. LOL Unless, maybe he is cheating on her and she doesn't know yet. Oh crap. Update soon.



Author's Response:

LoL Loving your guesses. We will meet Edward next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 2:25 AM Title: The ER

Is Edward the John? What's the "unthinkable" thing he does?



Author's Response:

Edward is not the John in the bar. That is just some random dude w/ a prosititute.  The unthinkable thing will come out. Trust me.

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 2:00 AM Title: The ER

A very good start...Can't wait for more..



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 12:16 AM Title: The ER

james...crap! I cant wait to see where this story will lead...

 

~Tiffany



Author's Response:

Lol. Crap was the reaction I was hoping for.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 11:41 PM Title: The ER

So far so good, I'll def stick around and see what you have planned.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: The ER

Love it wifey! You have done a great job! I am so intriqued and cannot wait to read more! xxx



Author's Response:

Aww thanks wifey!!!! (Oh and the banner is just a place holder until you do your fab job with it!)

Love you!

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