Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:07 PM Title: Aftermath
The good news is they didn't have kids. Even if you get be together after a seperation it still takes and toll and has lingering effects on the kids. Good chapter, I believe you got her emotions down pat.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Yes, thank God there are no children involved!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 9:26 PM Title: Aftermath
So sad and I wish she would have gotten some answers from him.
Author's Response:
Those answers all going to come out soon! Trust me! Thanks for reading!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:06 PM Title: Aftermath
Great chapter. So he cheated. Is there only one kind of cheating? Just curious if he is saying one way and she is thinking of the other. Thanks
Author's Response:
LoL if you're asking if he's gay...the answer is no. Never even entered my mind.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:37 PM Title: Aftermath
So will James come in and be her knight in shining armour? Edward is an idiot!
Author's Response:
Lol. I don't usually like to give things away but yes, it was with a woman. My Edward isn't gay!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:36 PM Title: Aftermath
he did cheat withna girl right?????
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:35 PM Title: Aftermath
I loved this chapter even though it was sad because you didn't make Bella weak and naive. She did the right thing and put his ass out, not excepting any excuses. Really there is non, that shit is never okay. Please keep her as strong throughout the whole story?
Author's Response:
I'm not a fan of weak Bella's. Bella got her answer and sent his ass packing! I promise she's going to be strong. She's hurt and she'll cry but she's not gonna let this ruin her!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:01 PM Title: Aftermath
Ack that was soo mean I thought we were gonna find out the juicy details of the affair!!! And we got nothing! Bad writer person!
Author's Response:
So sorry! Bella had finally gotten confirmation of him cheating and by that point she was just done with him and the situation. She wanted him out of there. All of the juicy details will come out. Believe me!!!!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:30 PM Title: Aftermath
I wanna kick Edward in the nuts!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol feel free. Someone else has already slapped him this morning. Might as well kick him too! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: The ER
I kind of wonder if Dr Hutton has anything to do with Edward's "wierd" behavior...you know? And it sure sounds as if a man is involved. You won't believe this, but I read the last chapter last night before bedtime, and I dreamed about where the story was going...now I'm stoked to see if we think alike about the plot! Very well-written!
Author's Response:
Ya know, that's funny because I often dream about fics that I read just before bed. It's crazy how that works! Thank you so much for the kind words and for reading and reviewing. The next chapter isn't far away, promise!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:31 PM Title: Confrontation
He better be ready to come clean. I can't wait to see what he says. I feel so bad for Bella. Dr. James Hutton needs to take a hike. He can not be a friend to you Bella!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
So funny! Take a hike! LOl Thanks for reading hun! Next chapter isn't far away I promise!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:17 AM Title: Confrontation
go bella......
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like my Bella! I like her being fiesty!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:29 AM Title: Confrontation
OMG i can't believe you left us hanging this way. i am dying. my blood is pumping so fast and my heart is beating a mile a minute. i am more pissed and ready to kill edward than bella.
Author's Response:
So sorry I left you like that but I promise the next chapter isn't far away! I'll hit Edward for you!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:14 AM Title: Signature
he is having an affair. OMG my heart is racing so fast. i am bad i have jumped to conculsions and have already strung him up. he'd better have a good excuse but i doubt it.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:03 AM Title: Pushing
I am either thinking edward and james had a relationship or they both liked the same gal. not sure
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:36 AM Title: Confrontation
ugh, way to leave a girl hangin!
Author's Response:
Sorry hun! Thanks for reading though!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:01 AM Title: Confrontation
Fascinating
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:11 AM Title: Confrontation
OMG!! Is he really about to tell her the truth about what has been going on? UGH, patience is not one of my best virtues. lol Love the story and can't wait for more. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you hun! I promise the next chapter isn't far away!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:03 AM Title: Confrontation
Uggg... that was a horrible cliffy lil lady!
Author's Response:
Sorry! :( I promise the next chapter isn't far away!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:24 AM Title: Confrontation
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 30 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: The ER
Does Edward have a wife already and that's why he's so anti-marriage with Bella? An entire family? Sounds to me like he's cheating...hotel charges, odd phone calls, odd behavior...hmmm. Please hurry and get more plot out. I really hope Bella doesn't wind up too broken because of whatever he's doing.
Author's Response:
The next chapter isn't far away, I promise and it's very BUSY! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 7:49 PM Title: Signature
hmmm hotel charges.....strike 1
Author's Response:
Lol Indeed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:14 PM Title: Signature
Uh oh, so is he cheating on her? Oh gosh, please say it isn't with Dr. Hutton. He has to be connected with it because Edward doesn't won't her around the other dr. Ugh!! Its killing me here, not knowing what is going on. Great chapter. Thanks Update soon, the suspence is killing me.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I can tell you that Edward isn't gay. the next chapter isn't far away!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:04 PM Title: Signature
Oh Edward, you are messing up you life! I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. next chapter will be up soon, I promise.
Date: 30 Jun 2010 3:22 AM Title: Signature
I knew it, thats how I caught my husband was the credit card statement. Men really are stupid!
Author's Response:
Wow, really? Men are stupid though. Let's see how Edward explains this one! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 9:13 PM Title: Signature
Ok the vibe I'm getting here is that maybe he had an affair with someone connected to James and James knows about it and that's why Edward doesn't want her around him. Of course it's your story and I'm usually really bad at figuring things out. But I am anxious to see what Edward has to say for himself.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks for reading! The good news is that i'm almost done with the next chapter so it shouldn't be long between chapters! Thanks for the insight! :)
Date: 12 Jun 2010 5:42 AM Title: Pushing
Good chapter, I still think Edward is fooling around or James has something on Edward and is using it to blackmail him in some way, cause James has the hots for Bella.
Author's Response:
Interesting theory! Thanks for reading!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:52 PM Title: Pushing
hmm she'd overreacting if its only 1 day of "oddness"
Author's Response:
She's concerned of his 1 day of oddness because it's so out of character for him. Thanks for reading!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:58 PM Title: Pushing
Well. Bella you have a right to be suspicious. I can't wait to find out what is going on. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Lol thank you!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:33 PM Title: Pushing
I'm still nervous about Edward. But I'm glad they tried to talk.
Author's Response:
LoL at least they tried! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:05 PM Title: Pushing
Yes, we definitely need to find out what is going on between Edward and James. Is there some kind of wierd lovers twist or have they had a wild past involving women. Come on 6 chapters in we need a little bit of the twist. Congrats on getting married! Vegas Baby! thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
It will be revealed soon, I promise! Thanks for the congrats. It's good to be home!
Thanks again.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 10:55 PM Title: The ER
Great start. I have a feeling Edward is cheating or doing something he isn't supposed to be doing. Crap! he isn't cheating with James is he!! Can't wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wish I could tell you what he's doing but that would ruin it.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:33 AM Title: Weird
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:36 AM Title: Weird
what the hell is up with edward???
Author's Response:
It's all going to come out. Trust me!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:57 PM Title: Weird
cant wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!!! Hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:33 PM Title: Weird
OMG, he is cheating isn't he? Why didn't she just look at the caller ID just to see who it was calling him so early. I know I sure would have. LOL Maybe just a drop by at the office and check things out wouldn't hurt. Thanks for the great update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and enjoying. I hope I don't disappoint!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:28 PM Title: Weird
Very interesting story so far, I'm hooked already! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Next chapter shouldn't be too far away!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:04 PM Title: Weird
This can't be good. I'm afraid to find out what he is up to.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm afraid too!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:30 PM Title: Weird
He's screwing around.
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 31 May 2010 11:15 PM Title: The ER
this sounds really good!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!!! I'm hoping to have the new chapter up by wednesday or thursday!
Date: 29 May 2010 4:39 AM Title: The ER
So excited to see you have another story I cant wait for more sounds great so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 28 May 2010 9:46 AM Title: The ER
Hmmm... interesting. Waiting for more. What have our little E. been up to?
Author's Response:
THank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We will meet Edward next chapter but as for what he's been up to....it will be revealed soon!
Date: 28 May 2010 6:53 AM Title: The ER
So James is a good guy?? And when do we meet Edward??? :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Edward will be introduced next chapter. James a good guy? Is he ever a good guy?
Date: 28 May 2010 4:05 AM Title: The ER
Great start. Is James going to be a bad guy in this one? Can't wait to find out what the deal is with Edward, though. I thought all guys were jealous. LOL Unless, maybe he is cheating on her and she doesn't know yet. Oh crap. Update soon.
Author's Response:
LoL Loving your guesses. We will meet Edward next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 28 May 2010 2:25 AM Title: The ER
Is Edward the John? What's the "unthinkable" thing he does?
Author's Response:
Edward is not the John in the bar. That is just some random dude w/ a prosititute. The unthinkable thing will come out. Trust me.
Date: 28 May 2010 2:00 AM Title: The ER
A very good start...Can't wait for more..
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: 28 May 2010 12:16 AM Title: The ER
james...crap! I cant wait to see where this story will lead...
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
Lol. Crap was the reaction I was hoping for. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 27 May 2010 11:41 PM Title: The ER
So far so good, I'll def stick around and see what you have planned.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!!!
Date: 27 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: The ER
Love it wifey! You have done a great job! I am so intriqued and cannot wait to read more! xxx
Author's Response:
Aww thanks wifey!!!! (Oh and the banner is just a place holder until you do your fab job with it!)
Love you!