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Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 20-Double Dating with Vampires

OMG!!! This was great!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 19-Wicked Games

LOL I worked in a shoe store back in high school and sold "CFM" boots. Yeah it was the 80's LOL

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 18-One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

wow...he can actually relate to her.

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

I just found this story and I really have enjoyed it so far.  Emmett is hilarious!  And Bella is now kinky!  Who knew?  I guess it is the quiet ones huh?  Can't wait to see where you go from here.



Author's Response: Oh thank you for your kind review. More chapters will be up soon

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 17-Fall

Nine inch nails rocks!!!

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

Yay! Loved the confessions and make out session in the book store!...Still hating Julian, I wonder if Tanya could distract him for awhile? There is going to have to be something about Julian that comes out and makes it easier for Bella to dump his ass.

Author's Response: Thank you D! I can't imagine why u don't like julian...lol

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

Poor Edward. He needs to loosen up a bit and get comfortable with using dirty talk. "Bella, would you do me the honor of having intercourse with me?"...Not very sexy at all. Will Edward be making his own cfm playlist for the Florida trip?

Author's Response: Oh if edward just knew how to loosen up...well then I guess there would be no story...lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

Oh.... how I do love it when you update.... i love this story.. and there needs to be something to push them over the edge...just the thought of Edward and Bella together.. oh the possibilities....yummy stuff



Author's Response: C: thank you. Will they or won't they? That is the question...lol

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

Hot damn!!!



Author's Response: Mora: may I presume you liked it? Lol

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

That was hysterical!  I love it.    kat



Author's Response: Kat: I'm glad you thought it was funny! Thanks for r and r!

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

I like this story a lot this is a very refreshing outlook on the whole
Edward get Bella back twist. Keep it going.



Author's Response: J: thank you so much. I was trying to come up with something different and light hearted

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

Operation Edward Eats Pussy--Finally   LMAO      Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 20-Double Dating with Vampires

Carlise's advice was hysterical.  It must be a trip to live with the Cullens.   Kat

Reviewer: Sweetlily Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

lol bathroom masturbating ed is soo funny  and its funny that bella know too ^.^



Author's Response: Glad u liked him! To be clear, bella didn't know abt his bathroom incident

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

OMG, LOL!!!



Author's Response: I'm glad you r laughing :)

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

I LOVE Emmett!!!

Reviewer: wickedlovely731 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

oh boy, i love this story. i laught with most of the chapters. please post soon.

Author's Response: Thank you Wicked. Laughter is good! I will post more later tonight

Reviewer: TwilightGwaelyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 23-Reconnections

I am LOVING this story.  It makes me laugh, to the point I think I might pass out, and it makes me sad.  Fantastic writing!  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Gwaelyn: Thank you for your kind words.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

LOL, you gotta LOVE Emmett!



Author's Response: Sammyjo: if you like Emmett, stay tuned. He kinds steals the show in the next chappie. Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

LMAO! this is just hilarious!



Author's Response: Thank you Liss!

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

I cant breath, please dont make me wait to long

 

ja ja aj aj aj ja



Author's Response: Chapter 22 will be up in approx. 4 hours

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

OMG I CANT WAIT!!!!

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 20-Double Dating with Vampires

Dude, hell even I wouldn't spank the monkey in the bathroom of a bookstore! EMMETT

Did you ever find out where Bella got those shoes? ALICE

I understand Edward. I think it is admirable you want to maintain control in front of Bella no matter what. JASPER

Even Emmett wouldn't do that in a public bathroom you animal. ROSALIE

Edward Anthony Masen Cullen! I raised you to know better than to masturbate in a public bathroom. What if there had been children nearby? ESME

Son, always use copious amounts of lubrication. You do not want to get some sort of friction burn CARLILE!!

 

JAJA!!!:0)

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 16-Research

too funny.. I love it!   I would love to see Edward and Bella together, maybe have Julian lose it and almost kill her, to push Edwards hand.... show Bella just how much Edward would do for her, and then can be complete mates!!!



Author's Response:

cj:  I'm so glad you like it.  I will be posting more today.

Reviewer: jol27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 16-Research

well it completely changed its direction from where i thougth this story was going to go when i started it a few hours ago.

However I have to say i love that all the vamps are gettign a little kinky esp Esme lol love that part with the , well you know ;o) and edwards was it for her or carlisle lol

 

can t wait to read more

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Jo!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 15-Bella's Toys

LOL!!!



Author's Response:

Mora: Thanks for reading and letting me know your reactions.  You have me laughing now!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....

damn!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 13-Over My Already Dead Body

? He is learning?

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 12-Julian Meets The Cullens

Dr. BSDM!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 11-Damn AT&T To Hell

:-) you go Bella!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 10-The Plan

LOL!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

You tell him Jasper!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

?Edward knows best?

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 16-Research

Mmmm. Edward is starting to push a little wedge between Bella and Julian ...have I mentioned I hate Julian? ;)

Author's Response:

Maybe once or twice...lol

Reviewer: sherry-2010 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 15-Bella's Toys

OMG! You go Esme ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Sherry.  I love Esme too.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 11-Damn AT&T To Hell

Edward getting his kink on....LMAO     Kat



Author's Response:

E might just have a naughty side...

Reviewer: Sweetlily Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....

you make me oo so happy w/ the updates :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Sweet.  I just posted the outtake (BPOV).

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....

Come on Edward grow a set. Man up. You had her, she was yours but noooo...geez, I hate Julian.

Author's Response:

When did you start hating Julian?  LOL.  So close....Thanks for continuing to read and review.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 13-Over My Already Dead Body

I have enjoyed reading this story, and I really like Bella a little kinky... however I would love to see Edward be open and tell Bella how he feels.. I would love to see Edward and Bella open up and have incredible sex....he could be very hot!!!!



Author's Response:

Don't give up on Edward yet...lol.  I will be posting at least two more chapters tonight.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

So happy I can read on to the next chap right now :-)

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults

U have to love Emmett!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 5-WTF?

Edward is SOOOOO innocent...for an undead killer! lol

 



Author's Response:

Innocent, undead killer. It has a ring to it.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

oh no



Author's Response:

Mora: I'm glad you seem to be liking it.  Your comments are cracking me up.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian

Poor Edward :-(

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 2-Of all the Airports in the World....

He so loves her to pieces

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

damn! He gets to see her in the first chap!

Reviewer: Sweetlily Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 12-Julian Meets The Cullens

:)

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

Indeed she is, and I definitely like it.

I'm now busy trying to catch up over on FF. I've been distracted during the day (work, ha!) and hadn't checked, but something told me you were cross-posting. Maybe the quick updates? ;)

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 11-Damn AT&T To Hell

The chapter title cracked me up.

I'm glad Bella's standing up for herself... and I'm glad Edward's *trying* to see things differently.

I'm really enjoying this. :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it March!  Grown up Bella is stronger than teenager Bella, at least in my view.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

Em is so cool sometimes



Author's Response: Kat: I'm an Em lover too!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

Edward kinky?  This I have to see (or read about)

**giggles**   Kat

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

OMg!!!cant wait for more!!see im supposed to be studying for a test tomorrow !!1u have me HOOOKED!!!!:0) UPDATE!!!



Author's Response: Oh my! In that case I guess I will have to post some more chapters tonight

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

Excellent talk from the older, wiser brother. Love it.

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

Gah! I'm really enjoying this story, but poor Edward is making me cringe. Obviously I understand where he's coming from, but his old fashioned upbringing and his blindness where she's concerned is overriding his common sense.

If only he'd decided otherwise about what thoughts to share with her. Silly boy. ;)

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: M: thank you so much for your kind words. We will have to see if E ever gets a clue...lol

Author's Response: M: thank you so much for your kind words. We will have to see if E ever gets a clue...lol

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

Open mouth...insert foot.  lol      Kat



Author's Response: That should have been the chapter title...lol

Reviewer: Sweetlily Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

i like this bella a lot more plz keep up the good work giggles ,,^.^,,



Author's Response:

Lily:  Thank you so much.  Chapter 9 has just been posted.

Reviewer: ACullen35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

Why does Edward always have to be stupid and NOT tell her how he feels???? Too bad Alice couldn't clue him in on the fact that talking about Julian is what pisses her off, LOL I can't wait to see what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks A for reading and reviewnig.  Next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

Too funny... I just love Emmett.... He may be a big goof, but he is right... I hope that Edward will bare his soul to Bella and tell her the truth.. she deserves it...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. We have not heard the last from Em....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

well edward is an idiot thinking that he can get her just to leave whener he wants her too! cant wait to see the blow out from it 



Author's Response:

Lani:  I think you will be getting your wish in the next few chapters. They will be posted soon.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

Boy, Edward sure has some blinders on. Emmett was actually giving him good advice and he tried to explain the probable scenario to him. Still hating Julian...what can I say, I'm team Edward always.

Author's Response:

Duchess:  You're not alone in your hate for Julian among the reviewers...lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

love this story!!:0) cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you oo!  More will be forthcoming.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults

Bella is 'a freak in bed?'  OMG   I love it.  You are doing such a great job with this story.   I can't wait to read more.  

**hugs**  Kat

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat. I think you will be seeing more of Emmett in the future..

Reviewer: Sweetlily Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults

lol i just love this ,,^.^,,



Author's Response:

Thanks Sweetlilly.  More chapters will be posted soon.

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults

Hmm...Maybe Bella still has feelings for dazzling Edward. She smiled and promised. Still hating Julian.

Author's Response:

Could Bella ever be truly over Edward? That is the question! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

Too funny...so embarrassing.  Great job.     Kat



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found it funny! Thanks!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian

Yum...jealous Edward.   Kat



Author's Response:

Jealousward is yummy, I agree. Thanks for reading and reviewing Kat.

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5-WTF?

Poor Edward...can't wrap his expansive vampire brain around the fact that his shy innocent Bella likes it kinky. For the record, I still hate Julian. I hope Edward can make big enough waves in their relationship to break them up. Meanwhile, he better get some bdsm books and get a playroom ready. If he thought sex with her would be difficult before...

Author's Response:

Edward does have some learning to do...Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 5-WTF?

LMAO11!! THis ch Its HILaRious!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you laughed!!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

hmm...Bella is kinky

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

What a wonderful start to a story.  I can't wait to see where you take things.

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you Kat. I hope you stick with it.  More chapters will be  posted soon.  Please let me know what you think!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 5-WTF?

Okay.. now I have read a ton of different stories.. and loved them all, however... Is this a HEA for Bella and Edward.. or do they never come back together??  I know that Edward can be completely straight laised.. but come on... He and Bella are so good together...



Author's Response:

Well, I don't want to give the ending away for obvious reasons. But I think if you read the title, it is easy to guess than Edward is going to try his best.  I hope you will stick with it. More chapters will be posted real soon.

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian

I'm with Edward...I hate Julian. He sounds like a Ken doll with a super gay name... lol... Just kiddin'. But I still hate him.

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 2-Of all the Airports in the World....

Uh oh... who's the tall man...and how involved are they? Poor Edward!

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

I like the premise so far. I wonder what's new with Bella?

Side note... Thanks for using 'intents and purposes' I swear if I read one more fic using 'intensive purposes'... lol ;)

Author's Response:

Duchess:  Thanks!  I hope you stick around for more.   My pet peeve is "per say" instead of "per se".   I'll be posting more chapters real soon.

Reviewer: cofey Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

it seems that edward and the cullens have lived their time in a bubble seemingly unaware of different sexual preferences ... perhaps they shld read some fanfic ... lol



Author's Response:

I agree...fanfic is educational for us all! lol

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5-WTF?

Now that's what u call EMBARRASSING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

 I wish I could say that will be the only such moment....I hope you enjoy the story.

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