Date: 30 Oct 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 39
I would love a part two. I love this little family. Great grandpa Charles too. I will put you on author alert. Great job with the story.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
It's really amazing. I love stories where Bella is pregnant and this one is really good.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 39
do continue ...ur story is truly amazin ....plzz write mr abt der growin family n der second kid ......would love 2 read mr bcoz it's truly wonderful.....
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 35
love the but instead of making characters up you should of used tanya as a girl who wanted him back
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 39
please, please, PLEASE do a part two! I absolutely love this storyline and I'm anxious to know more. You're a great writer! I've definitely been hooked since the beginning.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
Love!! I liked the flashback of sorts to when they first began seeing each other, and Edward's attempts at redoing and fixing his earlier mistakes. Thanks for sharing!!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 39
I loved it and inwould love to see more of them!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 39
I have just read the entire story from ch 1 to ch 39. It is one of my fav AH stories that I have ever read :) should you find your muse, a part two would be phenomenal...
Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 39
Thank you for the recent updates, it would be great if you would do a sequel.
If it's another story, can you please send out an alert on this story so that people don't miss it.
Cheers, Justice xx
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
What a lovely chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 35
wow... you had to feel some sort of compassion for how deluisional this woman was
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 34
now that was a wonderful conversation.... Kudos!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 39
He is being so sweet this time around.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 3:49 AM Title: EPOV with Caleb
wow what a chapter... what a story
Date: 02 Aug 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 39
These two have come such a long way. I love it! Great job...thanks!!! I would also love a part two of this story.
Date: 02 Aug 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 39
oh how nice. Would love part 2 of these two!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 39
ok, I did my part and reviewed, so please do your part and do a part 2......whispers....please?
Date: 02 Aug 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 39
*Gasps* Please do a sequel! I will never get enough of these two! Thank you so much for the 2 quick updates :) Awesome chapter, brought happy tears to my eyes. I can't wait for more! Xx
Date: 02 Aug 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 39
glad you updated so soon. great chapter, loved how he is trying in so many ways to show her his love.
Date: 02 Aug 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 39
Yes please, bring on part two. It's so wonderful to see them growing together while not letting the past bring them down
Date: 01 Aug 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
Yay!!! Please continue on with this story....let us follow their life together...;)
Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 39
I really think she needs to be in therapy to deal with her negative self image, but I love this chapter and would love to see a part 2.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 39
Another great one, I think a part 2 would be cool. hope to read more soon.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wow thank you so much for the new chapter. I love this story. I would love a sequal. It is one of my favorites. I often reread it. I love how much Edward changed. This chapter was a great insight into both Edward and Bella. Thanks again.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wonderful story, thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 39
I don't have much to bribe you with, but promise to review every chapter if you decide to continue. I've always wanted to see Phantom. I'm been to the theater many times and absolutely love it but Phantom is one of the last shows I've yet to see.
It certainly is hard when you want to control your dreams and can't. Even when you know it is just a dream it seems like you can't get out of it until it lets you. I think Edward did exactly what he needed to, even if he didn't feel like he was doing anything. The constant reminding her of his happiness and love helped her, since that is what the dreams were opposing, but I think this end scene is what really let her see. It showed that he remembered what she said when they were first dating and he was being standoffish. He may not have made it seem so but now he could show her that everything she wants matters to him.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 39
do a part 2!!! do a part 2!! haha this is one of my favorite stories and i would love to see it continued :) Edward is so sweet. it sucks that Bella is plagued with nightmares right now. loved this chapter :):)
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 39
thanks good outtake
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
more tears!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow that was a tear jerker!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 37
I have truely enjoyed you "Shared Lips." It was a beaitiful storyand lmost a fairy tale. Thank you for writing it.
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
It was so sweet! And i was thinking she was pregnant!! Please write more!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hey I read this story ..LOL . It's really good!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my! That's Sooo sad... was wondering if u had a ffn account?
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 37
cute ending
Date: 29 Jul 2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it, I hope you keep going! Thanks for this update!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 37
Since I didn't think there was going to be more, I'm super excited that this was posted. I would love to read more. I'm a greedy reader, so I take what I can get. I love reading the story of how ExB get to their HEA so it's icing on the cake when I get a look into the after. I'm just going to throw this out there but with another baby on the way have you thought about making a sequel with Edward getting his business off the ground and they go through another pregnancy?
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it and I would love love love more!!!!!!! Edward really has made a turn around
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 37
Awe :) I can't even tell you how pleasantly surprised I was to see this update!!' I love this story and it always gets me emotionally.You are an amazing writer.
Please continue! Xx
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 37
Poor B. Glad edward stayed home so she could get healty again.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 37
i was really happy to see an update and loved that their having another baby but i'm still waiting to find out what happened with the baby scandal?
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 37
You have to continue, I'm so happy their having another baby. Edward has matured so much as a man. Thanks for updating
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 37
Great update. I love how much Edward has changed. I hope that you continue I would love to see how Edward acts during this pregnancy.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 37
I love it!!! I am so happy they are having another baby. I would love to see more of these two. Great chapter...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 37
I loved it and hope that keep going. You have to give the new baby a chance to flourish too! lol! Great chapter hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it. i hope u choose to add on to this.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 37
Please add more
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 37
nice chapter. was happily surprised to see the update. would love to read more from them.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 37
Loved the chapter and hope you write some more.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 37
I love these two. Great chapter as always.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 37
aww i loved it!!! Edward is such a sweetie :) love that their pregnant again! i still re-read parts of this story from time to time. it would be great if you added more... :):)
Kristi
Date: 21 Jul 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG!!!! QUE CAPITULO TAN FUCKING HERMOSOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! THAT WAS ADORABLE, PERFECT, BRILLIANT!!!!! I THINK I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! JAJAJAJJJAJ GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
He told her he loved her!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Dom DOM DOM!!!!!! ..... Imma keep reading
Date: 20 Jul 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Growing a conscience are we? Good. Let's get this show on the road!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Such a deep chapter! It was amazing!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww.... Thats sad, Im really sorry if from now on I dont review or if my reviews are short, but I just want to read the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm sorry I hurt you, today?
What about all the time before that? Great second chapter, I kkep reading
Date: 20 Jul 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was actually surfing Fanfiction when I stubled on the memo that someone was looking for this story, they're simple discription absolutly drew me in and here I am now...
It was a good beginning I cant wait to read the rest,
April
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2011 6:46 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
Absolutely a beautiful story. I was hoping there would be an epilogue or even just a closing chapter that wraps everything up, but I saw that this story is listed as complete so I guess that's it.
I have to admit I'm a little confused on the whole "baby scandal". Kate was behind it?
I'm glad to see Charles was able to finally say his peace and really apologize to Bella like he should. I loved seeing the different POVs too. I think it was important to see how certain characters were feeling and thinking for some of the events in the story.
I hope to see one last chapter posted but if not, this was still a great story with amazing writing.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
I was going to stop at last chapter to go to bed, but of course it had to be a cliffhanger. So I had to keep going through this chapter to make sure she was ok. I am now incredibly tired and emotional and have to try to fall asleep without whipping out my laptop or phone to keep reading. It helps that I know I'll be able to come back to it tomorrow, though. Here's hoping...
Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love the absolute happiness that is the sonagram appointment.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
Aw I love this Edward. He may have started as an ass but he has his moments.
Date: 14 Jun 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love your story. I hope he changes his womanizing ways.
Date: 24 May 2011 2:23 AM Title: Extra (takeout)
Wonderful outtake. I can't wait for more of this story!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 35
OMG I have being looking for this story for EVER!!
Why was it taken down from fanfiction??
Once agian loove loove loove
Date: 20 May 2011 7:32 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
Aw this was really sweet!!
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2011 6:06 AM Title: Charles POV
I have been reading this all day and i must say this chapter was beautifully written as well as others. I wanted to hate charles, even at the end of this but i couldn't... not after reading your authors note. Bravo babes beautifully done! Very emotion fiction and i love it! every chapter i wanted more. I couldn't help but continue to read.This is Absolute perfection!!!!
Date: 15 May 2011 6:16 PM Title: Carlisle's POV
Hurray for Carlisle!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
aww you can see her belly!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
I want to slap him!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was looking for this fic in FF but couldn't find it came ASAP!! Reading it!! That much I love this fic!! Hating Edward right now.
Date: 15 May 2011 1:29 AM Title: Extra (takeout)
I can't help but smile. This is a very sweet moment in time. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 May 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 35
Interesting...did she really think she could come back and he would leave his family??? Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 10:37 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
sweet little extra
Date: 14 May 2011 8:28 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
aww that was cute :) a very pleasant surprise. loved it!!
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 4:50 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
i did a happy dance as i saw you in my inbox. i am dying to know about who set up the fake heir and the rest of the story.
michelle
Date: 14 May 2011 3:11 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
great insite to what he was feeling like!
Date: 14 May 2011 6:08 AM Title: Extra (takeout)
Aw! Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 5:24 AM Title: Extra (takeout)
omg i love it!!!!!!!
Date: 13 May 2011 11:45 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
totally enjoyed that. have you considered an out-take from Charles' POV of when he showed up to Edward's place and then just left without saying anything?
Date: 13 May 2011 11:22 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
I love reading this Edward and Bella. I hope that you write more outtakes.
Date: 13 May 2011 11:14 PM Title: Extra (takeout)
I love this story. I've read it so many times. I had it as a favorite story on ff.net and I'm so happy I found it over here. Amazing chapter as always.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
wow i have loved this story from beginning to end amazing. i would love the other chapter you said you had x
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wow! I'm so glad I read this story. I loved.....everything about it. I hope maybe you would consider a sequel.
And the answer is yes. Yea, I would love to read the other chapter you have. What are you waiting for?
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 5:26 PM Title: Carlisle's POV
I'm really proud of Carlisle. It was such a relief to find that Carlisle did not end up being just like his father, Charles. I hope all ends well for Edward and Bella. He did the right thing, finally, and now he is being punished by his grandfather. Everything in this world comes with a price or a sacrifice. Nothing is ever free.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow! What a day. I'm so glad that Edward finally admitted Isabella and their baby to his family but most importantly, to hisself. I'm happy that he stood by her side and did the right thing and defend his "family" to his grandfather. Asshole! I surely hope his father, Carlisle, will do the right thing, too. I know Esme will, she already has.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
i love you i love this story and i want to see more
Date: 02 Apr 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
You finally updated. Yay! I'm so glad. Great chapter from Kate's POV. I hope you do a few more chapters. I love your writing and your story. Thank You!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 35
cried through it all, but loved it so much i couldn't stop reading. great work. I would like to see the other chapter just for shits and giggles though. keep putting out awsome-ness.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
it was kate that made that girl do that... witch to think she could get him back. thanks for the story i loved it!! as you can see i read it one night!
Author's Response:
Ive loved all your reviews :) Its fun seeing how a reader learns to love the characters! Thanks so much for the devotion and for reading everything in one night!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 34
wow i was waiting for him to ask her to go into business with him and take ed's place or beg her to talk ed out of what he wanted.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:15 AM Title: EPOV with Caleb
oh what a sweet daddy!!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:09 AM Title: The Apology...
ok ed.... i think we are finally there.. a good guy right?!?
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 31
open up and take a huge swallow charles! poor bells...
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:38 AM Title: The Birth
interesting... i am so happy for ed and bell!!!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:19 AM Title: Charles POV
well he has a long way to go though and he is a jerk off!!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
hum guilt finally getting to you, you wreched old man!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:37 AM Title: Tammy's POV
wow his grandfathers dickheadness know no bounds!! and gee edward you sure know how to pick them!!