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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

at this point i wish she would have left him and gone to jake!!! he really is a butt head!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

omg i would have thrown up too but i would have aimed it at her... is he telling the truth?  i am doubting you and my girlie parts are sooo mad at you edward!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

i wonder what is up.... no more fighting.. i doubt it.. i know how terrible it is to loose a baby.. BAD terribel i wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 18

oh crap not good not good you are giving me a heart attack!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 17

ed you disappoint me and bella but she is going to be dumb and take you back....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

ed you are a really sweet guy!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

go carlisle go carlisle you are the man!! oh bella i think you should have told your dad before this!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

oh no i hope she doesn't get fired...ed my opinion is changing by the chapter you are one good man right now don't let me or bella down!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:37 AM Title: Carlisle's POV

well at least carlisle didn't follow his father's example... and was a man about it... haha they still got over on you charles!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 11

wow what a butthole his grandfather is... but what about ed and his money?  hum....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

what a prick his grandfather is!! wow!! yes the girlie parts are now so happy it isn't funny ed finally got his head out of his lower orifice... i am starting to like  you ed!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

oh ed you are making my girlie parts rejoice just a little .....your head is almost out!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

why do i have a bad feeling about this!  i am sure ed's head is still his orifice!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh boy.... what is ed going to do?  by the way this is really good!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 5

okay your head is slowly lowering?  i don't want to get my hopes up too much

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

ed you have to reach deeper to get your head out of that orifice i was talking about apparently it is deeper in than i thought i must reach all the way to your small intestine!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

come on ed extract that head from your lower orifice!  you are such a fool!  bella i am glad you are strong!  even though i know you are going to be crying your eyes out in the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

what a cad!  ed get your head out of your butt!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

not good have a feeling not goint to like this ed!!

Reviewer: bugsmama07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 35

i had to hunt this story down since it was removed from ff. i have to say that this one of my favorite stories, ever.

i never thought kate would come back, especially after so long. this story is just amazing and you are a fabulous author. i love this edward. he made such a drastic change, for the better, and it's heart warming to see him and bella get their HEA. thank you for sharing this story with us :)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 35

oh well hopefully kate can find some happiness. i really enjoyed story. would have loved to see a glimpse into E&B and Caleb's future

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 1:23 PM Title: The Apology...

well it took awhile but the cullen men are quite a group.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 25

aahhh, he softing up...maybe?

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 1:27 AM Title: Tammy's POV

oh feel almost sorry for tam. she is a lil bit 'simple'..wasn't her fault charles played her

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 20

oh, havent reviewed past few chapters because i had to see what was happening next. but i adore charlisle now. so happy bella and b.c. are ok

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

ok, so slowly team edward is not looking as bad. but the rest of the cullens????

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

is carlisle an a** in this story?? Please let his mother get him to get his act together. I am enjoying this story so far...

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

still not team edward.... I hope he plans on doing better by the mother of his future child

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

so far, not team edward

Reviewer: terriberry Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

*whimper* what a jerk!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 35

This was very interesting!

Reviewer: Jackie84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 35

I was very very excited to see an update for this story! I have missed this story so much.I read it originally on ff until you pulled it, and then I found it on here.

    Please keep writing, this is such a beautiful story. The way you write their inner monologues really makes you feel what they are feeling. I've never read a story that has evoked such strong emotions in me while reading it.You are an amazing writer and i'm so grateful to you for sharing this with us :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 35

That was a great story... I hope gets her happily ever after.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 10:58 PM Title: The Apology...

I am so glad that it wasn't Charles that put Teresa up to it....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

Yeah they are getting married.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:12 AM Title: Tammy's POV

I sort of feel bad for her now. Charles is Satan himself. But at least she was smart and got it in the end.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 23

I think he handled the whole Jennifer situation very well...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 20

I love Bella's attitude.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bed rest is soooo much fun, NOT. I can just imagine how Edward will hover and how pissed off Bella will get..

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 18

God I hope they are okay...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

God I hope he can fix this.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 16

AWWWWW! That was the sweetest thing ever.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

The media is going to go mad. At least they have someone that can take care of all their PR....lol

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Reviewer: xodani Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

I love your story and would love to read another chapter!!!! I actually never guessed it would be Kate that would cause trouble, I liked the little twist. Whether or not you decide to post the other chapter this story was amaizing and I loved reading it!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:42 PM Title: Carlisle's POV

I liked hearing from Carlisle it was nice to know that he has options.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:36 PM Title: EPOV with Caleb

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:28 PM Title: The Apology...

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Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm glad that Edward took it so well. It could of caused so many problems for them.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

It is sort of sweet how he is throwing himself into this 100%. I hope it lasts.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh thank God. Charles was a ass, but at least Esme and Charlisle are decent people. I'm glad that Esme smacked Edward he deserved it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow talk about hot and cold.....

I am really enjoying this story. I am so glad that I found it on this late snow day...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am really starting to like Edward and I' glad that Esme is her loving self...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh I wonder how Esme is.. Is she kind like the book Esme or is she cold like Carlisle seems to be...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

Is it wrong that I am happy that Edward is in pain? I mean it breaks my heart to see him so torn, but I think he needs this to get his life straight.... I think it will make him a better father.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

God that was heartbreaking....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

I hope that Edward fights for her and the baby. Now that it is real for him I hope that he realizes how wonderful this is....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Damn those pregnancy hormones...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am so proud of Bella.

Reviewer: ces424 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 35

Thank you for the update. This is one of my favorite stories ever and I'd love to read more.

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 35

i enjoyed reading this story

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 9:22 PM Title: The Birth

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Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 35

I was alittle confused by this story The two women Tammy and  the other one with the baby that said Edward was the father but he said he never actually had sex with them (was it like that with all the girls he was with, I know that Tammy said he had a fetish and never slept with her,So I was just wondering if he never slept with all those girls and just did oral which is still bad but shouldnt he have told Bella that) and this chapter Kate made a comment about being taken without mercy but he told Bella that he never touched kate and they never did anything.

Reviewer: Julz04 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

I didn't expect this to have EPOV.  And the bastard didn't deserve her say she kept it because it's part of him ;-)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: Julz04 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Edward is so cold. 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 8:16 PM Title: Charles POV

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Reviewer: kaybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 35

no epi?

Reviewer: charming vamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 35

Thank you so much for updating.  Loved the chapter and I am happy to know who was causing all of the problems.  I hope that you are able to update again soon. 

Reviewer: Annjann Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thats what he gets for being a selfish prick!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:07 PM Title: Tammy's POV

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: MrsCullen52 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 35

I have missed you!  Thanks for finishing this story.  Would love to see another chapter!  Thanks so much.  Do you plan to continue A Little Bit of Resolve?

Reviewer: Buddha1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 35

I absolutly love this story would love to read more!

Reviewer: grabadietcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 35

So, was Kate behind everything (at least everything that Charles didn't instigate)?

I would love to read another chapter. I'd mostly like to know what happened with the business and did she join him in that? Kind of something to wave good bye to them all I guess.

Reviewer: grabadietcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 34

I found your story yesterday when you updated and have been tearing through it. I just wanted to leave you a review and tell you that there are some really specific things that I love about it - 1. I like that you didn't go with the "usual suspects". I don't miss Alice shopping or Rosalie humping Emmett in the background. I like that they made little cameos as supporting characters to Bella (she had to have friends somewhere in the background), likewise with Jasper. Nicely, sparingly used. In that same vein, the way your villains have their own identities and personalities. It wasn't clear if Carlisle was going to be on the Charles train or not, but by ommitting, say James, it didn't matter because we had to wait and see where you were going.

2. Bella. This Bella is lovesick, but I like her backbone. The way she stood up to Edward and spoke up but didn't punish him endlessly. She was an adult who knew what she was getting into and was willing to take the consequences. She didn't readily forgive him, she stood up for herself and I also just love that when Edward recognizes her traits, he doesn't spend hours on her endless beauty and sexiness - but spends equal time on her talents, intelligence and heart. I especially love how he recognizes her talents in the business world. I think all of those things are 1000 times sexier than any lemon quite frankly.

3. I have loved Esme in this - again, not overbearing or a characature, but supportive and strong.

4. Jacob - maybe this is really a summary of points 1 and 2 - but she wasn't shattered and turned off from men forever, he wasn't a villain or abusive or anything but an ex boyfriend that was willing to inquire and see if she needed help. He made a grand jesture but she wasn't torn or otherwise troubled about it. It was a nice way to get Edward to see her point clearly and wasn't over used.

I'm sad to see this one come to an end. I know I have the one short chapter to read that sorts out the final mystery. Thanks for the great read!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 03 Mar 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 35

Well you can not blame her if she loved him. She at least left without a scene. I think it was too late when the baby was there. That part was way off.

 

Okay it is time for these woment to thin out.

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:46 PM Title: The Apology...

The sweet joy of babies and the funny "instant milk station". I have a friend that says when her baby was nursing she went to the grocery store alone. Hubby was sitting and she was having some "alone time".  Well another mother's baby started to cry and she heard it and her breasts started leaking. She was not happy!  If only your breasts responded to your own baby, ONLY.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:41 PM Title: Carlisle's POV

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 31

ahh here it goes.........THE GOAT EATS CROW.......PRICELESS!

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

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