[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good one!
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder why Bella thinks she knows better than any one else. Why is it her way or no way?
Author's Response:
Because it's Bella. She's the leader of the band.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awww, that was a sweet flashback!
Great chapter! Fast and hard, baby! ;)
Texas, huh? It's like a whole other country. LOL! :) What happend with Garrett??????
And um, with Jacob going with don't you think Billy and the rest of Forks would be suspecting him and probably be trying to find him?? Oh boy...
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Oh, I am from Texas!! I know it very well!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow...mea culpa Jacob. Sorry to have misjudged you. I kinda believe him as well! Maybe Tyler is the murderer? Sam would be a logical choice but somehow don't think so. It's always the quiet ones!
As for the pics, I'm thinking Jacob only had them in his room so he could study them like a crime pattern.
Good fake out! I actually have to wake up in 4 hours to take my family to Disneyland and should have gone to sleep hours ago but when I saw the update, I knew I had to read!
Great job!
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Thank you, my dear! Hope you all had fun at Disneyland ;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
WOWWW!!!
LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUVED it!!!!
Totally took me by surprise, LOL! Jacob gay, too! Woot woot!
Okay, so the real killer and stalker is maybe BOTH new suspect instead of just one?!? ha ha
Author's Response:
lol, I love twists like this!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
INTERESTING... good 1
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[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Whoa!!!!!! Nooooo waaaaaay!!!!
*gotta breathe, hold on!*
WTF???? How in the hell did he know where they were?!? URGH!!! I hope Elvis is armed! LOL
Loved the wedding, that was cool! Damn, you're good at cliffies!! Of course it's a 10!!
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lol, Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
WTH?? I'm hoping the next chapter explains Jacobs appearance & his obsession with Bella. How did he even know they were in Vegas? Did he have a tracking device?
Didn't see that coming!
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Thank you:) Twists and turns, I tell you, twist and turns.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
I knew there was going to be some big show by Jacob
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
Too bad the girls don't like it but I get why Bella wants to get married right away. Changes the outcome of her dream.
Good chapter...hope they find the murderer/stalker soon...for everyones peace of mind.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Woo hoo!! Hey, baby, let's go to Vegas!! LOL
Poor Bella and those nightmares!! Geez!
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[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
Yay!! Awesomeness!
Great distraction, lol!
And yeah, Bella's last thought came to my mind immediately!
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Date: 17 Jul 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hmmm....I thought they were already engaged? No matter, just love the way they all take care of each other!
Author's Response:
Nope, just living in sin ;)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella is rather selfish. Her family love and want to protect her. They lost Charlie also. Edward was filmed also. This didn't just affect her. She can't just push them away and expect it not to hurt them. She needs to respect their feelings as well. They are hurting too.
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[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Just keeps getting better!! Loved the lemon at the end, so beautifully written.
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[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Excellent!
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
Really good. Everything points to Jacob but I guess we will see!
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Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Someone better stay with Bella 24/7. She better get use to having no privacy until Jacob is caught.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Woo hoo, I sense alot of action coming!!
It was almost too easy figuring out that it was Jacob, though. Maybe it still isn't! This is all an elaborate hoax into thinking that it's Jacob??
Seriously, the last three chapters were great. I love your work!
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Of course the police can't find the killer since he is right in the office.
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks bb -
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:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Jacob is getting creepier
Author's Response:
Thank you but how can you be sure it's Jacob?
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the other pov's.
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Of course Jacob is watching. How do they think he got all of those pictures of her at intimate moments. He knows exactly what is going on. He knew she would come back to Forks if her Dad died.
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Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
I know I could be wrong but I truly believe that Jacob is"the Wolf"...I'm thinking he's read the Quillete legends and believes the "cold ones" etc.
Looking forward to more! Very exciting!
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[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
HOT! ;)
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[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hot!
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[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ohhhh, poor Bella. It's not her fault. Even if she did have the phone charged up it still would've been in the dressing room!
Hey, the "wolf"'s hair was with the note?! Maybe they can get DNA off it!!
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The hair in the note wasn't from the wolf, it was Bella's. That is why Charlie assumed he had her :) Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Still think it's Jacob. Especially because of his actions at the police station. Then again, maybe you're just playing with us and we will be blind sided! Good job.
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Thank you :D
Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm confused. Why would telling the police and the press knowing ruin their careers? If anything, the publicity would boost them...
Author's Response:
Because the press would never leave them alone. Right now, they have no clue who is after her. Plus the police hadn't found anything in six months. I promise it will make sense:)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
And the suspense builds....
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[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sweet lemons, and so hot!! ;)
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Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's Jacob, isn't it! Creepy!
Author's Response:
What makes you think it is Jacob????
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Holy shit!! What a cliffie!!!
Charlie's funeral service was nice. Thank you for so many details about it. :)
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Thank you:)
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Still great. I know there needs to be more to really get into the story line but the premise is unique and because of the frequent updates, I'm sure it will pick up speed.
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[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yay, Ben! LOL ;)
Love the lemon! Fast and hard, LOL!
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[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yay, reunited! :) Too bad it's under such bad circumstances, though. Neat that Charlie appeared in Edward's dream too. Sounds like Ben will help Bella too!
Great chapter! :D
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Didnt get alerts for som reason but glad I checked. Hmmm....the wolf is out to get the swan....sounds like Jacob or Billy may be making an appearance..so far, so good!
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[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, poor Bella!!!
That was such a sad but beautiful goodbye (Charlie and her in the meadow)...
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Date: 03 Jul 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMG at least Bella was able to say goodbye in a way and get a clue.
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Charlie why would anyone want to hurt him???
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Date: 01 Jul 2010 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting looking forward to reading it.
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Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Geez you are prolific!!! I'm intrigued and since you know I love completed, frequently updated stories, I'm in!!
Thanks for posting this....can't wait to meet the other characters and who hurt Charlie.
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lol, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cool start, I look forward to reading more!!
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Thank you:)