Date: 12 May 2010 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 28
Another good chapter!! Can't wait for the next one. :)
Date: 12 May 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh God he is just as bad as JAke. Why doesn't he ask Bella and the Cullens to leave before her change.
Date: 12 May 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
I like your story.You have a way to explain everything with very few words. it's amazing.
Date: 12 May 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 28
Another great chapter, well done
Date: 12 May 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
I hope that Quil can work things out with Bella regardless of what choice she makes. I'm glad Claire took things well. Atleast something in Quil's life is ok. Great chapter like always. Can't wait for more.
Elli :)
Date: 12 May 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 28
I hope Quil can come to his senses regarding his Mom. How sad if it would come to a war or something. Also not sure what Bella is thinking with becoming a Vampire. She has a daughter to raise. Although nothing has really been explained to her yet about newborns and stuff. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 09 May 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
well leave it to edward to be a total duche bag !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I hope Edward will redeem himself.
Date: 09 May 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 27
great chapters. john should get his ass kicked.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 09 May 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 27
I can't believe Rebecca would be so disrespectful to her mother. John shouldn't have passed his hatred for the vampires onto Rebecca. I know her and Quil have gone through a lot, but the way they treat their mom is just wrong. Bella should make John stay away from Rebecca for a while. Maybe she can learn some manners and John can learn to keep his mouth shut. Maybe seeing how it hurts to stay away from someone you love will make him understand that what he did was wrong. I can't wait to see what happens next. This was a great chapter like always.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. Rebecca is just mourning right now. She'll get over her vamp hate.
Date: 04 May 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
stupid angry boy! I feel sorry for him.
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks, I appreciate the comment.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh Quil, always so quick to start a fight
Author's Response:
I know, what a stubborn little bugger. LOL
Date: 04 May 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
I can't make up my mind about Quil. At times I want to kick his ass for how he speaks to his mother, but other times I understand his concerns about her relationship with Edward. For some reason I had forgotten about Rebecca. Isn't she only ten? This definitely affects her if Bella chooses to be with Edward forever. Although it's not like she is a typical ten year old when she has a brother and a soul mate who are wolves. I'm so interested to see how all this will play out.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Yes Rebecca is only 10 and that will effect things for Bella, for sure.
Thanks so much for your review.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
This story is great!!!! The concept behind the plot is amazing. I can't wait to read more. Thanks so much for sharing this one. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I am thrilled when people are happy with my plot. It's been so much fun to write so far.
Date: 01 May 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
Squeeee!!! They're dating!!!
Loved how she stood up to Rose - I guess being 35 as opposed to 17 helps you to stand your ground a little more.
Also loved how you took me back to the first time I read Twilight with your description of his lightly colored clothing (something the movie was extremely lacking in - liked the pea coat, but that was about it). And then how you described his vampire speed...I daresay you did a better job with that than SM. I could actually picture it and imagine how strange/uncomfortable that would be at first.
Awesome chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. That was one thing that I found lacking in the movie as well. The only time I thought Edward was dressed like he was in the book was in Alice's vision in New Moon. And dare I say, I though that is where he looked the best!
Date: 01 May 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 May 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. I absolutely loved it. I love that Edward and Bella are finally starting a relationship vs a friendship. I love Bella's sense of humor. Asking the vampires if they had eaten was extremely funny. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to read more. I'm looking forward to QPOV to see how things are going with Claire.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm always happy when people are interested in Quil as well.
Date: 01 May 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved the chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 01 May 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 25
I liked it!! Keep writing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm glad things are starting to look up for Quil. Christopher took the news of the imprinting better than I thought. I guess he truly is a good friend. I really hope that Quil will be able to work things out with Bella. Great chapter like always. Hope to read more soon.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
I think more that Christopher knew he couldn't win so he bowed out with dignity. I don't think it was out of friendship.
Thanks for your review.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
I really liked this chapter! You are making me miss Jake. But then again as soon as Edward comes back into the picture - I'm over it. :) Loved last chapter too! Work has been HELL for the last two weeks so after I read in a hurry thinking I'd come back to comment...it didn't happen. Go figure.
I KNEW you had to be purposely leaving the fact that Claire's boyfriend (can't remember his name) hadn't imprinted on her out for a reason!
Hopefully Quil can find a civil way to work things out with Bella or vise versa. I just can't tell you how much I love Edward meeting (and courting??) a 35 yr old Bella.
You're on twitter? I guess I might as well stalk you there too. LOL!! I just set up an acct earlier this week - twitter scares me! Which is why I'm just now joining the 21st century. FYI - I'm @rubyrandom (which is also my ff.n name - are you there too?) I can get to ff.n from work - not so much with this site.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you were sad about Jake even if it was for a little bit, it means I am doing my job.
I just added you on Twitter as well. I am on FF (Readingmama) as well but I've pretty much moved all my stories over here, except my first two and an interactive drabble one.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love the progress that Bella and Edward have made in their relationship. I think Edward is absolutely wonderful for just being there for her. I'm curious to see if Charlie is going to find out the truth because it's definitely not normal for the mom to move out and leave her fifteen year old alone. Her explanation is only going to work for so long and then what? Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm excited to read about the imprinting on Claire.
Good luck to Tanya.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much.
I think Charlie likes to avoid conflict so he won't do much digging about it.
And yes, Edward is wonderful, isn't he. : )
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:17 PM Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
ohh!!! I think we are so used to the name of Claire be imprinted upon from the book (and it was even someone else not Christopher) that I just made the assumption. thanks for the clarification.
Author's Response:
No worries. And yes I thought it would be nice that even though the original Quil isn't alive anymore that this Quil could imprint on her.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
uh oh - double imprintee!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I have had a bit of confusion already about this. Christopher was dating Claire, he did NOT imprint on her. The only imprinting that happened before this was John and Rebecca.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Quil. It seems like eveything in his life is difficult. Poor kid can't seem to catch a break. He did just imprint on the girl his friend is dating, right? I'm glad he told his sister the truth. She deserved to know even at such a young age.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. Yes he imrpinted on his friend's girlfriend. Lots of people over on FF thought that Christopher had already imprinted on her but he hadn't.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it! Glad to hear her reasoning. Quil definitely has gone off the deep end. Love Edward - he is kind of acting like a 17 year old with a crush...not quite understanding what she's going through.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I try to keep all the characters in their proper age ranges with personalities, glad to see it coming through.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
I really enjoyed this chapter. It's sad that Bella fears her own son, but after everything that happened, how can she not be afraid? That being said it's kind of ironic that the person who is comforting her is a vampire. I can't wait to see what happens when Bella meets the rest of the Cullen's. I'm also very curious to see what Quil has told everyone about Bella.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review, here is a tiny teaser for the next chapter
QPOV
“Is Claire coming today?” I asked. I was hoping that I would finally get a chance to meet her.
“Yes, but she may be late, she had a couple errands she had to run in town today,” Christopher replied.
“Oh,” I said. It seemed odd that on this grief-filled day anyone would have other things to do. I supposed not everyone’s worlds had stopped but it was so major to me that I almost expected it to.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
i love it...cant wait to see whats on bellas head..so sad about jake
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am glad people aren't all like "whoo hoo Jake's dead" cause I don't think he's a bad guy.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad you are back. Hope you had a great vacation. Thanks for updating so quickly after just getting home. You are definitely the best. This chapter was so intense. I feel so bad for Quil even after what happened with Jake. So many changes have occured in his life in such a short time and he is still so young. I imagine it has to be extremely hard for him no matter how much he puts up a brave front. I can't wait to find out what is going on with Bella. I'm really interested in seeing what led her to make that choice. Definitely looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, glad you liked it. There is lots going on with Quil, I feel like I am beating on him a bit but thems the breaks. LOL
Date: 29 Mar 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
omg i cannot believe that happened to him! cant wait to read the next chapter !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow - just when I was starting to like and feel a little pity for Jake again...
Once again, I was NOT expecting that! Is it terrible to say that at least now he's out of the way? Because that was my second thought (after OMG!) when I finished reading. I'm sorry but I'm with Canon Bella - "It's always been Edward". I (sometimes) like Jake but every time it comes down to a choice or a triangle...it's going to be Edward.
I will say that I am slightly sad b/c this will be hard on Bella and family. I wonder how Edward will play into it all now. B/c I know Quil isn't going to want him anywhere near Bella. And knowing Bella - she'll find a way to make this her fault.
Can't wait for the next update!
Hope you enjoy Hawaii!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. And yes, I agree, I have nothing against canon Jake, but it's always been Edward for me too. LOL.
You may be surprised on how they react, but maybe not! I will post a teaser on FFA if you are interested.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow - just when I was starting to like and feel a little pity for Jake again...
Once again, I was NOT expecting that! Is it terrible to say that at least now he's out of the way? Because that was my second thought (after OMG!) when I finished reading. I'm sorry but I'm with Canon Bella - "It's always been Edward". I (sometimes) like Jake but every time it comes down to a choice or a triangle...it's going to be Edward.
I will say that I am slightly sad b/c this will be hard on Bella and family. I wonder how Edward will play into it all now. B/c I know Quil isn't going to want him anywhere near Bella. And knowing Bella - she'll find a way to make this her fault.
Can't wait for the next update!
Hope you enjoy Hawaii!
Author's Response:
I'm team Edward too. Sorry I missed this review somehow.
And yes it's sad but It's always been Edward for me too. : )
Date: 29 Mar 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Holy shit. I did not see this coming. Your wolves are a lot more interesting than the ones in Twilight. I always remember the vampires saying how young wolves were dangerous but nothing ever really happened. Well except Sam attacking Emily, but we didn't see that. This was definitely a great chapter. I will try to wait patiently for the next update.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, that seems to be the same reaction I am getting over on FF too. Yes I thought it was strange that the wolves were so "dangerous" but nothing really happened besides Emily.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh crap!
Author's Response:
Yup. Thanks for the reviews.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ok- I didn't realize he's only 14. See? Not creepy now. :)
Oh goodness - is someone going to find that lingerie and get suspicious? Now I'm nervous!
Author's Response:
Ha ha, I should have had Quil find the lingerie...that would have been hillarious.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ok first - *pouts* stay away from Edward?? Noooo!!! Hopefully that won't last.
And second - EWWWWWWWW!!!! I mean 10 is much less scandalous than 2 but still... ewwwwwwww!!!! *shudders*
LOL - I kid. I kid. ;) I have full faith that you'll make this not creepy. :)
Author's Response:
Ha ha. Yes it's only four years and so it's not THAT icky.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow - you just keep throwing those curve balls! I definitely didn't see that coming. I was waiting for him to take off after Edward and wage war without getting the details.
Although that appears to still be possible.
Poor warewolves...always so angry. :(
Author's Response:
Nope no war. They are way too out numbered still.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
Jake's losing me again...Going back to Team Edward now.
Bashful Edward...*sighs*
Good thing I don't have anything better (i.e.-more pressing) to do today! I'm reading the next 5 chapters if I don't do anything else. Then I'm going to check out the FB page. Sounds fun!
Author's Response:
Ha ha, sounds good to me. Make sure you say that I sent you over there (My name's Tiffany) That way I can say hi.
Yes, people seem to go back and forth with Jake. Poor Jake, but I'm team Edward too. LOL.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh Sweet Jesus...
Claire???
*goes to look at copy of NM (or was it Eclipse?) to check Quil/imprinting facts* - perhaps I should just google it... :)
Author's Response:
Well it was the original Quil that imprinted with Claire. She was 2 when it happened so she is the appropriate amount older here.
As for anyone imprinting on her in this fic...you will have to wait and see!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
I KNEW Edward would be off brooding about attacking Bella! I KNEW IT!!!
Uh - oh that last bit doesn't sound too good...
I think E/B meeting like that was much more interesting than just seeing each other at school or at a store... Poor Edward though - I guess there is only so much a '15 year old' can do/get for a part time job. LOL at the image of him mopping the floors (or whatever the job consisted of) though!!
P.S. - Thanks for replying to my comments and questions! I love reading and commenting for your stories b/c I know I'll probably hear from you. I think it makes reading so much more fun - having a link to the author! I know how time consuming it must be - so I really appreciate it!!! :)
Author's Response:
I love responding to reviews. Getting to connect with my readers is such fun!
And of course Edward is brooding...it's Edward. LOL.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well that was unexpected. Why would Edward want that job in the first place? It seemed like he didn't know about Bella's family - which was the reason I was thinking he wanted it.
Jake is growing on me...a little. ;)
And as for that last sentence....I highly doubt it.
Author's Response:
Edward was just looking for something to do other than school. A break from the mundane of his life. Probably wanted to get away from the couples of his household a bit....oh and of course I needed some way for them to meet. LOL.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow. I can't imagine being the unsuspecting mother. Poor Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I hope you are enjoying.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sorry for your loss. I hope you can still have a nice vacation.
I'm glad Jake is trying to do something nice for Bella, but I have to wonder if the damage to their relationship is already done. I really want to know what happens now that Quil knows she is still having contact with Edward. I imagine that is a conversation Bella never wanted to have. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Well things will be heating up in the next chapter. I don't believe Jake and Bella's relationship at this point is doomed, but there will be something that happens to make it so. Just can't tell you what.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no!
Author's Response:
Oh no is right! LOL
Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
It's good that Jacob is trying to do something nice for Bella. I wonder how Bella is going to handle Quil's accusation. Also sorry to hear about your loss, hopefully you can still have a wonderful vacation.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Yes, it is nice to finally see Jacob do something nice for Bella.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Happy New Moon weekend! I'm actually reading and reviewing this while I watch the movie. I'm glad Bella and Edward saw each other. It must be hard for Edward to stay away. I think it's cute how John told Bella about imprinting on her daughter. What's the deal with Jake? Is he still being distant? I wish I knew what he was thinking. Amazing chapter like always. Looking forward to reading more soon.
Author's Response:
Jake is being a bit more present. Bella's accident was a bit of a wake up call for him.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
good chapter. glad they saw each other again.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh goodness. So it begins...
Jake - ugh. *rolls eyes* Why is he so distant and uncaring to Bella? She deserves better - like perhaps one of those beautiful Cullens. ;)
And I'm not ignoring the QPOV chs - I just don't want to be super annoying by commenting on every chapter. :)
-Jen
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your reviews. And don't worry you could never be annoying by leaving them. I appreciate hearing what my readers have to say as they go along.
As for the toothbrush, I agree....it's just wrong!
As for Jake and Bella, he loves her, he really does but he has become complacent as most do after 15 plus years together.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ewww!!! Having someone else use your toothbrush is so gross!! My husband did that to me once...he learned. LOL.
And yes - 10 is the new 16, actually though I'd even venture to say 6 is the new 16. It's crazy!
Glad to see Rose is the same.
Poor Bella - now I do feel bad for her. Didn't realize small town Forks would be so cliquey.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:56 PM Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
Well this is definitely interesting! So Edward will meet Bella as the mother of one of his classmates?? That is most definitely a different twist. Usually I'm not the biggest fan of Bella/Jacob - but this is interesting since you can already see that their relationship is lacking. Plus the fact that I'm a fan of your writing - so I'd probably read it regardless of who she ends up with. I am wondering about why Bella didn't go to college. It just seems like something she thinks about with the way she mentioned her high school friends. I was thinking surprise/young pregnancy but if my math is right she was 20- so she never went? I don't know why I am so concerned with it... just weird I guess. Don't mind me. Great start! Going to read more...
- Jen
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella. I imagine it has to be hard for her to have a son who is a wolf and to have this weird friendship developing with a vampire. Talk about a complicated life. So the first of the pack imprinted on a ten year old? I can't wait for the rest of the pack to imprint. Amazing writing like always.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I can't say at this point if any more of the pack will imprint. ; )
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow that was suprising that Edward could resist so quickly. Another great chapter. We get a little hint of a little "somethig something" brewing in Bella at the end too. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Well Edward is much better at resisting when she is in danger that isn't him. : )
Thanks so much for your review.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love that Edward was waiting to take her to the hospital. I'm guessing Bella will have a lot to think about with everything that Carlisle said about how Edward feels. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm guessing up next is QPOV?
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Yes, Carlisle has let the cat out of the bad, so to speak.
Thank you for your review.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
really enjoying the story. like the developing friendship between bella and edward. hope at least one of their families will be accepting of it.
Author's Response:
True. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Bella being attacked by her own son. This is definitely an interesting turn of events. Why is Jake never there?I'm really starting to get curious as to what is happening with him. I wonder how Edward is going to react to Bella being attacked. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Jake is trying to feel important by dealing in wolf things. Don't worry, this will be a bit of a wake up call for him.
Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
Where the hell is Jake?? I feel bad for both Quil and Bella. I'm a little lost as to why Quil didn't just "run" after her to the hospital to make sure she was okay but I guess you can chalk it up to him being a teenager and not really thinking. I wonder if Dr. Cullen is going to stitch her up.
Author's Response:
Yes, but once he got into town, he would be a naked boy trying to get to the hospital. LOL.
Thanks for the review.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love the interaction between Bella and Edward. I'm so excited to see this relationship develop because it is so different from anything I have ever read. I like how you mention Sam and Leah being happy considering how unhappy Leah was in Twilight. Thanks for the update. Hope to read more soon.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I like that I can make Leah happy in this one too.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
I loved the interaction between B&E.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much
Date: 06 Mar 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hmm.. sounds like Quil may imprint. Short chapter but they can't all be long.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I know that one was short, but it couldn't be helped.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
That's a start. I liked it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Things will be progressing much more now. : )
Date: 06 Mar 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
great story so far i cant wait to read on !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
I really do enjoy reading the QPOV. Now I'm wondering if he's going to imprint on Claire. I like a man that can admit to watching a soap. I love The Young and the Restless but I have to say that General Hospital is my favorite. Thanks for the updates. Can't wait to read more. I love everything you have written so far.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I know the wolves aren't always everyones favorite so I am glad that I can make them interesting.
I really appreciate your reviews.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love the Edward and Bella interaction. I'm very interested to see what type of relationship develops between them. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more about them.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much...there will be lots more interaction now.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
very cool
BxE first meet was entertaining. Great writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you. That was my fav E/B meeting I've written. I like me an aggresive vamp!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
Such an interesting and unique story! Keep up writing, I want more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading, I am glad you are enjoying.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
I guess Bella and Leah are friends? I never liked her much in Twilight but I guess she would be different here since she's not the girl wolf. I'm liking Quil. It's just so different hearing the wolf part through him because it's always through Jacob. I kind of like that Jake isn't a wolf in this story. BTW thanks for the quick update. I'm looking forward to reading more soon.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, and yes, Leah and Bella are friends. Leah wouldn't have turned all bitter if Sam had never left her, so it's nice to see that side fo her. I think.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
It's hard for me to get use to the "new wolves". You made a reference to Leah and I was like Oh yeah duh, she's not a wolf in this story. I can't wait to see how this progresses. It is very original.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Yeah, this is how I see things happening if the Cullen's weren't in Forks when Bella moved. Sam would never have imprinted on Emily so he and Leah would be happily married. I hope you will enjoy the new wolves though, I am quite attached to one, I named him after my husband. LOL
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow. That was some meeting.
Author's Response:
Yes, well without the classroom full of students, Edward is a little less inhibated. LOL.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love how Edward and Bella met. I'm anxious to see what happens next. Are you ever going to do an EPOV? BTW I spent all day reading your story Sinful Thoughts over in FF and I loved it. I know the stories are completely different but if the writing is anything to go by I know this story is going to be amazing. You really are a great writer. (sorry I didn't review in FF I don't have an account there and I honestly didn't even check to see if you allowed anonymous reviews. I got caught up reading and couldn't stop until I finished. I even ignored my poor husband and my son.) I don't know how often you update but I'm hoping it's sooner rather than later because I honestly can't wait to see what's going to happen. The story is great so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I am glad you are enjoying this one as well as Sinful Thoughts. I doubt I will do an EPOV but if I do, it's likely to be an outtake.
I update at least once a week, sometimes more when the creative juices flow. : )
Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm really enjoying this story. It is so different from anything I have ever read. I'm hoping Edward and Bella will be meeting soon. Looking forward
to reading more.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Edward and Bella will meet in Chapter 9. : )
Thanks for reading.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm enjoying your story. Hopefully we will get some B&E interaction soon.
Author's Response:
Bella will meet Edward in the next chapter. : )
Thanks for reading.