Date: 01 May 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details
WOW.. that was good. Poor Edward.. I know he is worried, but the only thing that is going to lose his friendships is to continue lying. They will find out someday.. and they will be hurt. Yes, they may not understand his need to be dominated, and they may push him away for a bit.. but like he said.. if they are his friends they would understand eventually. NOW.. I am not so sure.
not sure what to say about Rose. I am not liking her so much right now.
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Yay!!! Thanks, Hunny!! I know I feel for him in that aspect and I beg him to tell the truth, but I think he's protecting Bella. He wants to be more with her and he doesn't want people to make snap judgments about her before they get a chance to know her. He's stalling. Hopefully, he talks with Bella...soon.
Rose thinks she holds all the cards, but it's an illusion.
Thanks for the lovely review *mwah*
xoxo
~K
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:33 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen- The Hale Inquisition
Bella can thaw her heart and still do BDSM. They might only do it on the weekends and 1 evening a week. She can still treat him better, but still have rules. Rosalie was just rude. They should have just had a nice lunch. She should have never come. It should have been Jasper and Emmett. He has to learn how to be around them again. Bella should take of Edward and not leave marks. She should have better after care.
Author's Response:
Hey, hon! Thanks for the review. Rosalie was very rude, but she has this idea of who Edward is and doesn't agree with his life. It's none of her business, but I don't think she really cares. Emmett shouldn't have brought her, but he's whipped and didn't really see it as a problem. As for Bella and Edward's relationship, I agree that their is always a middle ground, but at the moment, they haven't reached it. Bella is the most misunderstood character in this story and without knowing what she is really thinking, she often comes off as cold and heartless. Also, I think after the little confortation with Rose, that Edward will most likely beware of things and fuzzy handcuffs will come into play.
Much Love ;)
K
Date: 10 Apr 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen- The Hale Inquisition
I don't like Edward's friends pushing him around. Only Bella can tell him what to do. ;)
Author's Response:
Thats right!!! LMAO!
Thanks for the review, babe!!
xoxoxo
K
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen- The Hale Inquisition
thanks as always awsome chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon!
*mwah*
K
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen- The Hale Inquisition
well im intrested in his response
Author's Response:
"I did it! I shot the sheriff!" Wait, wrong story ;)
Um, I think deflect is a keyword in Edward's vocab. LOL
Thanks for the review :))
xoxoxo
K
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:29 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen - The Plane of Ecliptic
Bella needs to face her own insecurities and stop hiding behind being a Dom. She tries to not have feelings for Edward that is why she wants him to go. She wants to beat and break him. It sounds like Bella is turning into a cruel Dom out of her own fears. I hope Edward can crack Bella's walls before she beats him to death. She
Date: 17 Mar 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen - The Plane of Ecliptic
loved it
Date: 16 Mar 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen - The Plane of Ecliptic
I absolutely love your story! Your Edward is entirely unique and i love the anticipation of what may happen next. Can't wait for your next update!
Date: 16 Mar 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen - The Plane of Ecliptic
Oh jeez. My heart was breaking for Edward as she turned so cold on him. He is so addicted to her that it boarders on unhealthy...but I fucking love it!
Date: 16 Mar 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen - The Plane of Ecliptic
i think he will crack first!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
see what happens when you are a good boy and do what you are told? wow that was awesome!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
i don't think he is in for a punishment but a reward. she is finally gonna really play with him and he may justget a chance to come!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
a little more insight into bella and a heart to heart with doctor daddy.eddie is really learning things about himself left right and center. wonder what's gonna go down in the purple room...?
Date: 06 Feb 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
so close but so far away. eddie has got to learn to control himself! he will learn it really is for the best.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 9:37 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
i wonder wht james was doing at the school? will bella tell eddie? and poor eddie has met jake and does not seem too thrilled with his waxer this evening. i wonder what the problem is....? heehee!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:48 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
well eddie you wanted her and now you have to play by the rules! even if you don't like them. besides i am sure you will be so sexy in nothing but the apron! heehee
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
awww poor eddie! he is gonna have a rough go at things if he doesn't start paying attention to the rules. but at least for now the message has been received loud and clear - breaking the rules will get you punished and being punished hurts and it sucks!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
well he almost caved in to his body's immediate desires but held off, waiting for the true prize that is to come.
Date: 01 Feb 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
I've spent the last few days totally engrossed in this story. I've loved seeing how much Edward has changed by the one encounter with Bella in the coffee shop. Man, Kate really screwed with his head and his heart.
I think Bella was truly attracted to Edward but was afraid to pursue a vanilla relationship after the disaster that was obviously her relationship with James. At least in a relationship where she is the Domme she has the control to not get hurt. I can totally see B&E having a successful vanilla and D/s relationship.
Author's Response:
Hey hun! Thank you so much for reading and your insight on this story is spot-on. I think Edward has been walking through life with an arrogant and cocky attitude towards women and sex in general..luckily, Bella comes aloing and shows him that wanting and desiring is way better than quick gratification. Thank you so much for reviewing and I will update as soon as possible.
Much Love,
~K~
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
O.M.G., no he didn't. WOW!
Author's Response:
LOL...he sure did...idiot? I don't think so. Thanks for reading, doll *mwah*
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
whew... *wipes forehead* it's awful warm in here... ;)
Author's Response:
LOL...well, now that can't be all bad ;)
Thanks for reading, doll!!
Korry xx
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:35 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
I am so glad that Edward feels better. It was about time that he got some relieve. A beautiful cock like his should not be wasted.
Author's Response:
Oh, I agree. If you think Edward's got control, how about Bella? I mean, you have this beautiful man fawning over you and to restrain yourself like that...fuck, it's feat I could've never accomplished. Thank god, she finally gave in...
Thanks for reading, babe *mwah*
A beautiful cock should never be wasted ;)
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
*panting* it was exactly what a girl needs!
thanks a lot!
Author's Response:
You're welcome and thank you for reading...
Much Love,
Korry xx
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
Oh. My. God! How could you leave me to burn like this! You evil, evil woman! Lol! That was fire bb! I have no words, except... OH Shit! What has he done now? But something tells me that Mistress is going to surprise us all! Great chapter... thanks for the update!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Hey, hun! I know I am so sorry. I promise to update soon for ya so I can quench that fire. Everything is all good and like you said, Mistress is going to surprise everyone...even Edward, prhaps. Thanks fot reading, hun.
Korry
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
great HOT freaking awesome chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks, babe! *fans you off* ;) LOL
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
That was wonderful, I agree, I'm spent LOL
Author's Response: :D Yay!! Thanks, sweetie!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
Me too. Phew, that was one hell of a chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, hun! Wanna share a smoke ;)
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
well i hope he didnt make a mistake! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, hun. ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2011 10:36 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
You love toying with our emotions. don't you! I love this freaking story so much! I can't wait to see if she pleasures or punishes him. I just love Angela, she is a riot! I'm enjoying the slow look your giving us into Bella's life. I'm interested to see how Christmas goes and who celebrates with who! Great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
you are more than evil... i hate you right now... but in a good way. you are toying with us!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter Two- Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
good chapter
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
hmmm... nice
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:10 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
wow, i'm shivering...
Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
Wow, another great chapter, I was just as scared as Edward was about what Mistress Marie wanted with him in the purple room. I really enjoy how he balks at the tasks before giving in an relishing his submission to his Mistress. I really hope Bella does have feelings for him and it is not all one-sided, but she is such a closed book right now, so I can't wait to find out more about her.
Bring on the playroom!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
Holy shit that was intense!!! I almost didn't think he was going to walk into the purple room.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
Hey Korry!
It's a fantastic chapter.
I was so excited about Edward and Mr. Harrison, you can not imagine! Fist I was thinking that can't be all - there must be a catch: and as Bella, or rather his mistress Marie then just stopped and has sent him out, I really thought: what?
When Edward then smoked his umpteenth cigarette... Mr. Harrison had to show up, yes! I knew it! And Edwards thoughts were really fascinating...
But I also like Angela very much, I'm curious what role she will play yet.
Much love,
Jenny
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
WOW, that was very intense. I wasn't sure Ed was going to make it. Some test!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 1:40 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
This is getting to be too funny!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
Thanks for the update:D)
I think at several points I've thought Edward needs to get the hell out of Dodge.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
well i hope for his sake that he dosnt mess up!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
I'm going to be optimistic and think that Edward is finally going to get some pleasure instead of punishment. I think Bella was very happy with how he behaved. Hopefully I'm right! Great chapter!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
hmmmmm such a god little subward. i get the feeling Edward is in for some pleasure and not a punishment.
can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
She seems to come home in a horrible mood from these playdates. Does she even enjoy doing them anymore or are they just for money now? Edward might have hessitated, but he didn't do anything wrong. He does not deserve harsh punishment. It is bad enough that he has to sit there all night.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
He is really pushing himself, but I do not see a balance in this relationship as long as he can't trust her to not really hurt him, especially mentally.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
I loved it, was great, can't wait for more
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
love it
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
:)
Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
I think I am a little afraid for Edward..yikes!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
*Drools* Great chapter, I liked the insight into Bella's past and now that we know Edward isn't actually able to blackmail her I feel... slightly better? Because before that Bella seemed kind of cold and Edward was all pining for her and it seemed kind of sad, a one-way attraction. Nice to know Bella finds him fascinating too. But, you cruel woman, why would you leave the chapter there?!?! I was ready to cry when I saw the next line was 'Chapter End Notes'. Can't wait for the next chapter.
And lastly:
'*ducks* Geez, I am sorry…well, not really, but if you review to tell me how much you lurve me, I’ll throw you a little teaser. I wonder why Mr. Harrison wants Edward’s company. Hmm…'
I lurve you <--------------------this much--------------------> :)
Date: 03 Jan 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Very interesting chapter getting to know more about Bella thru her sister, and I hope she does feel something for Edward than just a sub, especially since he seems obsessed with her.
Mr Harrison is creepy, so I have no idea what Bella has planned for Edward, and truthfully I am almost afraid to find out :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:35 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
As I said, I found this chapter just super.
The insight into the emotional world Edwards, the talk to Carlisle, then the exchange with Angela ... it's all just great described! And then, finally the bisexual Mr. Harrison calls for edward!
OMG!
I am so curious how it goes! I love your story, but you know it ;)
Much love, Jenny
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Okaaaaaayyyy... So the old guy thinks E's hot too & wants to get off looking at him (too). I'm looking forward to how this situation plays out as well as the rest of the story. I'm glad to finally have a little insight into B.Thank you for posting this story.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Edward better only be an observer or only be touched by Bella. No man better touch Edward. That is wrong on so many levels. I can not read anything where Edward is violated.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Okay, surely she wouldn't & he would call it quits if she wanted him to have sex with mister cotton top. ughh
I mean slash is sexy if everyone's game but E. seems turned off by that. Maybe she is a sadist?
Date: 30 Dec 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
lol this should be awesome!! lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Okay, that was so like... OMG! This is one krazy adventure and I´m with you all the way! First with Carlisle, I was so nervous he was going to see Edward´s chastity belt, that would have been too funny! Lol! I was so glad to get some type of insight into who Bella is, those little tidbits were really great in helping me understand her more. I´m really liking this Angela, and I think her and Edward are going to become good friends. I´m also crossing my fingers that Bella will be joining Edward at his parents for Christmas dinner. A girl can dream can´t she! Lol! Hmm... I wonder what Edward thinks of the fact that Bella wanted him too.... And the old dude requesting Edward to join them was freaking priceless! You could almost see the look on Edward´s face just reading the end. Lol! Great chapter! Now tease me BB!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Love this chapter!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!! :D
Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Love this chapter :) it was really interesting xoxo Mrs Twilight
Date: 30 Dec 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Hmmm me thinks Edward is about to have his limits tested. can't wait to see what happens.
Another excellent chapter it was good to find out a little about Bella's motivations.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
i hope for his sake that he will live ! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Run Edward, don't go to the purple room or Grandpa's gonna get you!!! :)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
Oh I didn't see the 24/7 thing coming, but it works well I think. Edward is going to have a lot of punishments in his future I think.
Author's Response:
Hey hun, thanks for the review. I think Edward is slowly learning that short cuts don't pay off...well, maybe they do. However, he'll start really behaving himself and once he does, his Mistress will start rewarding him with some playtime....
Much Love,
Korry
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
Ha! That was awesome! I just about peed my pants at the exchange between him and Jake! Why do I get the feeling at the end of there conversation that Jake my not actually be gay... maybe bi-sexual. Who knows but it was still funny. And has Jake ever been her sub or are they friends?
I thought for sure she was going to deck him, when he kissed her! I was scared for his safety. Mistress Marie is one tough cookie. I can´t wait to find out more of her background. I think she likes him more than she´s letting on. There´s no way that she would be taking all of this fuckery from someone else. I´m also curious like Edward about her history with James.
That was priceless that he would not only cheat on dinner, but also get her favorite meal! Only Edward! His punishment was totally awesome! Way to keep him wanting! Mistress Marie is my freaking hero! Can´t wait for more! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Hey Krazi!!
You are so spot on about Jake. At first I had planned to make him like super gay, but when I wrote him, he sort of created himself. Also, your perception of Bella is so fucking right. Of course she's attracted to Edward...the guy is gorgeous and she is human. The only difference is that she has control over her feelings and doesn't wear them on her sleeve, but I guarantee you that Edward pulls it out of her by the time this story is done.
The James situation...well, I can tell all my secrets...how am I expected to get you to come back?
Much love to you, doll!!!
xxx
Korry
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
Wonderful chapter, got me reallly hooked can't wait to keep reading, Keep up good work
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
That was wild!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:12 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
Great start, looking forward to the next chapters.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
shes has some moods! cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
Damn she is harsh! I feel so bad for Edward. But Jacob totally cracked me up.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
I don't know why she would want a viberater when she could have that beautiful man. Bella is so stupid.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
So, I'm wondering if this is going to just turn in to a long lesson in karma for Edward. Life can be a bitch, so I'm wondering just how far Edward is going to go to please Bella.
Thanks for the update;D)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
Holy cow that was fucking brilliant.
Poor Edward he is going to come so fucking hard if he ever is allowed to come again i get the feeling she is going to tease him mercilessly.
can't wait for the next chapter
keep up the excellnt work BB
Author's Response:
Yay!!! I am so glad you liked it!!! I was a little nervous with it, but I figured the hell with it. I mean, who said Bella can't have her fun ;)
Much Love,
Your partner in Domme,
Korry
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
please, PLEASE update soon. ME Love E. reading this
He's messed up & I think I'm equally there with him, okay .. maybe slightly over exaggerating. hehe
Thanks for writing
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
Yes, I guess by not giving Edward the sexual satisfaction he's craving she's actually feeding his deeper craving that he's not completely aware of yet.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Yes, I'm down with Dommella to a degree, there's no input from her though and it's like she's this empty shell that seem's just like Edward was when he was just being a big whore & going through the motions. I think maybe James is right or else maybe she's just a sadist?
I'm enjoying the read, alot, and excited to read what's next. I hope he doesn't blow off his commitment to the kids at the 'Y' it sounded like they are so attached to him.
I like how he recognized how immature and naive he's been.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
you may be a dirty little hoor but we all like you that way so don't change a thing!! :)
Date: 04 Dec 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
Poor E he just can't help being bad, he will figure it out eventually. although i have a sneaking suspision B likes it when he's bad.
can't wait to see him get his wax on
keep up the excellnt work BB
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
Ha! You were right, well worth the wait! James is a douche bag, can somebody please run over him with their car! Lol! That ending had me pissing myself! Great chapter!!
krazi
xoxo
Glad your back!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
Haha! This was well worth the wait. When I read your author´s note, I went no further, because frankly, it would have been like eating the spiciest hotwings with no water. Such a tease! I decided I would wait patiently for you to return. I know I will not be disappointed! Great outtake! Missed you BB!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
This chapter was too funny!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
:)
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
I am so happy to see this story back up and running! Mistress Bella is quite the evil bitch with her subs, and I can't wait to see what else she has planned. And I love how he can't lie or hide anything from Jasper, too funny. Also nice to see you introduce Jacob, and I am excited to see how the waxing session goes for Edward next time. Thanks
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
well i hope that he keeps his balls after his wax
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
OMG! Jacob is going to be the one waxing his happy sack? Oh this is too good for words!!!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
Ok that was so funny. Why didn't Bella tell Edward what name it was under? If she used a different name she must not want her name out in the community. I can just picture Jacob manipulating Edward's fine ass and privates.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
WOAH! Cant believe you stopped there!! Thats just cruel ;) Cant wait to see what will happen :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
Awesome work; cant wait for the rest!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:46 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
Eww i love these two can't wait till NaNoWriMo is over and all my favourite authors come back.
Eargely awaiting what's next
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
As a fellow writer, I don't blame you for wanting to take the time to write it all before posting anymore. Good luck with that. ;)
I love the little mind fuckery that Bella inflicts on Edward. The 'apron' is fucking classic and I can totally picture him cooking sideways to protect his most prized possetion. ;)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
:)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
I can 100 percent understand how you're feeling aobut the story, and i'm glad you've decided to take the time to write the story you want to write. I'll miss it, but I'd rather have your story the way you want to tell it, than have you force it and write something that doesn't please you. i can be patient, I think. Good luck with the writing this month.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Stomp on those crickets....we are here.... and yes where will Edward go?
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
That was an incredible chapter. I love Dommella. She is perceived as being so weak as a petite female yet she can physically and mentally tower over Edward. It is an incredible exchange of power and you wrote it beautifully.
I look forward to the teaser.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
luvd it !
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Finally got around to reading this chapter...loved it!! Can't wait to read what happens next! So exciting :) That and imagining Subward in his punishment scene...Hot.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Love it, she gave him a good lesson. Tables are turned. LOL
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
I've always read fic's with Edward as the Dom and I was unsure about this at first but you are totally on point with this story. I love that Bella is in complete control of him. It's so hot!! Can't wait to hear how the waxing goes!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Fuck i loved it please tell me you have a picture somewhere of the horse.
Can't wait to see what's next
Keep up the excellent work
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Wow, Bella is tough! I think she definitely got her point across. I felt kind of bad for Edward, but he wanted to learn and he definitely did that in this chapter.