Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Loving it! Bella is one tough cookie! I hope edward can hang in there & take it!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Great chapter :)
Looking forward to seeing how the waxing goes.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
poor edward first that punishment & then waxing???His balls will never be the same!! :)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
This story is completely yummy... of course I'm a hea kind of girl... so I would love to see them fall in love.. still keep the dom/sub relationship, but let Bella open up and love...
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
That was so well worth the wait... I really feel sorry for him his punishment was harsh... I really think that on the inside that Bella really appreciated his defending her, but of course she couldn´t let him know that, thus effectively rendering her a weak domme...I hope..... but i wanted to kick James´ass myself.... But this Bella is a kick ass Domme... when I grow up I wouldn´t mind being just like her!!!! lol.... You make the wait well worth it.... Thanks for a great chapter....
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Wow, that was really intense. I really liked the chapter. I liked how Bella handled him, never breaking her demeanor but showing both the tough and tender mistress in various parts of the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:28 AM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
I really liked this chapter :) It was very...interesting and dare i say i am even more addicted to the story than i was before :) I cant wait until the next chapter...to see how the waxing goes ;)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:49 AM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
I think the female doms are much meaner and less understanding than the male doms. It is like they have something to prove.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
i wanna hear dommella's pov. but i loved this chapter
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
Interesting!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
Holy shit! I can't believe he actually had the control to back down. This is going to be so much fun to watch Bella train him. ;)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
Hmmm Eddie is realising he is more submissive than he ever knew.
Can't wait fore theri first scene
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
Gosh... this really had me on edge...I can't tell how much I am enjoying this story...so different from the others... I had to hold my breath there for a minute.. when I thought he was going to take her up on her offer...Excellent chapter...can't wait for move in day...BTW gotta love Emmett... he's such a big teddy bear... laterzzzz!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 07 Oct 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
awesome
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
When it gets to stories where Bella is a dom that is where I know it is total fantasy. Bella's character does not have a dominant streak. Edward is also not a sub, but I find these stories fun to read. They are different.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
well i hope that he knows what hes getting into cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
Well Em is a real Teddy Bear. Think Edward's in for a suprise.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
wow eddie sure is walking into this blind! mistress is gonna make him pay for this!
Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
wow, we come to the most interesting part, super
Date: 25 Sep 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
Oh shit! Talk about digging your own grave. I can not wait to see what happens next.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
Things are about to get very interesting! Can't wait!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
well edward is an idiot! cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
I'll admit I was kinda nervous there for a minute, but this is better than Christmas morning..Subward is moving in with Dommella... I can hardly wait... I think I'll pack myself a bag and go along for the ride....Don't I wish...Damn Fiction... anyways.... Excellent eff'n chapie babes!!! You frick'n Rock!!!! Trust me I'll be sitt'n here biting my nails til 10 o'clock SHARP!! Don't wanna miss a thing!!! Laterzzzz!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
WOW, He is in for a ride.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter Ten- Relevations
What indeed.
I think both Edward and Bella are going to be suprised at just how Submissive Edward is.
CAn't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
OH NO!! how is Edward going to explain this one!! should be interesting and I cant wait to read more to find out
Date: 17 Sep 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
i wonder if she will beat him some more or untie him and kick him out? slow burn...? imma gonna have to go with #2 she is gonna untie him and end this. then they will both walk away wanting more with the burning need for more until bella finally caves and ties his ass up again
Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
well hot damn eddie! you have made it into the lion's den, now will you survive the lioness?
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
If he had not said Bella - he could have been in the clear. At least everything is out. Loving your slow burn.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
Hmmm I get the feeling Bella is going to be either really pissed off or really relived I am kinda leaning to pissed off and relived because she can have Edward now because he isn't freaked out by her but actually turned on.
can't wait to see what's coming
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
BUSTED!!! I love it ... boy is Edward gonna be in big trouble!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
Whoa! She is going to kick his ass and not in a good way!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
This is one of my favorite chapters so far. I really liked how Edward took us through his experience step by step. It was like being right there with him, understanding what he was feeling and thinking. He never imagined, not by a long shot, that he would enjoy it as much as he has. He had an idea of what he was going to experience. However that he would like it as much as he has... that has been a big surprise.
Sadly things are taking a twist he isn't liking at all. Safewords... I think Angela did mention something, perhaps he was so excited he forgot. I think Angela didn't tell Bella who he is, not that Bella hasn't found out. What are they going to do now? I guess some, if not plenty of talking and explaining. or at least some arguing.
Next chapter can't come too soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
Ok another cliffy....my heart can´t take it....we were almost there...that was about as bad as orgasm denial....I´ll just be over here pouting til the next chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 15 Sep 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
Woo-hoo! ;)
I love that he's finding out he rather enjoys what she's doing...
Date: 15 Sep 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
well if thats all he got then i would hope he could die a happy man! cant wait till the next chatper
Date: 12 Sep 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
Great story, looking forward to more. :)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
Sadly, it was the correct moment to end the chapter :(
Edward has had quite a day. Waking up with a hung over, regular, but still. Finding out he got a new tattoo, the meaning of it and most important the why he did it. He found the courage to call and make the appointment. It is all filled with holes and lies, and I am pretty sure both Mistress Marie and Angela are aware of it, and used to it. Will he be able to keep his identity a secret? Can he really trust Angela? And when and if he is found, then...
I can't wait!!!! Amazing chapter!!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
what a cliffie! Finally they are in the playroom, and I can't wait to see if he gets busted for his lies...Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
AHHHHHHHHHHHH No Fair. I want to know what haopens now. :(
Oh well guess i don't have any choice but to wait. Please tell me i wont have to wait too long for the next chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
Oh gosh, what a place to end it! But that will make the chapter all the more fun to read when it comes. I smiled a lot during this chapter, all Edward's attempts to be sneaky! I'm hoping Bella is smarter than that. after all, if he recognized her voice, why not she recognize his? I gleefully await Edward's upcoming education!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
OMG...Bella sounds like a tough Mistress...poor Edward - I'm sure he's gonna get his ass beat! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
OMG!!!! I am dying!!!! That was so intense just the set up; I can not wait to see the playtime she has with him!!!
PS. I love the tattoo he got!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter Eight- Masquerade
Wow... I think this Domme Bella is going to be more brutal than I've ever read in the story. The prologue alone had me thinking that... sixty lashings, and to think he gets off on it! That is some serious freaking pain. No joke.
As a side note, so now I'm wondering who in my building could have some sort of secret life :) I'm a teacher, and for some reason, I bet there are a lot, haha
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
HI, I really am enjoying your story so far. I definitely don't mind a slow burn on the plot but I am ready to get more Edward/Bella interactions, hopefully starting in the next chapter. Looking forward to it, and keep up the good work!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
of course it's her! yay he found her and man is he gonna enjoy this!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
:)
Date: 04 Sep 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
i wondered if this was a dream. i mean bella is controlled and profesional she would not start stripping and getting ready to ride eddie hard in her classroom with the boys and other kids, parents, and teachers roaming the hall after school.
but fuck if that wasn't a hot ass dream!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
lol good job!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
Love this chapter! I can't wait for Mistress Marie and Eddie to meet!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
I fucking love it!!! He finds her in an ad?!? That is fucking classic!
Author's Response:
It was the best way to reveal Bella's lifestyle, because if I would've waited for Bella to do it, then this story would be about Edward jacking off all day...tempting, but not kosher LOL
Thanks for the review, babe! I fucking loved it ;)
Korry
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
He better call soon! Love it!
Author's Response:
Oh he will...my betas are salivating for it!!!
Korry
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
It could be anyone, but the eyes, the name and the profession all together... they make different but more familiar story.
So, what's happening to Edward? Can it be that someone he bearly knows has so much power over him? Is he really changing that much?
Did Carlisle's comments came just from the twins saying something? Or does "dad" really know more?
Author's Response:
Hey Hun, okay what to tackle first...The Edward situation. The boy is a little obsessive. He see's something thats not readily avaliable to him, and instead of going on and living his life, he obsesses over it...more than whats for his own good.
Then there is Carlisle...LoL he knows his son far more than Edward would like to admit. He's not stupid and knows the only reason Edward wanted to pick up the twins was because of a female. I'm sure when Esme first told him that Edward wanted to pick them up that he was a little confused, so as soon as the twins mention Ms. Swan, it was like a A-Ha moment for him.
Hopefully that clears things up and Thank you so much for your reviews...Always insightful.
Much Love
~Korry~
Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
Oh, no, it's her. There is no doubt, lol. ;)
Author's Response:
Oh you know it, bb.
;))
One more week...are you excited?
I am!!!
Much love
Korry
Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
Loved this chapter. loved the interaction with the guys, male bonding is funny sometimes. The little brothers were typical, ratting out edward to the parents. Smile. And of course, i'm positive the ad is bella, since her middle name is Marie, and edward would know her eyes.
Author's Response:
Hey, bb!!! I love male bonding too, and I wished I would've added more of it, but sometimes a story needs to progress, and too much of a good thing can be bad. So, you ready for Domella. The next chapter should be very interesting, and my beta's and pre-readers have been waiting for this moment for like ever. This story has been pretty much collabrated on for a while, and I had to get talked out of doing a longer slow burn. They were right. Something has to give.
Much Love.
Korry
Date: 31 Aug 2010 9:01 AM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
Of course its her unless she has a twin.
I can't wait for Mistress Marie and Eddie to meet
oooo this is so getting good.
Author's Response:
Do you know much I fucking love you? You are so pro Domella that it makes me fucking giddy. There needs to be more people like us...right! I can't stress enough how excited I am about Bella taking control over Edward.
*Bounces with excitement*
The next chapter is a week away...so excited to share it!
Korry
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter Seven- The Eyes Have It
Edwards found another way to Bella - that wonderful. Doesn't suprise me Em and being a pain baby.
Loving your story.
Author's Response:
Awe thanks, bb. I am so happy that people are giving it a chance, and I work hard not to disappoint anyone.
As for Emmett...such a big guy and a huge wuss.
I can't stand the wait..I havent wrote the chapter yet, but it's playing in my head. I need to write it down...
Much love, hun! Thanks for the review!
Korry
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
Evil but so good..... It can't be great to wake-up to such dreams every morning. But Edward is proving to be resilient and will keep up trying to get Bella to talk to him, hopefully even go out with him. The fact that she talks with his brothers and tells them they are cute has to be another thorn for him.
What will his next step be?
Date: 24 Aug 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
Awesome. You had me thinking that dream was very real. Haha.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
You almost had me going there for a second but the longer it went on i knew it was a dream.
Can't wait to see what else Edward is gong to try.
I also like the sublte hints as Edwards inner submissive is starting to take over.
God I love this story
Date: 24 Aug 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
wow hot stuff
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter Five- Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde
ohhh hard to get hmm
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
showing love for the awesomeness
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
poor Edward lol
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter Two- Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
lol jizz in my pants
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
lol shot down
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:48 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
great start
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
:)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter Five- Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde
:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
That was HOTTT!!!!!!!!!.... even though it was just a dream.. it makes sense that Edward would fanfacise like that. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! :)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
:)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
:)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
Yeah, I think evil sums it up. I couldn't believe she would go that far at school, but it makes sense that he would fantacise like that.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
that was hott even though it was a dream! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter Six- White Knighters
Ah, I thought maybe it was a dream! Couldn't picture what we know of bella from the prologue, to be having sex on her desk with students right outside the door. she's not going to make it that easy on Edward. Poor guy really has it bad, and it's so fun to watch it happen!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter Five- Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde
oh eddie miss bella is so gonna beat your ass when she gets a hold of you! and she even warned you.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
well he has found her now he just has to reel her in. or maybe, probably, miss b is doing the reeling. she seems to have gotten a bite
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:09 PM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
wow eddie is really fucked up over this. i wonder if the teacher will be brown eyes? maybe the nanny? or maybe he will see her when he takes the twins out for dinner?
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter Two- Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
aww poor eddie1 that is kinda confusing how the o played out, poor guy's head is all over the map. and he didn't even really get laid
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
well it looks like eddie is gonna have to work for this one. and in ways he has never even imagined!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:21 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
poor eddie! he doesn't even get to touch her!?!?! why the hell not?!?
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter Five- Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde
Edward is getting under Bella's skin, yes, but not as deeply as she is in his. It can seem unbelievable that someone could change his perspectives so much in only a week. But it hasn't been just a week for Edward, deep down, something had been stirring to make him realize the changes he needs in his life. Bella was the spark, or in her case fire, so needed for Edward.
She has an immense power over him. If she is aware of it, we still don't know. However, Edward was able to see, she isn't immune to him. He affects her, and he wants to find out how much.
Edward isn't completely changed, but he is starting to move in that direction.... How long will it take him to accomplish it and Bella to agree to dinner? This should be interesting.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter Five- Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde
I love how bad he's got it. ;)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
oooh that was beautiful i can't wait to see where this goes
Date: 15 Aug 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Five- Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde
Love this story. Very original.
Date: 14 Aug 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter Five- Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde
god i'm impatient i so just want these two together now. i can wait though i just don't like waiting.
hey is this story only from EPOV or are we going to get some BPOV eventually.
keep up the excellent work
Author's Response: Awe thanks, babe! This story is from just EPOV, but I will be writing from BPOV in a different story and I promise that they'll be getting together. :)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
It was a huge one.
Edward did a lot of thinking, real thinking. Jasper did what needed to be done, confront Edward. His life has always been easy, as Jasper said, he has sailed through it, but that's not the real world, and Edward will eventually, have to face that one.
One girl, a girl who didn't fall for him had him all worked up for a week. Just when he was about to start considering giving it up, luck came into the game and helped him cross paths with her. This time, better than the first. He has found a way to see her, almost everyday.
She didn't say yes, but she didn't say no. She is leaving it to him. He will have to work hard on his persistance.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
That was awesome!! I'm glad that he finally got see her again but what I REALLY love is that she's playing hard to get!!! I wonder how far Edward will have to go to get the girl of his dreams??? It'll be interesting to see how this plays out!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
He is using his little brothers to get closer to Bella? I don't know if that is ingenious or dirty. Maybe a little of both. The slow burn is starting to cause a slight ache. I may need to read the Prolouge again.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
Correction, Edward is a man whore with a heart. LOL, I love the thought the idea of him teaching little ones to play the piano. Nice. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter Two- Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
Even though that whole thing went down with Jessica, it was still incredibly hot. You have a way with words.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
I love a slow burn...just don't burn too long.
So, Edward is a man whore? I can see that. I wonder if Bella will beat that out of him.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:44 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
Oh My Word!!! What a deliciously tempting beginning. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
awesome chapter :)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
I'm glad he finally found Bella!!!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
Ok so she wasn't the twins teahcer but she was a teacher and as i suspected he found her when he went to pick up the twins.
Can't wait to see how long it takes for Bella to give in.