loved this chapter and edwards outright desperation for bella sometimes where it just overcomes him...glad he let her change pants!  so great.  even liked the time at the club...thanks for writing!

That was an incredible chapter... they show each other such love ... and compassion.  They are really starting to understand the connection they have for each other.  Well done!

The Cock Worship was definitely something more. I like it.

I can't wait the see how Edward will handle a hormonal Bella.

Great chapter.

if that is the extent of her pms then Edward is lucky

oh wow...I wish I were a writer so I could put into words how very good this chapter is. I just love when its just the two of them w/little drama to interrupt. Edwards pov is always so grounding to me, I forget sometimes that he is as much hers as she is his. This just reminds me how much he loves her and how strong he has to be to be the man/dom she needs. Good job Louise thank you for my first non crying update I have read today lol.
Vic

Author's Response:

No tears ... not in this chapter and not in the next ...but hold on, they are coming .... thanks for reading ..louise

Love, love, love. Great job. Not a ton of plot progression, but a fun light chapter. It's been a while since there was a pure fluff chapter.

Cheers, Balti K

That was much more than a blow job - she made him loose control!

;-)

I'm not clear about when Tanya is referencing to, when she demeans Bella by saying she talks back to him? I don't remember her dng that.

Thanks for the update, yes, I was wondering about the hand off to Demetri?

I think anytime Bela steps away from Edward the parasites circle! She never has to look for trouble because it finds her.  Alice handled the cane mark rather well compared to last time. I want a picture of Bella's dress!

this may be my favorite chapter yet!  as always, you pack in lots of goodness!  love dougie, loved how edward shot samantha down and professed his love for bella, and so sweet that he put their initials on the car window...sigh, he's pretty yummy and perfect...thanks so much for writing.  great story...

That's right! I totally forgot that she shaved her patch off.  So much awesomeness in the last couple chapters that I completely forgot! That was a big step for her. I hope Edward isn't mad that she did it without asking him first. I think he'll recognize it was a big step though. I'm excited we are going to get to see more of the party and that they aren't going home yet! The last two chapters have been some of my favorites in the story.  And I love watching Edward throwing the cold shoulder and putting bitches like Lauren, Tanya and Samantha in their places. Yeah, Samantha hasn't been a bitch like Tanya and Lauren, but the audacity to proposition a man in front of his partner, sub-only or more, is ridiculously rude and offensive. But like I said, I'll never get tired of seeing Edward put them in their place.  It's delicious! :)

Two other people I enjoy getting told off are Alice and Jasper, I would love to see an outtake of the conversation Bella had with Alice at the kids birthday party. I'd like to see a conversation with Bella and Jasper too. I would have hoped hearing it from Bella's mouth would make Alice understand better but from what we saw of her conversation with Edward I still don't think she gets it. I mean, you don't have to want to be apart of the lifestyle yourself to understand it. At the very least to understand that it's not negative. It's still pisses me off to no end that they equate what Edward does to what James did. They really need to be sat down and told not only how offensive that is, but how wrong it is.

And I wouldn't mind hearing more about Dougie and his play sessions.  I enjoy age play. :)

Okay so the caning....that went well.  I'm guessing that B is all better about that now?

Tanya and Dougie's little outbursts were funny.  I am curious as to why Edward had Demetri babysit Bella though.  Very interesting.  Can't imagine Tanya being around too much longer if that is the way she is going to act.  How can people stand her?

Off to read the next chapter.

Keye

I can't wait until your next chapter! What kind of surprise did Edward get in the car's backseat in the end, huh? I'm almost dying here!!!

Now that 'Bella?', at the end has me intrigued.

L - This chapter was amazong.  Since the beginning I have totally felt that trips to the club were awkward and I didn't like it when you tooke the sotry there.  This chapter really showed how much the relationship has grown so they could enjoy the purpose of the club which is to be open and honest with the lifestyle they have chosen.

Interesting twist with Dougie and Tanya being play partners.  Also, I was glad that really for once, Isabella wasn't punished or questioned for something that wasn't her fault and that was totally Dougie's doing.

I am really interested to see Edwards reaction to the shaving.  I hope he doesn't punish her for it, rather celebrates that fact that it is another ghost from her past that she was able to slay. 

Great job.  Happy Easter.

Vicki

Did she start her period?  I forgot if she still had one or not after what happened with James.  I hope it has nothing to do with her being pregnant. Not a fan of Bella being pregnant, it seems to take the focus from everything else in a story.  I would be nice if it were her period so she has the possibility of being pregnant, that would be better than a surprise pregnancy they didn't think was possible.  I've read a lot of stories where Bella thought she couldn't get pregnant and surprise, surprise she ends up knocked up.  A surprise surprise period would be better than being pregnant. Maybe pregnant Bella can come later on like, chapter 150 of the story. :)  Because this awesome, favorite of mine story is never ever going to end...right? =D

I also don't think we've seen the last of Tanya.  Maybe I'm just a bitch, but I don't feel like she's been put in her place enough.  She certainly hasn't learned her lesson! You cold tell from her half assed, non-apology. And why doesn't Dougie tell his Daddy he doesn't want to play with her?  It's obvious he can't stand her.  I also really really REALLY want Bella to buy the poor boy new marbles! It's obvious Tanya stole them because she's so clearly lost hers.

I hope Bella lets Edward spank her now. I mean christ, a hand spanking is a cake walk next to a caning.  After some erotic spankings maybe they can move up to punishment spankings. They really are preferable to the punishments she currently gets imo. They are over and done with. Not to mention there is a huge cathartic release that goes with them. I think she'd enjoy it. And he has spanked her before. When they were in Forks and she had her break down in the car, he took her to the hotel room and paddled her. It helped her release all those emotions and cry (again, cathartic release). So he's taken her across his knee before.

Hi Louise I loved this chapter. I know I say it everytime but once I start reading your story it kind of takes over. I started last Sunday so it kept me busy but now I am up to date it kills me to have to wait for each Chapter. Happy Easter cant wait for next chapter. x

skankya got off easy.   Sucks that Dougie has to play with her.

the Z thing was cool.   Ugh  what happened at the end!!!!!!

Happy Easter to you and yours as well! Loved it! I'm very curious what surprised Edward at the end. Can't wait til next week!

Another awesome chapter... I love Dougies underroos....to cute!!! 

Damn woman....that was intense! So much happening. I can't wait to find osurprise is surprise is from....

Bella is getting brave about that caning. Edward introduced it very well, but that would still scared me to death. It sounds like it leaves very red and painful marks and he only did one full swing. It wasn't even for punishment. I don't think I could handle this impliment. More power to Bella for overcoming her fear of the cane. Edward has worked miracles with Bella. He is so patient with her.

greaT job L.  you vhandled the caning excellently.  till next time  take care 

Uh oh. I think/hope someone (probably Edward) will be taking care of Tanya sometime soon. She's such a jealous bitch.

I can't believe it's been less than 2 months. they've both come so far in such a short amount of time.

Edward and Bella both did really well with the cane scene. I think it did good for Bella to slowly be introduced and experience it. Even if it had been something she decided she didn't like and couldn't do, atleast she gave it a go. It's something they're working on together and it's paying off. Bella was able to take a full swing when not long before that she was panicking.

Great chapter :)

I think it was brilliant, how you wrote for Edward to help Bella start getting over her fears of canning.  This is one of my favorite top few fanfics, after lots of reading the last two years-- one of my very favorite portrayals of Edward!!

great update, i was just looking on Monday at this and thinking wow she hasn't updated for awhile hope everything is ok.  I loved how Edward worked wiht her on the cane, I am very interested for his side of that and bringnig seth in to help her was genious.  And Aro requesting that song, priceless !!!!!

Well I love Dougie, but I dont know what character he would be.  As for the corner, well I think it is a great punishment that does not involve beating her but it shows her how disrespectful her noises are. 

HOWEVER, I HATE the CUM SLUT.  To ME, it is so hurtful to be called names, I just can not even imagine that someone would enjoy that.  But to each their own.  It is however effecting my reading this story.  I will continue to read but it is taking away from my pleasure of reading it everytime I hear Edward call her a name like Cum Slut or any other name like that.

Hmmm Long time no see huh Luise?  Sorry about that.  As for Jessica, I really dont think she is that dumb but who knows.  As for Karen well I am only guessing it the money settlement that she got from James that Karen wants, I dont know what she has for Bella unless she is talking about a gun. 

So happy to see an update from you! Amazing chapter as always!

Annie B

I think that the caning seen was one of the sweetest thing that Edward has done for/to Bella. He was so attentive and took such amazing care of her. 

I can't say it enough I love this story. While some BDSM stories are all about he kink, it is refreshing to read a story with a great story line as well. 

I flove this story.  It is great!   I was surprised that Edward actually did use the cane on her. Even if she enjoyed it. Her earlier reaction was fright. But that worked ok for them. Guess that's why I am not a Dom!            Alice is being abit immature afar as what Edward/Bella, Emmett/Rose do. She need to understand that her and Jasper are not that different.          Can't wait till Edward sees that Bella in now pub hair free.         Love that he sang to her in the club, and the way Aro teases her.   Dougie :).  He is a hoot! To freaking funny.  Can't wait to see what happens with Tanya's skanky ass!   Curios what happens at "Midnight" that Edward was talking to Zarafina about....    Update soon!! :)

Excellent chapter

Oh this was good. Just love Dougie.

loved this chapter and am curious about the leaving w/Demetri. Dougie is a hoot but I see the potential of him getting Bella in trouble through no fault of her own lol. Alice is going to have to let go of her uppity ways, she is just as kinky just not it the same way lol. Thanks for the wonderfully long chapter and cant wait for next. You were a topic of conversation the other day in a FB thread at BornonHalloweens pumpking patch. They were talking about forced orgasms, so I had to bring up your last chapter. I love this world of ff lol

Hello, i'm your italian reader, i miss you very much, i love your story, please return.

Kisses from Marina

I can't believe this all comes down to Cauis wanting stock in a tv station. He is such a greedy man.  Trying to ruin people's happiness over money is so low. I wish Bella would get Emmett really good for all the teasing and torture he does to her. Edward always stops her before she can get him back. I love Emmett, but sometimes he is like a rash. I love this story and I hope you just ignore the negative comments. When you start to read one, just hit delete. It is not worth your sanity to go any farther. You work to hard on this story. If they dont' like they don't have to read it. It love it and will miss it very much when it is over. It is the story I savor when I see there is an update.

I hope that the annoying reviews stop.  I love this story partly because I find it challenging to understand what he is up to just like B.  I love it when you explain things like you did in this chapter.  This is a rare story that doesn't follow some predetermined story line.  Thank you.

WOW, lots of information in this chapter. At least now we knoe what caius is up to. I can not believe that he thought Bella was Aro's daughter when she was clearly with Edward. That would be just wrong. Loving this story. You are doing a GREAT job.

dear Lord Caius is a devious little fucker aint he.   Buh bye Newton and Laurant,  ya done screwed up big time.

Glad our kids got to talk about everything.   Eww for the Cougar.

I can't believe what you wrote on your a/n.  are people seriously that obtuse?  It's called fanfiction people, it has nothing to do about how someone lives their lives. I like BDSM fics, that doesn't mean I practice them or its saying that someone else should, if they want to, hey go ahead, to each its own. If some readers don't like it, why keep reading? Wake up and smell the coffee,ntheres worst things shown in tv that kids have more access to. And to imply this about your parenting skills? It's just horrible, and you should feel insulted. How about all these books about murder mysteries? Are they insinuating that every single author or reader of this genre are serial killers or planning to commit a murder?  Please I'm offended too, as a reader, I think you are doing a great job writing this story and I appreciate you doing all you can to bring us this chapters so we can escape a lil of reality. My life is chaos 97% of the time, an I truly enjoy this moments where I read and I'm somewhere else. So keep doing what you are doing, you have a lot more ppl backing your writing than ppl hating it!  See you soon I hope

Answers are great, but it means the end is coming which makes me sad! Your rant was totally deserved! I am not an author, but I read a lot! If something offends me or I don't like it, I embrace my civil liberties and use the little X in the top corner. It is too bad you cannot block them from accessing your story. They don't deserve to read it! I keep a pitchfork sharpened just for idiots like that. Point me in the right direction and let me at them!!!

Author's Response:

ohhh... yeah the end,..there is still a few things to tie up and i plan to expand a bit on E&B's life through Ot's and two multi chapter epilogs... sooo ... don't worry these two will still be around... and BTW...torches and pitchforks are on sale at walmart...lol...thanks ...louise

I just wanted to say i absolutely LOVE this story!!! Thank you so much for writing..looking forward to your next chapter! =0)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading...louise

Yay! a chapter :) It's nice to finally know more about what caius wants and what he's up to. I'm looking forward to seeing where he takes the whole cane fear thing with Bella.

great update, sorry you got hurtful reviews.

Louise I find it very disheartening that someone would blame you for the ill's committed by disturbed people and or fault your ability to parent. Mean people, huh? Go figure or their is no figuring it out, just figuring out how to not take those things/comments personally.

I feel Barney Rosset, if he were still alive, would be a fan of your writing and your ability to write as you see fit, as there are people like me out there that are fans;-)

Keep up the good work and remember Barney Rosset.

I cannot believe some of the comments you have endured.  While I had a hard time reading certain areas of your story, or found myself going outside my comfort zone (so to speak) I have at all times 100% respected your abilities and efforts to put yourself out there. This is called fiction for a reason!  Never at any time did it occur to me that you were in support of rape or any of the other hateful things said. You are simply sharing a great story with us. 

I am still here, still reading and still thoroughly enjoying this story. These anonymous cowards who have left such horrible comments can go fuck themselves.  Thank you do much for continuing to share this story. Your efforts are truly appreciated!

Yet another incredible chapter... I took the time to read your a/n at the end and I have to say that I can't believe that people don't read and enjoy your story with out thinking you are corrupting minors...really...You can't make everyone happy all of the time, so I say...make you happy. You have done a wonderful job with this story and it has been done very tastefully. I am sorry that there are women who are in abusive relationships or are raped etc...but that is life. Sometimes I think some of the people that are constantly complaining have a hard time telling fantasy from reality...

the way that man takes care of her amazes me. And to your detractors...why can't you just not read. Why do you all always try to bring stupid drama to wonderful well written stories that we as adults choose to read. Because isn't that the important thing here, that we are adults that make desicions that are right for us (kinda like this story) I am a 45 yr old that has raised 2 children who are active members of the community 1 in college and the other about to recieve a scholarship to college. We volunteer have friends play sports etc etc. I don't think in the grand scheme of things that reading or writing things makes a person sick. So stay the eff outta it don't read it and don't upset one of my fav. authors so much that she gives up or pulls her story (like so many have done). You judgemental ppl are the ones who leave a bad taste.

Author's Response:

oh i wouldn't pull the story at least not here. i have been thinking about pulling it from FF, and just posting it on my blog.....but i haven;t decided yet. And yes you are right ... Edward does take very good care of Bella and i would think that after 85 chapters it would be clear how much he loves her and wants only the best for her... yet ...people still doubt him...anyway thanks for reading ...louise

Awww I'm so sorry there are such stupid people that take these fanfiction stories so seriously.  You just have to be true to yourself and write what you feel.  For me - I LOVE IT!  The kinkier the better to me. :-)  I love Edward in all his dominating glory and I will miss this story when it's completed.  I come this website for the most part just read this story.  You keep writing and I will keep reading.  Thank you again.  Please don't let the a**holes get the best of you. 

I adored how neatly Edward handled the Shelly situation. Bella’s contribution by sending Vinnie over was priceless!

Edward and Isabella’s conversation regarding the night before was certainly enlightening.

I particularly enjoyed seeing Edward’s choice for Bella to nap on the couch. Seth is such a momma’s dog, curling up behind her legs. Everyone should know that level of devotion; even if a human partner is not in the picture, a dog’s love can be so absolute.

Marcus’ comments about a cougar was cute, Emmett’s response was FUNNY. Emmett may not have many boundaries, but what he says is out of love. Good thing Aro loves Emmett or he might have knocked the man into next week for the impotence crack.

Of course money is the source of Caius’ interest! If he isn’t lusting after Bella’s body, it is her bank account or her perceived influence with Aro.

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As to the detractors of this story, why do they contineu to read it? This far into the story there has been ever so much back ground presented I cannot understand how someone would read what must amount to hundreds of pages only to insult it. Really? Why? Do people not understand the use of the little red ‘x’ in the upper corner of their screen?