Date: 27 Jan 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 55
Little Miss Brandon shot her father?!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 54
I really like Carmen's enthusiasm with the whole sex discussion.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 34
Love those Biscuits!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
Your bored? I'm bored…but wow, not for long, I just found your story and it is 90 chapters long. I will not stay up all night and read. I will not stay up all night and read. I will draw this out and enjoy…keep repeating this Beth….
Date: 26 Jan 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 53
Very nice!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 52
Holy smoke, I never imagined that Edward's story would be like that, what a dummy! Awe, Bella said she loved him. Let's see if he returns the 3 words...
Date: 26 Jan 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 51
Wow, it all belonged to Edward!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 50
Okay so I thought the new latch was a gift, hey life was simple back then. But, being wealthy of course a horse was the big gift "Eclipse" so, Bella blushes at the she likes to ride fast comment. Ah, that was a great line!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 49
Is the present the new lock? Was Lauren or James looking at Edward and Bella? I'm not team Jacob, but I still like him. Can't wait to find out more as I continue to read on. All my questions are rhetorical in nature as I just jot what I am wondering in reviews. This story is sooo good.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 48
Damn the Volturi. Edward and Bella are so sweet together. I can't wait to find out all the deets as the story continues to unfold. A gift?
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 47
Hair tonic, eww...
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 46
Jasper is one determined man, what a passionate kiss woot woot!!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 45
Eleazar giving Carmen some much needed shots was funny! These guys are stupid sheep, Jasper/Em!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 44
Knew it couldn't be Jasper! Must be the Mallory railroad thing. Glad to hear Em is going to chillax with Ed/Bella. Poor Alice, what is her deal?
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 43
Could it be Jasper who shot Em? Hmm why can't Alice be with Whitlock? What is up with Edward's past, is it more than him refusing to marry Tanya? Wonder if his parents disowned him, what's the story on the rents?
Great story!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 35
Sweet Kiss! Em BUSTED, haha.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Gotta admit James teasing Em about begging a whore was hilarious!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really enjoy Carmen's character and I love this line!
“Never try to understand men, m’ija, it’s like trying to understand why sheep are stupid, they just are.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
"Shit" indeed!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great introduction to Cow-ard, as if he could ever be! This is a great story.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Great, Well Written Story!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG, I'm LMAO!! That was funny as shit!!
I just imagined what Alice's face must have looked like in church, not realizing that Emmett was asleep and he farts. God, that was hysterical! What a visual!!
I'm still giggling. I think my giggle box is turned over. Ugh!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
FINALLY!! I'm enjoying this so far. Can't believe this is 90 chapters. Geez!!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
I can't wait to read what is next because i really enjoyed this story! it turned out to be a really good one!
Date: 22 Dec 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 36
Man, I have done a lot of crying for Emmett in this story. You're doing a wonderful job! :)
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loving the story... poor Em, that was heartbreaking.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Out of the mouth of babes. GREAT GREAT story.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
sinverguenzas you could say is shameless, where you from???
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 89
Most definately worth it. Not too graphic, just right.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 88
Congratulations. Amazing you could do so much.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 86
Glad he got some of his land back, but Emmett is going to lose a good hand.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 84
Knew she couldn't die. Story wouldn't have had a happy ending.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 83
And no Dr. Cullen nearby .
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 82
Edwards not going to take kindly to a beat up Bella.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 81
Takes a womans brains. Jenks was unethical but he never really was a "bad" guy.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 79
Help on the horizon? Love the cat fight.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 77
He died brave. Rose is doing a great job.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 76
Yeah, and I'm wrong as always. Still think "Mr" Mallory is going to want Bella for himself.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 75
Bella obviously found the evidence. Gross James.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 73
You're doing a fantastic job. Well, well writtan .
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 69
Just hope someone gets to Bella before James does some damage.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 67
Eleazer can't die. So who will come to the rescue?
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 66
So, James or Mr. Mallory himself. Hmm, not sure.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 65
This is hanging country. Cattle are gold.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 64
Way to steal his thunder. Still romantic though.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 62
Knew they were up to something. Watch out Bella.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 60
Can't hide from the past either. Always comes back to bite you.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 59
Now she really has to tell him.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 58
A schoolmarm to get caught in this condition at that time would be unforgiveable. Have you ever read the rules for schoolmarms? Slavery, is a better word. Being a nun was probably easier.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 57
Can understand why she's scared but how can she clear herself if she doesn't let anyone in?
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 56
Not moving too slow. I'm just not able to get anything done. That means Christmas decorations too and here it is a week before Christmas.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 55
A nun. Huh. Unfortunately the Catholic Church really didn't encourge reading the Bible. Still don't to tell you the truth. The things priests and nuns take as truth are pathetic.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 54
That was worse than talking to Charlie.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
Definately distracting.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 52
Not too bad of a story. At least he wasn't a gunslinger or anything.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 51
Wow, really wondering what happened.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 50
Gonna be too close uder foot if you ask me.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 49
James watching no doubt.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 46
What could she have possibly done except be a rabble rouser. Help with the underground railroad there perhaps. Which incidently we had many in our area. Yeah, that sounds about right.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 44
So much for his blessings.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 42
Ok moving ahead. Alice wanted or something?
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 40
So good. This is really bad, can't get anything done, just keep reading this story. Oh well, who cares about a dirty house and sink full of dishes. There are more important things in life.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 36
Can easily get through any grammar mistakes. Not that many. Love the story. Just anxious to get the right couples really together.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 33
Better than crashing vans
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
Good Bella can be the catalyst. Emmett ever going to stop this big brother protection garbage and let his sister have a life?
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
Plans to get at Emmett through Bella?
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well Alice seems determined to follow through on the marriage. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Really wondering about Edwards family.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
That's going to go well with Emmett.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
Not many women out west. Emmett would want someone good for his sister.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Mike a reverand. How funny
Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
Okay sparks are flying
Date: 17 Dec 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
OK Alice then. Perfect for Jasper. Hope Edward is part Indian. That would be great.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
such a happy family. Love their son Charlie ha ha I just love a happy ending :0) I've really enjoyed reading this story.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 89
definately worth the wait! I love these guys they are so cute together. :0)
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
An awesome story that I really enjoyed. I hope to read more of your work.
Cheryle
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 58
this town sure does have a peaking tom
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 36
aww poor Emmett
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
of course she finds him attractive
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
now Edward in a cowboy hat and chaps does get the imagination going. I am really enjoying this even though I am not much for westerns
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
What a great ending to this tale, that is too funny. Great job
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Well leave it to one of their children to be like Emmett would be and not knock when entering a room!! That was funny and I am surprised that Emmett didn't beat the crap out of Edward without waiting for a response to what was really happening.