Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 81
So glad to see your update. Thank you for having that pig pass out. Dont let the bastard wake up please. I am so happy they have found her. I am happy that Rose and Carmen had there fight and now are one to bad didnt kill that fat bastard.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 81
glad they are there to rescue her.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 81
Please let them get into save Bella before James wakes up again! So glad Carmen and Rosie have come to an understanding
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 81
well i hope that they get to bella before anything happens to her ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 81
Excellent!!! Keep it coming PLEASE!!!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 81
yeah your back and our wild west gang too :o)
loved the chapter hope you update soon !
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 81
so close, please update soon, can't wait til they get back together.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 81
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 81
I think Rosie did a good job. I am glad they are there to get Bella, lets hope she gets out without getting shot.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 81
Hopefully Bella will be rescued in the next chapter and James dies a cruel and painful death...
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 80
Amazing story, I was so hooked last night, I couldn't stop reading till I caught up with he final posted chapter. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 80
I am so in love with this story. I kept back from reading it for a while, but found that I was driven to it and I love it. Hope you will update really soon.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 80
oh my goodness, this is so intense - but its nice to know that edward will now know that bella is alive and ok as far as they can tell. update soon please (ps kind of hope rose shot him somewhere good hehe)
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 80
oh no!!!!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 80
Haha! Good for Rosie -- I hope she kills him! And I knew that food fight would bring the two women together...now, if we could just rescue Bella!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 80
You are evilly brilliant!!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 80
Damsell! Good chapter! You always crack me up with your Spanish, it's good, I'm caught up in how appropriate it is!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 80
Oh damsell I hope life treats you right when will you get a bit of a break? I'll chat out on the forum tomorrow. If work allows. Chapter rocks - go rose & Carmen. Whoop. Go rangers bottom of the 8 6-3 rangers. Since my aggies can't seem to win. Go rangers!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 80
love it and can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 80
My fav chapter yet! All actiony! And love the "Shut up, Jasper" line. Go Alice!
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 80
I hope Rosie shot him good. Thank goodness Jenks found them.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 80
Please say he's dead, and please Carmen, be Rosalie's witness and say it was self defense...
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 80
You love cliff hangers. I am hanging on your words.
Please try.. Please.. We need to get to Bella. Rosie will shoot Mallory and that works
for me.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 80
awww, damn it. That's a hell of a place to leave a cliffhanger. Lol. :)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 80
i would shoot his ass dead or shoot him and make hims suffer! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 80
OK just so you know I love you but right now I am not to happy with you LOL. You know how to keep a girl wanting more. ;) Please tell me Rose shot his fucken head off?? I hope Edward can get to Bella before James wakes up. cant wait for your next post.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG you can speak some spanish hehe!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 80
go rose woooo yeah thats my girl
Date: 19 Oct 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 80
GO ROSIE!!! I love it
Date: 19 Oct 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 80
oh jeez, things are all messy now. hopefully bella won't get raped by the snake james.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 80
I love this story. So glad that bad guys are getting what's coming to them finally. Keep up the exciting and wonderful writing.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 80
Awwwcome on it's getting so good!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 80
Yea! (insert fist pump) We are getting closer to a rescue! I knew Rosie & Carmen would band together & be a force to be reckoned with!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 80
Hope he shot him in the knee so he can stand trial
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 80
Looks like carmen may not hate rosalie for much longer. can't wait for the next one
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 80
Carmen has to like her after that.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 80
I really hope the boys get to Bella on time!
I hope Rose did some serious damage!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 79
Oh come on, he needs to get to the search party looking for Bella. And Mr. Mallory comes to the ranch??? Wow, can't wait for the next update! Thank you!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 79
Good chapter!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 79
well carmen is one stubbared broad! cant wait till the next chapter to see what happens next !
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 79
OOooo, so much going on!!! Cool. *giggles* Me likey.
Gwen
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 79
glad jenks is doing the right thing.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 79
I simply cannot wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 79
Squeal!!!!
Thank GOD! Rose and Carmen aired out the differences... I trust Mallory as far as Bella could throw Emmett. So not at all. What is he doing there? Checking to see who is around? Seeing if Emmett is out on the land or there? Did James and his bunch check in with their Boss? Did the other 2 of the gang let Mallory know that James took Bella?
Thank goodness that Jenks manned up and is doing something! I hope the boys stay passed out long enough for Edward and Co. to make up time.
Can't wait for more! - Meg
Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 79
I guess I understand better where Carmen is coming from. I hope that their fight and having to show a united front against Mr. Mallory will let them put it behind them. Good for Jenks! I hope Bella is rescued in the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 79
I like this story even though the chapters seem really short. I'm guessing that the story will be over once Bella is rescued or shortly after since this is already chapter 79. Your writing is very good! Maybe you'll write a sequel telling more about their future.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 79
Uh old man mallory, how, odd of him to show up , i hope the girls keep their wits about him.
I don't know about anyone else. but that fucking scene was truly funny. i laughed my ass off.
I hope jenks finds help. I'm so glad he had a heart. James is disgusting, i wonder what that was he keeps in his pocket, is it something of bella's
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 79
yes!! someone is helping bella - gah the anticipation of getting her out of this situation and back with edward is killing me. please please please keep updating like you have been, don't know what i'd do if this goes on forever haha :D
Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 79
I knew that was the reason that Carmen was mad at Rose. Thanks that was a fun fight. What is the fat fuck doing there???? I hope Jenks finds Edward and Emmett quick.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 79
Carmen has worked my last nerve. She is cruel and hateful. She may think that she is being loyal to Emmett but her behaviour towards Rose is inexcuseable. It is classless. Rose may be a whore but she has handled herself with more class than Carmen.
I hope that Jenks is able to get help for Bella before she is harmed. It was stupid of him not to just let her go.....
I hope that James and Laurent die a cruel and painful death at the hands of Emmett and Edward.
Hopefully Rose is able to deal with Mallory.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 79
LOVED IT!!!! I wish I could have seen that fight first hand, hahaha!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 79
At least he is going to try and help Bella. Thank goodness! Good chapter. hope you met your deadline.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 79
another fabo chapter and i like getting all the details from different parts all in the same chapter.
i love your rose as i said before and its a nice use of jenks you have worked in as well.
as always don't keep us hanging on ! xx
Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 79
Good chapter. look forward to her rescue...because I refuse to think she won't be rescued.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 79
nice update!!! love it!!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 66
Still loving your story. Alice's history of being part of an outlaw gang if fabulous!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 54
I'm having so much fun reading your story. I love both the characters you've created and all of the individual story lines. You've really done a great job!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Cute story. I love that Alice is a champion for human rights. Love that the guys got shitface, too. :)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 78
Just caught up with all the chapters and i think it is an amazing story can't wait for her rescue :-)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 56
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“I got something for you. Made it actually.”
He reached into his pocket with his free hand and pulled out a small piece of wood that had been carved into the crude shape of a rose. “I know it ain’t much and I know I ain’t as good as carving as my pa was...,” he said sheepishly.
Taking the rose she ran her fingers over it and smiled. “It’s beautiful, Edward.” She turned the rose over in her hands and noticed the initials B + E carved into the bottom. She looked up at him and whispered, “Thank you.”
“My pleasure, my Bella,” he said with a soft smile. “I’d give you the whole world if I could.”
She blushed and tiptoeing up she kissed him gently and whispered, “I don’t need the whole world, Edward. I just need you.”
Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 46
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Alice was playing dead. She was hoping that by lying there, unmoving, that her tormentor would leave her alone.
Though she’d been lying there with her eyes closed for what felt like forever, but in reality was only half an hour, the chatter had actually continued. It was as if Jessica Stanley didn’t care that she was asleep—well, faking to be asleep anyway— and she just kept talking.
“You can stop pretending now, Alice,” Jasper drawled, humor lacing his tone.
Alice opened one eye and looked at him. “How’d you know I was awake?” she asked.
“Well,” Jasper responded as he sat in the chair next to the bed that Jessica had recently vacated, “you were making some rather annoyed faces even though you were supposed to be sleeping,” he chuckled.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 45
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“She wants to be with me?” Jasper said incredulously.
Bella nodded, ignoring a stunned looking Emmett.
“She wants to be with me,” Jasper grinned now and he put his teacup aside and jumped out of his seat. “I gotta go!”
Bella smiled at Jasper and Emmett still sat there, looking surprised.
Jasper, who was now grinning like a fool, smiling longer than Emmett had ever seen him smile, went up to Emmett and stood in front of him.
“Em, I’m going to marry Alice Brandon,” he exclaimed.
Before Emmett could answer Jasper whooped and smacked him on the shoulder, right above his wound, causing Emmett to scream out in pain.
“SORRY! Sorry!” Jasper exclaimed, but he didn’t stop smiling and he ran out of the house as Bella rushed up to check on Emmett. Luckily the stitches seemed to have stayed in tact
Emmett looked to Bella as she checked on him. “Alice likes Jasper?”
Bella nodded.
“And, Jasper likes Alice?” Emmett continued.
Bella nodded again.
“Well, I’ll be damned,” he muttered.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 41
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“How much do you like her?” Esme pressed.
“I don’t know, Aunt Esme.” He frowned and leaned forward in his chair, resting his elbows on the table and his head in his hands and he continued in a quiet voice. “She’s the first thing I think of in the morning and the last thing I think of at night. It’s almost…almost like nothing in the past matters as long as I know I have a future…” with her, he thought, but didn’t say out loud.
“I’m sorry, but Dr. Cullen…” before she could say anything else she was interrupted by Carlisle’s voice behind her.
“Carlisle!” the doctor called out.
She smiled. “I’m sorry, but Carlisle was wondering if lunch was almost ready.”
Esme arched a brow. “Is my husband sending you in here begging for food on his behalf? I swear that man has no shame!”
They sat there silently for a moment and then she whispered, “Really was sweet of Jasper to bring her flowers…even if he did give them to your uncle.” He snickered a bit. “The look on Carlisle’s face was priceless.”
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 40
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As he made his way downstairs Edward was surprised to see Jasper coming in through the front door holding a bouquet of wild flowers. Both men stopped, looked at each other then at the same time their eyes dropped down to the flowers and snapped back up again. Edward looked confused. Jasper looked like a startled deer that was ready to bolt.
“Uh…” Edward uttered, not exactly sure what to say at this point, so he just came out and said what was on his mind. “Who the flowers there for, Jas?”
Jasper turned pale and almost panicked as he looked around. It was as if he were looking for a means of escape. At that moment Carlisle came out of his office and Jasper thrust the bouquet into his hands, startling the good doctor.
“Here you go, doc!” Jasper said.
Carlisle blinked and said, “Um, yes. Well…thank you?” He seemed just as confused as Edward looked.
Nodding, Jasper turned and walked out again without another word.
Edward scratched the top of his head. “What was that about?”
Carlisle blinked down at the bouquet of wildflowers and simply said, “I have no idea.”
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
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At that moment she wished that Edward could have been there, holding her and touching her like that, making her laugh the way that Emmett was making Alice laugh. Letting out a sigh of regret, she jumped as she heard someone whisper in her ear, “What’s that sigh for?” She nearly fell off of the bench where she was sitting, but felt the strong hands of the person that was standing beside her steady her.
“Whoa there!” Edward said as he made sure she didn’t fall over. “Sorry, didn’t mean to startle you.”
Blushing brightly she regained her balance and shifted around a bit in her seat as he moved to sit next to her. She knew she was grinning like a fool, but she couldn’t help it. “You’re here! I mean…you came!” she said happily.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
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Instead he just looked at her, his green eyes locking with her brown ones as she spoke softly. “You’ll be careful.”
Her concern for him caused him to smile at her and he nodded. “Always am.”
“Good. I’ll see you when you get back then.” She seemed hesitant about something and then she leaned in and gave him a quick kiss on the cheek before she stood up and rushed inside.
As the screen door closed behind him, Edward just sat there with a goofy grin on his face.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
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“Alice, I didn’t get to ask, but who’d you leave Reverend Newton and Miss Stanley with?”
Alice grinned. “With your brother!”
Bella blinked in surprise and then giggled a bit at that.
As they moved up the back steps they heard movement inside the house and then they heard Emmett bellow out, “ALICE!”
Carmen poked her head out the back screen door leading to the kitchen and whispered, “Run, niñas, run! El Patron looks like el Diablo himself!”
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
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Making her way out onto the front porch Bella sat down on the front steps to the porch, looking at the stars. They were so clear here compared to Chicago. After sitting there a while she heard someone clear their throat and she looked over to see Edward walking up to where she was sitting on the front steps.
“Evening, Bella.”
“Hello, Edward.”
“Mind if I join you?” he asked and waited till she nodded and moved over a bit before he sat next to her. “I, uh, found something for you.”
She turned and looked at him curiously and it was then that she noticed that he was carrying the small kitten she had seen in the barn that first day they met wiggling in his hands.
“Oh!” She leaned towards him to peer closer at the tiny black kitten with green eyes that was peering up at her. Edward carefully handed the kitten over. “I think he’s the same little fella you saw the other day.”
Taking the kitten she held it close and smiled as it snuggled up against her and started to purr. Grinning brightly at Edward she whispered, “Thank you, Edward.”
“You’re welcome, Bella. He seems to like you. What you going to name him?”
“Twilight. I think that’s a good name for a black cat.”
Edward chuckled and leaning over he scratched the top of the kitten’s head. “I think it suits him.”
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
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When Bella woke bright and early the next morning she was surprised to find a new split skirt waiting at the foot of her bed. The material was a deep maroon color and the fabric of the pockets on the front were cream colored with matching maroon stripes. On top of them was a note.
I couldn’t let you go riding without the proper clothing. I wanted to make it more spiffy, but this will have to do on short notice. Wear it with the cream colored blouse I saw in your closet. –Alice
Bella knew that Alice must have stayed up all night working on the skirt and while she felt a bit bad about that she also couldn’t help but be excited.
“Oh, before I forget, there’s a little kitten that Edward gave me last night. I didn’t know if it’d be all right to bring it into the house or not. Edward put him under a crate on the front porch so he wouldn’t run off again.”
“Oh, it’s fine, m’ija. Cats around here tend to be good at catching ratones. It’s been a while since we had one that came in and out of the house. It’ll be good to have one again. I’ll bring him in and give him some cream in a bit.”
Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
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Esme just chuckled at this and looked back to the girls. “So, shopping for fabric I see.”
Alice nodded and sighed. “Yes, but there doesn’t seem to be much of a selection.”
Esme leaned in a whispered conspiratorially, “That’s because Jessica Stanley makes her father keep the prettier stuff in the back so she can have first grabs on it. But, Mr. Stanley is an old softy and you can usually get him to show you her secret stash if you’re nice.”
Alice’s eyes gleamed and she whispered, “Show me?”
Esme laughed and without a word she slipped her arm from Edward’s and led Alice off
Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
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Edward stopped his horse short of the two and asked, “What’s going on here? What’s wrong?”
Alice turned to him, but before she could say anything Emmett was screaming again, “That horse ran off with my sister!”
Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
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Edward chuckled at that and leaning towards her he whispered, “You got any advice?”
She looked at him with twinkling eyes and simply said, “Girls always like nice unexpected surprises, Edward. I’m sure you’ll think of something.”
Date: 16 Oct 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
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Leaning in the handsome stranger whispered in her ear, “I’ll carry you inside, ma’am, but you should, uh, perhaps cover up a bit? I’m enjoying the view and all, but…”
At first she had been so mesmerized by the feeling of his warm breath against her ear and neck that she hadn’t processed what he was saying. Then she looked down at herself and realized the front of her blouse was completely torn open revealing her camisole and corset. Gasping she sat straight up, no longer leaning against his arm for support and she fumbled with the torn pieces of her blouse, trying to hold it together.
Under her breath she whispered, “This is the most mortifying moment of my life,” and shyly glanced up at him.
The man chuckled again, giving her a lopsided smiled, and without a word he untucked his shirt from his trousers and proceeded to unbutton it. Now she sat there, mouth agape, as he pulled it off revealing a lean, muscled torso. She’d seen statues in museums her parents had taken her to, but this…this was true perfection and she felt a feeling the made her feel like jelly as she gazed as his bare skin.
“It could be cleaner,” he said, “but, it’ll just be for a while till we get you inside the house.” Without a word he tucked the shirt around her before his arms slipped under the crook of her knees and her back as he lifted her off the ground.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
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He was known in the area for hiring ‘half-breeds’ and ‘injuns’ as the locals liked to call them, but he didn’t judge these men by their background. They were hard, honest workers and that was all that mattered to him.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 78
James is just nasty! I hope rescue comes really soon. Poor Bella!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 78
James is a sick fuck. Please hurry up Edward and Emmett
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 77
Poor Tyler...
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 78
OOoohhhh, have I mentioned HOW much I HATE James lately? *snort*
Gwen (Pssst, Bella! Break the window! Stab him with a piece of glass!!!)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 78
Oh Lord! At least Jenks had some kindneww. Good chapter! And, I'm glad she bit him!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 78
They better go faster if they want to get to Bella in time. James sure needs to get what is coming to him.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 78
oh man, totally killing me here - hopefully by next friday they'll be back together!! poor bella, been through enough already haha
Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 78
well i hope that shes able to get away from him soon or they finally get to her to save her from james ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 78
Maybe Jenks can help her? He seems to feel sorry for her. Maybe James will have a few drinks while downstairs and pass out giving Bella the chance to sneak out?? :0) Hoping Edward and the others arn't far behind. :0)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 78
Poor Bella!!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 77
Carmen isn't going to even give Rose a chance is she? I feel bad for Rose. What Paul said about his mama made me chuckle. :0) Sad they lost Tyler but glad Elezar is still dong ok.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 78
Wow, didn't expect an update today. I will thank you after I catch my breath! LOL. Dragging? Not at all IMO. Please let them catch up before something horrible happens to Bella. Being molested by a creep is bad enough : )
Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 78
just waiting on the edge of my seat with wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 78
Crap crap. Dragging he'll no! Killing me yes. I hope jenks will help Bella when Edward and the gang get there. Maybe jenks can keep James occupied. I know its going to be bumpy but ugh. We need wussperv ratings. Cause that was 20% max. Thanks for the update. Meg
Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 78
yeah another chapter fitted in hope yu have a good weekend too but don't keep us waiting long......... .please!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 78
Ugh. Hope she gets the pleaseure of killing him, or at least hurtinghim REALLY bad.